a twist in the tale; swabhiman (chapter 17)

karan had brought naina in the house and naina slept until later that evening. when she woke up, she saw karan all dressed up ready to go somewhere.

naina: karan, are you going somewhere?

karan: you’re awake? i’ll call bhabhi.

naina didn’t know why karan didn’t reply but she brushed it off thinking it wasn’t anything specific. meghna came in and saw her little sister lying down in pain.

meghna: naina, are you okay? do you need something?

naina: my teeth hurt.

meghna: naina, i’ll get you your medicines okay?

before meghna could continue or get an answer from naina, naina saw karan coming back in to take something and as he headed out, naina asked him where he was going.

naina: karan, where are you going?

no reply.

meghna: karan, are you going somewhere?

karan: bhabhi, i’m just going to meet someone. i’ll be back in awhile.

meghna: okay. naina, i’ll bring some food for you and after that you can have your medicines.

naina nodded and when meghna left, she started thinking about how karan was ignoring her, she thought about his cold behaviour towards her and wondered what could’ve happened to get him to behave like this. naina remembered that all of naina’s cars had cameras to make sure that all the malhotra’s were safe while driving. naina checked the footage from earlier that day and saw everything she did and said. naina’s heart sunk.

naina: karan’s upset because i said all of that to him. oh god, i better talk to him.

meghna came in then with naina’s medicine.

meghna: naina, we haven’t spoken in sometime. i was thinking since everyone’s busy in their work i’ll talk to you today. how has everything been with karan?

naina: um, i mean i guess it’s been good. what about you and jeeju?

meghna: we don’t get time to talk naina. work has been so busy, we hardly see each other. either he comes back first and i’m late, or i come first and he’s late. whoever comes first sleeps first too so it’s been horrible.

naina: di, you guys should take a day or two off then?

meghna: we’re thinking of doing that next week.

naina: okay, that’s good.

naina got to thinking about how karan wasn’t talking to her now. she didn’t know what to tell him when he came back. was she supposed to even say something? but, when karan came back, naina got out of the bed to talk to him.

naina: karan, i’m really sorry.

karan: for what?

naina: for everything i said earlier in the car. i don’t know why or how i said those things and honestly, i can’t even remember half of it.

karan: how did you know?

naina: we keep cameras in the malhotra cars incase of any emergency or situation. i checked the footage when i realised you weren’t talking to me.

karan: listen naina, i told you this before and i’m telling you this again. i can never love you. we will never have a normal relationship and you know what, i think it’ll be better if you just left and went back to rohit.

naina: what?

karan: naina, i think you should leave. i’ll never make you happy. you should go back to rohit.

naina: is this what you want?

karan: yes, i want you to leave naina.

naina: okay, if it makes you happy then i’ll leave.

naina controlled herself and went to the cupboard. she took out all her things and put it in a suitcase, to karan’s surprise. before she left, naina stopped and told karan something.

naina: i didn’t leave earlier because i couldn’t leave without trying. i tried as much as i could, i’ve done everything. however, i did promise you that once you were fine, if you still wanted me to leave i would and so i am. i’m finally leaving. you win, karan.

naina took out her mangalsutra and put it on the table beside the sofa and left. karan stood still, not knowing how to react whereas naina ran to her car and left chauhan house, crying her hear out for once more, she was heartbroken.

thank you for reading! i’m really sorry this is quite short but this way i can divide the chapters up nicely and at least, i’ll be able to update regularly. hopefully, if i’m able to write it tonight, the next chapter should be up by tomorrow morning which was around the same time you read the last chapter. so, i hope you enjoyed and also, please comment and tell me what other stuff you want to read and tell me who you think sandhya really is and what her revenge is all about! i really want to hear your theories about the current track on the show right now.

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  1. OMG!?Naina left Karan! I have this feeling that Karan will realize Naina’s importance when she leaves or that when Naina goes back Rohit won’t love her anymore!? I think Sandhya was Nirmala’s surrogate or something and she helped deliver Kunal and that Nirmala promised Sandhya that she would get her rights or something in the Chauhan house or something and then Nirmala wasn’t able to fulfill the promise and then Sandhya had to sacrifice her love or something for the Chauhans and now she’s turned evil…I know it sounds really odd? Love your storyline?

    1. NainaSharma

      yes, naina finally left haha. honestly, i think that no matter what the situation, rohit will always love naina, he has this special place for her in his life. yess, i think so too! i was either thinking that or maybe nk is the person behind that curtain, who knows? and, thank you so much! ?

  2. Titli

    I cried reading this epi, i dont know why.. pls post soon.. i love it.. write more..

    1. NainaSharma

      omg i’m so sorry for making you cry but thank you! the next chapter is already up. ?

  3. Tamihna0808

    OMG! Naina left! I want her baaaack! I know you’ll deliver many great updates and I really can’t wait! ?❤ I don’t have a clue about Sandhya to be honest with you! She’s being so weird. I don’t think she’s any of the children mother but I just think she’s had bad intentions after Karans birth because maybe she was feeling neglected. I’m just waiting for them to unveil her truth soon. I’m also waiting for Meghna to find out about Karan, I think she’ll take it well. She’ll understand how string naina really is. I hope Karan and Meghna interact a bit more. This was a long comment! Continue the great work girl! ❤??

    1. NainaSharma

      what if she doesn’t come back? thank you so much!! i think she’s maybe kunal’s surrogate mom or something, because she keeps wanting to make kunal the better child. or maybe, she’s in love with nk, who knows. yess karan and meghna scenes would be so much fun! ❤

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