unconditional love ~ twinj episode 13

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Episode starts

They both sits der only…

Twinkle thinks~
What’s wrong wd him… why he is saying all diz… why i feel dat he loves me… babaji kya ho rha h ye sb…

Kunj thinks~
What is all diz kunj… ab to ye or zyada ho rha h… (looking at twinkle) jb tu mere aas pass hoti h sb kuch perfect lgta h… or zra bhi dur hoti h to me bechain ho jata hu…. ab dur nhi rh skta tujhse twinkle…. (when u r near me everything looks perfect… nd whn u go lil far i was worried for u…. now i can’t stay away from u twinkle)

Full silence in btw both…. dn twinkle breaks it…

Twinkle: kunj…. tumhe kese pta me yha thi… pta h me bohut dar gyi thi (kunj… how do u get to knw dat i m here… knw wht i got vry scared)

Kunj comes out of his thought nd looks at d situation der…. instead of given d answer he said…. (he is lil angry coz of d situation)

Kunj: Scared…. i was telling u na not to stay in diz forest but no… tujhe to kisi ki sunna nhi h… (u don’t want to hear any1s)

Twinkle: Areeee…. mujhe kya pta tha ase bina btayaye barish aa jayegi… (i didn’t knw dat suddenly rain starts without informing)

Kunj: nhi nhi letter likh k aati na ya phone lga k… (drama) hloo twinkle me aa jau… twinkle madam bolegi nhi nhi abhi me yhi hu abhi mt aana… baad me aana…. (no no first rain post letter to u or call u… dat hello twinkle may i come…. dn twinkle madam said… no i am here now… don’t come now… come later)

Twinkle: are bina btayaye as in k abhi to weather…. acha… tha…. suddenly… (kunj interrupts her)

Kunj: haa… suddenly barish ne socha… k kyu na me twinki ko surprise du… (suddenly rain thinks dat y not i give surprise to twinki)

Twinkle: y r u fighting wd me… it’s not only my mistake…

Kunj: haa but u also want to stay here… now enjoy… huh (murmurs) bhagwan ne bheja to bheja pr bheje me bheja nhi bheja…

Twinkle(hears all diz): shut up… if u don’t want to stay dn go… i don’t need u…

Kunj: as if i need u…

Twinkle: now plz shut ur mouth otherwise….

Kunj: otherwise… what… ???

Twinkle: leave it i don’t want to talk to u….

Kunj: as if i waaa…

nd he sees twinkle looking at him angrily so he shuts his mouth…

Kunj thinks~
Kuch zyada to nhi ho gya… nhi kunj whtevr u said is true… it’s needed…. if smthing would happen to her… dn… leave it… nothing happens…

After some tym…

kunj places his head on twinkle’s lap… (purposely)

Twinkle: ku…kunjjjj….

Kunj: twinkle m tired… plz u r my gf naa… (naughtily)

Twinkle: i m not… (fake anger)

Kunj: ok… (ignoring)

Twinkle: wht ok… get up…

Kunj: i won’t… i don’t need ur
Permission… u r my… my… whtevr.. m tired…(teasingly)

Twinkle(whispers): but i m feeling butterflies…

Kunj: butterflies… where… don’t tell me in ur stomach…. nd he smirks at her….

she is surprised by his behavior…

Kunj gets up… nd says ok fyn if u r not feeling comfortable…

Twinkle: no..ya…nhi…vo.. i mean… vo… i… it’s… nothing…

Kunj: wht u r trying to sy… wait… it’s nothing lyk dat kunj u can sleep… right… nd winks at her…

Now Twinkle ignores him… nd he again places his head on her lap ….
but insted of saying anything now she caresses his hairs… both smiles..

Morning

All goes to their respective places…
Twinj reaches sarna house…

Bebe: puttar ae ki hua… halt dekho apni… (what happen dears… look at your states)

Kunj narrates everything to d family…

Bebe: rab da lakh lakh shukar h tum dono thik ho… twinkle puttar kitni kamzor lg rhi h… jao ab tum apne kamro me or aaram kro (thankx to god dat u both r safe… twinkle u r looking vry week… now both of u go to ur rooms nd take rest)
Both go to their rooms… for some rest…

Evening

Kunj wakes up… (ya he was sleeping thk gya tha na bechara)

He goes to twinkle’s room…

Kunj: twink… he sees twinkle…. he smiles…

Kunj: abhi tk so rhi h… (she is sleeping till now)

He comes near her…

Kunj: twinkle… twinkle… wake up…
Ohh god diz girl….

Kunj taps her… n feels her body temperature is high… kunj checks her head… she has fever…

Kunj calls usha nd bebe… both comes…

Usha: kya hua kunj… (what happen kunj)

Kunj(tensed): maa… she has a fvr…

He calls der family doctor… doctor comes nd checks her… he asks what happen to her…
Kunj tells him about ystrdy night…

Doctor: ohh… she seems vry week… fever is normal in dat situation… don’t worry i’ll give d medicines… she is unconscious now… after d injection she becomes fine…

Kunj(lil scared): injection…??

He sits beside twinkle nd holds her hand…

Usha: kunj.. she is unconscious… she didn’t even realize d pain…

Bebe: yup kunj… usha is right… doctor…. give her injection…

Kunj(acts like child): n..nhh..nhi… plz… nd he holds her hand more tightly…

Usha(fake anger): kunjjj…

Kunj: no no give d medicine na… i’ll make her eat…

Doctor: injection is important…

kunj: no… i said na…. no means no

Usha nd bebe holds his hand nd drags him from der…

Kunj(acts lyk kid): maa… bebe… leave me… i am not going anywhere…

They both holds him… one hand bebe another hand usha… nd doctor gives her an injection… while kunj closed his eyes…

Kunj(frustrated+angry): ho gyaaa

N after dat doctor leaves from der… bebe nd usha also leaves…

After some time twinkle become conscious… nd finds kunj near her…

Twinkle: ku..kunj…

Kunj is vry vry happy… to see her conscious…

Twinkle: tum yha…(u here)

Kunj: yes yes… madam… i m.. kunj sarna… ur PA is here…

Twinkle: y r u saying lyk diz…

Kunj: tujhe pta bhi h… meri halt… me… mujhe lga… yrr i don’t wan’t to loose u… i.. i..

Just dn bebe enters with dinner…

Kunj thinks~
God i was just about to say but… noo what r u saying kunj… diz is not right tym… buttt i think she is also feels smthing for me…

jst dn Bebe shakes kunj…

Precape: kunj enters in twinkle’s room at mid night….

##Episode ends##

Hope u lyk it… keep commenting… love u all…. ??

Credit to: Shona...

21 comments

  1. tara

    shona di…. kya kar rhi ho?? aisa koi karta hain kya??
    mummy se kitni daant padhi mujhe…. bt i insisted that i would read ur ff now….hehehe 😛 😛
    can’t skip it 😉 🙂
    how do u write so well i mean… nowadays it has become a trend every new writer is doing wonder!! really glad to have u here….
    again awesome episode.. loved it.. love u tooo

  2. bulbul

    Shona di it was. So lovely loved it so much when will the confession occur I also want to write ffs on twinj but don’t know how to uplaod

  3. Shikha

    awesome story
    reading ur ff for the first time
    and I must say this ff is mind blowing …I read all of its parts in one go so I’ll tell you about all of these brilliant story,,,, I totally loved the starting becoz it was needed and twinj’s first meet was like the show but I also loved it in the show so imagining it again is also good
    and yaa the way Kunj showed his heroism was cute but he shouldn’t did it as he don’t need it…….and then the way you made them both say yes to the marriage was superb must say you have got a very good brain hehehe…..
    and twinkle’s description of love is soooo goooooddddd and when Kunj kissed that msg gave a aweeee feeling …….Twinkle got scared in the house was also awesome as it gave us their first night together hehehe its so beautifully described by you ……and their camping each n every part in forest was just beyond words twinj hugged each other and then arguing and then Kunj slept in her laps was really cute and twinkle saying m feeling butterflies was soooooooo good……..and then at last kunj’s care for twinkle was super duper good ……..thnx for writing this wonderful story m loving it a lot
    sorry but don’t read stories on TU so cudnt get to read it before but now m glad that I got to read it
    and sorry for this much long comment but what can I do I can’t stop praising your wonderful writing and after sid’s exit I cudnt watch the show so m happy that I can read it n imagine it in place of the show …..so also that’s y m showing my feelings to you becoz m so happy to read it
    thnx again for this update
    keep updating fast

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