uljhi hun kuch suljhane ki kosish mein(part 1)

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Hiii guys..a very good afternoon.I am Suchi.I am new here.I luv to ryt stories n poems.so after seeing so many fanfictions I am also trying to write a very very interesting ff of swaragini n guys plz suggest whome do u want to make couple…but yes there will be so many changes in dis story..so plz read this comment below n support me n my ff…all suggestions,comments,complements are welcomed open heartedly..n if I do any mistake dn guys plz tell me how can I correct it.

here we go…..
A beautiful room decorated lyk a fairy land..pink curtains,pink bedsheets n all where there is pink n white combination n the princess of that fairy land is lying on her bed.
a sweet voice came,” u don’t wake up till now.its very already late today u will definitely late for college.
shona plzz wake up naa ,I will call dadimaa otherwise.
suddenly shona dat means our swara wake up from bed n said shockingly dadi!!!
no dii u cant do dis with me afterall u r my laddo na with a innocent pouty face swara told.
then turning d camera to our lado who was standing with a puja thali in her hand .she wore a nyc green salwar,her hair were open which were flying due to d smooth air coming from window.she was smiling seeing her cuteinnocent little sister..

ragini – achha ji!! Why? Y cant I call dadimaa..u never listen to anyone except her with a fake anger in her eyes.
(A sound came from back side) y she will not listen to me after all she is my ladli..
she is swaragini’s dadi…she looked at ragini annoyingly n went to swara n huged her n told go n get ready its really late shone..
swara-ya dadi u go I am coming in 10 mins..but yes I need my breakfast wthin 10mins..ok.
Ragini-yes queen Victoria ..u get ready 1st…brkfast is already ready..
both swarag smiled n dadi also smiled fakely to show swara n looked at ragini annoyingly dn left from there..

at MM arnapurna ,sujata were doing aarti.
dp n rp were also present der..suddenly priya came down d stairs with 3 young dashing boys to join d aarti.
priya is d sister of sanlak n aadarsh.sanskar n aadarsh were in their formal wear as they were ready to go office both were looking smart n dashing.
laksh came in with his formal tshirt n jeans n he was also ready to go to college..

after completing aarti both AP n sujata turned n saw their children ,,
sujata-ye ke ho gaya jiji…does sun comes out from west today?? Then all laugh n all sanlak aadarsh priya looked at each other n they also smiled..
sanky-no mom today we have a very imp meeting so we thought lets take some blessings from our living goddess then he n aadarsh took everyone’s blessings…
laksh-n u know na chichi today I n priya have form submission for our semester..so we also joined our bade bhaiyas..they also take everyone’s blessings..
AP told them don’t u both take blessings of ur brothers??
lacky n priya looked at eachother …both told- what now we hv to take blessings of them by touching theor feets..
sanky n aadarsh-no lucky u both are always in our heart..so take blessings by hugging us.. all smiled n all 4 huged eachother..
sujata –lets go have brkfast or else all of u will late.

at gadodia house,
ragini-dadimaa ur tea..
dadi looked at her suspectedly..
ragini innocently told-I didn’t add sugar..dadi told ok ok put it here…ragini becomes little upset..
at dat tym two voice came simultaneously di I am ready..
one voice was of swara n 2nd voice was of a handsome boy with blue eyes cuteness on face..he is swarag’s brother ansh..
rag-ansh ur project is complete na??
ansh-ya di but I hv no tym to hv brkfst so I am leaving
swara- me too dii …today is my form submission u know naa I cant be late..
dadi-kisi kam ki nahi hai ye ladki(looking at ragini)..cant even take care of own bro n sis..ragini becomes silent..swara n ansh try to oppose dadi but ragini signs dem to not tell anything..

ragini-ok don’t eat anything but khali pet kuch thik nahi hoga…so drink d juice atleast…so complete d juice I am coming in 2 min..
dey drank d juice ragini came with a pot …
ragini-have it..its dahi chini…it’s a gudluck..she fed them ..n wishes them all d best..noth kiss her on her cheek n ansh told-u r not our dii..u r our mom..
ragini becomes imotional n tears fills in her eyes,,she controlled n told don’t say lyk dat none can take mothers place ..she signed swara n ansh to take blessings of dadi

both swara n ansh took blessings n left for college n office respectively..ragini looks at them smilingly.

in MM also dey 4 leve for their respective destination AP n sujata waves them bye..

screen freezes on their smiling faces…

I hope guyz u will enjoy dis ff n plz comment below to support me..n guys I want to do dis as ragsan n swalak…so what do u say..

Credit to: Suchitra Pattanayak

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57 Comments
  1. Nice start n plzzzzzzzz make swasan n raglak plzzzzzz.swasan r d best.

  2. Swasan nd raglak ….

  3. Swasan and raglak they look cute
    Now I think there are many ragsan and swalak ffs so plzz sawsan and raglan

  4. i will try my best dat u all will njoy swalak n ragsan

  5. whats dadi problem with rags yar..
    hey one suggestion never ask pairs from readers… everyone like different pairs
    so u make pairs of ur wish…

  6. Ragsan will b the best…thank god u choose swalak & ragsan other than giving us false hope….nice start dear

  7. i think ragsan is better…………….
    all d best……
    i would like it very much if lead pair ragsan……truly speaking i m fed bcz swara is in lead in all ff…..
    patnayak???????
    where r u from????
    sorry i m asking u……

    1. i am from odisha..bbsr…n yes ragsan nwill be d pairing

  8. No ragsan will be better couple

  9. Priyanka Swain

    Suchi.. M. Glad dat u r followin ur heart keep..writin..n keep givin us such nyc stories m proud of u dear :-* :-*

  10. thanks for swalak.and i am from odisha bbsr.

    1. ohhh really…nyc talking u…n u r welcome

  11. Swalak and Ragsan are awesome

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