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U never know what destiny has kept for u….TwiRaj (episode 5)

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Hi guys risa here with long update. I cant believe i reached here. 5th epi. N sorry ahira as that comment was for the person who stole ur tab. N sorry again if it hurt ur feelings. Guys i put a lot in it. Plz plz comment. Ur comments give me strength to continue in front of loads n loads of twinj ffs. Plz comment. Silent readers too. Sry if i hurt twinj fans feelings. N here i begin…
Were we left
Twinkle:what? What r ur terms english parrot?
Yuvi: will u stop calling me that! I hate it!
Twinkle: ok fine go on…
Yuvi: so now my fake gf… u umm….lets see..
Twinkle: fast!!!
Yuvi: if ur not listening to me then…goodbye!
Twinkle: no dont go!
Yuvi: fine so u should do something for me….
Twinkle: what should i do? Rob a bank? Oh ya pay u loads of mony? Or no i should then…
Yuvi: none of these.
Twinkle: then what?
Yuvi bent his head down. He thought for awhile.
Yuvi: u no twinkle i love dogs. I go to the park just to see them. It wad my childhood dream to pet a dog n u no mom hates pets…
Twinkle: so…come to the point.
Yuvi: so u twinkle taneja… would u like to be my dog.
Twinkle was stunned n had turned to stone. She never heard of anything like this.
Twinkle: have u a mind. I n ur dog…
Yuvi: if u want me to go along with ur fake bf farce u have to become my dog.
Twinkle: never!
Yuvi: then i just need to go n tell ur friends the truth…
Twinkle: no dont!
Yuvi: then turns 3 times hold my hand n say woof!
Twinkle had nothing left. She turned 3 times n held his hand n told woof.
Yuvi: my dream come true. I have the power to turn a lioness into a dog!
Twinkle had completely lost hope now.

At the cafeteria
Twinkle was with chinki.
Twinkle: so this is what happened.
Chinki: yuvi is treating u like a dog n ur obeying him. Twinkle how is this possible.
Twinkle: thats what chinki. I cant believe myself.
Chinki: i never thought u would go to that extent as to just preserve fake friends.
Suddenly her phone rang.
Twinkle: hello! Whos this.
Yuvi: this is me ur master. Howz my pooch doing.
Twinkle: yuvi!!!
Yuvi: ya the great me!
Twinkle: why did u call me?
Yuvi: come to the canteen now! N pay my bill.
Twinkle: y should i!
Yuvi: forgot ur my dog. N its a dogs duty to give up their kith n kin for their master!
Twinkle: whatever! I am coming!
Yuvi: thats like a good girl… i mean dog. Bye pooch.
Twinkle: bye yuvi
Yuvi: what should u say.
Twinkle: bye my dear master.
Twinkle cut the call.
Twinkle: bye chinki!
Chinki: bye twinkle. N be careful.
Twinkle:ok
Twinkle goes out of cafeteria.

At canteen
Twinkle arrives.
Yuvi: so late.
Twinkle: its not late.
Yuvi: but now ur on luthra time n ur late.
Twinkle: whatever! Heres the money.
Yuvi: sit with me ill treat my dear pooch.
Twinkle: really!
Yuvi: u bet.
Twinkle was really happy. Her work had finnaly paid off.
Twinkle: so whats my reward.
Yuvi: here…
He held a glass of water.
Twinkle: whats this now?
Yuvi: your reward water.
Twinkle: water!
Yuvi: see ur my dog n u cant eat human food n i dont have dog food hear so… water.
Twinkle drank that water sadly. Yuvi saw her. He patted her head.
Yuvi: good doggie.
N he gave a super cute smile.
Twinkles mind was singing. She suddenly felt better. She felt a feeling she never felt for anyone.
Twinkle to herself: babaji i have landed myself in a new siyappa but y do i feel happy.
N that moment the class bell rang.

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Thats for the mega surprize episode. Guys i wanted to make it longer but i have to study for tests. So sorry but hope u enjoyed new siyappa.
Bye n do comment.

Credit to: risa

24 Comments
  1. Amazing????
    All the best for ur test????
    By the way u are in which standard and which state do u belong to???

    1. Thanks maanvi. N i cant reveal my state but right now i am in 10th.

  2. Risa…thanks for another episode …..mind blowing….

    1. Thanks rashi. 🙂

  3. really enjoy it. wtng for next

    1. Thanks sonali.

  4. Its fine. I understand.
    This episode was funny. Lol. Poor twinkle. Woof!

    1. Hi riaA MendeZz. I hope u have forgiven me. I never meant that for u. And even i felt sad for twinkle. But i wanted our siyappa queen to go through some rough patch n then fall in love.

  5. omg twinkle started to fall for yuvi
    it’s so hilarious
    unite them and make them fall in deeeeeeeep in love and soon
    risa

    1. Thanks mallu. I promise they will fall in love n i will try to make them fall soon. But it may take 15 episodes.

  6. wiowwwwww I loved ur imagination….
    it’s jst mindblowing I read thousands of ff’s not only of tei but many others
    u r the second person to whom I am saying that have never read such a ff…….
    twinkle dog- woof…….
    all the very best from my side too…..

    1. Thanks yashasvi. Even i dont no how this thought came to my mind. 🙂

  7. So cute…..ahh….I’m lovin’ it

    1. Thanks laddoo

  8. Weird but awesome

    1. Thanks sam.

    1. Thanks harna.

  9. it was awesome

    1. Thanks yagya.

  10. I feels sad. Ther were a lot of new people commenting for my epi before. N now on my 5th epi or epic epi no comments at all. :'(

  11. Epi 6 posted just wait for preveiw. New development coming… 🙂

  12. Risa its ok. No hard feelings. Life does not go on relying on the past. All is forgiven.

    1. Thanks buddy. 🙂

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