A TWIST IN TALE (Episode 1)

hi guys tis is nikita… I read more kkb ff nd hands off to naveena,sowmiya,tisha,surbhi… and all .u r the inspiration for me….
support me guys..
I hav combined kkb, punarvivah,matsh,tashan e ishq .. I tried if I get feedbacks I Wil continue….
it’s different story not tk from real one…..

dadi,dasi,Sarla ,badi dadi (rockstar dadi) from kkb as it is
abhi: rockstar as it is in kkb
pragya : lovely girl who cares for relation.nd th ( radio jogger )
yash nd aarti: abhi ‘s bhai nd bhabhi
payal nd ansh : kids of yash nd aarti
kunj ,purab : abhi’s friend
twinkle : pragya’sfriend
bulbul,purvi: pragya ‘s sister
ranveer nd ishani: pragya’s frnds
aliya : abhi’s sister
tanu : abhi’s girlfriend… as it as in kkb

the episode starts with one Friday morning in mumbai ,in mehra’s mansion. it was fully decorated with flowers nd all are busy in preparations. the old lady, dadi calls robin and ask if everything is ready. robin says yes dadi… nd leaves.
A young man comes nd gets blessings from dadi. dadi says arey yash beta kush ho…. she ask where is bahu.. yash searches and says dadi,here she is!! a lady in red Saree comes nd gets blessings from dadi. kush ho beta… dadi asked aarti is she ready?
aarti says I will see nd leaves.
dadi asked yash beta.. make him ready fast.. yash nods yes nd leaves.
dadi prays ohh God give us happiness.

in groom’s room…
yash comes and sees kunj and purab getting ready.. yash asked where is he? kunj says he went down Bhai. .. yash says r u mad? I am cmg from there..
purab asked matlab… he escaped … he went out .. ohh god, bhai… he says he don’t want to marry … now see..
yash says stop … and search for him.
tat time a tall man comes … kunj asked arey… thank God… abhi…. where were u? we r searching for u.
abhi says i want out to get fresh air. . yash says it’s k nd u both stop ur make ups nd make him ready ..I m leaving .the both says k bhai…

in bride’s room
when aarti went in the whole room was messed up. bulbul shouts noo… tis shade… aliya says nooo … this one… twinkle says arey this suits for her..
aarti asked what’s happening here? Prague are you ready. pragya turns and says ohh you came di…
please send these three out.. they are tensioning me.
aarti says go. ..you three.
twinkle, bulbul, aliya looks on nd went out…..

abhi and pragya sits in mandap. .. pandit hi asked abhi to put mangalsutra around pragya’s neck…. abhi looks on….

how is it … comment…

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  1. nice combination of characters and nice plot

  2. Nice yaar..keep it up…just one question…so now the dadi n badi dadi are two different person…arent they

  3. Nice story dude

  4. Wowwww awesome intro

  5. Pls update the next one soon coz I’m not able to wait

  6. Go on girl, full support from this sid3, waiting for ur next update…..

  7. nice dr….
    abhigya n twing my favourite..

  8. nice wedding in first episode

  9. Nice yaar u can continue but u said tanu is the girl friend of abhi but now abhi is marrying pragya is their any twist in it ok any ways clear all the doubts in next episode and all the best…?

  10. there is no importance for ishveer in ur ff but still u can continue because i like yasharati

  11. Hi Nikita really its nice one..good start keep going girl….:) and its different too frm other ff

  12. Its really nice

  13. yes harna dadi is abhi’s dadi and another one is pragya’s dadi

  14. Nice episode but one request
    Plz..give tanu and aliya positive characters bcoz..we r feed up of their negative characters in serial and if at all uv Is also there in ur ff then make his character positive plzz..a humble request from sanju

  15. nikita I am so happy for u ma . really waiting for ur next episode

  16. thanks guys for support. thanks sowmiya special…

  17. Different story i m waiting 4 d nxt epi……..

  18. nikita i am happy in first epi abhigya r getting married but wat about tanu ??

  19. Nice start nikita….eagerly waiting fir nxt epi

  20. Nikita go ahead as you are fully supported from my side.

  21. Intro..suprb..keep goinggg..

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