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UNBELIEVABLE TRUTH– CONCLUSION – ISHQBAAZ -SHOT 9

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Hello this is VHM signing in with a few shots FF…this story will pick from my own imagination involving current track and spoilers taken into account….i hope the readers will support me the same way as they did earlier….

This is a mystery and here is the final episode of this FF …SO FIR THE LAST TIME OF THIS FF PLEASE BEAR WITH ME !!!

Recap : OmRu saved Anika…Shivaay and ASR confronted…ASR accepted the defeat….Shivaay revealed the plot….Shivaay slapped Anika….

Shivaay turned towards her and slapped her hard …………everyone there got shocked and Anika was crying

Om shouted ‘’ What the hell have you done Shivaay ?’’

Rudra held Anika

Shivaay ‘’ I should have done this before but she was not near me……..’’

Om ‘’ You have lost it Shivaay…’’

Shivaay looked at ASR …… ASR was burning in anger with what Shivaay had done to Anika………..

Anika left from there running and OmRu followed……….Shivaay had layer of tears but controlled them and looked at them till they left completely……….

ASR Was now at his peaks of rage …Shivaay turned and looked at ASR and his condition ….Shivaay smiled looking at ASR…………Unable to bear Shivaay smiling after slapping Anika ……..

ASR Held Shivaay’s collar and shouted ‘’ How dare you hurt Anika ? I must have killed you before but I was quiet because Anika was happy with you…but now I will not leave you …….’’
Shivaay shouted ‘’ Shut Up…. What were you saying earlier…I didn’t know the reason for you not harming Anika ‘’

ASR ‘’ what do you mean? ‘’

Shivaay ‘’ I know who you are ? ‘’

ASR ‘’ What ? ‘’

Shivaay ‘’I said..i know who you are ?’’

ASR ‘’What do you mean?’’

Shivaay ‘’It means Shivaay Singh Oberoi doesn’t leave any job incomplete’’

ASR ‘’Enough of your puzzles , tell it straight’’

Shivaay ‘’ I said just earlier that Khanna called me and insisted me to meet him to share some important information now let me tell you what was it …I didn’t want OmRu or Anika to know it …so I slapped her…I wanted to see your reaction after I hurt Anika and also make them leave from here…….’’

ASR looked puzzled while Shivaay continued

Shivaay ‘’You are not Advay Singh Raizada because the real Advay Singh Raizada is dead …….. ‘’

ASR ..fake ASR was startled and shocked to core………..

Fake ASR ‘’But how..do..you..know ?’’

Shivaay ‘’Because you are the best friend of Advay Raizada … when I saw you for the first time I said I observed you …and my eyes saw your bracelet with CCC too……..but unfortunately that day the bracelet was upside down…so I could see the jewellers name……I informed Khanna to find out more……Khanna went to the jeweller and found out your truth from then…..

CCC stands for Chintu-Cheenu-Chutki ………….

Cheenu is none other than Anika ………….Chintu her brother and Chutki her sister………’’

ASR was teary Eyed ………but he behaved normal…………

Shivaay continued

Shivaay ‘’Anika’s family died in an accident ….she was saved somehow………….You reached the accident spot and didn’t find Anika or Chutki there ..however you found her parents and Chintu’s I mean Real Advay’s dead body there…you decided to search others too……..

You took care of their business from then on and wanted to give back to the sisters whenever they were found ………..you were searching for the Raizada sisters…when you finally found one of them………

Anika was saved and was adopted by Sahil’s family…..

You saw Anika when I announced her as my wife in the press holding her hands ….you recognized her by her bracelet..but you were not sure…that was the reason ..today morning when her bracelet fell you were so keen to ask about it………

FLASHBACK———————————

ASR ‘’ this bracelet ? ‘’

Shivaay ‘’ yeah sorry this is mine ‘’

ASR ‘’ But this is ladies bracelet ‘’

Shivaay ‘’ actually this is my soul…it’s my wife’s bracelet…my Anika’s bracelet ….thank you for giving it…’’

ASR was in thoughts…………..

ASR ‘’ Are you sure this is your wife’s bracelet?’’

Shivaay ‘’ ofcourse…she doesn’t leave this anywhere anytime..but this time it unfortunately remained with me’’

ASR smiled and said ‘’Thank you’’

Shivaay ‘’for what?’’

ASR smiled and said ‘’nothing …just that you answered me’’

Shivaay observed change in his behavior and simply smiled………..

————————————————-FLASHBACK ENDS—————————–

As I said earlier you were studying me… you found out in what circumstances I married Anika and how much I have hurt her earlier……….

I always wondered why will you plan to ruin me just because I was reason for the loss in your business….because you are an equally good business man and you know profit and loss are part of business……you might want to give a loss in business but not ruin me personally too ………

I was thinking only about this and was recalling everything… that’s when I realized that there is something more than professional rivalry… may be something personal…………
To prove what I was thinking I slapped Anika and your reaction made me confirm my instinct…….. ‘’

ASR looked at him appreciatingly……Shivaay smiled and continued

Shivaay ‘’YOU LOVED ANIKA and you couldn’t win her………..because I took her away from you……… So you wanted to ruin me in both ways…separate me from Anika and parallely ruin me in business……..’’

ASR smiled taking his hand out of pocket and looking at the bracelet

Shivaay ‘’this is an Childhood love ….had there been no love angle..you would have acted as a businessman….had you treated her as Sister : while holding my collar you would have shouted ‘’how dare you hurt my Sister’’ or you would have reacted instantly not waited till she left or would have revealed the truth while she was in your trap, you would have agreed to the fact that I am her husband and you cannot ruin me and most of all never tried to hide the CCC bracelet from her when she was infront of you amidst all of us’’….

Your reaction wiped away all my doubts …else who would want to give away such a big established business and that too having developed to such an extent….why would you search for Anika and her sister as priority ‘’

ASR was silent and Shivaay continued

Shivaay ‘’ what you never found or understood was that I LOVE ANIKA AND I HAVE ALWAYS LOVED HER…..she is happy with me and I am sure she loves me too…………’’

ASR walked here and there Shivaay stopped him and held him by his shoulders and said ‘’Relax’’

They both sat and smiled…Shivaay was thinking something ,rupturing his forehead as if it was itching

ASR ‘’do you have something to ask me?’’

Shivaay ’’yes but how do you know’’

ASR ‘’I Said I read you , your mannersims and from you current mannersims of rupturing your forehead I understood…go ahead…ask me’’

Shivaay ‘’ What’s your real name …..i found out about everything related to you But what I couldn’t find out is what is your real name …because none wanted to reveal the real name of yours ……….’’

Fake ASR smiled and said ‘’ now nothing is left in my name to be known …keep her happy always …’’

Shivaay smiled and said ‘’it’s my duty to keep her happy ‘’

Fake ASR ‘’ will you not reveal about me or about her family then ?’’

Shivaay ‘’ when right time comes I will say her ……..but as of now …….Few things should be mystery always …because such UNBELIEVABLE TRUTH will never give peace’’

Shivaay ‘’ But still I want to know your real name…an return gift by letting you know how we bought Anika safe’’

Fake ASR smiled and said ‘’ARNAV’’

Shivaay ‘’ ARNAV…nice name’’

Fake ASR ‘’ And Arnav’s ‘’KHUSHI’’ is in Anika ‘’

Shivaay ‘’ And ANIKA’S happiness is SHIVAAY’’

Arnav ‘’you are right’’

Arnav removed his CCC bracelet and handed it over to Shivaay and said ‘’when your right time comes give this to Anika…apart from her property this bracelet will also is hers…….’’

Shivaay took the bracelet and said ‘’Sure…thank you…’’

Arnav ‘’for what ? ‘’

Shivaay ‘’ for not revealing about her family to Anika…you had every chance to do so but you didn’t….had you not been involved in this planning and plotting I would have loved to be your best friend as Advay was and we would have the best of businessman in our country…….’’

Arnav smiled and

Arnav ‘’When are the cops coming to take me.’’

Shivaay ‘’ shortly ‘’

Cops arrived and took the fake ASR ……….Shivaay returned home………….

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In the Oberoi mansion all the family members were present and were waiting for SSO…….

He stepped in

Dadi went near him and Slapped him hard………

Shivaay ‘’ Dadi ‘’

Dadi ‘’ this slap is for two reasons …1 for hiding the truth about Anika being alive and 2 for slapping Anika ‘’

Shivaay ‘’ Dadi …but I couldn’t reveal it for security reasons ‘’

Pinky ‘’ Don’t you trust us at all ‘’

Shivaay ‘’mom.. nothing like that…..i just’’

Pinky ‘’leave it ‘’

Prinku shouted ‘’ will you all listen to me for once……..’’

Everyone was shocked to hear such a loud voice of Prinku

Prinku nears Tej ‘’ Papa…I want to travel abroad for sometime….also I request you to not think of marriage anytime soon….i need some time and break ‘’

Shivaay neared her ‘’ Your wish is our command Prinku…go anywhere you want to go but please keep in touch …we will be waiting for you eagerly ‘’

Shivaay ‘’OmRu …I know you are angry but I had to slap ‘’

Om ‘’ Shivaay …Anika Bhabhi explained us and we are not angry anymore …’’

They all share a super big tight hug

Rudra ‘’ go bhayya…Bhabhi has explained us but you have to pacify her …all the best…’’

Shivaay moved towards their room ………………..

Shivaay entered the room and Anika was sitting on bed with changed clothes, tied hair , tired face , red eyes and wiping her tears which were in no mood to stop flowing ……..
He slowly neared her and Anika sensed his presence and got up to leave from there……

Shivaay ‘’ Anika where are you going ? ‘’

Anika didn’t respond…….

Shivaay ‘’ I asked you something…this time where have you planned to go all alone ?’’

Anika saw him and speed of her tears increased with hiccups accompanying them at the same speed……..

Shivaay couldn’t see Anika such but he was much angered with what Anika has done…

Shivaay ‘’ this time I am not going to stop you or take you in my arms ….how could you leave all alone that night without taking or informing any of us ? ‘’

Anika was listening as she knew she had no answer…….

Shivaay ‘’ Anika when will you understand…. it’s true you are Jhansi ki Rani, we call you by that name..but as I need you sometimes…you will also need us at times……….’’

Anika bent her head down…….her hiccups and tears were continuing at their own pace…….

Shivaay ‘’ Fine I don’t have anything else to say except to the fact that ……I was much angered on your childish behaviour and slapped you for the same….and I don’t regret for it’’

Anika looked at him and wiped her tears and turned her face away from him……..

Shivaay ‘’ Don’t you want to say anything ?’’

Anika nodded in No

Shivaay ‘’ Fine then… it’s late and everyone including you and me are tired ….Take rest….you need it ‘’

Saying this he gave her a glass of water and left the room without seeing her………….

Anika fell on the bed and started crying vigorously…….While Shivaay went to the Pool side…………

OmRuHi were already there and this time they anticipated that Shivaay would come there…………..

Shivaay was shocked to see them there and said ‘’You all here?’’

Om ‘’ I think we must ask this to you….why are you here at this time and how’s Anika Bhabhi ‘’

Shivaay ‘’ she is …She is…She is okay…okay ‘’

Mahi ‘’ Shivaay you cannot lie….did you console her or not ?’’

Shivaay ‘’what the wuck why will I console her ? what wrong did I do to console her ? it was her mistake to leave without informing anyone of us ‘’

Om ‘’ Shivaay relax…. Whatever she did was for our family….She did this to save Mahi….why couldn’t you understand such a small thing? ‘’

Rudra ‘’ Yes bhayya if I were in her place I would also have done the same……..’’

Shivaay ‘’ I am sure Rudra you would have done the same…because you both are insane and stupid ‘’

Mahi ‘’ I am sorry Shivaay all this has happened because of my carelessness ‘’

Shivaay ‘’ Don’t say so Mahi…it’s not your fault… I …I …I was much angered and slapped her …at that point all I knew was what would have happened if that fake ASR had harmed her ‘’

Om ‘’ wait a second…fake ASR? How do you know ?’’

Shivaay ‘’ nothing did I say fake ASR …no I mean that fake person had harmed her…..’’

Om relaxed ……..

Shivaay thought ‘’ Sorry OmRuHi and Anika… this truth should never come out …I can’t make Anika feel guilty that his childhood friend has done all this to get her and ruin me…she can never get rid of this guilt….and I fear at any emotional moment you guys may spill …………your brother for the first time is hiding such an important thing from you ‘’

Rudra ‘’ Bhayya what’s going on in your brain? I think now you should go and pacify Anika Bhabhi…..enough is enough…she has been crying continuously…she hadn’t had food also…’’
Om ‘’ yes Shivaay…Rudra has spoken something sensible after a really long time…’’

They all push Shivaay from poolside and Shivaay gives up and says ‘’ Fine…I am going…..i donno what to say…are you my brothers or Anika’s disciples ?’’

OmRuHi ‘’ Good night ‘’

Shivaay nodded his head in disagreement and returned to his room…………..

Shivaay came back to his.. their room …….and Anika was nowhere to be seen …..

Shivaay settles on his bed and says ‘’ Not again Anika…you can’t do this to me again….this time I will not be able to handle ‘’

He felt Anika’s presence and got relived then he kept the CCC bracelet in locker before Anika sees and went to get freshened up

Anika comes infront of him holding her ears and says ‘’ Billu ji… I ..i ..i am sorry….please forgive me’’

Shivaay held her hands and put them down and cupped her face………Anika was teary eyed and a lone tear dropped from her eye……he wiped the tear and said ‘’ no more tears
Anika…you have had enough…i..i am sorry…I shouldn’t have slapped you …I am really sorry ‘’

Anika held his hands and nodded her head horizontally signalling not to say like that and said ‘’ Don’t say sorry Shivaay…i…….’’

Shivaay ‘’ sshhhh……….no more words of apology…….i missed you so much Anika …….i missed you ‘’ and kissed her forehead and took her in his arms……brushing her hair……..

Anika blushed ……

Shivaay ‘’ you are blushing even while crying……you are seriously something else’’

Anika was even more blushing………

After a while Shivaay brought food and made her eat ………..

Shivaay ‘’ Take rest Anika ….you must have been very tired………..we will talk tomorrow’’

Anika held his hand and said ‘’ Shivaay…..please don’t go away from me……all these days I know how I survived and now I cannot afford to go away from you …it hurts Shivaay…it hurts very much‘’

Shivaay said ‘’ AWWWEEEEE’’

Anika hugged him tight and Shivaay reciprocated ……………after sometime they broke the hug and Anika turned to leave when Shivaay held her left hand and pulled her……….She was looking at his Blue orbs while Shivaay slowly made her wear the Moon bracelet…Anika looked at her hand……

Anika ‘’ Shivaay this ….?’’

Shivaay ‘’ Anika this is your strength and identity …you can leave me but never miss this bracelet’’

Only Shivaay knew why he said that bracelet as her identity

Anika ‘’ Shivaay I can never leave you …never….i know how lonely I felt these days…I had no family …’’

Shivaay hugged her tight when Anika said she had no family………..

Shivaay ‘’ You have a family ‘’

Anika looked at him ‘’ What are you saying? ‘’

Shivaay ‘’ nothing… I am saying now you have a family our family the Oberois family’’

Anika ‘’ that was what I was going to say…I had no family earlier but now I have such a big and beautiful family……..and I will never want to miss this family being somewhere else’’

‘’ I will never let you alone Anika……’’ said Shivaay in a husky tone hugging her…….

Anika was getting absorbed in his hug…….they broke their hug and looked into each others eyes and Shivaay slowly neared Anika’s face…His breathe was making her go
crazy……she was breathing heavily …..Shivaay neared her eyes and kissed her………Anika closed her fist ………he held her by her waist and pecked at her neck…Anika gave up……….Shivaay moved back to her face again and cupped her face and brushed her lips with his …….Anika couldn’t resist more ……she pulled him and their lips met softly ………..

Their romance continued from a liplock to consummation !!

It was UNBELIEVABLE for them but it was yet the TRUTH !!!!

Still Shivaay kept the mystery of Anika’s past with himself ………well was this an end or was it a beginning of something unexpected …Time would give the answers !!!

————————————————-THE END —————————————–

Please let me know how you felt reading this? Please do comment and let me know your opinion…any sort of comments are welcome both Positive and negative…I will reply back as soon as possible…

84 Comments
  1. Awesome

    1. VHM

      Thank you Shabnam for bearing with me and appreciating me

  2. Miss.murty

    I enjoyed reading it… tanq for the chapter

    1. VHM

      Thank you Miss.murty…i am glad you enjoyed reading

  3. Nithu

    super se uper hein………….yaar…………..loved it……………ty for giving us this amaziiiiiiiiinnngggggggggg story yaarrrrr….love you n ua story soooooo much hope you come back with another khidkithod story……………..
    with love
    mohitha……………….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Nithu / Mohitha…..your comment make me feel like i have passed in this Mystery FF

      1. Nithu

        you passed in distinction……….dnt worry but i loved this line Arnav’s ‘’KHUSHI’’ is in Anika ‘’……….to say this line stole my heart……………………..

      2. VHM

        Thank you so much Nithu for giving me distinction…it’s something big for a normal person like me

  4. Sairan

    Ohhhhhhh my goodness
    No words to express
    Marvellous
    Like u have left me speechless

    1. VHM

      Thank you Sairan……….i am so happy right now reading your comment……thanks a lot again

  5. Superb…. just fantastic….

    1. VHM

      Thank you Lilly ……feeling just fantastic reading your superb comment

  6. Lovely. Will you post epilogue as well?

    1. VHM

      Thank you Fffan1234…i am afraid i have no intention to post epilogue…sorry to disappoint you

  7. Awesome amazing ending do you know I love reading mysteries superbbbbbb yaar

    1. VHM

      Hey Shivika1233 thank you so much for your comment…I had no idea you love mysteries …but same pinch i too love thrillers and mysteries

  8. Ahaana

    Kya tha yeh … my god… mujhe literally pata hi nhi chla… when it started and came to an end… i was so much lost in it..omg no words can define its beauty on my feelings can express how i felt while reading 😊😊

    1. VHM

      initially reading your first sentence i was like did i write some crap then after reading the rest of comment i was like Thank God i din’t disappoint you………..Thank you so much Ahaana

  9. Surbhi Sharma

    This was best ! Such a CUTE ff .It was a perfect ending . I loved it . U ‘re an amazing writer .

    1. VHM

      Thank you Surbhi ……..i am so happy you liked the FF…thank you for the compliment

  10. It’s awesome…keep writing fabulous stories…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Zaveesha

  11. I dont know what to say yaar….I’m dead…loved the way you interconnected all the things told by shivaay in real ib….nd shivaay is such a genious man,in annika’s language he is a big chantomayi….
    Well eagerly waiting for your nxt work…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Bhavana …please be alive or else who will be encouraging me whenever i write my next FF or OS

      1. There is no need to even ask me to read it…as there is no way that i’m going to miss any of ur updates..that’s for sure…

      2. VHM

        Awee so nice of you …thank you

  12. Awesome….Loved it…
    Perfect Ending…
    Do come up with a new 1…. 🙂

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shivika……well next time i have to come up with something really new …………

  13. Nita D

    Awesome episode….loved it….ASR also fake….that was so unexpected….N shivaay as usual became the great wall of Shivaay n kept animal’s past with himself….my guess was partially correct…ASR had fallen for her….but not during the kidnapping…long before that…

    1. VHM

      Thank you Nita……i replied to your comment on my last shot that you were bang on and i am peace….you guess it right everytime…you have this amazing ability to read the authors brain…so it’s difficult to keep mystery as mystery from you………thanks a lot again Nita for your continuous support encouragement and motivation ….

      1. Nita D

        I read your previous comment just now only…. actually I love crime thrillers n I don’t know how but I m always able to guess what’s gonna happen….maybe I have watched n read so many so maybe….
        (Even my mom says it’s difficult to plan surprises for me as my “antennas” are always on 😉)
        Anyways….keeping that aside….it has always been a pleasure to read your work….N frankly speaking, u show show son e of your work to writers of CID etc shows….they are all showing crap these days….
        N come back soon which some other SS…..
        Bye! Luv ya! Good night!

      2. Nita D

        Aree I forgot to mention one thing…I really liked that line arnav ki khushi…..u mentioned names of both with their partners….where there is arnav, khushi has to be there….N Anika n Shivaay are as inseparable as Arshi…..

      3. VHM

        I know Arshi was someone special for many of the viewers …slowly Shivika is taking on the legacy…….I too liked those lines from my FF……lol…i am not so talented yaar that i send my stories to CID or so shows…and frankly speaking if i make an attempt i have no fairest idea of how to send my works to them too….i am happy in this beautiful world of Telly Updates meeting and greeting you all !!! Gud night and take care

  14. Ohh my God what a climax yaar,I really loved it. You are a mystery master

    1. VHM

      awee thank you Gangu ……..i am sorry i hadn’t time to comment on your FF ………..you too write amazingly….keep writing more and more

  15. Gayathri.visu

    This is really UNBELIEVABLE TRUTH…..!! I like line ARNAV’s KHUSHI is ANIKA….
    ANIKA’s happiness is SHIVAAY….! I just love this story…. The way you are creating suspense and the way you are solved them….is MARVELLOUS….!! Can you please send all links to me???

    1. VHM

      thank you thank you thank you……….i too liked tat line from my FF…my personal favorite line !!!

  16. amazing!!!!

    1. VHM

      Thank you Rahanuma

  17. Shivika

    Wowwwwwwww………amazing……spellbound….u nailed it……loved it to the core

    1. VHM

      ohh my God so many compliments … thank you for each and every compliment

  18. Awesome
    When shivaay slapped anika I have not thought it would be the reason…….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much …..Frankly speaking i was scared when i read comments on my previous episode that readers started thinking i will separate Shivika and Anika is in ASR’s team …..i was like in this episode i am gone ….but you all gave me so much appreciation…thanks a lot

  19. Archisha

    Just awesome and I loved it. Hope you make a dhamakedaar come back soon. 😊

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Archisha…hope so …but cannot guarentee

  20. Vincy

    Awesome

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Vincy

  21. Aryaraju

    Awesome.. Really liked it .. Thank you so much for this wonderful ff… 😍

    1. VHM

      Thank you Arya …….thank you for reading it patiently and appreciating me

  22. It was really nice, awesome and fantastic. I always loved reading all your episodes

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Nishi………..i am glad you loved it

  23. Nishi sharma

    It was really nice, awesome and fantastic. I always loved reading it

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Nishi………..i am glad you loved it…….thanks again

  24. Best ff loved it r u going to cont the story
    If yes pls pls fast waiting for it

    1. VHM

      Thank you Taspee …i am sorry this FF ended here……..but glad you liked the FF

  25. awesome update… finally mystery solved and I’m sad that I’m gonna miss ur ff…. Pls come up with another ff…. loved ur ff sooooooòooooooooooooo much..

    1. VHM

      Thanks a lot Lincy ARNAV …. hope you liked to see your name in the FF……i too will be missing all the awesome comments…..but everything has to end on one day …..oooo too much philosophical right……thank a lot

      1. I’m happy to see the name ARNAV in ur ff which made me literally jump… I’m die hard fan of arshi and now shivika…. I m a silent reader bcoz of my exams… but I comment only when I couldn’t control my excitement…. just like I commented on ur ff… u r an awesome writer…

      2. VHM

        I am so happy you jumped out of happiness ….All the best for your exams !!!

  26. No words come 2 my mind after reading ur super duper ff
    It is just amazing
    U really nailed it

    1. VHM

      Thank you Amaya …Thank you for liking this

  27. Nida

    Not fair … i just started to read it and you have finished it … why ? But no problem i will be eagerly awaiting for your next fan fiction… but this last part just blowed my mind away 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

    1. VHM

      Awee…i too will miss you Nida…i missed in all my episodes but i knew why you were not available………i will not say thanks to you because it is implied everytime for your every comment

    1. VHM

      Thank you Alekhika

  28. What an end!!!! It’s AWESOME….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Banita….i am glad you liked this episode

  29. It is fabulous dear…. I have a suggestion cum request…. Plz pen down on the plot of spy fiction like Anika is a raaw agent or undercover police officer…. If you have some free time….. Plz work on it….I hope if you read this comment… You will think about it because in these days I am becoming a late Comer…..
    I will be very glad if you work on it……..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Nikita…….I would prefer to write an total out an out mystery not involving Ishqbaaz characters……..and if at all i come up with what i am trying to write i will first post it to you…….Ishqbaaz is much of a family drama with Romance and bromance…so why change it’s flavour ? what’s your say on this?

      1. Go ahead dear… I am waiting….

      2. Go ahead dear…… I am with you for your support dear…..

      3. VHM

        Thank you Nikita …….Thank you for showing so much confidence on me that without any apprehension you showed your support

  30. VHM dear, one of the most beautiful ff this is.I really enjoy it from fast yo last and your conclusion made the ff perfect. Thanku sooooooo much for entertaining us.😍😍😍😍😍
    I hope you will back with your other KHDKI TOD ff. Byyy GOOD LUCK. frnd.

    1. VHM

      Awee thank you so much Arpita..hope you will no more fodo me ………..

  31. Ruksy

    Loved the full ff totally sorry for not commenting on any of your parts and for commenting late on this part. Amazing

    1. VHM

      Thanks a lot Rusky…you have posted your comment and that’s the best thing…glad you liked this FF

  32. Totally loved it. you truly and completely nailed it from starting to ending awesome, mindblowing, amazing…………………………………………..

    1. VHM

      Thanks a lot Starlight…thank you for posting such amazing comment…..i am so happy that you lIked this FF

  33. Jerry_36

    Hey VHM….this one was totally splendid. Loved it thoroughly. The way you maintained the level of your writing, creative mind to come up with such mysteries was mind blowing. The ff was awesome and the revelations were super awesome. Keep writing☺

    1. VHM

      Thank you Jerry …. it just went on with the flow…nothing preplanned or thought of ……i am glad you liked the FF …looking forward for your FF too

  34. it was the 1st FF that i read and its really awesome……….Congratulations dear and all the very best for your future FF’s
    Keep Writing………………..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Priti …i am glad reading that my FF was your first FF that your read….heep encouraging …Thanks again

      1. u keep writing so i can happily reading and keep encouraging

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