u all made us like this (swasan ff) by rabia (Part-5)

read this if u have time ๐Ÿ˜‰

Guys I just want to say or u can say im going to do a request from u allโ€ฆ. I know few time I said that I need a break or about my job etcโ€ฆ. but now this time guys I seriously want to gooโ€ฆ sometimes it happens that u got such chance which will become the sole reason for your lifeโ€™s imp phaseโ€ฆ something also happens with meโ€ฆ this is my last week with u allโ€ฆ I will be come back in feb or march.. because this time these all months till feb or march may be I canโ€™t even be able to open telly update because this is very imp for me or u can see my lifeโ€™s imp phase is depend on itโ€ฆ soo I seriously need your prayers plzz guys pray for mee that I will be successful because this is very imp for my lifeโ€ฆ I need to win this challenge and if I become successful in this challenge I will surely tell u all about my story..

but guys plz plzzz pray for mee I never said anybody whole heartedly or truly for prayers but this time please at least one time pray for me by heart that I will be able to achieve the goalโ€ฆ im not telling u the exact thing because before fulfilling I never told or disclosed to anybody but I promise when I will comeback I will tell u all firstly about the whole thingโ€ฆ.

Soo in this week I will wrap my FFโ€ฆ and also TSโ€ฆ I will definitely gonโ€™na miss u all.. and if any of u want to say any hi,hello to mee u can say your wishes to shan and rosey ( I hope shan and rosey u donโ€™t mind about to become a messenger for me ๐Ÿ˜‰ ) I will answered u back by both of them and if any of u want to talk with me directly then I will give u my fb id or contact num in private msg if any of u wantโ€ฆ or else I will definitely snd my wishes to shan and rosey for u all.. im literary crying after writing this because u all are very dear to mee really just like a second family ๐Ÿ™‚ .. but this challenge is also very very imp for meโ€ฆ I seriously want to win thisโ€ฆ plz pray if u have time at least one time thankuu all and luv u all ๏Š

Part 4
Part-5

Two yrs have been passed to adiโ€™s deathโ€ฆ lucky and shekhar created his death as an car accident and put the someone else dead bodyโ€ฆ

Niharika never shows that she knows everything about themโ€ฆ

Actually adi and niharika both works in the special squadโ€ฆ nil is also an officer not a journalistโ€ฆ. Both know and loves each other very well and also done marriage secretlyโ€ฆโ€ฆ but they never showed this at homeโ€ฆ

Because they wants to give them punishment on their this actโ€ฆ but adi diedโ€ฆ nilโ€ฆ is completely broken because nobody is there in the home for her supportโ€ฆ

She knows about luckyโ€™s and her fatherโ€™s characterโ€ฆ.

But little did she know that there is one more reality is hidden from herโ€ฆ which will totally break her downโ€ฆ

Raglak marriages have been fixedโ€ฆ ni is participating in all the function with fake smileโ€ฆ

One day she got up and found some marks on her body.. but she donโ€™t know about themโ€ฆ soo she ignored them as an allergyโ€ฆ

Today is raglak marriageโ€ฆ both are taking pherasโ€ฆ on the completion of final pheraโ€ฆ

Lucky take out the gun and points it towards ni..

Ni become shocked on seeing thisโ€ฆ and saw towards her family

All are smirking evillyโ€ฆ

Ni : what is this jiju??

Lucky : awwwww donโ€™t show us that u r very innocentโ€ฆ. We know everything

Ni : what do u mean??

Ragini : my dear sister we know that u and adi are in special squad.. but we killed adii..

Ni acts : whatttt?? U killed adi???

Lucky : yes with my this handsโ€ฆ

Shekhar : and we know from last 2 yrs u r collecting proofs against usโ€ฆ.

Sumi : now its time to meet your adi dearโ€ฆ

Ni : how can u doo this all?? Donโ€™t u all feel any shame??

Lucky : oo dear shame is not in our blood even I also didnโ€™t feel any shame when I tasted u and winksโ€ฆ

Ni become numb on hearing thiss

Lucky : last week didnโ€™t u find any marks on your hot body??

Ni remember about the marksss tears start flowing from her eyesโ€ฆ

lucky : actually i mix sleeping pills in your water and when u fall asleep i came to your room and spend the night with u laughs shamelessly (guys don’t feel bad much something else in that night is also remaining )

Ni with choked voice: how could u doo this im your wifeโ€™s sister..

Ragini : aaa.aaannn u r not my sisterโ€ฆ

Ni : what do u mean??

Sumi : u r shekharโ€™s frnd daughter that time we are very poorโ€ฆ soo we make a plan and killed your real parents but we canโ€™t kill u because property was in your name.. so we have to wait for u till u turn 24โ€ฆ soo now today u turned 24 sooo now its your time to meet your parents..

Ni breakdown completely on listening the bitter truth of her lifeโ€ฆ.

Shekhar : now enough of this crying sign these papers..

Ni wipes her tears and said neverโ€ฆ. By saying this she runs outsideโ€ฆ.

Lucky : grab herโ€ฆ

Ni is running on the highway she is trying to call someoneโ€ฆ

Other side someone picks up the call..

Ni while crying please savee meeeโ€ฆ by saying this her cell phone fall downโ€ฆ

Raglak,shemish and their man were chasing herโ€ฆ nil reached at the cliffโ€ฆ

All also reached thereโ€ฆ.

Shekhar : sign these or else ready to die..

Ni : neverrrrr Iโ€™ll never sign theseโ€ฆ..

Sumi and ragini grabs her by her hairsโ€ฆ

Ni : aaahhhh

Ragini : signnnn quietly

Ni shouts : neverrrrrโ€ฆโ€ฆ

Sumi stab the knife on her stomachhhโ€ฆ

Ni : aaahhhhhโ€ฆ aadddiiiiiiiiii

Sumi stabs her againโ€ฆ

Ragini pushed her from the cliff but she is grabbing her hand..

Ragini : last chance sign the papers otherwise I will remove hand..

Ni with great difficulty : I prefer to dieโ€ฆ and one more thing your end will come one day just wait and watchโ€ฆ and my ad is also alive by saying this ni removes her hand and fall down from the cliff..

All become shocked on listening this that adi is aliveโ€ฆ

Lucky: how is this possible

Shekhar : may she wants to scares usโ€ฆ.

Sumi : letโ€™s goo my hands become dirtyโ€ฆ.

All goes like nothing happened while down at the cliffโ€ฆโ€ฆ

Niharika(ni) is in someoneโ€™s lapโ€ฆ. She smiles painfully after seeing the person and closes her eyesโ€ฆ.

To be continuedโ€ฆ..

Precap : relation of swasan with adi and niharikaโ€ฆ.

guys in available in this whole week and ya i will complete this story within this week and will definitely give u a new ff with new story when i will be back ๐Ÿ™‚

68 comments

  1. Bresh

    Nice….awww gonna miss u…I know I haven’t commented on ur ffs but I defently read them all…am abit lazy in commenting..and.I hope ur wishes comes true nd u achieve the success u want..๐Ÿ˜˜ Will always pray for u…stay blessedโค๏ธ

    • Rabia

      |Author

      Thankuuuu soooooo much dearrr that u commented and dont worry i will wrap uo my remaining work before going ts will be tonight or tomorrow for suree and once again thankuu sooo much ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

  2. Rosey

    |Registered Member

    Wow such an emotional episode and I really liked it
    Any about your leaving I’m sad but glad also that in th of I get a chance I will talk to you and I’m happy that u oh consider me such a special person thank u so much this friendship Rabi ๐Ÿ˜‰โ˜บ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’—๐ŸŒธ

    • Rabia

      |Author

      Hehehehehe yeess roseyyy u r myy frndd only at the distance of merely 1 or 2 hrs ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† and i will not leave u soo easilyy and after coming back im surwly the first one to comment on your storiessss and thankuuuu soooo muchhhh and InshaAllah i will ๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

  3. SHAN

    |Registered Member

    Awesome di….. I dont mimd becoming ur messenger di…. ๐Ÿ˜œAll the best for what u r going di…..

    • Rabia

      |Author

      Thankuuuu sooo much shaann and i u will mind thn alsoo i will make u my messenger ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™

  4. Rosey

    |Registered Member

    And all the very best for your career I’m glad that you have got a good opportunity I hope you will her success and happiness in your life (Ameen)
    Always stay blessed and once again All THE VERY BEST FOR YOUR CAREER

  5. Balaji

    |Registered Member

    i love all ur stories even though i didnt comment. all the best fr ur future and u will definetely achieve ur goal.

  6. Simin

    |Registered Member

    Awesome di
    I will miss u
    Actually maybe i also wont be able to read ffs anymore coz from 2nd my college will start and i dont kbow whether i will get any chance to read

      • Simin

        |Registered Member

        Thank u di
        All the very best to u too
        Inshallah app jo chahte ho wo aapko zaroor milega
        Just one query kya aap out of country jaa rahe ho?
        Di wo arrogant man wala plz jaldi post kardo i am dyeing to see swara’s cute antics

      • Rabia

        |Author

        Thankuu sooo much simin andd no no im here onlyy im not going any where but u can say very tough timee is going to come but ya i will tell the wholeeeee story after coming ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š and ya dear i will upload it tonight dontt worry and InshaAllah ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

  7. Aliya123

    |Registered Member

    api…….i will miss u (crying) bt if it is fr life so u can take a leave because nthing is imp. than a life ……..if u get a oppur. to do something in ur life so go fr it……..
    enough of matured mode nw angry mode …..hw dare u call us LIKE A SECOND FAMILY we are ur family understand …,. dont dare to call us like a family again nahi toh mein aapse naraz ho jaungi or kabhi baat nahi karungi

    childish mode- i m also a member of ur family right

    hold a sec…………….no need to tell us nw t
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  8. Aliya123

    |Registered Member

    no need to tell us nw tell us when u get success with a treat so do extra hardwork dont take stress nd te ready fr my treat bcoz i knw u will get success one more thing api i knw u dont believe par first line padhte hi samajh mein aa gaya tha u r tensoed nd disturbed so go nd eat a choco u will feel gud it works on me from a month i m eating regularly to reduce my worries this time my life is also become complex ek tarah kuanh hai toh dusri taraf khai bt u knw just trust urself nd everything will be fine..
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    • Rabia

      |Author

      Awwwww thankuuuu soooooo much aliyaaa andd sooooo sorrryyyyy u r my familyy my chotuuu sisss ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ and im not depressed im just nervous i want to achieve this goal by hook or by crook i never said for prayers but this time i really need them and after 4 months i will surwly give u all a bigggggggg treatt but u can snd me wishes through shan and rosey ๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™ i will also snd donttt worryyy andd post your epis this week more and also save your linkss i will definitely read them after coming ๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™

  9. xavia

    Superb dear …feeling bad for adi n niharika ……All d best dear……dun wry. Aฤบlah vl definately help…….inshaAllah……n vl miss uh dear…cm back wid a bang……๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Rabia

      |Author

      Thankuuu sooo much dearr and i will surely come this is my last week because if i want to be here thn also i cant soo thats why i said it becauae it is nearly impossible to be here for 4 months ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

  10. Kakali

    |Registered Member

    What is this Rabia Diii ?? what u have written? haaaa !!!! i might be fun loving but i can’t handle all this.. m not that emotionally strong to bear ur talks.. okkk !!!! huhhhh!!!
    Will miss u,,, ummm !!! i’ll also going to leave this site within 15 days may be .. after completing my SS..hmmm!!! i have my operation naa!!!

    my prayers n good wishes r always with u.. Love u.. i just wish u achieve ur goal n back with a bang..God bless u… ;-* ..

    • Rabia

      |Author

      Hehehehe kakalii im also not a very emotional likee who can write these type of thingss but this times im very scared and nervous but i have no other choice thats why i wrote soo may be in this way my confidence can boost up to somehow ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

  11. Kakali

    |Registered Member

    Sorry Dii it’s not operation… it’s my exams.. woo galati se mistake hoo gayiii…
    huhhh !!! i was habitual of u n ur talks.. now whatttttt ??

    • Rabia

      |Author

      Hehehehehe i got your point of operation ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† and snd your msgs to shan or rosey ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ or u can contact me directly i mentioned abovee my jalebii queen ๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™

  12. Hemanshi

    |Registered Member

    All the best for ur future….I am not forcing u as I know it’s necessary for u to go…..all the very best…….hope for the good and return soon…..will be waiting for u ….๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Rabia

      |Author

      Thankuuu sooo much hemanshii i dont want to goo but sometimes u have to kill your heart for gaining something for the whole lifee thats why and i will be back within 4 months ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

  13. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Di,I don’t know what is the challenge but I will definitely pray to Allah that you get succesed in it…..Trust yourself and do it…I am gonna miss you badly…Agar koi msg karna ho apko then mein definitely Shan di ko kahungiโ˜บโ˜บ…

    About chappy, what to say about those monsters๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก..Nothing…keep it up di.. Waiting for nxt..
    Take care
    Keep smiling๐Ÿ˜Š
    Stay blessed and back with a bang..All the best for your challenge..Love you๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Rabia

      |Author

      Thankuuu soooo muchh umaa luv u too dearr and my challenge will be disclosed after my arrival ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ thankuu sooo muchh and i will surely wait for your msg ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜ and InshaAllah i will ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

  14. Dharshini

    |Registered Member

    Awesome chappy dear..
    All the very best for ur goal…Will definitely pray for u…
    Take care dear…Will be awaiting for ur return…
    Miss u….

  15. Kakali

    |Registered Member

    Rabia diii,,, u r present till Sunday naa? i mean u’ll read FFs this days naaaaaa!!!!!! ยฟยฟยฟยฟโ˜†โ˜†โ˜†โ˜†ยค

  16. Nagamanasa

    |Registered Member

    Di u r leaving us within 1 week oh my God I can’t bear such shocks di but it’s ok ntng is imp than life I totally understand u di…i will seriously pray that u achieve success in ur life and don’t be nervous di u r surely gng to succeed…

    Coming to the part Its really nice di with full of suspense asusual…update next part soon di…

    If possible msg me ur fb id di…gonna miss u di…love u๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Rabia

      |Author

      Thankuuu soooo much dearrr and luv u toooo and i will msg u my idd dont worrt ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ and once again thankuu soo much and this week i will post my remaining work also ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜

  17. Rabia0032

    |Registered Member

    Oh my god rabia yeh kyaaa tha rula diya๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ขmujhe….I will kill laksh how cheap yaar disgusting and ragini omg cant belive eweeeh…
    But truly yaar you Made me emotional when I read your ts I was loughing and smiling but reading I am crying ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข

  18. Vyshu10

    |Registered Member

    Awesome…u made me emotional both with d ep and ur talk…..Whatever it is about…wish u good luck….Can u give me ur fb id….i might want to say hi or something in between so that i won’t miss u much

    • Rabia

      |Author

      Hahahahhaa vyshuu dont yarr here im becoming emotional due to stress and tnsn un every 1 hrr soo dont u dare to make me cry again ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† and here is my fb id
      Rabia.m.sayyed or rabia sayyed same tu dp ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š i will love to say hi hello to u ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

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  20. Mahjabeen

    |Registered Member

    Inshaallah dear u will b success…will definately pray fr u nd will always remeber u in my prayers๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š all da best..b sucess nd win da challenge…but i will surely miss u soo mch nd ur ff too….u made me emotional by ur tlks
    Nw cmng to chappy it ws amazing…nd how cheap ragalak nd shemish r…thy r disgusting…waitng fr nxt
    Stay blessed
    B happy always
    Take cr
    Love u๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Rabia

      |Author

      Thankuuuu soooo muchhh dear and i will alsoo miss my this familyy soooo muchhh ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ and already posted dear the next epi ๐Ÿ˜Š

  21. Mirna

    |Registered Member

    Hey rabsssss all the best for ur new phase of life. Will miss u for sure arrey yar you are making me too emotional. ๐Ÿ™‚ now i hav to read ur kitten again ๐Ÿ™‚

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