Uncontrollable feelings (swasan ff)by Mars part 7

Hlooo guys!! I m back with next part. Thank you so much for your amazing response on last part.Sorry for being late.
Let’s begin:

Uncontrollable Feelings (swasan ff)
Epi 7:
Rajesh’s house:
Next morning:
After fighting with his heart and mind yesterday, today sanskar don’t know what he is feeling.
Sanskar(monologue): uff sanskar just forget it. Just be away from swara it’s only attraction. And he is here for few days. U will forget her when she will go.
Concentrate on your life.
He got ready and went down.

Swara is already sitting on dining table with daffy and rajesh. Kaki is serving them.Then only Sanskar comes after taking rajesh’s blessing he sits opposite to swara. Swara saw him and said
Swara:good morning Sanskar.
Sanskar(didn’t look at her): hmm.
Then he silently had his breakfast while Swara is speaking sometimes with rajesh and Daffy. She talk to Sanskar also but he just nod in yes or no.
Later Sanskar left to bank and swara to her room.

Swara’s room:
Swara is sitting on the bed playing game on mobile when Daffy came from outside with shirt in his mouth. She came on bed and call swara with gestures.
Swara look at him and saw shirt. It was sanskar’s shirt.
Swara:Daffy why u bought sanskar’s shirt.
Daffy look at her and blink his eyes.
Swara: ohhh u are missing him.
Daffy nodded with his head and lie on Swara’s lap.
Swara:even I missing him.
Then she thought but why????
Swara:bcoz he is my friend no no best friend.
Then she keep on talking with daffy about only sanskar.She was feeling very happy reminiscencing their moments.

Sanskar has came back from bank. He is doing little household works.
Swara is in garden with daffy. Sanskar came out to take something when he saw swara laughing. He just got lost in her.
Suddenly swara screamed
Swara: ouchhhh
She put her hand on her eye. Sanskar ran to her and asked
Sanskar: swara what happened??
Swara:something went in my eye.
Sanskar remove her hand from her eye and said
Sanskar:let me see. Slowly open your eye.
Swara slightly open it then instantly again closed.
Swara: I can’t open it.
Daffy was jumping on Swara.
Sanskar:daffy wait.
Daffy barked.
Sanskar:offfo nothing will happen to your girlfriend.
Sanskar held swara’s hand and made her sit on bench.
Sanskar:now show me.
Sanskar open her eye and blow air in it.
Swara felt relief. Later when her pain releases she open it and saw Sanskar hell close to her. Their lips were just inch apart. Their unstable breathing mixing with each other. Swasan got drown in the depth of their eyes.
How much their heart is screaming to close the gap between their lips. Soon they came to senses when daffy jumped in swara’s lap and Sanskar moved back.
Sanskar: how is it now?
Swara: fine, thank you.
There was silence for sometimes when Swara said
Swara:sanskar me and daffy are going to play football. U also come.
Sanskar:Swara I never played earlier.
Swara:it means u were always involved
in work only.
Sanskar:yes I m very sincere.
Swara:toooo much.
Swasan started laughing.
Then only kavita and sahil came and saw them laughing. Sahil said
Sahil: kavita, they(swasan) look cute together.
(Sahil don’t know about kavita and Sanskar’s engagement)
Kavita(smiles): yes.
Even kavita didn’t understood why she didn’t felt jealous when sanskar is coupled with swara.
They move closer to them. Swara saw them and shouted
Swara:woww kavita u came.
Kavita:yes. I was coming here when sahil met me on the way.
Sahil:yeah in the evening I used to come out for a walk.
Sanskar:that’s good.
Sanskar and sahil started moving the park talking about politics, business and all other boyish talks.
While swara and kavita sit on the bench and started chitchatting.
Swara:what is there in dinner today at your house.
Kavita:same only vegetable, chapati.
Swara:ohhh.I think sahil is also nice man.
Kavita(look at him): hmm very nice. His nature is very helping and friendly.
U know I was always hesitate to talk to boys but I enjoy his company and he made me comfortable when we talk.
Swara noticed a different shine in her eyes when she talk about sahil which was never for Sanskar.
Swara(abruptly): u like sahil??
Kavita(shocked): what are u saying Swara?
Swara now realised what she said in flow
Swara: no I mean as a friend.
Kavita: ohhk yes he is good friend till I know him.
After sometimes kavita and sahil left.

Dinner time:
Swara saw that its capsicum in dinner. She make faces seeing it as she don’t like capsicum. Sanskar and rajesh are also present.
Swara:I don’t want to eat this(pout).
Sanskar look at her.
Rajesh:swara u should eat all vegetables.
Swara:noo I don’t like its taste.
Sanskar’ heart was beating at jet speed seeing her expressions.
Swara:I will not eat dinner today.
Swara was about to go when Sanskar said
Sanskar: wait swara tell me what u want to have?
Swara(happy): Maggie it will be cooked it 2 mins.
Sanskar (smiles): okay I will make and bring.
He left his dinner in between and went to make Maggie for swara. How he can see his love sad??
Later he came with Maggie bowl and give to swara.
Swara(excited): thank you.
Sanskar; it’s okay.
Sanskar went to his seat and start having his food.
Swara keep on staring him while eating. She is falling for his caring nature. She smiles like an idiot thinking he left his food to make her happy.

Swara’s room:
Swara is lying on bed with Daffy beside her. She is thinking about sanskar how her heart flutter when he comes near. Their eyes oftenly got locked now a days. Swara was confused with her feelings so she ran to rajesh.

Rajesh’s room:
Swara entered inside and saw rajesh reading some book.
Swara: dadu I have a doubt.
Rajesh;tell me I will clear it.
Swara:how we will get to know that we are in love.
Rajesh: according to me if u r in love then u will keep thinking about that person, u will like to talk to him and enjoy his company and miss him when he is not near.
Swara was listening carefully and relating it with sanskar and she found all points similar. She felt very happy as finally she realized that she is in love and that to with sanskar.
Swara(kisses rajesh’s cheek): okay thank you. Good night.
She ran to her room and rajesh signed seeing her.

Swara’s Room:
Swara came running and picked daffy in her arms and twirl him.
Swara:daffy daffy daffy I m soooo happy.u know I love sanskar. Ohhh god why didn’t I realized earlier. Are u happy daffy?
Daffy barked at her.
Swara: opps don’t be jealous u are always my first love.
Daffy lick her hand and made puppy sound as he understand.
Swara(thought): do u think Sanskar also love me. Yes may be bcoz I felt something in his eyes.But he is engaged with kavita so what they don’t love each other.
Ufff so much confusion will think all this later. Let’s sleep now.
Swaffy jump on bed and slept.
To be continued…..

Precap:swasan confession in drunkard state.

How’s it??? Now the story will begin.
Will swara ask from sanskar about his love??
How will Sanskar react when he will get to know that swara loves him?
To know dhekte rehiye nahi nahi parhte rehiye uncontrollable feelings. Hihi

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  1. Stg

    dhamaakedaarπŸ’₯πŸ’₯πŸ’£πŸ’£πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Špls post next part soooon πŸ™…

  2. NDSG


    |Registered Member

    Dil ko tumse pyar hua, pehli bar hua….πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜š
    Love is in airπŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’•πŸ˜˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ˜Š. Idiot SANSKAR not understanding his feelings.

    Zasbat h Sanskar, inhey dil mai dabaya to ja sakta h par dil se nikala nahi ja saktaπŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

    Feeling bad for Daffy 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒 now he has to share Swara’s love with Sanskar… Don’t worry Daffy Mars will soon find someone for u πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ love it

    • Mars



      Thank you so much depuuu dear aur tum tho shayir nikli. And daffy will be always swara’s firstly love and sanskar ke dimag ki bati b jald hi chalegi.

  3. Kanha


    |Registered Member

    Awesome episode yaar. Finally Swara realised her love for Sanky😌😌 Waiting for Swasan dhamakedaar love confession. Ab toh Swasanffy ka love triangle dekhne ko milegaπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜πŸ˜œ Waiting sisoooooo. Loveeeeeeeee youuuuuuuuuuuuu sisooooooooooooooo😍😍😍😍

  4. Raina


    |Registered Member

    the precap is aaaawwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeee
    i just can’t wait for it..
    sanskar’s care for her is also so nice..

  5. Prashasti7


    |Registered Member

    Yipieeeeee πŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒ
    She realized her love finally
    Let’s she what comes next

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