U R A MASQUERADER!!!… (A Twinj os by Shatakshi)

Hellooo lovely ppl
So here u go with my second os….its been 5 months since I have not written any one slot…so please forgive me for the mistakes…
N one more thing….that the slot is quite lengthy

So let’s start

YOU R A MASQUERADER!!!??….

The camera rotates around a cliff

“SHOOT TWINKLE….JUST SHOOT!!!” he yelled

The camera rotates around a cliff….a boy is seen standing at its edge facing a girl…but wait a minute…does she has a gun!!!…yes she does…n that to pointing towards him

Her eyes shows the furiousness…the urge to kill him…but at the same time it carried a mixture of feelings…. The pain…the betrayal n yes THE LOVE…

The dilemma between mind n heart was clearly visible…. It was like a war between its mind n heart….where the mind forced her to kill him but the heart, it was not ready to accept the truth that he betrayed her…her glassy eyes were making her vision blur, so immediately she cleared her eyes n again made her hold firm on the gun…

Several thoughts were flashing in her mind due to which she closed it very tightly when suddenly a thought struck in her mind…
“DI…PLEASE SAVE ME…PLEASE…HE WILL KILL ME…MR SARNA STAY AWAY FROM ME…PLEASE….I BEG U” such words were repeatedly echoing
She opened her eyes with rage…her blood red eyes were reflecting her anger

“U KILLED MY SISTER…MY LIFE…I WONT LEAVE U….KUNJ” she yelled still the gun pointing towards him
“I didnt killed ur mahi” he said trying his best to convince her
His every word was piercing her heart…n her thoughts gave a start

• • • FLASHBACK • • •

Twinkle n Mahi…her sister made up a perfect bond together…they never felt the need of parents becoz their togetherness was enough to survive…its the same story since childhood…when one of the either loose their hope n patience the other used to console…they were habitual to lead this life becoz God deprived from the parents love at a very early age

One fine day,
“Di…di…where r u…di??” mahi shouts in full excitement twirling like a butterfly
“Ya ya…mahi…what happened baccha??…” replies twinkle holding her by her shoulder in order to calm her
“Di…guess what??…I m selected as the show stopper in a fashion show at LAS VEGAS!!!” she says stressing the word
Twinkle was numb listening this Becoz somewhere in her heart she knew that In order to achieve her dreams mahi has to leave her…but she shook away all the thoughts from her mind
“So IPS TWINKLE TANEJA is afraid that her choti will forget her” mahi says teasingly taking a support of her shoulder
Twinkle widen her eyes in amazement…but then
“Hahaaa…di…please…s..top …di please” twinkle started ticking her but later she stopped n both of them lay on the bed playing with their legs…
M : Di
T : hmmm
M : What if I leave u??
Says mahi calmly but her sudden question gave a shock to twinkle…but she tried her best to sound calm
T : ummm…I will die
Immediately mahi got up looked her…but then again got down
M : Aur agar aasa ho ki koi aapko mujhse alag kar de?? (What if someone make us separate??)
Twinkle held her fist tightly n said
T : I will kill that person
M : Haww…di…the great IPS officer Twinkle Taneja will become a serial killer
T : aagar aapne Behan ke liye yeh bhi karna padega to mein Tayar hu (if for my sister I have to do this then I m ready for it)
This was an immediate reply from her side
By the time mahi had tears in her eyes…she hugged twinkle tightly n said
M : promise di…I will never leave u…I love u soooo much

Days passes gradually n now its the time for mahi to leave for Vegas…
Before going Airport
T : Mahi…think again…If u say i will accompany u…
M : Arree mere pyari di (Ohh my cute sis)…don’t worry I will be fine…n due to my work I dont want my didu to sacrifice her job…to serve ur country…they need u more than ur sister
T : but…
M : (interrupting) no buts..n its…its final that u r not coming with me…got it
Twinkle just nodded her head reluctantly
M : that’s like my didu…aacha okay now we should leave…
Twinkle n mahi reached airport n later mahi left India

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PRESENT DAY
“That was my biggest mistake to leave her alone..becoz I wasn’t knowing that this world is so cheap n curel…thuu” says twinkle spitting….
“Twinkle…u r completely on a wrong track…it wasn’t me…” says kunj clarifying but was interrupted by her
“Just shut the f**k up…Kunj Sarna” she yelled
Unstoppable Tears gushing out of her red eyes..several feelings bouncing throughout her head…

• • • FLASHBACK • • •

Twinkle was having a conversation with mahi on cell…
“Di…I m damn excited for tonight..”says mahi jumping on her butt
“Oye mere kangaroo…shant ho ja (ohh my kangaroo…calm down)” says twinkle smiling
“Di!!!…u know everything na…even my actions” she says
“That’s why I m ur didu…right???”
“N yes di…u know there r many famous personalities going to come…n yes Mr Sarna is specially coming in this event to see the new face of the year…n that’s me!!” she says happily
“Mr Sarna???”
“Yes…here ppl say that he is a big business man in Vegas….ohh…di my show is going to start…wish me luck…bye…love u n yes miss u….muuuhhhhhaaa” says mahi hurriedly
“Drama Queen kahi ki…love u too baccha…All the best…may my choti get all the dreams fulfilled…bye” n she hangs up the call
Twinkle thinks, “Why am I getting so restless??…a strange feeling is gathering in my mind…ohh God twinkle just give it a break…its just a clot in ur mind…there is nothing like that…”
Time passed n twinkles restlessness was at its peak…many a times she thought to call mahi but dropped the idea…
All of a sudden she received a call n yes the screen displayed ‘Mahi’….she didnt let it to ring for once n picked it up
T : Helloo baccha r u okay??
M : “DI…PLEASE SAVE ME…PLEASE…HE WILL KILL ME…MR SARNA STAY AWAY FROM ME…PLEASE….I BEG U”
This gave twinkle a biggest shock of her life
T : hello mahi…tell me where r u…n who will kill u…please baccha answer me
But the call got disconnected
The entire night twinkle kept on calling various sources…the event manager of her event…her colleagues…friends…but non of her friend knew about her
Twinkle had various ill thoughts but it was obvious becoz the circumstances leaded the same
At midnight she got the news of mahi being dead…she was shattered…her entire world was upside down…
The very next day her body reached India…reports claimed that someone tried to molest her
Twinkle was in big trauma…but she composed herself becoz she took the oath to finish that person who killed her life…
Right from that day her planning started….
N the main proof against the murderer was “Mr Sarna”

• • • •

PRESENT

KUNJS POV

“Twinkle please I beg u ….please listen to me once…after that I m ready to die…but I can’t die being a murderer n that too in ur eyes…the one whim I love the most… “ I begged her several times…but she was not ready to listen my words
“I love u twinkle….please dont doubt our love”
Was our love so weak???… Yes it was…

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Listening those words made her heart melt which reminded her the most beautiful days of her life….the revengeful mission….the disguise…

• • • FLASHBACK • • •

The story starts from Las Vegas….the story of revenge…the story of love…the story of betrayal
A girl steps in Vegas…her eyes carried some unknown intensity….she was like a mystery…her messy hairs with curls…her baggy dress…made her look different
She carried a news paper… In which she read an article n this brought a smirk on her face
She wore her shades n carried her trawly bag…n headed towards the building
Ting tog…she rang the door bell
Her fingers were continuously playing with the door waiting for it to open…
Suddenly the latch gave a sound…n a guy opened it…her was continuously rubbing his sleepy eyes…
“Yes??” said the guy giving a confused look
“Hey I m Twinkle” she says forwarding her palm…he readily accepted her gesture…
She continued, “ Actually I m new in Vegas…n was seeking a room to live…I saw ur advertisement in the news paper…so thought of approaching”
“Oh ya…please come in” he says making her sit comfortably
He sat opposite to her n continued, “But before that I want to clear something’s with u…u r a girl…n for u to live here firstly u must trust ur roommate n that’s me…n household choruses would be done by combine efforts…n as I have my morning shift …I can easily help u out…n u dont have to pay the rent instead u should buy the necessary stuffs required…if u agree to all these then this house is urs”

All the time twinkle was nodding her head in agreement
“Yes…I m okay will all ur words…but just one thing that I need privacy…so please entering my room do knock…n BTW what’s may I know ur name??” says twinkle
“Myself Kunj…n ya sure u will totally get ur own space” he says assuring her
“Kunj…..” she says indicating him to say his complete name
“Ummm….I m not related to my family” was he word he said
“So where is my room” she stood up on her heels n says excitedly…a way to change the topic
“That way…he guided her”
Days passed n both of them enjoyed each others company
They used to hang out together…spend time together…shared their feelings n thoughts…
He was a loyal friend…but her actions were two sided…yes it was necessary as her plan was on .
He sometimes felt weird but then ignored

One fine day
“Kunj…come let’s go to that hotel” she says indicating towards a lavish hotel…
This made him tensed…
“U know this hotel belongs to sarnas…n here only a big fashion show took place” she blabbered continuously
By the time…he was sweating…
“No…we won’t go” he said coldly n made his way towards the apartment
She saw him going…n her eyes caught the same hotel…this brought a burst of tears
After consoling herself…she followed him

Everyday she used to fill up her dairy…it carried her hidden emotions…hidden identity…n the only aim of her life n that was to punish her Mahis murderer

Days were flying…n making their bond even more stronger
One day they were sitting on the sofa…chatting
“Twinkle…u know what…I feel u r not the one u pretend to be” he says softly leaning towards her face n looking straight into her eyes
“Yes I m a mystery…” she says looking into his eyes..completely lost
“I want to know u…ur life…the real u…everything…it seems that U R A MASQUERADER!” he says in a whisper still moving forward n tucking her flicks…both lost in each other
Within no time she wrapped her arms around his neck n he made a tight hold around her waist making her sit on his lap with her legs spread on both the sides
He softly kissed her neck smashing her waist…she was continuously massaging his hairs with her eyes closed…he forwarded towards her glossy lips n within no time it met…both were enjoying the moment…it carried a huge passion in it
But suddenly she got flashes of mahi…n she pushed him…n stood up leaving him blogged
Without meeting her eyes with him…she started moving away but he hold her wrist n pushed him towards his body…
“No more mask between us twinkle…I just want to say truth that I LOVE U” he says
She had tears in her eyes….she quickly hugged him tightly
“I Love U Too Kunj”
“U always used to say na that u feel that I have two shades…yes I have.. “ she says still sitting in his lap
She opened up her entire life story before him
he was hell shocked n tensed
“I means u r really a masquerader” he said totally amazed
She nodded her head…

Days were going on n on….but their relationship had something missing from his part….he used to go early n reach home late…twinkle was busy in executing her plan….
There was a knock on the door…she was alone…
She opened the door n received a letter…it was for KUNJ SARNA
She closed the door in utter shock….his surname was the most bothersome thing…
She immediately opened the envelop n got to know that it was a will paper…now it was confirmed that he is from the same Sarna family….who killed her life…her mahi
She felt betrayed
But then composed n headed towards his office…n made him sit in his car…n drove …she got many questions to be answered
She stopped the car near the cliff n pointed the gun towards him

• • •

PRESENT

She remembered all the memories which bought tears in her eyes…
“Twinkel…it wasn’t me” kunj continued
“Ohh okay…Mr Sarna…then please tell me…who was he” she says completely hurt
“It was….” he stopped
“Why did u stopped…u bl**dy murdered” she yelled
“IT WAS YUVRAJ SARNA…my brother” firstly he yelled but the broke down into tears
Twinkle stood there numb
“the day u told me ur story..I understood that it was my spoilt brother….my dad always gave him the liberty for everything…n supported his wrong doings….same he did that day…what u thought huh…why I live this cat n dig style life leaving that luxury…just becoz I dont want to enter in that dirt ….n about ur revenge…he has been handed to the cops…n so my so called father removed me from the will” he says confessing
Twinkle was just standing like a deadbody…he started moving towards her
He grabbed her hand n places the gun point on his head
“Twinkle if u dont trust me…then please shoot” he said meekly
Twinkle shook his hand n thrown the gun n jumped on him giving a tight hug…he responded to it
All the pain vanished all if a sudden n what left was the Love they hold
He breaks the hug
“Twinke…we met as Masqueraders….hiding our identities…but now I want to give a new start if our life. With truth” he says cupping her face
Suddenly she smashed her lips with his…it went on in a sync ….both showing their love for each other
They broke the kiss n smiled looking at each other….
Yuvraj was hanged until death
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Its been five years now….twinj r found in church lighting the candles….it was Mahis 6th death anniversary…
Suddenly
“Mumma dadda…come let’s go fast…it’s my birthday” a pretty girl says pulling twinkle saare
“Yaa Mahi…let’s go..” says kunj lifting her up
“Kunj..” says twinkle softly
“hmmm”
“Mahi is like an angle in our lives”
This brought a bright smile on their faces

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So did u liked the slot??
Was it good…or just a waste of time??
Was I able to convey the mixed feelings well??
N finally…how is my dp…u know I just love masks…n this one is my favourite
I m so sorry if u felt it boring….it took much time to write it up
It is my compensation n also laddoos request…
I committed her nearly a month before…n finally I did it
Chappals r allowed…but please soft wale use karna??
N if u liked the slot then please dont forget to give ur comment on my work
I have uploaded So A Lion Fell In Love With The Lamb (Season 2)…do check it out
Love u all❤❤

32 comments

  1. Jisha

    |Registered Member

    Hey Shatakshi,
    This is awesome….Loved the way you portrayed Twinkle’s mixed feelings…Enjoyed Mahi-Twinkle relation. Dp is beautiful..

  2. Chehak

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    ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
    cant describe my feelings after reading this

  3. Loveleen

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    tht ws really an outstanding work……such a nyc stry n yeah ur dp too….. no chappals only sweets n kisses….hatsoff to u…love u

  4. Laddoo

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    Haan di…to kya keh rhi thi aap? Joote? Nahi nahi…chappal? Di main inn dono mein se ek bhi nhi maarungi pr main aapka qatal pakka kr daalungi….ek to itna achha likhkar joote maarne ki baat….I mean aap ho kya di? Itni emotional kahaani…itni achhi story aur aapko chappal chahiye? Wo nhi dungi….kuch aur bhi battar dungi…..ek badi si jhappi aur bohot saare kisshiesh????. At least meri wish to poori ho gyi….kitne dino baad itni achi kahaani padhi…too good di??????✌✌????

  5. Sayeeda

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    Amazing Sattu …missed u sooo much …
    Soooooo good OS …..best one I ever read ….nd u r calling it a waste of time… Aren’t u serious????
    It was the best utilization of time…
    love u

  6. Kruti

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    Superb os shatakshi……..just loved the way u portrayed each and every bit of the story right from the sisters bond until humare twinj ka pyaar…..muhhhaaaa loved it

  7. ariya

    very unique story.. emotional too…
    i dont like it
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    because i love it….

  8. Bhavika

    wah wah shatu diiiiiiiii ye apka 1st ff hai jo maine read kiya hai and it was fabbbb… love u shatu diiiiiiiiiii muaah

  9. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Ab I can’t praise you much. After woh toh dost karte hain na and we are enemies right so… anyways, the slot was superb (dushman ne tareef ki hai yaad rakhna) and welcome back.

  10. Apoorwa

    |Registered Member

    shatakshi tera deemag satak gaya hai kya
    and if you think it’s just a waste
    so i am ready to waste my whole life reading these masterpieces
    and about dp it attracted me although i usually don’t read os but it was you dp’s
    and i enjoyed your emotions wali chat! 🙂 🙂
    see after 2 months i use emoji☺☺☺☺☺☺
    love you darling ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

  11. Saby

    |Registered Member

    Satuuuuuuuuuu……….
    Wat an compensation yaar???
    Loved it so much yaar……
    Too beautifully portrayed…..
    Try to give such os every weekkkk….
    I missed uh so much……
    Keep it up…….. Love uh……?????

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  13. Baby

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    omg satakshi osm yr luvd it i dont believe it amazing yr how do u rite soooooooo gud man muaah kya story thi hving tears srsly

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