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When u r mine ur dreams r also mine…..[part 10] [I LOVE YOU SWARA] by neptune

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Helllllllooooooooooooooooooooooo……… to all my dear sweet buddies….
This your dear, sweet cute and innocent Neptune back with the most HEAVENLY, BEAUTIFUL AND LOVELY PAIR SWASAN………
Thanks to all those who voted and commented.
Guys actually I was thinking that now that we all are friends why don’t we know somethings about each other.
So first question…..
Who is your most favourite pair in the whole tellywood?? [you can write swasan and some other pair too…]
My answer is SWASAN and ARSHI……
But the most is SWASAN ok………
So I hope you all will answer my questions.
Now stopping all these fun lets jump into the story.
Precap : swara’s result out and Sanskaar hearing her………

Sanskaar was standing there, his eyes furious and showing some pain.
To say that he was shocked would be an understatement. He was much more than shocked.
While swara was looking at him with scared eyes. Her eyes held so much of emotions.
Fear for his reaction, fear for her di’s marriage, fear of her daadi and fear of losing the only person whom she can call HER’S……..
Swara : [scared and stammering] sa sans sanskaarji…..
For a minute Sanskaar forgot everything around him. Swara’s voice calling his name in the most melodious way possible. His breath hitched and his uneven breathing calmed down for a second.
Swara : vo vo I I am so sorry….. vo.
And then all the memories came flooding to his mind. Without speaking another word he just marched out of the house.
As raglak were in ragini’s room and daadi was in the kitchen no one saw him going…..
Swara just took a breath to calm herself and stop her tears and started running behind him.
Sanskaar was taking long steps and was walking really fast. It was difficult for swara to match his steps especially in that Ghaghara.
She was calling him continuously. But he was playing deaf for every word she spoke.
Swara : wait…. [breathing heavily] sans…. [the long Ghaghara came in between and she was going to fall] aaahhhhhh……
But Sanskaar turned back right in time and caught her from falling down.
Bg : allah waariyan from movie yaariyan……

Reh Bhi Na Paaye Yaar
Seh Bhi Na Paaye Yaar
Behti Hi Jaaye Dastaan
Reh Bhi Na Paaye Yaar
Seh Bhi Na Paaye Yaar
Behti Hi Jaaye Dastaan
Umra Bhar Ka Intezaar
Ik Pal Bhi Na Karaar
Ungli Pe Nachaaye Dastaan
Ho..Apne Roothein, Paraaye Roothein
Yaar Roothein Naa..
Khwaab Tootein, Waade Tootein
Dil Yeh Toote Naa..
Roothe To Khuda Bhi Roothe
Saath Chhoote Naa..
Roothe To Khuda Bhi Roothe
Saath Chhoote Naa..

It resulted in a deep eyelock between them. Sanskaar’s hands were around her petite bare waist. His eyes scrutinising each n every details of her face. Swara’s eyes were closed due to the fear of falling. Her face reflecting her fear. Her hands were fisting his shirt collar tightly.

O Allah Waariyan
O Main To Haariyan
O Tooti Yaariyan Mila De Oye..
O Allah Waariyan
O Main To Haariyan
O Tooti Yaariyan Mila De Oye..
O Allah Waariyan
O Main To Haariyan
O Tooti Yaariyan Mila De Oye..
O Allah Waariyan
O Main To Haariyan
O Tooti Yaariyan Mila De Oye..
Aa…

When swara felt that she didn’t fell on the ground, she was hanging in the air. She opened her eyes only to meet sanskaar’s chocolate brown orbs holding all his emotions.
Swara apologised to him through her eyes and Sanskaar on seeing this fumed out and pulled her up. so that now both were standing separately.
Swara was trying to read his expressions.
Swara : [fidgeting with her dupatta] I…. i…… am soo… sorr…. Sorry…. I [interrupted by Sanskaar]
Sanskaar : [sternly] what’s your age??
Swara : [confused] what??
Sanskaar : [this time a little more loudly] what’s your age??
Swara jumped in fear listening his shout. Sanskaar calmed down a little seeing this.
Sanskaar : [ a little calmly] what’s your age swara??
Swara : eig… eight… eighteen…. I turned 18 1 week ago.
Sanskaar was feeling to burst that very moment. Anger was clearly exploding from each n every cell of his body.
Sanskaar : you are just 18…..
Swara : yes….
Sanskaar : and you gave your 12th exams this year??
Swara just nodded in response.
Sanskaar : [hardly controlling his shout] for god sake swara you are just 18 why did you even agree for this marriage??
Swara didn’t know what to speak and so she just stayed silent.
Sanskaar : [shouting] speak up swara…
Swara : vo vo…..[interrupted by Sanskar]
Sanskaar : [sternly] TRUTH. I just want to hear the truth swara.
Swara : [taking a deep breath to calm down herself] my daadi told me that the maheshwari’s wanted me to marry their younger son and if I didn’t then my di’s marriage would also be cancelled.
All this while tears were continuously flowing from her eyes and she was continuously wiping them off.
Sanskaar was not even in the state to react anything. Such a big fool he has been. In his own happiness he even forgot to ask anything about the bride.
Sanskaar : how much did you scored in your board exams??
Swara : [stammering] 90%.
Sanskaar : [calmly] you want to become a doctor right??
Swara : [not finding words to speak]
Sanskaar : [sternly] swaraaa……
Swara : [not able to control anymore] yes, I I wanted to become a doctor, that’s my dream that was my mamma’s last wish. [controlling her tears] but I know [closing her eyes tightly] I know it’s not possible now. I am sorry.
Sanskaar : [angry and confused] why sorry??
Swara : for doing something you don’t like…..
Sanskaar : [taking a deep breath closing his eyes and then holding her hands] [calmly] listen swara this relationship is not made by only my presence. We both are EQUALLY present in this relationship. Your wishes do matter to me as much as mine……… [interrupted by a phone call]
He took out his phone and saw laksh’s name flashing on the screen.
Sanskaar : [on the phone] yeah bhai……… ok…….. ok we are coming right now.
Sanskaar : [to swara] it was bhai’s call we should go now……. And yeah now YOU ARE MINE SO YOUR DREAMS ARE ALSO MINE.
He went away speaking these words leaving swara rooted on her place.
A shiver passed down her spine hearing his words. Firstly he claimed her as HIS. And then his indirect promise to fulfil her dreams.
For the first time in her life someone claimed her as theirs. Unknown to her a smile spread on her lips with tears in her eyes. She quickly wiped them from the corner of eyes and went behind him.
After sometime:
Sanskaar and Laksh went back to Maheshwari mansion went back to Maheshwari mansion while swaragini had to stay back there as per the ritual.
Maheshwari mansion.
As usual everyone was having their dinner in silence with pari serving them. It was the belief of maheshwari’s that the daughter-in-law of the house should have the dinner only after her husband and in-laws have eaten. As this is what should concern her the most.
After a while Sanskaar knocked the door of the room of his father i.e durgaprasad mahehwari. He had barely held his anger till now and it would blast anytime now.
Ap opened the door and was confused seeing Sanskaar at this time of night.
Ap : [confused] Sanskaar you here at this time?? Come inside naa.
Sanskaar : mom where is dad??
Dp : [from inside] Sanskaar what you want to talk?? Come inside am here only.
Sanskaar : [very hardly controlling his anger] dad you know what’s swara’s age??
Dp : [as a matter of fact] yeah, she is 18.
Sanskaar : [angrily] dad you knew that she is just a kid, how could you force them to get her married. She is just a kid dad. What about her future, what about her studies, what about her dreams dad.
Dp : [angry too] SANSKAAR, lower your voice first don’t forget that you are speaking with your dad. And how dare you to shout on your dad just for a mere girl whose just nobody.
Sanskaar : [shouting] DAD…… she’s my WIFE…..
Dp : [interrupting sanskaar] ok she’s your wife but that doesn’t mean you can shout on me like that. And about her future, her future should be you, her DREAMS should just be limited to you, her duties are to take care of this house, to make all the family members happy. Her duty is to satisfy all of us. And if she has to SACRIFICE her dreams, her studies for that then she has to.
Sanskaar :[ sternly] no dad she will not. If she has some duties towards me, towards this house, towards all of us, then even me, you and all the family members have this duty towards her. It’s our duty too to keep her happy, to fulfil her dreams. And what’s wrong if she studies dad??
Dp :[angrily] and if she studies then who will give us our heir, who will cook food and who will take care of this house??
Sanskaar : [in a disgust] seriously dad, did you just made me married to her for all these things. Dad she is the daughter –in-law of this house not any maid.
Dp : [shouting] SANSKAAAAAAARRRRRRR……
Sanskaar : [calmly] she will STUDY dad. She is MINE, SHE IS MY WIFE and I owe everything of her. IT’S MY DECISION THAT MY WIFE WILL STUDY FURTHER……
With that he storms out angrily from the room.
Sanskaar’s room.
He goes into his room and changes into his vest and tracks. He immediately rushes towards the gim and play area in the house.
He went there wears his boxing gloves and starts punching the sand bag ruthlessly venting out all his anger and frustration on it.
Aghhhh…… how much, how much he hates this narrow minded mentality of this house and the so-called society.
Like seriously….. does only the daughter-in-law has duties towards the family?? Does the family members have no duty towards her?? Does only she has to take care of their need, their happiness?? Don’t they owe the same thing to her?? Why is a daughter-in-law considered as an outsider?? Why don’t we treat her the same way we treat out daughter?? When she takes care of her husband’s needs why can’t he do the same thing for her too??? Why… why WHYYYYYY??
All these questions were flooding in his mind and creating a havoc…… he needed some peace, he needed HIS SOLACE, he needed his ANGEL, HIS RUIEE right now. In front of him.
It’s been a single day, a few hours, a few moments he spent with her. But it seems like it has been an eternity he has not seen her. In a single day how could he grew attached to someone like that.
He went down in the garden to have some fresh air as he was feeling suffocated here.
Mehta house:
Swara was sitting in her favourite place. Her garden. Staring the beautiful flowers she grew with so much love and care.
She was lost in her own thoughts. What did Sanskaar’s last words mean…….. will she be able to study further? But what about her duties then?? And sanskaarji daadi told that he oesn’t want his wife to study further. Then why he spoke like that.
She was so confused, this whole week had turned out to be so extra dramatic.
Suddenly it started to thunder and then it began to rain heavily.
Both swasan were drenching so heavily in their respective houses.
Swara : will I really get to fulfil my dreams??
Sanskaar : swara, now your dreams are not only yours, they are MINE TOO. Now YOU ARE MINE, YOUR EACH N EVERY BIT, YOUR SOUL YOU HEART EVERYTHING IS MINE. And I will not leave you……
Swara : but how can I study more?? Will it not be wrong?? Will over relationship my di’s marriage will not be ruined??
Sanskaar : nothing can be ruined when we are together swara. I LOVE YOU SWARA……….
The screen freezes on sanskaar’s determined and swara’s innocent confused face……..
Precap : THE JOURNEY STARTS NOW………….

Dhentedaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnn…….. so guys here I stop….. so I hope the part wasn’t too boring?? Guys are feeling this story to be too overdramatic n filmy??
If so then please do tell me………..
So sorry for less swasan scenes. But in the next part I promise to give some more……
Guys this is my first ff. so please forgive my mistakes and please do comment…..
On tu every SWASAN ff is getting really less comments. Where are you swasanians please comment…..
And please increase the number of swasan ffs…….

DO ANSWER MY FUN QUESTION AT THE TOP…….. love you all LOVE SWASAN….
Bubye meet you all in the next part….

68 Comments
  1. INTERESTING…….STORY

    1. Neptune

      thanks dear

  2. Gayathri.visu

    Hey Neptuuu dear… Plz check this part, bcz this part got posted in Ishqbaaz’s page. Plz check it.

    Areee….wow!! Excellent part dear. The way u described our Swasan’s convo….I can really able feel their emotions!! Just awesome!!! Hats off to Sanskaar(and u too). His words are 100% true!! I m eagerly waiting for next part dear.

    And the answer for ur question……hmm…..Swasan, Shivika, Devakshi, Ardhika, Saras-kumud. And my most favourite pairs are Swasan n Shivika!!

    1. Neptune

      oops that’s what i was thinking why it hasn’t been posted yet… lemme do something…

      thanks for your comment gayu….

  3. Kanha

    Finally!!!!! I was impatiently waiting for your update Neptune. Awesome yaar. You made my day. Update sooooon😊😊😊☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

    1. Neptune

      thank you sooooooo much kanha for your sweet words. will try to post soon dear

  4. Amazing update… eagerly waiting for next update… pls post next update soon…

    1. Neptune

      thanks dear….
      will surely post ASAP…

    1. Neptune

      thanks dear

  5. Independent

    Awesome dear loved it to the core
    By the way my favourate is same as you arshi and swasan

    1. Neptune

      Thanks diiiiii…..
      Same pinch diiiiii

  6. Excellent and thank for your encouragement(for my new story in wattpad chup chupke)

    1. Neptune

      Thanks dear and no need to thank me for that…..

  7. Awesome as always . And I like swasan,raglak,ishveer,shivika and devakshi but most favourite is swasan and ishveer. Miss both the couples like hell

    1. Neptune

      Thank you so much dear…..
      Yeah even I miss swasan like hell.

  8. Mica

    waaaa.. love this story, full message na, hmmm.. my fav only Swasan and ardhika, nothing else

    1. Neptune

      thank u sooooooooooooo much mica diiiii….. was waiting for you to return back at swaragini page….

  9. Shiksha

    Awesome.. Update soon..just Love it ..
    Dear…

    1. Neptune

      thank you so much shiksha dear….
      will try to post the next part soon…

  10. Seema

    It’s awesome dr. Today only I read all the parts and it was just outstanding. And about the couple then my favorite couple in TV are swasan and asya( asad and zoya)

    1. Neptune

      thank you sooooooo much dear seema…
      glad you liked it….

    2. Seema

      Welcome dear. And I had forgotten to ask you, your admission is completed.

      1. Neptune

        No dear The process is still going on

  11. Awesome as always..my fav is swasan..never loved any1 before..tc..

    1. Neptune

      thank you so much kumu…
      yeah SWASAN is love for us…

  12. Nice. .swasan..rikara

    1. Neptune

      thanks liza…

  13. awesome update dear :* and my fav couples are swasan shivika and avneil <3

    1. Neptune

      thanks jenny….

  14. Mars

    Hayeeeee kya stand liya hai Sanskar ne.loved him.
    Nepuuuu epi was super se upar vala.
    I enjoyed alot.
    Continue soon.
    About favourite pair so its always SWASAN at the top.Then its arshi.
    U know my first favourite pair was arjun arohi from kitni mohabbat hai.
    Bye
    Take care.

    1. Neptune

      aww thank you marsuuuuu……….
      you are right marsuuuuu even for me SWASAN is at the top…
      umm my first favourite pair was i guess jeya means jethalal and daya from tmkoc..
      well i still like them too….
      take care dear…

  15. Chaitu

    Superb dear sanskar took a stand for swara dream loved it dear and about favorite pairs is first is my heavenly couple swasan then arshi then abhiya from pyaar kii yeah ek kahaani from that show only I learnt hindi

    1. Neptune

      hey chaitu thanks dear… glad you liked the part…
      even for me SWASN comes first then arshi….
      oh so you didn’t knew hindi first??

  16. AnuAnn

    Loved it dear.. Can’t wait for next part and abt Q. same as u…

    1. Neptune

      thanks dear anu….
      will try to post ASAP…

    1. Neptune

      thank you so much dear

  17. Nice…..n my love is one n only one ..SWASAN….

    1. Neptune

      thanks dear….
      n yeah swasan is the best….

  18. awesome loved it

    1. Neptune

      thank you anu…

  19. awesome dear

    1. Neptune

      Thanks anu

    1. Neptune

      Thanks anju

  20. amazing

    1. Neptune

      Thanks dear

  21. awesome

    1. Neptune

      Thanks dear

  22. awesome

    1. Neptune

      Thanks dear

  23. Suppeerrbbb

    1. Neptune

      Thanks dear

  24. Simi

    Awesome dear..
    Fvrt pair is Swasan ❤️ then Omri

    1. Neptune

      Thank you simuuuuu….
      Yeah SWASAN is the besttttttt

  25. IQRA222

    hello nepuu di !!
    this episode was just AWESOME loved it
    and yes my fav pairs in whole tellywood are raglak , swasan and then rikara
    to be honest starting scene i was scared!!
    the song really suited the scene well
    swasan scene was hell awesome there the way he cares for her just makes me say awww!!
    so so hated dp and claps for sanky boy.. well done
    all in all this episode was mind blowing
    and how many times do i have to tell you that dont ever day that any episode of this ff is boring cause its not!!! do not repeat the mistake next time di! okay!!
    waiting for the next part

    1. Neptune

      Hey iquuuu……
      Thank you so much dear…. Glad you liked it…..
      I love swasan…. But yeah I have neutral feelings for raglak…

      Aww ok dear from now on I will try not tell the episode boring……
      Will post ASAP dear……

  26. Shifa96

    Awesome update dear..loved it.

    1. Neptune

      thanks shifa

  27. Shashi

    Interesting . Waiting for next epi .

    1. Neptune

      thank you so much dear shashi

  28. Sumayyah

    amazing sweety loved it to the core!!!!

    1. Neptune

      thanks a lot sumu….

  29. Raina

    i just can’t describe how much i love swasan dear..
    sorry for commenting late..
    loved this chappy..

    1. Neptune

      aww raina di… even i can’t describe how much i love SWASAN….
      no need to say sorry dear…
      am glad you commented

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