U never know what destiny has kept for u….TwiRaj (episode 7)

Hi im back!! I got to see new people who commented. I am so happy. Risa is hungry for comments. Please make my wish true. Dear silent readers, i no u read my ff n dont comment. Please i request u guys to comment n give ur veiews on my ff. U can suggest ideas too. I will think n imclude them in my ff. Please do comment. When all comment in unison. A mindblowing story with complete entertainment can be made. I would love to acknowledge the commenters up to date. Without their comments i wouldnt have any hope to continue infront of popular twinj ffs. Thanks again. N heres the episode…..

After class
The school bell rang n all dispersed to go home. Girl 1 n 2 went to twinkle n the 3 of them sat together n started gossiping. The class monitor kept calling twinkle but twinkle ignored her n continued with her chattering.

After 1/2 hour
Girl 1: oh no im late! My mom will kill me.
Girl 2: lets go!
Twinkle: but i wanna talk more.
Class monitor patted twinkles back for the 1002nd time.
Class monitor: twinkle…..
Twinkle turned behind.
Twinkle: hi vaishnavi howz it going u no…
Vaishnavi: yuvraj is waiting for u at the class door since half an hour u no. I tried telling u this but looks like he is angry….
Twinkle: yuviii!!!!!

At the class door
Twinkle arrived. She saw that yuvi had slept waiting for her. He had fallen asleep leaning towards the wall. One of his bangs had fallen over his face.
Twinkle to herself: babaji his sleeping face is so cute. Munda toh super cute nikla (guy has turned out to be cute.)
She kept staring at him. She saw that his bangs were disturbing him. She tried to remove them of his face. She was successful but she touched his forehead n he woke up. He saw twinkles eyes. Twinkle got stunned but slowly she calmed down n fell deep in his eyes. Twinkle felt like she had reacjed bliss. Yuvi saw twinkle n noticed her extra large eyes.
Yuvi to himself: her eyes r so innocent n beautiful just like a puppy….. wait yuvi what r u thinking?
N he came back to his senses. He jolted backward. Twinkle came out of *cough* bliss too.
Yuvi: made me wait for so longgggggggg….. endless
Twinkle:sorry..
Yuvi: punishment to milegi! ( u will surely get punished.)
Twinkle: huh?
Yuvi came close to her. He brought her hands near her cheeks n touched them.
Twinkle: babaji y is yuvi touching my cheeks. I feel so nervous n happy as well…..
Yuvi came to his plan. He slowly pulled her cheeks. N he pulled harder.
Twinkle: aaaaaahhhh…., yuvi stop it.
Yuvi: no no. Ur cheeks r so soft i wanna pull more.
Twinkle: hey stop it!
Yuvi: never! Made me wait. Made ur dear master wait. Good doggies never do such a thing…
Twinkle: sorry i will never make u wait! Never ever!
Yuvi left her cheeks.
Yuvi: good. Now lets go. As ur fake bf i need to behave as if i am leaving u home. See half way together then u ur way n me my way.
Twinkle: fine lets go!
Twinkle waved girl 1 n 2 bye n went with yuvi.

Outside school
Twinkle was super tired but yuvi kept walking normally. Twinkle was so tired that she caught a pole n relaxed her head there.
Twinkle: yuvi i cant walk any far. U go i will go with chinki.
Yuvi: chinki has gone home now. I told her i am going to leave u home.
Twinkle: well done. How far lefr.
Yuvi: just some 80 metres more n done.
Twinkle: 80 metre! Y did u park it so far.
Yuvi: u no the health benefits of walking right!
Twinkle: fine.
Twiraj walked a lot n finnaly reached his car.
Yuvi: bye twinky my dog!
Twinkle: what bye! Ur dropping me home right.
Yuvi: we agreed halfway. Now halfway is done. Bye!
He sat in his car n went away. Twinkle was left alone.
Twinkle to herself: babaji how can anyone be so heartless. He tells i am his dog. N does anyone leave their dog midway n go! N i was thinking that his attitude is changing. He is still the same old yuvi i hated.
Twinkle heard a loud horn.
She turned behind. It was yuvi with his car.
Yuvi: coming or not!
Twinkle ran n sat ins8de.
Twinkle: now why did u come back.
Yuvi: because all of a sudden i felt that my dog was missing me. I too no that i have a responsibility for my pet.
Twinkle: i am still a human.
Yuvi: ya i get it.
N he smiles.
Twinkle gets lost in thoughts while yuvi drives them home.

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How was it? Any suggestions? Any appreciation? Plz comment . Silent readers too. Bye.

Credit to: risa

49 comments

    • risa

      Oh hello dont bash people. I no that ur an hater. N u dont need to teach me how to write n what to write. N for ur kind information i have been to school n i no manners too. I dont wanna say this but plzif u dont wanna read then dont read but please dont bash me. I told this before its ur choice to read or comment on my ff. N write one on ur own n see. Even 1 word would not come out! Please twinj fans r welcome to read but i am not forcing u guys. Dont bash me. If u hate me n my ff then y r u even here commenting. Mind ur own business. N dont call anyone a crap writer. This shows how much of a blockhead u r. If u have the guts then write an ff on twinj. But sorry if u didnt appreciate my writing. But i am never gonna bring kunj in my ff.

  1. shagun gulati

    UR HATER pls if you don’t like it pls don’t comment coz it will hurt her and we guys are not here to hurt anyone instead to support so pls if you don’t like then pls don’t read and if your saying this is bad and she don’t know to write so pls write a ff of urself on twinj ok and for your kind information iam also a twinj fan but iam as well as a twiraj fan I love both twinj and twiraj equally and pls don’t hurt anyone feeling after this
    Sry if I hurted you I was just trying explain you

    • risa

      Thanks shagun gulati for supporting me. Plz its an request if u hate my ff then plz dont read it. Sorry if i hurt u.

  2. Mind ur language Ur hater u have no write to say like this to anyone. And if u have gone to school then i think there u should have learnt some manners also

  3. Mayatwinjfan

    Ur hater if u don’t like the Ff then why read and comment on it. Get a life. Im also a twinj fan but it doesn’t mean I hate twiraj so mind my language but if u don’t like then don’t comment and if u want to comment say good things plz ???

  4. Maanvi

    Ur hater pls go to hell and Mind ur own business!! Even I’m a TWIRAJ and TWINJ fan I LOVE BOTH OF THEM EQUALLY!! We should give chance to ppl to prove their skills u only love TWINJ and don’t care of ppl’s feeling who love TWIRAJ!! And now coming to Rosa’s writing skills they are awsome and of u are a twinj fan then read only Twinj ffs and comment on them don’t dare to read the 3 TWIRAJ ffs and comment on them!! Mind ur own business and just f*ck off??

    • risa

      Thanks a lot maanvi n dont read my other comment about 15 epi . Seeing massive support i am gonna continue n write 1000 epi n show them whose boss here.

  5. Maahira

    Stop bashing others !!U haven’t gone to school as u haven’t learn manners and how to talk with respect???if don’twant TWIRAJ then read only Twinj ffs and don’t dare to comment!!

    Amazing Risa love ur work and don’t care
    abt what others haters think abt ur work u are a gem of a person??

    • risa

      Thank u maahira i am thankful to people like u who support whats justice. Thank u again. 🙂

  6. deepika

    Hey ur hater what u’r promble ???
    U don’t like means then stop reading and commending
    Y r u insulting her skill…
    For kindly information I also twinj fan but its does not mean I hate twiraj pair
    This is just serial not a real life .s they first introduced yuvi as a hero. so many of the like him n they pairs
    So what wrong with u. I think u’r overreacting
    If u want twinj ff mean go to other ff n y r u wasting, u time in this ff.just get off here

  7. risa

    My buddies mallu, sam, riaA mendeZz, laddoo, maanvi, rashi, sonali, ryths sorry if i forgot to mention anyone. Please where r u guys. I badly miss ur comments.

  8. risa

    Looks like i should quit. No one is liking my ff. Someone who stole ahria’s phone commented against me n now ur hater has completely discouraged me. I habe decided to end my ff on episode 15. If really anyone wants to read my ff then do comment. Silent readers i really need ur help to overcome such readers. Please comment n support me. N ur hater i am not scared of ur comment. I will continue to write as i no that my fan-base is small but i do have supporters. Please ur hater dont bash anyone else now. Plz its a request. 🙁

    • Maanvi

      Pls don’t discontinue it ❤️❤️We all are there as ur support system❤️❤️?? and love ur ff to the core of our heart

      • risa

        I no that maanvi. People like ur hater cant stop me. I will give them proper answer. Its done the comment is deleted of ur hater.

  9. Aanya

    Amazing don’t care what haters think abt u!!! U are surely gonna rock!! We are there u support u always and forever

  10. Rashi

    Risa I’m also a twinj fan …but I really appreciate ur efforts….I really like ur ff…pls don’t think about stupid comments….many people would be jealous with ur success and will try to demotivate u….pls just focus on good comments….we are always with u….and haan don’t stop writing… U r an amazing one….luv u…??????

  11. Sayeeda

    Risa dear….. I’m a big fan of twinj but I don’t have any grudges from Twiraj fans …it’s just that every other person has his / her different choices nd preferences …nd I truly respect the feelings of Twiraj fans…… don’t get disheartened with bashing comments infact a writer has to bear all positive as well as negative comments ….it’s just a strength of a writer to ignore negative one’s nd learn from all consequences nd come up as winner….
    I had never read any Twiraj ff …it’s my first one of urs that I’m reading.. coz I’m busy with my office nd get only night time to read ff so I read only twinj one’s…. but I’m enjoying ur ff ..its awesome…. nd continue with it dont stop it plzzz…

    • risa

      Hi sayeeda. Thanks for ur support. Some people have tendency to bash others. I dont care now. I mind my business n dont enter others problems. I am atleast not like someone called ur hater.

  12. tina

    How to delete comment ur hater deleted his comment how ?????? Plzzz tell me
    Anyways I m liking your ff very much plzzz continue OK dear luv u

  13. sonali

    its too osm dear. I really like it intact I loved it .risa u r fabulous writer as here r many twinj fan I’m one of them but by giving such an epi & by collecting so many comments that too on twiraj ff then y must be fab writer.

  14. Ur hater

    Good u should finish ur Ff as its the biggest crap I’ve ever seen. And all u idiots why r u bashing me for, u all preach about giving opinions and on most people’s ff they ask for honest comments so unlike u I was honest I didn’t hide what I thought. I just I don’t understand why tu let’s people post such crap. Risa u r a stupid crap writer and if u don’t like what I say go to hell becuz at least then I won’t have to tolerate this crap.

    • risa

      Excuse me. Then y r u tolereating my crap. If i am writing crap then dont read ignore my ff n read ffs on twinj. Dont dare to comment of my ff again.

    • Maanvi

      U better f**k off and comment on Twinj ffs Keep ur comment with urself and if u can’t say positive then don’t say negative also and don’t comment and have the guts to speak ur true name!! ?? u deserve shit?

    • Mallu

      U bl**dy crap how could u comment by stooping so low in social websites our choice is far better than ur choice
      U f***king rascal
      I just hate u

    • risa

      Excuse me get lost. Read twinj ffs n keep ur mouth shut. Dont date to read my ff again.

  15. shagun gulati

    Excuse me UR HATER what do you think of yourself don’t you have feeling if you have feeling try to understand what others will feel when u bash them and iam sure that if you continue to bash people not only in TU IN real life also you’ll never be able to get a nice life partner coz no one loves to live with a manner less girl so better try to change your attitude and after this if you show attitude to anyone than you have to bear our curses do you get that and pls don’t comment if you don’t like it n ya if ur saying this us crap then why don’t you write a FF on your own so better keep your mouth shut

  16. Risa…..dnt discontinue ur ff…..dnt do injustice to urself….plzz….and ur hater…..if u wanna comment then plz be decent.

  17. Mallu

    He risa I’m here I’m bit busy in home waiting for our results plus doing arrangements for my grandfather’s post death rituals
    N the episode is super cool
    Hungry for next episode

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