u r my heartbeat…a shraman os (ek duje ke vaaste)

43

Hello guys!! 😀
Maria here wid a romantic emotional is….
—-u r my heartbeat—–
Hope u lyk it…….

Shr n sumo love echothr deeply…..
But they hid their love frm their family n frnds just waiting fr d ri8 tym to tell dem……..
But fate lead dem to such way where thngs happen unexpectidlyy……
—————–
Shr pov:
I ws dammm happy when she wake up after an huge accident…..i thought dat i almost lose her….. but my sumo cm back to me……

HOSPITAL:
sumo open her eyes n looks around confusingly…….

Shr pov:
But my whole happiness turned into sadness when……..

Hospital:
Sumo wakes up….n shr goes to her…
Shr slightly : sumo…….
Sumo luks at him: excuse me can u plzz…..call my mom…

Shr pov:
when i get to know dat she lost her memory……

Hospital..
shr is in big shocked cause sumo lost hr memoryyy n didnt knw who is he?
Rishab shr frnd told shr in d hospital dat he loves sumo…….
—-she get a double shock aftr listen dis—–cause sumo is shr luv— but nobdy knws dis—-

DAYS PASSES N SUMO CMS HOME…….
—-she gets better bt her memory still didnt came—-
—she just claimed shr as a good frnd but shr loves her deeply—–

Finally rishab’s parents cms to sumo house fr rishab-sumo alliance…..
—rishab is happy as he luvs sumo—-
—-sumo is not happy nor sad she is just obeying her parent’s wish—-
—-shr is dam sad as sumo is d luv of his lyf….but he decided to sacrifice his love fr his best frnd…….
Cause he knw dat sumo’s those those feelings n luv before d accident cant come……

2 DAYS BEFORE D ENGEGMENT :
—shr cms to sumo room—
Shr: hey beautiful…… 🙂
S: hyy..!! 😀 glad u came….i want to show u my engagment dress…..
(she shows him he gives a fake happiness)
Shr: beautiful……just lyk u……. 🙂
—sumo luks on—-
Shr: actually i came here to give u dis…… 🙂
Sumo: wats in dis box…… 🙂
Shr: open it…… (sumo opens d box)
—-it is a beatiful red heart shaped diamond ring in d box—–
Sumo: wow!! 😮 wat a beautiful ring fr me…?? 😀
—-shr nods—-
Sum: thank u thnk u…!! 😀 ( she happily hugs him)
Shr: acha m going…….u take care ( sumo nods)
Shr cms out of d room a tear rolls frm his eye…….—-…..

FLASHBACK:
1 day before d accident….
(sumo n shr r in sm place )
Shr sit on his knees n proposes her wid d same ring……
—-they hug eachothr—–

Present:
—she thinks abt dis n smiles but den gets sad—-

ENGAGMENT DAY:
evrybdy is busy in prepations…..
Preeti cms sumo wid engegment ring…
P: di here is d ring……make rishooo wear dis ring ok…?? 😀
(sumo nods)
—suddenly she feels dat her one earring is missing—-
—she fogot to wear it—-
—-so she go to her room—-

IN ROOM:
—Sumo wears her earring n strts to go when sve finds a diary on her table—-
Sumo goes near table n pick d diary…..
—wbose diary is this??? —-
She opens it n it ws shr diary…….
—–she is shocked to read evry word its all abt her n shr—-

She gets n headache…..n collides with a table…..
She strts to remembers small prts of her memory……
Wind strts blowing n diary’s last page opens……
—-their is a pic of both of them—-
when be proposed her……
—she is shocked tears rolls down frm her face—-
She i weak…. but manages to open her cupboard….

—she takes out d ring—-
—she gets small flashbacks whwn smone makes her wear the same ring—
–she holds her head– in pain—

Door knocked:
A maid sm to call her….
Ma’am engegment function has already strted evry bdy is waiting fr u….
Sumo frm inside: yes!! i…i cmming…….

She goes our her room n decided to tell evrybdy that her memory came back…….
But stopped when she saw dat evrybdy is soo happy……
—evrybdy is having fun—-
N rishab is waitig fr her on d stage—-
She goes n feels helpless…..
—-she has both rings in her hands—-

—she stands in front of him n cries silently—-
—she takes out rish ring n abt to make him wear when he steps back—
—she looks on—-

Ris goes to shr holds his hand n makes him stand infront of sumo—-
—everybody is happy n shr n sumo ws confused—
Ris: here is ur groom make him wear ring…. 😀
sumo confusingly luks at him sbr also—-
Ris: wat m saying d truth….luks at sumo…it ws me who keeps d diary in ur room….so ur memory can came back…… look my try worked….

Shr looks at sumo in shock…..
—evry body strts clapping fr them—
Ris: u sacrificed ur love fr me body…….but when i came to ur room dat day…..

FLASH BACK:
BEFORE D ENGEGMENT….
one day rish cms to shr room…..n finds d diary he is shocked….n tells evry thing to evry body…..he decided to reconcile them…..

PRESENT:
shr hugs him…. 😀 thanks yr thank u soo much…..
Sumo cries in happiness……
Sumo: bt how do u knw my memory……
(i can c d pain in ur eyes when u were standing infront of me) said rishh
Ris: so make echothr wear rings……
Rish: wait….sumo??
—sumo gives him heartshaped same ring—
R: here shr make her wear this ring…….dis ring belongs to her….

—–both makes eachothr wear ring——n got engaeged—–
—shr hugs sumo—-
Shr: i love u…i cant lose u…..
Sumo: m also glad my memory came back…..my feeling…..i love u toooo
shr: u r my heartbeat…..
—n kisses her on cheeks—

———THE END———-

so guys how ws it?? 😀
did u lyk it.. ??
If a little bit then plzzz cmmnt…..!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
N silent readers dont stay silent u toooo cmmnt….. 😉 🙂 😉

By by guys !
LOVE U ALL…..! 😀

We recommend
43 Comments
  1. Sweet and lovely…..

    1. Marie

      Thanks a lot dear….!! 😀

  2. Fatimagulesarfraz

    What a story yr ???? .. ap k mind me esi stories ati kahan se hn ? ? … really hats off ????

    1. Marie

      Hahah thank u sooo much dear…!! Wat a lovely cmmnt! 😀 😀

  3. Prettypreeti

    Hey maro yaar u r awesome how can u write so much and so nicely loved it a lot and dp change kr li nayi photo aayi ki change ho gayi dp loved ur d,ur os ,ur ffs and u

    1. Marie

      Hyyy preeti dear!! 🙂
      Awww thank u sooo much dear!! M glad u lyked it! 😉
      Hahahah dp change…..!
      Thank u so much fr loving evry thing….!!
      I tooooo love u sooo much dear…!!

  4. Its was really cute and sweet. Keep writing.

    1. Marie

      Thank u sooo much Nandu dear !! 😉 🙂

  5. Khushi

    Yaar Maria aaj toh lagta hai ki mera rone ka din hai….subah se kitni baar to chuki Hun…..but thank God u had a happy ending yr….Varna jab Maine padha ki sumo ki memory loss ho gya toh sachi meri eyes mein aansun the……u r just out of the world Maria….itne ache ideas hote hai tere paas….stay blessed dear…..big tight hug and big kiss from me…love u dear???

    1. Marie

      Awwww hamari khushi roti hoi nai hansi hoi achi Lagti hai!! 😀
      N thank u so so much fr such a sweet cmmnt yr….!! Ur cmmnts r really boosters fr me as I said already….!! 🙂 🙂
      Lots of kisses n tight hugs frm me toooo dear….!!
      Love u too dear…!
      Stay happy stay blessed!! 😉

  6. It was really cute and sweet. Keep writing. Are u maria?

    1. Marie

      Thanks a lot dear!! Yes dear m maria! 🙂 🙂

  7. LovelyLady

    Ooo my os queen… u really deserve this….
    I loved d story upto its core… hw cn u wrt so good yaar?? Kuch tips hme bhi do…
    Really loved rishab of this story. He was d real hero… isnt it??

    1. Marie

      Awwwww thank u sooooo sooo much fr such an amazing compliment di….!!
      N abt d tips hahhahah how can I give u tips jabke Maine khud apse hi inspire hi kar likhna seekha hai u r my inspiration…!! 🙂 🙂
      Yes rishoo is d real hero….wo na hota to shahiad…….
      Love u di…
      N erglyyyy waiting fr the ep of together forever n ANJCK….. Season 2….!! Plzz post soon! 😉

      1. LovelyLady

        thnk u sooo mch fr sYing all this… bt really ur wrtng inspires,me…..,a lot ….
        no majak…. i m saying dis,seriously….
        ya,dear,i wll try to post vry soon… perhaps,tmmrw…
        i am too missing all thise love n cmmnt on my pGes….

      2. Marie

        Great lovely di yaayyy…!!! 😀 ap ka ep bhi post hone wala hai m soo happy!! 😀
        thank u fr saying such great words fr me…….!! 😀
        even i m nt worth dat but u r…..!! 😉

    2. Heyyyy lovy how us ur health now?????
      Did ur fever says bye to u?

  8. Knock knock Mario
    Small one but good one liked it infact loved it
    Love u most
    Take care

    1. Marie

      Opening door…………
      Aww thank u so much api!!
      Love u mostest!! 😀 😀
      U too take care…..

  9. Khushi

    Hey Maria…I have got an idea for OS….with this same memory loss track….can I use ur this memory loss idea and go ahead with my OS???

    1. Marie

      Han Han kyun nai ye Bhi koi pooochne ki baat hai….
      Infact mujhe toh Lagta hai tu ye idea (memory loss) wala mujh se Bhi acha use kare gi 😉 😉 😉
      Go ahead…!!
      Really want to c in ur style!

      1. Khushi

        Haha aisa kuch nhi hai…bas dimaag mein aaya so thought to write… I will write and maybe it will get posted by tomm

      2. Marie

        Wah wah lekin yr tumhare dimagh ke ideas bhi kmaal bemisaal hote hain….!!
        Bs kl aajai jaldi se….. 😉

  10. WeirdSister

    Wow….maria….loved it!!!!…..u write os so well….???

    1. Marie

      Awww thank u sooo much weird sis…… fr such a lovely cmmnt..!! 🙂 🙂
      m glad u lyked it…! 😀

  11. Yaar kya kamal ki luv stry hai..heart touching…soooo niceeeeee…..

    1. Marie

      Thank u sooo much yr shiny….!! 😀
      So gald to knw dat u loved it…..!! 🙂 🙂

  12. Nikita

    It was damn amazing.. Lved it to the core.. How can u write so well.. Love you marie di

    1. Marie

      Awww my cutie nikki…!!!
      Thank u sooo much yr !! 🙂
      Haha mere chote se dimagh me jo ideas aate hain i just write them….! 😉 😉
      Love u too my dear…!

  13. Angel_pari

    Wowwww maira it was really touching and emotional story with happy ending lov u u rocked

    1. Marie

      Thank u sooo much pari di…..!! 🙂
      So happy to knw dat u lyked it…!! 😀
      love u toooo !! 🙂

  14. Oops..I’m become so late..
    But..still…I wanna..say..that I loved it..
    So..sweet story…u rocked my dear maria..?☺☺☺

    1. Marie

      Haha no worries…! 😀
      thank u soo much sona di…….
      Lots of love…!! 🙂

  15. Maria Maria jus amazing….. this was short by soo cute…. loved it??

    1. Marie

      Awww thank u sooooo much anamika dear…!! M really glad u lyked it dear…!!

  16. Awesome

    1. Marie

      Thanks alot ishq! keep cmmnting! 😉 🙂

  17. It was wonderful really heart touching loved it

    1. Marie

      Thank u sooo much dear…!! 🙂 :)m reqlly glad u lyk it…!! 🙂

  18. RANdomfANCreationz

    wow marie I am out of words its toooooo gooooooooooood loved it a lot

    1. Marie

      Thank u sooo much fatarajo…,fr such a lovely cmmnt..!!! 😀 😀

  19. Madhuri

    Nice maria. I love it
    ???

  20. Marie

    Thanks a lot lot…!! Fr such an a sweet cmmnt dear…!! 🙂 🙂

Comments are closed.

Yes No