unconditional love ~ twinj episode 23

Hlo…. guys…. !!!!

Thanku soooo much for ur comments….. m glad u all liked it…. i m vry happy seeing ur response…. it means alot to me…. here is d nxt update… i hope u lyk diz one also….
Episode starts

Kunj: u r fat twinkle…. i will die…. leave me….

Twinkle: fat….. I M FAT(stressing)

Kunj: yes…. U R FAT(stressing)

Twinkle(lyk a nursery class kid): u fat…. Mummaa khti h ki jo khta h na vo khud hi hota h….

Kunj thinks~
Yrrr ye to school tym me chli gyi….

She again moves towards his lips….

Kunj: aaah…. mummmaaa…. my legs…. my hands…. my shoulder…..
Plz leave me twinkle…..

She(making a childish face)leaves him nd stands dn kunj also…. she looks here md der nd dn turns in order to see d whole room….

Kunj: ab kya hua (wht happen now)

Twinkle: drwaza kha pr h…. (where is d door)

Kunj sees dat door is behind her only…. but she didn’t look down she continuesly looking up nd searching here nd der…. he goes to her downs her face turns her nd points towards d door….

Kunj: wo kya designer wall lgri h….

Twinkle sees kunj nd says….

Twinkle: last tym i m asking u…. u r kissing me or not….

Kunj doesn’t say anything…. she starts to move towards door….

Kunj: wait where r u going….

Twinkle: kattii…. u r not kissing me naaaa…..

Saying dat she opens d door nd goes outside d room…. kunj holds her wrist nd pulls her inside…. she again goes outside…. nd pulls kunj with her….. both r outside d room…
Kunj looks here nd der….

Kunj: sb soo gye shayad….

Twinkle: shit…. sb so gye kya…. i want to ask bebe abt kiss….(kunj shocked) no problm i will ask her tomorrow….

She looks at kunj…. whn he say…

Kunj: yaa…. we both together ask her abt kiss…. but tomorrow….

Suddenly her head starts paining badly…. she holds her head…. all d things starts blurring to her…. she starts fainting…. but she doesn’t want to…. so she is not closing her eyes while it automatically starts to close… she is opening it forcefuly…. kunj sees her struggling…. nd holds her by shoulder…. while she hugs him nd rests her head on his chest…
Kunj: close ur eyes twinkle….

Twinkle: no i don’t won’t to close….

Kunj: plzz u r opening it forcefully ur body needs rest…. plz close it u will feel better….

She closes her eyes for few seconds nd again opens…. kunj breaks d hug nd holds her in his arms…. nd place her smoothly on d bed…. while she keeps opening nd closing her eyes for seconds bcoz she doesn’t want to sleep…. he is abt to leave but she holds his hand….

Twinkle: where r u going…. u want to ditch me….

Kunj: ditch…. why would i ditch u…
Twinkle(innocently): first u didn’t kiss me nd now u want to escape…. m i dat much bad…. m i ugly…. u don’t loveeee…..(He places his hand on her mouth)

Kunj(cupping her face ): u r not bad…. nd don’t u dare call ugly to u…. nd yes… EVERYONE loves you…. don’t say dat again….

Twinkle: i want u in dat EVERYONE… (suddenly) aaah…. diz headache… sb kuch ghum kyu rha h…. kunj….

Kunj: sleep twinkle…. u will feel better….(he goes nd close d door)

Twinkle(childish): no no no…. i will sleep with u only….

Kunj: twink…. (she interrupts)

Twinkle: noooooo…. with u onlyyyy…
Kunj: areee yrrr….(rolling his eyes) okay…. i will…

Both sleep on bed…. she sleeps holding his hand….

After smtym….

Kunj sees twinkle sleeping beside him…. he removes her hand from his… he gives a kiss at her forehead nd starts to leave but turns nd again goes close to her….

Kunj: i will fulfill all ur wishes…. whtevr u want…. evn my lyf…. i will happily give it to u….

He goes close nd gives a peck to her lips…. while removing he feels his lips is locked by her soft lips…. he opens his eyes nd sees twinkle is looking at him…. she closes her eyes nd starts moving her lips in his lips he want’s to remove his lips but his love for her stops him…. he doesn’t understand it is right or wrong…. he sees twinkle her curiosity…. he also closes his eyes nd starts kissing…. she moves her hands to his hairs nd starts caressing it… his hands r admiring her curvy figure.. he starts to make kiss deeper…. nd deeeper…. remembering as her wish…. both r into eo…. der tounges r playing with eo… both r enjoying it…. when kunj stops kissing but twinkle continues… bcoz she wants diz only…. he smiles seeing her desperancy….. kunj starts again kissing…. they share a deep nd passionate kiss…. dn after 5 min twinkle starts breathing more heavily…. kunj feels diz nd opens his eyes to see…. he breaks d kiss…. both r breathing heavily nd looks at eo when kunj says “can’t u break d kiss when u r out of breath” he gets up nd sits on bed…. she also

Twinkle(innocently): i don’t knw…. actually it was my first kiss naa…

Kunj: achaaa…. jese mera to roz ka kaam h… (really…. as if it’s my daily work)

Twinkle gives WOW wala look when he says diz….. when she sees mirror nd her smudge lipstick…..

Twinkle(tensed + crying lyk a baby): my lipstick…. how it got smudge…. ooohh my clutch… (stressing in her mind) i think it’s with chinki…. how will i correct it now..(seeing her lips)

Kunj gives common boys look…. kitne nakhre hote h in ladkiyo k vo wala look dn kunj see her smudge lipstick…. nd smile…. she looks at kunj for an answer….

Kunj: ohh haa ur lipstick got smudged…. who did diz…. nyways we will search him tomorrow…. now plz….. sleep…. (he starts to leave)

Twinkle: okay but…. where r u going….

Kunj: at couch…. u sleep here…. nd plz don’t stop me… i m here in room only….

Twinkle: nooo nooo…. plzzzz…. sleep wd me…. i don’t want to go far from u….

Kunj: u seriously drunk naa…. or making me fool….

Saying diz he goes nd sat on couch…

Twinkle: i told u m not drunk…. y r u saying diz again nd again….

Kunj: bcoz i taste it…. i knw…. u drink vodka shots right….

Twinkle(surprised): hawww…. how do u knw dat….

Kunj: i m Kunj Sarna i knw everything….

Twinkle(impressed): u knw evrythng really u r sooo smart kunj….

Kunj smiles at her behavior….

Twinkle: btw kunj.. my knee is paining… (lying on bed)(If u remember she is wearing a black one piece nd her knee got hurt while she is coming from balcony)

Kunj: shit i forgot…. all bcoz of ur kiss… wait i will do ointment on it

he search d ointment nd find it when he turns nd finds twinkle sleeping peacefully….

Kunj goes towards bed….

Kunj: twinkle…. twinkle…. again ur drama starts…. twinkle…. (she doesn’t even response) finally…. she slept…. god…. drama queen….. don’t knw wht would happen tomorrow when she remembers all diz…. i also don’t knw in wht way she react…. kunj get ready dear…. she will kill u for sure…. babaji plz save me….

He see her knee which has a lil scratch…. he apply d ointment on it nd goes to sleep…..

##episode ends##

Sorry for short update…. as m not well…. diz headache nd cold…. aaahh i m done with it…. i love monsoon but not it’s side effects…. my nose becames red yrrr…. nd i jsttttt hate it…. nyways…. i want to say dattttt……………………………..
keep commenting nd loving me….. love u all ????

18 comments

  1. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Shona, it was amazing.. loved it a lot..continue soon and also, please take care of yourself.?

  2. zayb_zikra

    Awwww shona di…
    Inna cute epi yaar…?????????
    Jusss amazing loved it…???
    Awwwweeee twinkis talk ws jussssssssssssssss adorable Yarr…
    N do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz

  3. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Loved the episode shonaa and drunk Twinkle was so cute god knows how will she react after waking up that too in Kunj’s room god Please save Kunj from her outburst Please do post the next episode soon and get well soon Even I love the rain and I have already faced it’s side effect and will surely face it again by looking at the way it is raining in Mumbai

  4. Lama

    |Registered Member

    Hey Shonaa, Brilliant episode yaar ???…nd kunj’s one liner was Amazing ???…it was sooooooo awesome yaar ????…twinkle’s behaviour was like Awwwww ?????…loved it from the core ???

  5. Shreya098

    |Registered Member

    just loved it..?
    finally twinkle ko uska kiss mil gaya??
    curious to know how she’ll react in the morning….
    waiting for the next update

  6. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Shoonnnnnnaaaaaaa……….
    Ayyeee haayyeee…itna romantic episode …..haayyee reeee …
    Throughout whole episode I was feelings goosebumps… nd that kiss part was toh……..sorry no words to describe the cuteness of it…
    Nd Kunj’s dialouge yeh toh mera daily ka kaam hai ..hhahaaa…
    So well written…. so well described …Imagining Twinkle inebriated state nd Kunj’s innocence at that time was soooo amazing ….I wish I could see it in real… this scene was more better than hotel scene of TEI….
    Love u shonu ..monu….

  7. Shikha

    its amazing Shona
    loved this talli Twinkle
    and the lipstick smudged part was so cute I loved it so much
    And Kunj telling her about vodka Shots aweeeeee its really nice how Twinkle didn’t know about it
    and get well soon buddy

  8. baby

    hey shonaa 1st of all soooooooooooooo sry fr being late dn 2ndly d episode ws amzing pls post nxt asap n 3rdly get well soon dear

Your comment will now be reviewed first before it's published. Read more here..

Your comment will now be reviewed first before it's published. Read more here..