unconditional love ~ twinj episode 17

Hloo… guys…. !!!!
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Episode starts

Sarna mension

Kunj is in his room (haa… or vo bhi devdas typ… no he is not drunk… what’s d need of drink if d situation is enough)

All d things in room are here nd there…. he is sitting beside d bed in d floor… tears anger are still der in his eyes…

Kunj: i hate u…. i hateeee uuuu…. i hateeeeeee uuuuuu….. twinkle taneja….. how can u do diz…. with me…. with my love….

Some1 knocks d door he stands up composes himself… nd opens d door
He is standing at d door as d room was all messed up wd his anger….

Kunj: maa….

Usha: wht happen kunj…. ur face is looking dull….

Kunj: n.. no… nthng… maa… tell me… u… came to say smthng…. ??

Usha: are haa.. tomorrow’s engagement ring…. (shows d ring nd kunj takes it) it is her size only…. i hope twinkle lyk diz…

Kunj fakes smiles : it’s vry nyc….

Usha: kunj… u knw…. i m vry happy for u… marriage is not only about 2 persons relationship but it combines 2 families also…. i always wanted to make twinkle my DIL…. i m feeling lyk i m vry lucky mother in diz world….

Kunj: ofcourse u r… bcoz u r kunj Sarnas mother….

She smiles nd takes d ring nd leaves…. kunj closes d door…

Kunj(for twinkle): u want me to say NO…. in ur dreams…. now see what i do…. diz engagement will happen for sure…. by hook or by crook…. i will make it happen….. bcoz now… it’s not about my feelings for u…. but my family der happiness also involved in diz…. u don’t love me…. dn it’s ur problm…. i won’t force u to love me… but now i can do anything to marry u…. it’s not about me now it’s about my family…

At taneja mension

Twinkle is in her room lyk a lyfless body….

Flashback
After college twinkle goes to d near by cafe where uv is…

Twinkle: now say…. where is chinki…

Uv: patience baby… u wanna see her cm lets go…

They go to d same forest nd d same cottage where twinj is staying at night…. but outside d cottage twinkle sees many wires covering d cottage…

Twinkle: what is all diz… diz wires….
Uv: ys wires…. diz wires catches d earthing by tower which is near d forest…. it is needed at night….u knw ur friend is also lyk u… scared of darkness….

Twinkle(angrily): come to d point… chinki is under d cottage or not…

Uv: so d point is dat…. u knw na weather of diz forest…. not heavy but a little rainfall also gives her a 1000 volt of shock….

Twinkle: what u mean…

She runs under d cottage nd sees chinki is unconscious nd wrapped in many wires many bulbs is also der in cottage…. dn she sees some goons also der… she turns nd says..

Twinkle: what’s ur problm uv…. y r u doing all diz….

Uv: diz is lyk my twinkle… direct point ki baat… ur mom insulted my mom in front of every1…. my mom wants to make u her DIL… but ur mom insulted her by saying dat she will find a better husband for u who is not lyk me…. n u…. u r not less dn ur mom… u said dat ur engaged… lier….

Twinkle: so what… u will take a revenge lyk diz by taking a lyf… just for an insult or a small lie….

Uv: yes i will bcoz diz is d question of my mom’s self respect….

Twinkle(frustrated): what… okay… so what u want now….

Uv: u r not engaged… dn u r not going to engaged wd any1…. if u want chinki to come out of diz forest nd diz wires n all dn stop diz engagement… by making me ur bf..

Twinkle: consult wd a psycatrist…. coz u r a psycho personality…. i won’t do anything lyk dat….

Uv: oh so u won’t do…

he take a waterbottel from one goon der nd he makes waterdrop falls on wire… which give a shock to chinki(a lil as it was a drop) twinkle screams…

Twinkle: chinkiiiiiii….. (scared) okay i will do… but first free her…

Uv: no… first stop diz engagement.. otherwise…. i won’t do anything… but if rain comes… dn u also won’t be able to do anything…. end of ur bestiee….(laughs evilly)

Flashback ends

At night
Twinkle is in her room… she started crying again…

Twinkle(shivering crying sobbing): m not cheap kunj…. m not a cheater.. kunj understand me plz…i..i..love.. u… i love u… yes i love u… i don’t wanna go far from u… kunjjj… u r my everything kunj…. i can see my future in ur eyes…. u r my future… i want u… i need u… u r my lyf… u make me feel special everytym…. u make me fall in love wd u… u r my love… my world… don’t call me cheater plz…. i will die…. i m crazy for u kunj… plz hug me tight nd say dat u r wd me…. plz don’t leave me lyk dat…. i love u…. kunjjj….

She stops as some1 knocks d door she wipes her tears composes herself nd opens d door…

Twinkle: tum….

He enters in nd locks d door…

Twinkle: u…. what r u doing here… why u came here….

He pushes her to d wall… she closed her eyes as they r very close to eo… he interlocks his both hand with her hands….

Twinkle(still eyes closed): kunj… leave me….

Kunj: open ur eyes nd look at me twinkle….

Twinkle slowly opens her eyes…. both r very close…. she starts breathing heavily…. she sees his condition…. she sees d pain nd anger in his eyes… in his face which is full red…. she doesn’t care about anything nd jst hug him tightly (still crying badly)…. kunj doesn’t hugs her back…. she tightens her grip more…. kunj holds her shoulder in order to push her… but she doesn’t leave him…. now he holds her waist to break d hug…. but twinkle comes more close to him…. so kunj also wraps his arms around her…. from her waist to her back…. both closes der eyes to feel d love behind der hug…. after 10 min. Kunj breaks d hug…. both r much relaxed now….

Kunj(calmly): y u doing all diz… who is diz uv.. nd from where he suddenly comes…

Twinkle again remembers all d scene about chinki nd what uv said…

Twinkle: i love yuv… i love him…. plz stop diz engagement….

Nd diz tym kunj’s anger is on peak.. uncontrolable… kunj holds twinkle’s hand nd folds her (reverse) behind her back same hand which uv twists… still paining to her nd now kunj also does d same… but as he twists her hand….

Twinkle: aaaah aahh… kunj… plz… plzzz leave my hand… it’s paining… i beg u plz…..

Tears starts flowing from her eyes nd within a neno second kunj realizes nd leave her hand…. he punches d wall hard…. twinkle’s hand was really hurt by him…. she holds her hand nd sits on d floor crying badly…. kunj sits besides her… he slowly takes her hand…. nd starts rubbing it slowly….

Kunj: i m sorry…

Twinkle: kunj… i don’t luv yuv…. nd her phone rings…

Both stands up nd twinkle goes to receive call… n shocked to see d name uv… she receives…

Twinkle: hloo… (Kunj thinks to go from der)

Uv: stop all diz… tell me… kunj is ready to cancel d engagement or not…

She turns nd sees kunj is going out of d room…

Twinkle: he is not yet ready uv…

Kunj is about to go but hears diz from d entrance… n turns again…

Uv: u want ur frnd out of d forest or not… u love her or not

Twinkle: no i want… i love(she doesn’t say… “her” but takes a pause nd says sadly) but kunj is not ready….

Kunj hears dis nd goes from der angrily….(as he is hearing only what twinkle is saying)

##episode ends##

Keep commenting…. lots of love…. ???

Credit to: Shona...

14 comments

  1. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Please clear the misunderstanding between Twinj why could Twinkle just keep the phone on speaker so that Kunj also supports her
    Loved the intense episode and Kunj’s concern for Twinkle
    Hate the character of Uv

  2. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Yrr….I can’t bear their separation nd that too just bcoz of Uvi ….humesha twinj ke becch main ata hai …
    Plzzz don’t separate them…. so emotional ….

  3. Poorvi

    Episode was damn emotional.. Was feeling like to cry out with twinkle.. Hope both unite soon.. Post next one asap..

  4. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Shona d epi was filled with emotions….u nailed it
    Pls clear d misunderstandings soon ……and post d next epi asap

  5. Lama

    yaaaar till when we have to see this sepration…now i can’t bear more…plz unite them fast

  6. Dreamer...arundhati

    |Registered Member

    Shona u rite sona na so plz twinj ki life ko sone jaise chamka
    Epi was too g7d
    Uv ka chapter khatam karna yaar
    Ye judaai ab bardas nahi hoti.
    Love u and ur ff shona dear
    Ctd soon

  7. zayb_zikra

    Omggggggggggggggggg shona diii epi ws really heartbreaking???
    Anyways plzzz uv urghhhh
    Ik u have planned sumthg amaizing.. …
    N cant see their seperation…….
    Plzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz do cont asap eagerly waiting for ur ff plzzzzz………
    Luv u……
    ?????????

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