TWO BODIES ONE SOUL OS! (Shraman)

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Hi everyone, I am new on edkv page! This is the first time I am writing an OS on Shraman. Actually I have recently started watching it and I liked its story so thought to write an OS. I hope you all will like it! And I don’t know much about the other supporting characters so will add some.
Shr and Sumo are best friends since childhood, they both love each other but have never confessed it. Both the families understand that but they don’t. shr thinks that sumo doesn’t love him and vice versa. Today is Sumo’s marriage with Aditya.

In the morning,
All the preparations are going on full swing. But neither sumo nor shr is happy.
Sumo: shr, are you happy? Today its my marriage with aditya.
Those words pierced Shr’s heart. He was left just as a body without any soul.
Shr: yes I know its your marriage. I am your best friend why will I be sad? I am very happy!
These words pierced Sumo’s heart. She didn’t want to marry anyone except Shr but her fate!
Preeti who heard all this was also sad, she takes Sumo aside.
Preeti: Di go and tell him that you love him!

Sumo: why are you telling me like this? You know na today is my marriage!
Preeti: yes I know, but if you marry you and Aditya both will be unhappy.
Sumo:…
Preeti: go and tell him that you love him yaar.
Sumo: but he doesn’t love me!
Preeti: he also loves you, I have seen in his eyes!
Sumo: just now he told me that he is happy with my marriage!
Preeti: that was just for formality di! Please understand.

A voice is heard Sumo…
Sumo: I will be back, mom is calling me.
Preeti sees Shr sitting sadly in one corner. She goes to him,
Preeti offers him a drink,
Shr: I am not in a mood to drink it.
Preeti very well understands that why he is not in a mood! But she couldn’t do anything, she was helpless. She goes from there.
Varun(Shr’s friend) : Shr go and tell her that you love her.
Shr: its of no use she doesn’t love me and today is her marriage!
Varun: she loves you yaar, I have seen in her eyes. Go and tell her..
Shr:… No, she doesn’t love me otherwise she would not have agreed for this marriage.

In the evening,
Sumo is looking gorgeous in baby pink lehenga for her wedding. Preeti is standing beside her
Preeti: apko kisi ki nazar na lage di!
Sumo smiles a bit.
Varun comes and shows a signal to Preeti. She understands it
Preeti: I will be back di!
Shr enters Sumo’s room and is mesmerised by her beauty. Sumo sees Shr and has tears in her eyes. He locks the door and moves towards her.Sumo is confused and she moves behind, he pins her to the wall.

Sumo: Shr… Shr keeps his finger on her lips,
Shr: Only I will say today and you will listen. From the childhood we are friends, we shared everything our happy times, sorrows, we were each others support. We were like two beings but one soul. But when you agreed for this marriage I thought that our souls were separated. I was left with only my body.. you had taken away my soul with you. But I cant bear it anymore
I LOVE YOU SUMO! And I know you also love me!
Sumo is overjoyed, tears fall from her eyes.. She hugs Shr with happiness.. shr hugs her back.
Sumo: no..no.. she breaks the hug, I am going to marry Aditya.. I cant be yours.. she runs away from there. Shr is heartbroken.
Preeti and Varun come there and ask what happened? Shr tells them that they can never be united, Sumo wants to marry Aditya..

A flashback is shown,
When Varun and Shr were talking, Preeti hears their conversation,
Preeti: Shr you are wrong, di loves you a lot but she thinks that you don’t love him that’s why she agreed for this marriage!
Shr: what?
Varun: see I had told you that sumo loves you.
They make a plan to let Shr talk with Sumo before marriage.
Flashback ends…

Sumo is very upset, she is called down for marriage,
she enters the hall and was about to sit down for the rituals when Aditya stands up and says
I don’t want to marry you!
Everyone is shocked!
Sumo: Aditya what are you saying?
Aditya: I know you love Shr and he loves you too.. if I marry you we both will not be happy! You can marry Shr, I have no problem.
Sumo: how do you know this?

Aditya says he had heard Preeti, Shr and Varun’s plan in the morning.
Sumo is confused: what plan?
Preeti explains everything to everyone.
Aditya bring Shr and gives Sumo’s hand to him.
Aditya: Best of luck!
Sumo is very happy as well as Shr, they both hug each other tightly.. and Shr and Sumo are once again TWO BODIES ONE SOUL!
The end!

So that’s it, I think it was boring… but please do comment and tell me whether you liked it or not! 🙂

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33 Comments
  1. pretty preeti

    Maria it was too gud sweetu u write marvellous
    Nice title also
    It was too gud
    I
    We haven’t talk much right
    I m preeti class 9 student what bout u
    Hope we will become gud friends
    Love uuuu
    Keep writing

    1. Angel20

      Thank you so much
      I’m in 11th STD so you are like my small sissy!!
      Yeah of course we will be good friends!
      Love you too??

  2. Nikita

    Maria, firstly welcome to the TU EDKVied family..
    Secondly, this was very cute.. Lovedit
    Do write more OS and FFs
    -Nikita-

    1. Angel20

      Thank you for your sweet welcome!
      Thank you so much for liking it!
      Yes I will try to write but not now as my exams are starting from 16th after that I will write!
      Love you!

  3. It was sooooo guuuuud will u make me friend i am sonakshi of 9

    1. Angel20

      Yes of course dear!
      Thank you❤

  4. Maha_Aijaz

    Hey Maria.. well I haven’t watched this serial ever so don’t know anything about it.. I was getting bored so thought to search OS on search bar which is present on the top of the TU page than so many OS appeared I opened this one and read it because of its beautiful title and when I saw ur name I was amused.. very well written! Love it’s title too! Please write an OS on vidhani too <3
    Love u!

    1. Angel20

      Omg!!! I am soo happy that you read it and commented!!! Thank you so much appi!!
      Yes of course I’ll write an OS on our Vidhaani!! I’m thinking of a nice story for our Vidhaa! When I’ll get one I will surely write!!
      Love you too!!??

    2. Maha_Aijaz

      OMG u called me appi.. how sweet actually I love when someone call me di api aur baji.. Well really excited for ur story! Keep writing like this as we love ur work a lot!

      1. Angel20

        I called you appi before also but I guess you don’t remember! It’s OK hence forth I will call you appi only????
        Love you❤❤❤

    3. Maha_Aijaz

      Oh acha I didn’t notice! sorry.. my bad!
      Love u 2,3,4 and so on…

      1. Angel20

        It’s OK appi 😉

  5. Fatimagulesarfraz

    Hey Maria !!!
    First welcome to our chhottu c TU family ..
    Nd this OS was amazing ..
    Not at all boring
    Love it ..
    Take care ..

    1. Angel20

      Thank you for your sweet welcome!
      Thank you so much!!

  6. Maria it’s really nice.
    Write more ffs on the current track of edkv.
    All the best……

    1. Angel20

      Thank you Meera!
      Yeah I’ll write!

  7. Marie

    Hey maria API…….!!!!!!!!!! ????❤❤❤❤???????????????
    OMG OMG OMG wat an OS totally amazing !!! M so happy that u wrote it…???????????????
    Oyyy meri maria API ke OS ko boring mat bolne I loved it it was not a b or boring…!!! Cause ye meri maria API ne likha hai……!!!!!!!!!toh boring kaise ho sakta hai
    Welcome maria API as a professional writer…..!!????❤❤❤❤????????????????keep writing like dis always acha ach now request tym do write n OS or a ff ASAP 😉
    Ye bht zabardast tha…..!!!!!!!!!!
    Love u sooo much!!!
    Take care

    1. Angel20

      Hey darling!!??
      Thank you so so so so so much?????❤❤❤?❤❤??????
      Haha!! I’m not professional yaar???
      Yeah I’ll write but after 16th Sept as my exams are starting from 16th…
      Love you too jaan!!?????❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
      Take care!

  8. I maria I am smile
    I am also new to this family
    I welcome u
    Let’s be friend
    I know we ( edkv family)will enjoy a lot with u
    I will address u as di
    B’coz I am in 9 th class

    I hope u don’t have problem
    🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

    1. Angel20

      Awwwww you are smile keep smiling☺
      Yeah friends!!
      No dear why will I have a Problem?
      You are like my small sis!!
      Love you!!??❤❤

  9. Oops…
    Lagta hai..my hi sabsey oeechey reh gayi…
    Firstly…welcome maria…
    And till now..u have all our stupid Frinds..oresnt this page???
    Now..it’s my turn..I’m elder than everyone
    .graduate completed..h can also call me dhi as every one..
    Lovely..ff…do write like this…u can practice..here..to b a gud writer and develop ur skills…u can..show..urhidden talent to us…ok??????????

    1. Angel20

      Thank you for your warm welcome!
      Hi Di…
      Yaa of course I will write here!!

  10. Hey Maria howz u???
    The os was amazing I liked the reunion part Bt to be very clear I think u should added some dialouges in it and made it long sorry if u felt bad sorry
    All and all it was amazing I loved it
    And ya best of luck for ur exams
    And ya sorry for lateness
    I guess u will recognize me without login
    Take care
    Love u

    1. Angel20

      Hey ufaq! I’m good!
      Ya I’ll write a long one next time!
      No I didn’t feel bad 🙂
      Love you
      Eid Mubarak!

  11. Angel_pari

    Hey maria….
    Firstly sorry for late coz sona di is late than i,m toh super late 😀

    sorry..

    And welcome to our chotu si family…but i dont think i hv to introduce myself do i 😉

    ok now coming to os it was superb duperb loved it to the core….do come with more os

    lov u 🙂

    1. Angel20

      Haha?? it’s OK!
      Thank you so much..
      Love you too!!

  12. This was so cute. Really loved it. ?
    You wrote really amazingly. ?
    Take care ?

    P.S what’s your age? Where are you from?

    1. Angel20

      Thank you so much!!
      I’m 16, I’m from India!
      And you?

      1. I’m 17 and I’m from Pakistan 🙂

  13. Ariana

    Hi dear. 1st welcome to TU EDKV squad which is more like a family. We also have another Maria. Now u r the 2nd one so I guess I’ll call u Maro. Is that okay? Will u mind? btw wht’s ur age? I’m 14. So Am I ur di or r u mine?
    K now and the OS. It was sooooooooooo nice. Wonderful. The Shr confession part!! Uhhh too good. Make more shots.
    loads of love nd best wishes
    ltake care
    -ariana (aru)

    1. Angel20

      Hi Ariana!
      Yes you can call me maro!
      Love you too!!
      Yeah I’ll make more!

  14. hey Maria…m anjali …I was a silent reader but started commenting from past few days on some ff’s … ur os was so lovely…I loved it yar … kitni simplicity s u showed everything…awwww…it brought a smile on my face …love u dear …
    I didn’t feel like it was ur first os …it’s amazing
    ..write more :).
    now I’ll introduce myself…
    m anjali …I’ve completed my graduation this year…so I think m elder than u..u can call me di if u want…as some of tu friends call me who’re younger than me 😀
    I know few ppl who commented here…some of them call me anjo n some anju …so u can call me watevr u want 🙂
    take care…
    love
    anjali 🙂

    1. Angel20

      Awww thank you so much for commenting di!!
      Yes I’m younger… I’m in 11th now!
      Actually it’s not my first OS! I have written before but not on edkv!
      Love you!

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