Uncontrollable feelings (swasan ff)by Mars part 4

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Hiii guys!!!! I m back with next epi. Thank you so much for your amazing response. Sorry for being late.kindly read the note at last.
Let’s begin:

Uncontrollable Feelings(swasan ff)
Part 4
Evening:
Rajesh’s house:
Swara and kavita are sitting in lawn and chit chatting. Kavita was about to leave in the morning only but swara insisted her to stay as she can get company.
Swara:so what are your future plans.
Kavita:means??
Swara:like u will do any job after marriage?
Kavita: no I prefer to be housewife.
Swara:okay btw when u r going to get married?
Kavita:sanskar Ji said after one year.
Swara:wow mean one year u can date each other.
Kavita: we don’t do all this here.
Swara: ohh yea. I must say u people have so much of patience.
Kavita: how?
Swara:see u know u will marry Sanskar but still u won’t come close to him but in USA only within one week girl meet the boy and start expecting also.
Kavita got shocked and put hand on her mouth and said
Kavita:without marriage??
Swara:Ofcouse and best part in many cases children see their parents marriage.
Kavita: omg they are very fast.
Swara: very much.kavita I want to visit village.plzz will u take me?
Kavita got excited telling about her village.
Kavita: yes we will go and trust me u will love it.
Swara; okay then let’s go today only.
Kavita: today?
Swara: yea and now its evening and weather is also very nice
Kavita: okay.
Then only Sanskar came on his bike from bank.After parking it he went towards entrance and saw Swara and kavita in lawn .
Swara said looking at him
Swara: so kavita here comes your soon to be hubby.
Kavita slightly blushes.
Sanskar ignored her and ask to kavita
Sanskar: kavita u r still here.
Before kavita reply swara said
Swara: why can’t u see her. And I asked her to stay here.
Sanskar(annoyed): I didn’t asked you.
Swara: but I told u only.
Kavita look at them fighting so said
Kavita: it’s ok actually we are going to see village now.
Sanskar: hmm
Sanskar was about to leave when kavita said
Kavita:sanskar Ji u also come with us.
Sanskar:no I have work(look at swara): and I m not interested in listening someone’s stupid talks.
Swara(angrily): how dare u to say like this to me.
Sanskar: I didn’t took your name.
Swara:I m not fool and we are also not interested to take such a kahdoos person with us.
Sanskar thought it will be his stupidity to argue with her.
So he silently went inside.
Later,Swakav went to tell rajesh that they are going out.
Inside Sanskar bought tea for rajesh at its usual time.
Swara went to him and said
Swara:hotty we three are going to see village.
Sanskar thought that she is including him in three.
Sanskar(sternly): I m not coming.
Swara:and who is talking about u and I saying about my Daffy.
Sanskar looked at Daffy who was looking at him with innocent eyes
Sanskar: (mumble)huh!! This dog is too much.
Rajesh: OK Sanskar u also go with them it will be better.
Swara: don’t worry dadu we will manage.
Rajesh: no beta u r new here and kavita also hardly goes so it will be safe if u take Sanskar then u can come little late also.
Swara: okay ask him.
Sanskar: its ok baba I will go with them
I will come after changing.
Swara make faces while kavita got happy.

Village:
Swasan and kavita are walking and going across greenery and enjoying the beauty of nature.Swara and kavita are in front with Daffy in Swara’s arms and sanskar at back.
Swara turn back and said little loudly
Swara: hey if I and daffy are coming between u both(sanskar and kavita) then plzz tell.We will give u privacy.
What’s say daffy.
Daffy nodded her head.Kavita blushes.
Sanskar: no not needed.
Swara:as u wish.
Swara went near kavita and whispers to her but it was audible to sanskar
Swara:ask him to speak little more.
Kavita:why?
Swara: I thought him as dumb in our first meet.
Kavita(laughs): really.
They look at Sanskar who give them glare.They turn and giggles.
Then swara click many pics with daffy and kavita. And they took some group pics also.
Swara saw bangles shop and said
Swara: wow bangles I want to take them.
Kavita: okay come let’s take.
They went to the shop.Sanskar sit on bench outside the shop. Swara kept daffy beside him and said
Swara: baby sit here.
She went to choose bangles with kavita.
Sanskar look at daffy who was silently sitting beside him.Sanskar got busy in using his phone.Daffy was continuously staring him and seeing him doing work.After feeling Daffy’s gaze he looked at him and said
Sanskar: what???
Daffy blink his eyes.
Then Sanskar listen Swara’s laughing sound and said to daffy
Sanskar: ok tell me how u tolerate this non stop radio all the time.(point to swara who was busy in buying bangles)
Daffy looked at him in rage.Sanskar noticed it and said
Sanskar: ok ok don’t get angry I know she is your girlfriend but seriously u got her only. Are female dogs vanished from earth?
Daffy looked at Swara lovingly.
Sanskar:ohh today I get to know love is blind that’s why u don’t find difference between human and dog.
Then only swara came running.
Sanskar bury his face instantly in his phone as if he don’t care about surrounding.
Sanskar realized that he was talking to dog
Sanskar(monologue):ufff sanskar now u started talking to dogs also like her. She started showing her effect also ohh God.
Swara came to daffy and show him bangles
Swara(excited):see Daffy I bought bangles of blue colour it’s your favourite colour.
Kavita: even Sanskar ji’s favourite colour is blue.
Sanskar (thinks): ohh again I m compared to this dog.
Swara: but I have choosed for daffy not him.
Sanskar: I think we should go.
Kavita: ok.
After roaming for some more time Sanskar said
Sanskar; kavita u go to your house as its near only.
Kavita:ok
Kavita hugged swara and said bye to Sanskar and daffy.
Swasan are coming back to their house when swara said
Swara:we came very soon.(pout)
Sanskar: soon it will be dark and it’s village not your metro city to roam till midnight.
Swara:u are always like this only?
Sanskar: like what?
Swara:most of the time u remain mute and if speaks then also with full attitude.
Sanskar: I m like this only
Swara: that’s why I give u perfect name khadoos right daffy.
Daffy bark.sanskar glare at him and swara giggles.
Soon they reaches at the house.
After dinner all went to their room.

Night(10:30pm)
Swara was not getting sleep as she is not habitual to sleep so soon.She took Daffy and went to garden.She moves here and there looking at beautiful plants in moon light.
Daffy saw ball in the garden so he ran to take it.Swara looked at him. After Daffy reached the ball he kick it towards Swara with his little feet.Swara understand that he wants to play.
So she also push the ball back.Like this they started playing catch catch. swara was speaking loudly in between and daffy was also barking in joy. They were enjoying giggling. Sanskar who was still awake doing some pending work of bank heard laughing sound from garden so went to his Window only to see Swara and daffy playing.
Sanskar(mumble):she can’t sleep silently at night also.
Unknowingly he stood their staring her.Swara got tired and lay on the grass laughing. Daffy sit on her belly.
Swara: enough for today Daffy now I can’t run more.
Daffy also keep his head on her belly as if resting. Sanskar can’t stop himself from smiling seeing her antics.
He went back and off the lights and slept remembering about whole day events which included swara.Even he don’t know why he is again and again thinking about her.
In garden:
Swara looked at Sanskar’s room window and said to Daffy
Swara:daffy I m thinking to do friendship with sanskar.
Daffy look at him.
Swara:see I m going to live here for many days and I can’t fight all the time with him.
Daffy nodded his head in anticipation.
Swara:so we will go in the morning only to his room.ok now let’s go and sleep.
Swara picked daffy and went to her room and slept.

Morning:
Sanskar’s room:
Swara is standing outside the room.
Swara:Daffy let’s go and talk.
She slightly pushed the door and it got open.Swara tip toed inside with Daffy. She looked around but no one was there.Then only sanskar came from washroom wearing only pant without shirt.He saw Swara standing. He went and stood at her back.Swara feeling someone’s presence turn. Bcoz of sudden movement sanskar lost his balance and fall on bed with Swara on the top.They look in each other’s eyes.Swara’s hands were on his bare chest.Daffy was looking at them with wide eyes.
To be continued….

Precap:swasan become friends. New entry.

Guys if u think story is going very slowly then do tell plzz. Actually I don’t believe that u once see the person and fall in love.It is like fantasy.So I want them to live with each other for sometimes then they will fall for each other.
This is my POV and u r most welcome to give yours.
Plzzzz leave your comments.
Silent readers also try to give your feedback.
One request as I felt that swasan ffs are decreasing and I m trying my best to give maximum stories. Plzz do leave your comments on all other swasan stories and motivate the writers.Hope u won’t let a swasan down.

I had made wattpad account. My I’d is
mars_111
Plzz follow me.I will post my stories there soon as I need little time to adjust there.Special thanks to shan di she helped me alot in joining wattpad.
Hope to get your support.
Thank you
Bye
Take care.

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86 Comments
  1. Soujanya

    Awesome…

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  2. awesome dear.i like all ur stories which is very different dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  3. Raina

    i read this story also in a go.. hehe.. i became your fan again!!!
    so cute story and will love to see it proceeding slowly..
    and i really thank you for the request you have given in your note.. really the comments are getting less nowadays..
    so a heart felt thanks as an author..

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and it’s all my pleasure as I can’t let swasan stories go down.

    2. Mars

      Sorry dear I had not read your story sword of love.Actually I had read it’s first part today soon will read all and leave my comment. Thanks.

  4. I also believe love at first sight is quite fantastical . U take ur time and forward the story as u have planned . I do not mind the speed of story but donot vanish like other writers plzzzzz .the episode was awesome and I m looking forward to see how the story progresses and ofcource what happens to kavita . And I m really happy that u r not making kavita negative

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I won’t vanish leaving my stories in between. When I will get busy will get less active but will not leave. And kavita is all positive so enjoy.

  5. Amazing 😊😊😊

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  6. Amazing..ur story is going good..tc..

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  7. Nice epi

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  8. Marsssss yaar its wonderful.dis is become my favourite ff.i can’t wait for nxt part .pls update it soon.

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

  9. Superb and welcome on Wattpad

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  10. Vyshu10

    Awesome….last scn😍😍😍😍 Ek doubt….swasan r now in dehradun or a village near dehradun?

    Story’s pace is ok…even i dont believe in love at first sight…may be u feel a connection…so wanna see swasan falling in love gradually

    I wanna Thank you for writing awesome stories on swasan…i ve already said it once…ur stories r a breath of fresh air in TU😘😘

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much for your beautiful comment. They are in uttrakhand.
      Rajesh’s house is on the outskirts of the village and kavita’s house is inside the village.I hope its clear.any query u can ask.

  11. Savanshi27

    Hush!!!! Finally a relief… thank God u joined wattpad otherwise I had to browse several tym to read ur stories..
    u won’t believe but I seriously read Ur two stories Naughty billo and My better half for nearly 10 times till now and I loved them every time… in fact it increased with no. Of reads….
    u are truely talented..
    Something which is bestowed on special ones is Ur possession so keep writing and stay blessed….
    love u dear… and apologies for irregular comments😯😯😯😯

    1. Savanshi27

      Sorry I totally forgot to mention that the two new stories that u have started which includes this have an awsm plot and I would love to read them further… so update soon….

    2. Mars

      Thank you so much for your precious words it really means alot.

  12. Neptune

    awesome marsuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu…..
    loved it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much…………..

    i want to see them falling in love gradually with those sweet cute nok jhoks…..
    hayeee MY SWASAN you know i love them soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much….
    but i fall for them more n more while reading these wonderful stories….

    and about comments ya comments are going very low in some swasan ffs nowadays…
    please swasanians do comment the writers are losing their confidence to write yaar please read all the stories on SWASAN and comment toooooo…….

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear and I toooo love swasan alot and hope so comments and swasan stories increases.

  13. Tamil

    Amazing dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  14. Shibil

    Mars ….the way u r proceedings the story is gud ….waiting for next one

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

  15. lovly dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  16. Simi

    Awesome dear…
    Poor sanskar.. He is always compared with DaffyπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  17. its really awesome

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  18. AnuAnn

    Loved it dear…and thanxxx for the note

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and its my pleasure to write the note

  19. Amazing dear.

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  20. Abirsha

    Awesome dr and i also accept u as we won’t fell in love with the person who we see at first…. And about the update its amazing…. The reason swasan ffs are decreasing is many authors are posting their ff in wattpad as they are getting good response in wattpad and also here in tu the other couple writers are morphing swara’s photo to someone else which we can’t see…. Many aren’t coming to tu only for this…. In that many i am also one ..

    1. Abirsha

      And forgot to say!!! No need to thank me at all… I didn’t do any big thing at all….😊

    2. I totally agree with you..and they are doing it intentionally just to hurt swasan fans..bt I think authors should post here also coz many readers don’t have wattpad account..I know it hurts when we see the morphed pics bt I should remember that swasan is the original couple..they can morph the pics bt no1 can’t change the reality..swasan is the real couple in SR.
      sorry for posting this long msg here bt I’m so upset bcoz of all these..I really don’t want swasan ffs to decrease in number..

      1. Sumayyah

        I totally agreed to u as I also don’t have any account in watpad

      2. Mars

        Kumu dear right some people do it intentionally. Huh!! They don’t have anything of their never existing bro sis Jodi so morphing our heavenly couple’s pics.
        I don’t want to use any wrong language zipppp my mouth before i speak something….

    3. Mars

      Thank you shan di so this is the problem but still plzz don’t let swasan down do support them.

  21. Kojagorimalik

    Amazingggggg……
    Loved it…….
    Post soon…..

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  22. Awesome

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  23. Thank god u joined whattpad… Now I can read all ur stories… In an easy way… U don’t knw… There’s sudden urge for me to read ur ff.. Bt I can’t….
    N it’s OK like u r going slow….
    Update soon ❀
    N how going to wattpad to read ur stories…bye ❀❀

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon

  24. Sumayyah

    Loved it dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you sumu dear

  25. Rockleon

    Outstanding!

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  26. Awesome

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  27. NDSG

    Yepii mars on wattpad. I followed u.πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

    I’m loving this ffπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡ whatever u write I love that… Dheere dhree pyar ko badhana h, phir usme hadh se gujar Jana h…

    If u saw me as ur follower list then reply me, kahi esa to nahi mai kisi aur ko follow kr du πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    Ok bye take care…

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and u had followed me only not anyone else.

  28. Phoniex

    It’s good dearv

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  29. Scooby

    Awesome mars😜 daffy im loving it😘😘 haha swara had her effect on sanskar😝 yup nowadays swasan ffs have reduced alot😭😭

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  30. Awesome Marssss😊😊😊loved it….

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  31. Loved it

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  32. Kanha

    Swara aur Daffy ki jodi mast hai yaar. Love them soo much. Agar Daffy human hota toh Sanskar ko jaldi love realisation ho jata πŸ˜‚ Bechara Sanskar. Uss par bhi ab Swara ka asar hone laga haiπŸ˜‰ Awesome part sisoo. Sorry for being late yaar. Waiting for the next update. Love you sisoo😍

    1. Mars

      Thank you sisso and don’t be sorry. Its ok.
      I will post next part soon

  33. Amazing…. sanskar talking to dwaffy….he he he….

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  34. Shifa96

    It’s awesome dear..
    I usually open SR page in TU once in 2-3 days and open the ff’s I read in new tabs and read them when ever I get time inbetween..and today while doing so, I realized that their r more raglak and other couples ff’s being posted more than
    swasan’s..
    And good u joined wattpad, though I don’t use that much but it will be easy for me to read few of your ff’s which I have missed.

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear and don’t worry swasan stories will regain soon as many writers and readers must be busy.

  35. awesome update next part soon

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

  36. Awesome dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  37. Prashasti7

    Awww dear this is solo cute n specially daffy he is sooooooo cute n i agree with ur POV I too want it to go smoothly we r not running for marathon na soo take it slow only luv u 😘😘

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and love u too and thanks for supporting my pov

  38. Gayathri.visu

    Superrrr dear…. Loved it!!! I agree with u, even I don’t believe love at first sight concept…..

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

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