Twinj:Immortal struggling love Chapter 50 ( golden jublie)

Note: the story is followed by the Titanic story line bt nt exactly the same. Changes is made according to my fiction.
As everyone knws hw great this story is bt if i fail to reach ur expectations plz excuse me.
(I am nt going to drag it)

Chapter 50:

Kunj s pov:
We both ran upstairs but all the ways are blocked with water.
Some how with all efforts we came to upstairs where the ship officers were trying to send ppl safely in boats. The first priority was given to ladies n kids.
‘Twinkle, u go. I wil come,’ I said making her go into boat.
‘Kunj…how can I leave u,no…I can’t, ‘ twinkle replied being adamant.
‘Twinkle please go…I will be there, ‘ I try convincing her.
‘Mam…get in soon,’ the cop ordered her. I made her to sit in the boat and all the time we were lost in eo eyes, we had some talks which meant nly fr eyes.
I stepped back and tried to return coz I knw my twinkle won’t be able to leave me alone here. I moved away frm the place.
After few seconds I heard ppl shouting I turned to see the hustle bustle near boats I panicked and ran to the place to see twinkle jumped outside of the boat. She landed in one of the floors.
‘Oh ..god….’ I thought n ran downstairs.
*end of kunj s pov*

Twinkles pov:
I wasn’t able to leave him here, he went away frm the place so I just jumped away frm the boat. I ran upstairs to meet him.
But he noticed me i ran to him n hugged him.
‘What’s wrong with u ? Who the hell told u to jump?’ He asked me while hugging.
He was concerned about me.
‘My heart… heart said me to do,’ I replied him.
‘Kunj….if we can’t live together let’s die together….’ I said cutting him.
His eyes watered.
‘I love u,’ He said placing a peck on my lips.
‘I love u too,’ I said running my hands in his hairs.
‘We have to move out of here,’ He said n dragged me upstairs.
We were almost covered by water till our necks.
Many of the boats were filled with ppl and carried.
As the water entered into ship the weight increased and ship started drowning at one end.
Kunj held me n ran to the other end. He made me to stand on the pole holding it.
‘What ever may happen don’t leave the pole,’ He cautioned me.
We both were at one end. When the half of the ship sank and the other end broke, the unexpected one!!!
With a huge thud both the halves drowned into water.
Finally she (Titanic) sank!!!
As I fell into the cold icy water kunj held my hand n brought me up.
‘Come on swim’ He shouted.
No one had any idea what was going on thr. Bt all I wanted either to live with him or to die with him.
He caught hold of a wooden door and made me sit on it.
But he remained in water.
We held eo hands…
‘U will be fine,,,,’ He said shivering in the cold.
We just looked into each other eyes and remembered everything that happened and how our lives changed.
A small smile played on our lips.
We seemed happy for eo coz love is eternal but the fact of not living together for life pricked us.
*end of twinkles pov *

Me: with a prosperity of love they both closed thr eyes and freezes to death in the middle of the icy cold night.

Precap: LOVE and FATE talk.


Hope u ppl liked it…here is my 50th epi tq fr each n everyone fr ur love n support.
Do share ur views.
as promised I posted it today nly.
I replied to each n everyone’s cmnts

P.S: if possible give ideas like which story u want next.

Urs lovingly

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  1. Sohi

    Hey rosh lovely end yaar in real only hero died but u did justice to make both die
    I am happy ? with your this decision
    Well about next story
    Umm you remember when you ended previous story of Princess and soldier you asked about the u give option one of titanic and another of British girl and Indian boy at the time of independence. So now I want to read that story only of British girl and Indian boy. Please write this one or if you have any other ideas then your wish
    OK bye do continue

    1. Sohi

      One more thing congratulations for your silver jubilee and completion of 4 stories
      Plz post your another ff soon
      Do continue

    2. Roshini125

      Hey Sohi. ..Aww tq fr respecting my decision as u liked it i am happy too…
      According to ur wish the next story will be written…

  2. Hey rosh… Wooaaahh…
    A big Congratulations 4 ur Golden jubileeeee… May u reach ur 100 episode..
    And the epi is good.. Its very emotional.. Love it dear..
    But what we will give u any ideas. Ur an amazing writer so ur thought will out be the best of instead our stupid ideas.. So what u like u can choose it.. Now m excited 4 next janam.. Plz post soon..
    Stay happy always.. Love you..

    1. Roshini125

      Hey Priya. ..tq so much even I am planning fr 100 episode let’s see wt happens…. will be happy if u give ideas as I respect them too dear. ..tq love u

  3. SidMin23

    Congratulations for complete 50 episode n nice update

    1. Roshini125

      Thankq so much sidmin…will be back soon

  4. Congratulations for completing 50 episodes roshini I loved this episode very emotional and I’m damn excited for the next janam do continue soon

    1. Roshini125

      Tq so much sushmitha. …ur support always made me feel gud

  5. Presha

    Hey rosh ita amazing loved it

    1. Presha

      And congo for completing 50 epi nd I also liked the way u ended this janam eagerly waiting for next one
      Lots of love
      Keep smiling

      1. Roshini125

        Tq so much dear….presha…I went through ur os also…concentrate on studies dude….all the best n tq again

      2. Presha

        Ur wlcm and ya I have started my preparation for my exams

  6. Chiku

    Awwwww!! That sooo sweet?????lovely. Loved it. Its just fabulous.
    Congoooo for 50 episodes. Golden jublie. Wohoooo???????????????????i am sooo happy for uuuuuuu
    Any story will work for me
    Post soon
    Love u?

    1. Roshini125

      Hey tq so much chiku baby. … even fr chocolates n wine…also..

  7. Purnima.agrawal30

    congratulations for completing golden jubliee……n epi was amazing awesome

    1. Roshini125

      Tq so much dear…fr ur love n support till now…

  8. SidMinTwiNj

    Hey rosh
    Congo for golden jubilee?? amazing epi… Very excited for love and fate talks… About story for next janam I’m OK with any story…

    Love you❤

    1. Roshini125

      Tq sidmin Twinj..will be back soon

  9. RUTU.....

    Hey Roshani,
    Really an amazing episode dear & congratulations for golden jublie of your ff

    1. Roshini125

      Hey Rutu….tq fr ur love n support….I hv sent u private msgs also…keep in touch

  10. SidMin

    Awesome ?
    The episode was a perfect golden jubliee episode…. too good
    Each of your janam has made me fall in Love with this ff right from the first one where Twinj were Prince and princess then the mermaid one the soldier one and last but not the least the titanic one and the love and care talk I really love it ❤
    Loved it all
    You have come a long way hoping to see many more episodes ?
    Love you ??
    Post soon
    Congo on your golden jubliee ??

    1. Roshini125

      Hey sidmin….Happyto knw that u fall fr my love…tq so so much fr so long cmnt…it made my day…love u tooo

  11. SidVee_Yashvee

    Congo for silver jubilee.. and many more to come 🙂 the epi was awesome.. loved this titanic story as well.. excited for love n fate talk.. ❤

    1. Roshini125

      Tq so much dear….fr ur support

  12. Ramya

    Hey roshini
    First of all
    My heartly congratulations fr ur golden jublieee
    N u know yr I just love ur ff I’m falling fr it day by day frm where u write such superbly I just loved it n u know bcoz of u only I got to know about titanic story I don’t know dat was dis good n ha I know u said to see me dat movie but after reading dis I don’t think ita needed u nailed it
    N I loved it sooooo muuucchhhh
    N I don’t know which story u have in ur mind
    But have I’m waiting fr ualot so plsss post soon wid a New janam

    Loads of love keep smiling

    1. Roshini125

      Hey ramya..tq so so much fr such a long cmnt….it made my day. ..Happy that u loved it..glad u came to knw abt titanic heheheh. .love u too dear

  13. Baby

    ohhhhhhh god rockstar……….. 😀
    u did justice both died together well…………
    congratulations first of all……..♥♥for ur golden jublieee………
    woooaaaaahhhhh……………diii!!!!…………. 😀
    finally 50………………………
    loved the end and even d whole janam
    it was a blissful to read it
    i..i…just loved it to eternity……….
    a beautiful adorable love story………
    love u lods di……
    n dis was amazing tobe read….it was my pleasure n my luck dat i was able to read ur story….
    and would love to see more of it by you……..d next janam♥♥
    asap love u di….. 😀

    1. Roshini125

      Hey baby…..tq tq tq so much fr longgggggg cmnt…love u so much dear…ur words made me to fly like anything. …love u so so much

  14. Adya

    Hey rosh Di…
    Congooo my biggest congooo for your 50th episode. I hope you write 100 episodes.
    The episode was indeed an emotional one. You made my cry Di. The episode was amazingly written.
    It was blissful Di.. I love it.
    Hope you post soon..
    Love you!

    1. Roshini125

      Oh adya I missed u dear….thankq so much fr long cmnt…I loved it.
      Sry to make u cry dear….love u

  15. Aanya_pandey

    Hayee end of this life of twinj.. will b waiting for next

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