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When u r mine ur dreams are also mine.. [part 8] [SWASAN anokhi wedding night] by neptune

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Helllllllllllllllllllllooooooooooooooooooooooooo everybody….. this is your dear Neptune back with our dear lovely SWASAN…..
Everyone thank you for your response on the previous part. Hope you all keep showering your love on the story. Thanks to all the silent readers also.

Wedding venue :
Swara was made to sit in the car decorated beautifully with flowers and then Sanskaar sat in the car followed by her.
The car started and a coconut was placed under the wheel, which cracked as the wheel passed over it.
Swara was not really crying but tears were silently fowing through her eyes. Though there was nothing given to her in this house that she wanted to remember or cherish but still she was BORN in this house. This is the house where she did spend her entire childhood. Where she laughed and where she cried, where she walked the first step of her life and where she fell while learning to walk. It is easy to see someone other’s marriage or talk about it. But when your chance comes, when you have to leave the house where you have spend your entire life. To leave your identity by which you have been known all your life.
It’s something which requires great strength. Today she was missing her mom soooooooooooooo much. She wanted her, she wanted to hear her soothing words, to cry in her warm embrace, to let her soft fingers wipe her tears.
And as if god had heard her silent prayers she felt a sudden pull and landed straight on sanskaar’s chest. His rhythmic heart beats were giving her peace. She smiled slightly but tears were still flowing from her eyes.
On the other side sanksaar was getting some unknown pleasure feeling his angel near him. He was seeing her shedding tears from so much time. His heart was bleeding seeing her crying. He knew that she needs a shoulder to cry on forgetting all her worries.
He had also heard about her parent’s death and so he thought she would be missing them.
He without any further thoughts pulled her towards him silently soothing her pain.
No words were exchanged but still both of them found peace in each other’s company.
There are many people in this world with whom you can talk nonstop. But there are only few people with whom you can enjoy silence.
And they had found such person. Who was for themselves, ONLY FOR THEMSELVES……….
Soon they reached the Maheshwari mansion.
The mansion was decorated with beautiful flowers and fairy lights.
It was adding more charm to the mighty building. Swara really liked the house but didn’t give it much importance, while ragini was mesmerized seeing the house and was really excited thinking this was the place where she was going to live further.
The grah pravesh ritual was done.
During the Griha Pravesha, the mother-in-law then applies a Tilak to both the bride and groom, after which the couple seek blessing from the elders present. After this the bride is to tilt a Kalash (pot) laden with rice using her right foot and then step into a dish with Alta. After this she is to walk into the home leaving behind auspicious red footprints which is symbolic of the arrival of Goddess Lakshmi.
Swara smiled feeling sanskaar’s grip on her hand tightening so as to give her a silent support.
He was a stranger but still was supporting her and thinking about her. He knew that she would be feeling nervous seeing new environment and so was giving her warmth indicating that this was her house only.
Then they were taken to the inhouse temple to pray for their bright future.

The Maheshwaris decided to do the rest rituals the next day because they were really tired preparing for 2 weddings and there are still many rituals to be done.
Sanskaar’s room.
Swara was taken to sanskaar’s room by Annapurna and was made to sit on the centre of bed.
She knew that swara would be nervous and so she comforted her and then went away from there.
On the other side Sanskaar was busy in some talks with his clients. He was so eager to go to his room but this stupid person had to call now only to disturb him immediately after his marriage. He somehow controlled himself and finished the call as soon as possible.
Sanskaar’s room.
[guys sanskaar’s room is having one back door too. You can imagine his room like arnav’s in ipkknd. There is a personal pool outside his room, which is connected by a side door]
Swara was sitting there waiting for Sanskaar, she was really tired due to all the wedding rituals. Her eyes were becoming heavy but she was controlling them somehow.
Suddenly all the lights of the room went off. She became shocked and frightened. From the childhood onwards she was afraid of darkness. But she has seen enough darkness in life and she knew it very well how to fight the fear.
Suddenly she heard some sounds coming from the back door of the room. Her eyes frightened in fear. She started biting her lips in tension. Then her eyes spotted the cricket bat lying in the basket. She took it and marched towards the back door. A faint shadow of a man was seen there. She immediately raised the bat to beat him but the person caught the bat with his one hand and her waist with another. Due to sudden pull she couldn’t keep her balance and they both fell down with swara on top of that person. A loud shriek escaped from her lips and she closed her eyes tightly in fear.
The other person that is obviously our Sanskaar [guys who other will come in her room at this late night]
He just kept on string swara. He was just mesmerised seeing her. It was a new moon day. Only a little star light was falling on her face. Her eyes which depicted her strongest emotions were closed tightly in fear. Her lips shivering due to fear. Her hands clutching his sherwani tightly. Their legs entangled. This was a sight he could watch for a life long.
When swara didn’t find any moment she opened her eyes only to widen them more. She became afraid thinking his reaction and tried to stand up but as their legs were entangled she fell straight in his arms.
Sanskaar screamed lightly due to the sudden fall.
Swara got up carefully this time.
Swara : [after getting up ] sorry sorry I am really sorry. I I didn’t knew that it was you. I I thought that there was some theif and…….
She stopped speaking as Sanskaar put his finger on her lips. Oh so soft they felt under his rough skin.
They shared a short eyelock which was broken by swara. She averted her gaze from he. He realised that and lifted his finger away from her lips.
Sanskaar : [chuckling lightly seeing her childishness] it’s okay you don’t need to apologise to me. Well we are PARTNER NOW NOT ONLY FOR THIS LIFE BUT FOR SEVEN BIRTHS. [hearing this she looked towards him surprised at his deep tone] so umm [sighing loudly] FRIENDS??
As soon as his words hit her, her face broke out in a huge smile. The only difference from the other smiles is that it was a whole hearted smile.
Swara : [sternly] nooooooo.
Sanskaar became shocked hearing her. His face grew pale thinking that she doesn’t want to be his friend.
Swara : [smiling widely and forwarding her hand] BEST FRIENDS………
Sanskaar’s expressions first grew shocked and then smiled widely hearing her.
Sanskaar : [shaking his head] ahannnn BESTEST FRIENDS……
And they laughed st their own childishness. While Sanskaar was looking at her with love filled eyes swara’s eyes had respect for him and some other emotion which had still not yet bloomed fully.
Being with him she fully forgot all her worries and pain.
Sanskaar : ok then you change your clothes first then I wil change.
Swara was really surprised hearing this. From all that she heard till now and what she saw till now man’s always use woman’s for their pleasure, satisfaction and desires and here he wanted her to change. Means he doesn’t want to do anything like really ANYTHING. Now that was surprising, she looked at him with surprise, confusion and some suspect in her eyes.
Sanskaar : [sighing reading swara’s expressions] see SWARA [ and that’s when she felt an unknown magical feeling passing through her. And even Sanskaar felt that unknown magical feeling passing through him, this was the first time he spoke her name. and it rolled of magically from her tongue. Swara felt goose bumps hearing her name in his deep voice.] I know what you are thinking but a husband and wife doesn’t only share a physical relation. Their relation is beyond all these earthly things. I want myself to be your first priority, to be your first thought in everything, in your every sadness in your every happiness I want you to remember me first. And same goes with me too. I want you to be my everything. For which I know we are still not ready. So the day we accomplish all these things and they day we become each other’s in all senses we will be each other’s here too.
Swara was really surprised hearing this. He portrayed all her thoughts. It was like he spoke the words from her heart. She just smiled widely nodding her head and went from there to change her dress.
She came there after changing into a white kurta and white salwar. Her straight hair were left open and there was no make up on her face. But she still looked so divine.
Sanskaar was just lost seeing her. He was just surprised seeing how could she look so beautiful without any make up and heavy jewelleries.
He came out of his trance hearing swara.
Swara : now you can go to freshen up??
He just nodded his head and went from there.
When Sanskaar came out after changing in his green t-shirt and white tracks he saw swara who was sitting at the pool site gazing at the stars as it was too dark in the room. He went there and sat beside her. When he saw that swara was too lost and didn’t notice him he passed his hand across her shoulder on the other side and tapped there. Swara who became startled feeling this saw that side and fell straight in his arms.
She looked at him with wide innocent eyes. Blinking her eyes innocently. They steadily came out of their trance and straightened themselves.
She put her hand on the left side of her chest above her heart to calm her raging heart beats.
Swara : [sighing] you scared me.
Sanskaar : [smiling sheepishly] oops….. well I didn’t knew sherni [lioness] gets scared too. After all when you don’t fear climbing to the balcony how can you get scared by my single tap hmmhmm. [raising his eyebrows in a teasing way]
While she made a cute angry pout face on his teasing.
Swara : that to vo vo [fumbling with words]
Sanskaar : ha ha vo vo kya?? [teasing her] ha ha tell what vo vo??
Swara : ughhhhhh mamma……[beating her hands and legs around.]
While Sanskaar started laughing hearing her cute antics.
She stand up from there stomping her foot in anger and when she was about to go sanskaar’s legs came in between as she was standing near the pool she tripped and fell into the pool.
Sanskaar : [shocked] oh shittttttt…….
And he also jumped in water to save her.
He jumped into the water to save her and her head which was near the pool wall hit her head as she was near to it.
Swara : [rubbing her head as tears started to form in her eyes due to the hit] ahaaan mamma….
Sanskaar : [worried especially seeing tears in her eyes] swara swara show me what happened??
Swara : [she really didn’t want to cry but tears were escaping her eyes unwantedly] it’s I’s okay.
Sanskaar : [wiping her tears with his thumb] what okay haa. [sternly] swara stop moving your head, let me see. [he began massaging her head softly blowing some air on it] [in a soft voice] is it paining now??
Swara : [nodded in no with still scared eyes] no not much [said in a low voice]
Sanskaar : [wiping her tears with his fingers cupping her face. They were standing really closed totally wet in the pool] shhhh [hugging her closely] its okay stop crying mera bacha it’s okay. Did it hurt so much??
They didn’t even realise that they were standing so close and were hugging each other. They were just lost in the moment.
Swara : [nodding her head and speaking cutely] haa it did hurt?? But I am not crying because of that…..
Sanskaar : [confused] then…
Swara : I am crying because you shouted at me……[pout face]
Sanskaar : [feeling bad] aww I am I am really sorry swara it’s just that…..
Swara : [interrupts him] no it’s okay I know you were just concerned for me….[tries to smile]
Seeing her smile even Sanskaar smiles.
They both suddenly realise their position and separate themselves averting their gaze from each other.
Swara : [confused] but why did you jump in the pool?? To do swimming??
Sanskaar : nooooooo. To save you from drowning……
Swara : and why will I drown???
Sanskaar : cause you don’t know swimming na…
Swara : [frowning and narrowing her eyes] and who told you that I don’t know swimming???
Sanskaar widened his eyes and bit his tongue realising that….
Sanskaar : aa umm amm voo[ fumbling with his own words]
Swara : [folding her hands across her chest] for your kind information mr mahehwari I know swimming and that too better than you…
Sanskaar :[ folding his hands across his chest with narrowed eyes] achaa …… better than me???
Swara : [in a challenging tone]yess…
Sanskaar : ok so if you are so confident oops sorry sorry so over confident then lets to a race.
Swara : okay as you say.
Sanskaar : and the looser will have to do whatever the winner says.
Swara : okay I am on it…..
They both went out the pool and the stood on its edge in a diving position.
Sanskaar : ready…
Swara : steady……
Swasan together : goooooooo.
And with that they jumped into the pool and began swiiming. Both were applying full power. And a minute distance between both of them and with that swara won.
Swara : [panting heavily] now tell???
Sanskaar : [panting heavily] vo to you won co incidently…
Swara : [frowning angrily] how mean of you!!! Achaa I won co incidently naa then lets do a race again…
Sanskaar disagreed as they both were quite tired. And so now Sanskaar has to do whatever swara says.
With that both of them slept aftef changing. Both of them slept happily on their side of bed with a pillow wall in between.
They slept with a smile on their faces thinking thast they will be the first ever couple in the world to do SWIMMING COMPETITION ON THEIR WEDDING NIGHT…….

Precap : swara’s neet result out and Sanskaar to come to know something….

Huff sooooooooooooooo guys here I end today’s update. I have written this in quite hurry….
I really hope it is worth reading. Hope it’s not boring??? Is it too boring??
I promise that the next episode will be better….
IMPORTANT NOTE:
1. Guys all the people who are helly fans please start watching devanshi. I know you guys feel sad to see helly with some other actor but still she is really working hard for it. Just see how marvellously she is acting. I fell in love with her again seeing her acting skills so please please do watch devanshi it’s a humble request.
2. Guys nowadays swasan ffs and comments on sawasn ffs are decreasing very much all the swasan readers please do comment on the ffs you are reading. I am not talking only about my ffs I am talking about all the swasan ffs. If you are reading then please vote and comment because by seeing less comments it breaks the writers confidence. PLEASE INCREASE SWASAN FF’s AND COMMENTS ON SWASAN FF’s. it’s a humble request to all swasan fans……..

Meet you all in the next part till then bub bye…..

69 Comments
    1. Neptune

      thanks anu…..

  1. So sweet of you .this chapter is quite funny.the race part is too good

    1. Neptune

      thanks guna

  2. Amazing. U no when I read this story I feel m watching them live. I really love this ff….. Pls update next soon…

    1. Neptune

      aww thank you sweety.. glad you liked it….
      hope you read my other works and like them too….

      1. I like every swasan story…. But little lazy about comments(don’t beat me now)… But I like this (from ur story) more coz it’s simple no revenge n all…

  3. Thank you sooo much for fast update. Thank you for excepting my request. Thank you. Thank you thank you soooo much love u…. I don’t no next when I’ll read this ff….N comment… If u can please mention when u’ll update next part k

    1. Neptune

      aww its okay sweety u r my friend dear and you can order me no need to request me….
      and don’t you remember sanskaar’s dialogue you don’t need to say thank you to me.

      and you are thanking me that means you have not accepted me as your friend?? now i am katti with you….
      and i will post the next part i guess within 5 days…..
      till then i have to post my other works too….

      1. Hehe…next time I won’t repeat….I’ll take my “thank you”back now happy??… & don’t give permission to order….U’ll regret afterwards..(aap pachtavoge)…. Coz if I start ordering then… I’ll be very greedy about my swasan

  4. Awesome, sweet nd funny part too

    1. Neptune

      thank you chooooo much dear…..

  5. awesome

    1. Neptune

      thanks dear

  6. Awesome epi dear…

    1. Neptune

      thank you so much dear

  7. Raina_Riz

    Amazing

    1. Neptune

      thank you so much dear

  8. It was so very gud di

    1. Neptune

      thank you so much sally

  9. Awesome..their first night was really different 😂😂
    Loved it..thank u for the end note about comment decreasing..😊😊
    Tc..

    1. Neptune

      thanks kumu….
      and the end note was really needed one….

  10. This is really nice ..swimming competition 😂…are u in wattpad??

    1. Neptune

      thankyou so much dear…
      and yeah i am in wattpad….
      my id is neptunezz…

  11. Great,actually I have started watching Devanshi and its very interesting now

    1. Neptune

      thanks neeti….
      and yeah even i have started watching devanshi…
      its really interesting now

  12. loved it dear

    1. Neptune

      thanks anu….

  13. lovely….. my swasan

    1. Neptune

      thanks anu

  14. awesome

    1. Neptune

      thanks dear

  15. Kashu

    Awesome as always…
    Please post next part soon…

    1. Neptune

      thanks kashu…..
      will try to post the next part soon….

  16. AnuAnn

    Loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it dear… Can’t wait for next part.. U become one of my favorite writer.. And about comments and ff .. I too feel really bad ..then got to know that many readers and writers shifted to watpad and also some r bc with their work and studies.. Hope they w’ll come back soon

    1. Neptune

      aww thank you chooooooooooooooooooooooo much for loving this tory….
      i know many of them shifted on wattpad but i will be really happy no no i will be happiest if all of them start posting their ffs back on swasan…

      coz this is the place where we started our journey….. where we got our swasan…
      we can fight back right….

  17. It was so good Neptune di..I read all the parts in one go..and now I am in love with your story.. truly di..you write so well…I can clearly feel each and everything from the story..I am loving it.. continue soon..tc

    1. Neptune

      aww thank you soooooooooooooo much mannu….
      glad you liked it….

  18. It was just mind blowing. Seriously ? Swimming competition and that too in first night.? It was so funny. Just loved it. Post next one soon. Plss

    1. Neptune

      thank you so much dear….
      will try to post the next one soon…

    1. Neptune

      thanks pari

  19. Rachna

    Awsm Dr… Update soon

    1. Neptune

      thanks dear..
      will try to post soon

  20. Awesome dear…..

    1. Neptune

      thanks dear

  21. Shiksha

    Awesome..

    1. Neptune

      thanks dear

  22. Mars

    It was super she upar nepuuu. I loved it.Even I watch devanshi daily for my helly baby and she is nailing as kalki shah. Love her alot.
    I also humbly request to enhance comments on swasan ffs then only writers will feel to write.
    Epi awesome vala tha
    Continue soon…..waiting
    Thanks
    Bye
    Take care

    1. Neptune

      aww thank you sooooooooo much marsuuu…
      yes even i have started watching devanshi recently due to my hellu…
      and her acting is really awesome…
      this show has really been fruitful for her she has learned so many things here….

      ya i wish people comment more on swasan ffs so that swasan writters and swasan ffs increases….
      will conitnue soooon….
      bye you too take care….

  23. hey neptune…i loved it dear…sorry for not commenting regularly…not coming to tu now a days…sticking to wattpad..i think u update in wattpad also right..!if yes…i’ll read there only..will come to tu for once in a month if i can..!n abt decreasing swasan ffs..hmm…let swasan fans live happily in wattpad…now a days all r happy updating in watty n also very peaceful environment bcs we no need to bear unnecessary ppl😴here always bashing only…

    1. Neptune

      hey seebu…
      glad you commented i was missing your comments….
      yes i do post in wattpad…
      my id i neptunezz…

      i know swasanians are happy in wattpad but this is the place where we started our journey with swasan right and this is the place where we first got our swasan….
      so due to some people who don’t even matter to us why should we all suffer…

      i am not saying that don’t post in wattpad but please post in tu too. there are many people who are not present on wattpad…
      it’s a humble request to all swasan writers who are posting their ff on wattpad post them on tu too….

  24. Super I like like it

    1. Neptune

      thanks ammu dear…

  25. Simi

    Amazing dear

    1. Neptune

      thanks dear

  26. Awesome dear

    1. Neptune

      thanks dear

  27. Gayathri.visu

    Neptuuu…fantastic n funny yaar! They are indeed different from others…. That’s why we call Swasan as heavenly couple hai na???! Swimming race in first night…..!! Different thinking dear…very good.

    By the way when did u updated 7 part?? I missed it dear. Can u give 7part link to me????? Plzzzzz yaar….

    And haan even I m also watching devanshi only for Helly. But I can’t able to watch it regularly.

    1. Neptune

      thanks a lot gayuuuu… yup you are right they are really different from other that’s why they are the best n HEAVENLY couple…
      i posted part 7 before somedays dear

      http://www.tellyupdates.com/u-r-mine-ur-dreams-also-mine-part-8-swasan-anokhi-wedding-night-neptune/comment-page-1/#comment-4783278
      this is the link of it..

    2. Neptune

      oops sorry this is the link of part 8 wait i will give you the link of part 7:

      http://www.tellyupdates.com/u-r-mine-ur-dreams-also-mine-part-7-swasan-marriage/

      1. Gayathri.visu

        Areeeee Neptuuuuuu …..I just loved that part. Now come on pull ur cheeks from my side!!! Beautiful…..u written very well about Swasan’s outfits n marriage rituals….n of course emotional scenes also…

    3. Neptune

      i pulled my cheeks….
      thanks for the comment dear…
      glad you liked it…

  28. IQRA222

    nepuu di you toh rock seriously
    this episode was so sweet and cute totally loved it<3 <3
    their scenes were just mindblowing
    and you toh know they are swasan they have to be unique but i did not expect swimming race anyways that was just superb
    and didu i already watch devanshi and yes she is just slaying in it
    waiting for the next part
    take care
    keep smiling and writing
    lots of love

    1. Neptune

      hey iqu…… thank you soooooo much for your sweet comment dear….
      am glad you liked it…

      even i watch devanshi yeah she is rocking it as kalki shah……
      take care dear…
      love you too…

  29. Shifa96

    It’s awesome dear

    1. Neptune

      thanks shifa

    1. Neptune

      thanks dear

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