U never know what destiny has kept for u….TwiRaj (episode 17)


Thanks you so much guysssss!!!!!! I am so happy to see ur warm n supportive comment. Thanks to sparkle, yuvi/zain ki fan, sam, twiraj rocks, infinity, maanvi, meeta, laddoo, yagya, riaA mendeZz, n manny for their constant support. Thanks to yashu for commenting. Its a request please post ur ff soon. N thanks to sayeeda. I read the intro n epi 1 n i loved it. Plz continue. N guys i got info from twitter fc that gold awards areon 24 july. Do watch it. Our dear jasmin is winning best debut female n zain is winning best negative role male. Congrats to both of them from my side….. n now with the episode….

At taneja house
All had fallen asleep waiting for twinkle. All but leela who was worried about twinkle. Twinkle entered.
Leela: twinkle! Is this the time to come home! Its half past 11! N u were missing sonce we returned at 8! Where were u twinkle?
Twinkle: maa i was at…. at chinki’s home. I felt bored sitting by myself so i went there….
Leela: ok! Bit if u repeat this mistake again… i will not forgive… u no how worried i was….
Leela started to cry. Twinkle hugged her.
Twinkle: maa….
The both of them were like this for a long time.

At luthra house
Now this is a killer scene. N literally it is! Decor burnt at sides. Everything broken or at wrong places. Yuvi had not even entered that he got scared.
Yuvi: i think i should not trouble mom… i will dig my own grave n sit inside it!
He entered. He saw the destroyed function. N his dear mom sitting down on one of the chairs facing backwards. He saw above. He saw one of the chairs hanging on the fan.
Yuvi to himself: fall on me fast before mom kills me!
Anita got up. She came to yuvi.
Anita: yuviiiii!!!!!!
She held her hand. Yuvi closed his eyes tightly. But he didnt feel any pain. He opened eyes n saw anita crying.
Yuvi: mom…
Anita hugged him.
Anita: what do u think? I will go against ur wishes. U could have told me before itself u dont agree to this marriage. I love u beta!
Yuvi felt remorse at what he had done.
Yuvi: i am sorry mom!
N he hugged her tightly.

Next day
Before entering college
Twiraj were together in each others embrace.
Twinkle: u no what yuvi?
Yuvi: what?
Twinkle: i think the college gate is more far than before.
Yuvi: even i do think the same.
Twinkle: u no why?
Yuvi: why?
Twinkle: because i love u!
Yuvi: i love u too!
Chinki was standing behaind them.
Chinki: if ur talk is over could u lovebirds. Speed up a bit! Ur walking like snails u no. Listening to this twiraj speed up. The 3 entered the college. Sound of camera was heard. A man was hiding behind bushes. He was on the phone.
Man: i have done it mam…
Voice: good! Now u can go! Tmrw i will tell what u should do…
N they hung up.

After college
Twinkle will be waiting outside gate for yuvi n chinki as section 1 had extra classes. Chinki arrives.
Twinkle: where is yuvi?
Chinki: he coming….
N she pointed behind.
Twinkle saw a guy wearing same clothes as yuvi with harry potter like glasses come forward.
Twinkle: whose this boy with specs? Isnt he super cute…..
Chinki: he is ur bf…
Twinkle: what! Its yuvi!
Yuvi comes to them. The 3 of them go n sit on a bench.

At the bench
Twinkle: yuvi u have specs?
Yuvi: cant u see? I am wearing them right now. So i do have specs.
Twinkle: ok! Dont need to panic.
She took off his specs. N checked them.
Yuvi: give them back.
Twinkle: but u could see without specs until morning what happened?
Yuvi: my contacts fell off…
Twinkle: what u have contacts!!!!!
Yuvi: i do…
Chinki: even i do? Whats ur number? Mine is -3 for reading.
Yuvi: mine is 0.5 for reading….
Twinkle: so less…
N she wore it. He eyes started turning. She removed them.
Yuvi: so i told u not to come to conclusions. I have 0.5 fo r reading n -7 for distance too.
Twinkle got up. The specs fell down. But they didnt break. Yuvi got angry.
Twinkle: i am sorry….
The kid from episode 8 came with cycle n crushed the specs.
Kid: all is forgiven! Revenge taken!
Yuvi chased him. But he hit a wall. The kid managed to go away.
Yuvi: now what will i do?
Twinkle: dont worry when i, ur gf, is here. I will take u home safely.
Yuvi: i am worried cause u r here.

At the road crossing
Twiraj stood there for signal to become red so that they can cross road when all the vehicles stop.
Twinkle: feeling better.
Yuvi: the traffic signal looks like fireworks!
The sognal turned red. Cars stopped. Twiraj crossed road.

At a street
It started drizzling.
Yuvi: y do i suddenly feel cold….
Twinkle: its drizzling!
Yuvi: oh!
It started raining heavily now.
Twinkle held yuvi’s hand.
Yuvi: but….
Twinkle: trust on me too.
Yuvi felt happy.
They reached a shop shade n stood there until the rain went off.

Near neighbourhood
Twiraj reached luthra gate.
Twinkle: anita aunty is sitting there at the garden. Call her here n take her help. Bye!
Twinkle turned to walk. Yuvi pulled her to a wall.
Yuvi: its a wall right?
Twinkle: yep…
Yuvi kissed her on her lips.
Yuvi: ur bonus!
Twinkle was so happy that she jumped up n down. She hugged him tightly.
Tjey waved each other n went in their respective homes.

At a secluded area
The man showed pics of twiraj to the person. The person took pics n gave a bag of money.
Voice: give me more pics by tmrw.
Man: ok mam!
He goes away.

How was it? Plz plz plz plz plz comment. I love replying to ur comments. One comment from silent readers. Please i love to read ur comments.
N about the announcement. I am planning new dp for my ff from epi 20. If u want u can suggest to keep same dp or change dp n give me suggestions for it too.
Bye. N plz plz comment.

Credit to: risa

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  1. Really fab

    1. Thanks xyz.

  2. Meeta

    Nice one
    Update soon

    1. Thanks a lot meeta. Good ur eager.

  3. Rashiverma2199

    Risa it was fab….

    1. Thanks rashi.

  4. Risa, it was not good….. IT WAS MIND BLOWING!!??????

    1. Thanks infinity. 🙂

  5. yuvi /zain ki fan

    nyc 1..bt risa i thnk uv shud behav more lovable towards twinkle ..i mean he shudnt get angry towards hr ..sorry if i hav said anything wrong ..bt btw ua ff is v nyc …

    1. Yuvi was angry with twinkle cause she put his specs down. Its natural for him to get angry. Sry if u didnt like it. 🙁 btw thanks for comment.

  6. Don’t feel bad if some don’t appreciate risa happens all along. ???. Cheer up.?

    1. Thanks again infinity

      1. Typo thanks again risa.

    2. ??????? I didnt get u ??????

  7. Woowwww…..Risa it’s the first time I’m becoming crazy for a a Twiraj ff ….seriously I use to wait to read it….
    Thank u so much for making me feel special as u mentioned my ff in urs …love u ….muahhh….I’m gald to have a frnd like u nd let me tell u in my ff also u will find UV playing a very positive character as I don’t care about UV of tei but I love Zain Imam a lot ; he is a very good human being by heart nd just for the role he portrays in serial can’t take away my respect for him..

    1. Thanks sayeeda. Ur ff is cool! N i love n respect zain a lot too so i love yuvle no matter what kind of person yuvi is.

  8. Amazing!!! I have made some edits on them how can I send u? Pls reply

    1. Umm…. thats a question too. How can i recieve ur edits….. or i will upload some edits next epi. U guys can choose.

      1. Are u on Facebook messenger??ill send u on hat if u don’t mind

    2. Could u upload on fb n use link. I can tap link n check out pic.

  9. Amazing!!! I have made some edits but how should I send u???

    1. Reply is above.

  10. Superb episode :333

    1. Thanks manny.

  11. Hey.. Sayeeda can you tell me ur ff name?
    Btw it fab episode risa..love u nd ur ff…waiting for next..

    1. Thanks ayesha. Sayeeda’s ff name is ” i cant stop loving u” twinj love. 🙂

  12. Loved it….nd I am a silent reader

    1. Thanks cutie pie . Wish to see more of ur comments.

  13. yashasvi ( yashu )

    li luved it and thxx fr reading mine i vll post soon

    1. Thanks yashu. Post soon.

  14. Now got the time to read it. Wow it was awesome. Finally they both are together.

  15. awesome wonder who the person is

  16. is sayeeda ff is on twiraj???if s i vl surely read it..

  17. btw ua ff izzzzzzzzzzzzz …….just wow …love yuvle ..specially zainuuuuuuuuu …yaa can any1 say me how can be some1 soooooooo cute lyk zain imam..

  18. Risa

    Thanks sana, sam n sparkle.

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