unconditional love ~ twinj episode 9

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There first night together…

Episode starts with

Kunj look at her sleeping… nxt song starts to play…(guys read d lyrics n feel d song… n if u hear d song with diz… dn it’s well n gud… u’ll feel it)
Kunj looks at her lovingly with smile…
Meri becheniyo ko chain mil jayeeee
Tera chehra jab nazar aayeee…
Tera chehra jab nazar aayeee…

Kunj thinks~
She is soo beautiful…
he looks at her colsed eyes which has black liner nd brown eyeshadow which makes her looking beautiful… her silky nd shining black hairs waving in filmy style which looks gorgeous…

Mere deewanepan ko sabr mil jayee
Tera chehra jab nazar aayeee…
Zikr tumhara jab jab hota h
Dekho na aakho se bhiga bhiga pyar bah jaaataaa h…

Kunj looks at her glowing chubby cheeks which adds more beauty in her nd a dimple which makes her looking stunning… her glossy nd shining lips which makes her hot nd dat red color lipstick makes her looking s*xy…

Meri tanhayio ko noor mil jaayeeee
Tera chehra jab nazar aayeee…
Tera chehra jab nazar aayeee…

Kunj looks at his hand which is in her hand… she is holding tightly… even in her sleep… he takes her hand up… closes his eyes to feel it nd kisses it…

Me raat din ye dua kru
Tere liye me jiyu maru
Chaaroo pehr tujhe dekha kru
Mera jaha ye tujhpe fana kru

Kunj now looks at her face nd comes near her face… he comes more nd more nd more close… he comes close to her lips… he is able to feel her breath… he closes his eyes… buttt buttt dn he goes away…

Zikr tumhara jab jab hota h
Dekho na hotho pe tera ehsaas rh jaataaa h

Now he comes near her ears… nd whispers (very slowly) i love u… but she is in deep sleep even in her sleep she smiles a bit… kunj also smiles seeing diz…

Mere hr raaste ko manzil mil jaayee
Tera chehra jab nazar aayeee
Tera chehra jab nazar aayeee

Now he goes towards her forehead n places a gentle kiss on it… she moves a lil… n holds kunj’s shirt… still in sleep…

berang hawayee mujhe najane de gayi saza kyu abhi abhi
Hai sarfaroshi ye aashqui bhi jayegi jaan meri isme kabhi

Kunj removes her hand from his shirt slowly… he closes his eyes… n he remembers d scene when they meet for d first tym…

Zikr tumhara jab jab hota h
Dekho na hr lmha teri dastaan kh jaataaa h

Kunj smiles with his closed eyes… remembering there first meeting… suddenly twinkle’s head falls on kunj’s shoulder… he opens his eyes to see…

Meri har ek tadap ko sukoon mil jaayeeeee
Tera chehra jab nazar aayeee…
Tera chehra jab nazar aayeee…

He offs d music…
Now kunj takes her head nd places it gently on his lap… d wind is flowing n twinkle’s hair comes on her face… it irritates her… when kunj places her hairs slowly behind her ear… his one hand is on twinkle’s head nd another is holding her hand… he sleeps in dat position only with a smile on his lips..

Morning…
Twinkle wakes up nd finds her head on kunj’s lap… she sees kunj who is sleeping peacefully with a smile…
Twinkle(smiling): he is smiling… haww… how cute… kunj sarna…
Just dn kunj wakes up… due to her voice… nd he sees twinkle looking at him only…
Twinkle(with cute smile): good morning…
Kunj(sleepy voice): good morning… twinkleeee…. pack ur bag right now… we r going to my house…
Twinkle: are but…
Kunj: don’t argue… i had seen ystrdy night… how brave r u…
Twinkle: ok… she said ok bcoz she has no other option…

At sarna’s

Twinj enters in sarna house…
Usha: wlcm at your house twinkle… kunj from where u r coming…
Kunj(stammering): um..m..maa..v.. vo..morning walk…
Bebe: find new excuse kunj… last tym also u said dat one…
Twinkle laughs silently…
Kunj: i.. i m.. going… daily… bebe…
Usha: kunj… morning walk… in diz dress… u wore it ysterdy naa…
Twinkle is full red now… bcoz she tries hard to controls her laugh… nd smwhere she is successful in diz.. but kunj sees diz…
Kunj(slowly to twinkle): it’s all bcoz of u…
Usha(fake anger): oy kya chl rha h ye…
Kunj: no maa… m.. just saying dat.. (to twinkle) cm i will show u your room… n they leaves
Twinkle’s room is just beside kunj’s room… they enters in d room…
Twinkle is behind kunj… nd purposely kunj stops in d middle of d room… twinkle who is busy seeing d room… bangs on him… n she is about to fall… but kunj turns nd holds her… but with d sudden turn he also looses balance n they both fall on bed… kunj over twinkle…
twinkle’s hair is on her face… he removes it from her face nd places it behind her ear… they looks into eo eyes
Kunj: beautiful…
Twinkle(blushes badly): thanku…
Kunj: let me complete… beautiful room na… n he laughs…
Twinkle pushes him away… n gives disgusting look to him…

After sometime…
Kunj’ room
Kunj is thinking about there first night together… it was romantic… thought twinkle doesn’t knw anything…(kumbhkaran ?)
Kunj calls chinki
Chinki: hello…
Kunj: hie… kunj here…
Chinki: oh jiju… yup say…
Kunj smiles brightly…. hearing d word jiju…
Kunj: i want to ask u something…
Chinki: ys… say..
Kunj: chinki… can u plz tell me… why twinkle said no 4 diz marriage..
Chinki: yaa sure… actually.. n she tells him d reason…
Kunj: really… she nvr fall in love wd any1…
Chinki: no… she had a crush… but love… no… nd d funny thing is dat she desperately wants to fall in love wd sm1…
Kunj(smiles): or…
Chinki notices nd says or… or kya sb thik thak…
Kunj: no no i mean twinkle…
Chinki laughs n says sorry jiju but diz is our bstiees talks… how can i tell u all diz…
Kunj: but i want to knw… i lo.. i love her… plz… we r getting married soon… i hv a right…
Chinki: ok but plz… twinkle ko kuch mt btana… otherwise she will kill me…
Kunj: ok…
Chinki: so… what u want to knw… abt her…
Kunj: i understand dat she wants to fall in love wd sm1 but she nvr falls in love… buttt tell me… sbke liye pyar ki alg alg definations hoti h… twinkle kya sochti h… abt love…

Chinki: wait jiju… mere pass kuch h but it’s personal plz i request u… read it nd delete it… n don’t tell twinki about all diz… i’ll forward u twinki’s msg which she sends me…

Kunj: ok… n she cuts d call
Kunj receives d msg nd reads it…

Precape: twinkle’s cell is missing… kunj helps her… she came to knw about her name (blunder)… kunj is scared…

##episode ends##

I hope u like it… keep commenting… love u all… ??

Credit to: Shona...

31 comments

  1. sonali

    osm yaar . seriously I love d way when u r describing about twinkle’s beauty . when I read it for some time I think she is in front of me

  2. tara

    lol..what a reason..haha
    anyways..ur epi was …not good… m not happy with it… how can u do this??
    chill m very happy..lol… it was super se uper..loved it to core..
    🙂 😀 LOV U TOO

    • Yaa… wht d excuse naa… but from now i try my bst to comment bcoz i really loved yrr… btw thanku tara love u soo much… ?

  3. Cutie pie

    Ufff wat was der in dat msg u make me desperate aftr rrading ur evry part nxt part ka wait nai hota hai

  4. Sayeeda

    Sahi hai apne aap ko sabki daat se bachane ke liye kitna cute reason diya hai ….plzzz mujhe bhi batao nd plz sikha do ye talent….. lollzzzz…
    Awesome yrrr ….what a romantic scenes with my fav singer Arijit Singh’s song ……it’s really acted as the icing on the cake …..
    Waiting to read the next one to know about Chinki’s msg nd that blunder also ….love u Shona Mona..

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