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Home»Fan Fiction»uljhi hun kuch suljhane ki kosish mein(part 1)
Fan Fiction Swaragini

uljhi hun kuch suljhane ki kosish mein(part 1)

administratorBy administratorJanuary 22, 2016Updated:January 23, 201657 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hiii guys..a very good afternoon.I am Suchi.I am new here.I luv to ryt stories n poems.so after seeing so many fanfictions I am also trying to write a very very interesting ff of swaragini n guys plz suggest whome do u want to make couple…but yes there will be so many changes in dis story..so plz read this comment below n support me n my ff…all suggestions,comments,complements are welcomed open heartedly..n if I do any mistake dn guys plz tell me how can I correct it.

here we go…..
A beautiful room decorated lyk a fairy land..pink curtains,pink bedsheets n all where there is pink n white combination n the princess of that fairy land is lying on her bed.
a sweet voice came,” u don’t wake up till now.its very already late today u will definitely late for college.
shona plzz wake up naa ,I will call dadimaa otherwise.
suddenly shona dat means our swara wake up from bed n said shockingly dadi!!!
no dii u cant do dis with me afterall u r my laddo na with a innocent pouty face swara told.
then turning d camera to our lado who was standing with a puja thali in her hand .she wore a nyc green salwar,her hair were open which were flying due to d smooth air coming from window.she was smiling seeing her cuteinnocent little sister..

ragini – achha ji!! Why? Y cant I call dadimaa..u never listen to anyone except her with a fake anger in her eyes.
(A sound came from back side) y she will not listen to me after all she is my ladli..
she is swaragini’s dadi…she looked at ragini annoyingly n went to swara n huged her n told go n get ready its really late shone..
swara-ya dadi u go I am coming in 10 mins..but yes I need my breakfast wthin 10mins..ok.
Ragini-yes queen Victoria ..u get ready 1st…brkfast is already ready..
both swarag smiled n dadi also smiled fakely to show swara n looked at ragini annoyingly dn left from there..

at MM arnapurna ,sujata were doing aarti.
dp n rp were also present der..suddenly priya came down d stairs with 3 young dashing boys to join d aarti.
priya is d sister of sanlak n aadarsh.sanskar n aadarsh were in their formal wear as they were ready to go office both were looking smart n dashing.
laksh came in with his formal tshirt n jeans n he was also ready to go to college..

after completing aarti both AP n sujata turned n saw their children ,,
sujata-ye ke ho gaya jiji…does sun comes out from west today?? Then all laugh n all sanlak aadarsh priya looked at each other n they also smiled..
sanky-no mom today we have a very imp meeting so we thought lets take some blessings from our living goddess then he n aadarsh took everyone’s blessings…
laksh-n u know na chichi today I n priya have form submission for our semester..so we also joined our bade bhaiyas..they also take everyone’s blessings..
AP told them don’t u both take blessings of ur brothers??
lacky n priya looked at eachother …both told- what now we hv to take blessings of them by touching theor feets..
sanky n aadarsh-no lucky u both are always in our heart..so take blessings by hugging us.. all smiled n all 4 huged eachother..
sujata –lets go have brkfast or else all of u will late.

at gadodia house,
ragini-dadimaa ur tea..
dadi looked at her suspectedly..
ragini innocently told-I didn’t add sugar..dadi told ok ok put it here…ragini becomes little upset..
at dat tym two voice came simultaneously di I am ready..
one voice was of swara n 2nd voice was of a handsome boy with blue eyes cuteness on face..he is swarag’s brother ansh..
rag-ansh ur project is complete na??
ansh-ya di but I hv no tym to hv brkfst so I am leaving
swara- me too dii …today is my form submission u know naa I cant be late..
dadi-kisi kam ki nahi hai ye ladki(looking at ragini)..cant even take care of own bro n sis..ragini becomes silent..swara n ansh try to oppose dadi but ragini signs dem to not tell anything..

ragini-ok don’t eat anything but khali pet kuch thik nahi hoga…so drink d juice atleast…so complete d juice I am coming in 2 min..
dey drank d juice ragini came with a pot …
ragini-have it..its dahi chini…it’s a gudluck..she fed them ..n wishes them all d best..noth kiss her on her cheek n ansh told-u r not our dii..u r our mom..
ragini becomes imotional n tears fills in her eyes,,she controlled n told don’t say lyk dat none can take mothers place ..she signed swara n ansh to take blessings of dadi

both swara n ansh took blessings n left for college n office respectively..ragini looks at them smilingly.

in MM also dey 4 leve for their respective destination AP n sujata waves them bye..

screen freezes on their smiling faces…

I hope guyz u will enjoy dis ff n plz comment below to support me..n guys I want to do dis as ragsan n swalak…so what do u say..

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57 Comments

  1. Noor on January 22, 2016 11:54 pm

    Swasan & raglak

  2. mahi on January 23, 2016 12:04 am

    Nice bt plz make swasan and raglak

  3. Shruthi on January 23, 2016 12:06 am

    So nice….. Pls make it swalak and ragsan

  4. manvi on January 23, 2016 12:12 am

    superb yaar superb ……….I hate this dadi …….and I love ragsan pair so much thank u so much for this cute couple …my ragsan ……..I m feeling very bad for my ragini ……plsss post next part soon…….

  5. Jyoti on January 23, 2016 12:14 am

    Nice..swasan raglak pls

  6. priya on January 23, 2016 12:21 am

    yuppie its swalak its noooo its best no swasan and no raglak plzz let it be swalak and ragaan

  7. angel on January 23, 2016 12:22 am

    Ragsan pls dont change pls so many swasan ffs pls even u want this as ragsan so listen to ur innerself and continue

  8. priya on January 23, 2016 12:23 am

    No raglak becoz there are mny ff of swasam and our swaragini serial also as per ur ur ff ragini will look gud no adorable wid sanskar

  9. Kiran on January 23, 2016 12:25 am

    Raglak and swasan plz

  10. nupsi on January 23, 2016 12:30 am

    Ragsan swalak

  11. nupsi on January 23, 2016 12:32 am

    I dont know why swasan fans want to convert every ff into swasan u people have enough swasan now pls let some ff be ragsan and swalak

    • Shruthi on January 23, 2016 2:26 pm

      True

  12. suchitra on January 23, 2016 12:33 am

    hey guys i know most people want pairing as swasan n raglak…n guys i am also bigfan of swasan..but try to understand na it is a ff…u can see swasan in serial so plzz see ragsan in fanfiction…trust me u will definitely enjoy..

  13. akku on January 23, 2016 12:34 am

    swasan pls..
    swasan swasan swasan

  14. suchitra on January 23, 2016 12:34 am

    thanku thanku so much i cant even tell u how happy i am seeing support from u guys …so wid dis support read my ff…n love u all…dont forget to comment below

  15. Crazygirl on January 23, 2016 12:35 am

    I love your idea please make Swalak and Ragsan

  16. Vini on January 23, 2016 1:17 am

    Very much happy to read this,especially Ragini’s character,lots of scope,I am a swasan fan,have always wished to see all ff’s based on swasan only but this one ,I feel Ragsan will suit,I feel so,sorry to swasan and Raglak fans,it is just an opinion.

  17. Shailz on January 23, 2016 7:36 am

    Hi many raglak ff s are here.so make it RagSan

  18. Eva on January 23, 2016 7:51 am

    Swalak and ragsan please….

  19. Mallable on January 23, 2016 8:14 am

    Nice but make it swasan

  20. Ayesha on January 23, 2016 9:46 am

    Wow ragsan,swalak. Keep going..

  21. Lahari on January 23, 2016 9:48 am

    Nice..plz dnt change d pairs ragsan,swalak r nice

  22. Ruhani on January 23, 2016 9:52 am

    Raglak plz

  23. meesha on January 23, 2016 10:00 am

    swassn n raglak

  24. Venni on January 23, 2016 10:02 am

    Supr..thank u sooooooooo much fr ragsan

  25. Ammu on January 23, 2016 10:10 am

    Plz raglak and swasan

  26. Arjuna on January 23, 2016 10:11 am

    Raglak nd swasan

  27. manvi on January 23, 2016 10:15 am

    plsss post next part soon

  28. manvi on January 23, 2016 10:15 am

    awesome episode with best couple ragsannnnnm

  29. manvi on January 23, 2016 10:16 am

    hatts of yaar

  30. manvi on January 23, 2016 10:16 am

    hatsssss of yaar

  31. manvi on January 23, 2016 10:17 am

    my ragsan ……keep it up dr

  32. Darshini on January 23, 2016 10:21 am

    No make it swasan swasan plzzzzz

  33. Sindhu on January 23, 2016 10:29 am

    Awesome yar and plz dont change pairs and dont ask voting and etc
    Plz its a hunblem request dont change pairs

  34. pari (PHFFANK) on January 23, 2016 10:44 am

    plz make it swasan and raglak as according to ur ff rag and lak are totally diff and swasan are also diff.. so it will be fun to see how the north pole and south pole attract each other…

  35. preethi on January 23, 2016 10:51 am

    ragsan plz

  36. Amilu on January 23, 2016 10:53 am

    Plz make it swasan and raglak

  37. lakshmi on January 23, 2016 11:23 am

    Swasan nd raglak

  38. suchitra on January 23, 2016 11:36 am

    ya guys i am very happy after reading all ur appreciation…u guys cant feel i i am feeling now..n i will not change d couple for sure…n i hv already sent d next part soon it will be published…n thanx again..

  39. jazz on January 23, 2016 11:45 am

    Swasan raglak

  40. Tina on January 23, 2016 12:12 pm

    Nice bit plzz make it ragsan and swalak i love swalak plzzz don’t chnge swalak ti swasan

  41. Honey on January 23, 2016 12:52 pm

    Nice start n plzzzzzzzz make swasan n raglak plzzzzzz.swasan r d best.

  42. Shruthi on January 23, 2016 2:00 pm

    Swasan nd raglak ….

  43. Tehreem on January 23, 2016 2:03 pm

    Swasan and raglak they look cute
    Now I think there are many ragsan and swalak ffs so plzz sawsan and raglan

  44. suchitra on January 23, 2016 2:08 pm

    i will try my best dat u all will njoy swalak n ragsan

  45. meghs on January 23, 2016 2:41 pm

    whats dadi problem with rags yar..
    hey one suggestion never ask pairs from readers… everyone like different pairs
    so u make pairs of ur wish…

  46. anamika on January 23, 2016 3:10 pm

    Ragsan will b the best…thank god u choose swalak & ragsan other than giving us false hope….nice start dear

  47. nandini on January 23, 2016 3:15 pm

    i think ragsan is better…………….
    all d best……
    i would like it very much if lead pair ragsan……truly speaking i m fed bcz swara is in lead in all ff…..
    patnayak???????
    where r u from????
    sorry i m asking u……

    • suchitra on January 23, 2016 4:58 pm

      i am from odisha..bbsr…n yes ragsan nwill be d pairing

  48. Hayathi on January 23, 2016 3:44 pm

    No ragsan will be better couple

  49. Priyanka Swain on January 23, 2016 8:37 pm

    Suchi.. M. Glad dat u r followin ur heart keep..writin..n keep givin us such nyc stories m proud of u dear :-* :-*

  50. khusubu on January 23, 2016 11:30 pm

    thanks for swalak.and i am from odisha bbsr.

    • suchitra on January 23, 2016 11:36 pm

      ohhh really…nyc talking u…n u r welcome

  51. Crazygirl on January 24, 2016 10:10 pm

    Swalak and Ragsan are awesome

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