Twinj:Immortal struggling love (Chapter 38)

Note: the story is followed by the T itanic story line bt nt exactly the same. Changes is made according to my fiction.

I can’t write such a passionate one bt i am trying my best plz excuse me if I failed to reach ur expectations.

Chapter -38

Twinkles pov:
I made an excuse n came out of that party hall, I could nt controll my tears.
Why? My life is like this,everything is against my wish in my life, I can’t marry him, I even can’t tell this to mom. Even I can’t share my life with him, I knw what’s Naman is, he is a womaniser. I even knw why he is marrying me nly fr the sake of lust. Orelse who will come forward to clear all our debts without expecting anything frm us.

I had no one to share my feelings for all at once I decided to end my life. Yes.. why should I live? Why should I give myself to a bladdy womaniser. It’s better to die than to be a puppet of lust in his hands. No matter abt this now. Atleast I can die peacefully.

With a tears gushing out if my eyes I ran towards the end of the ship. I climbed on the railing of the ship and stood at the top with my eyes closed.
I prayed to god as I knew that wt I am doing is wrong bt i had no option left.
As I was abt to jump I heard someone. I turned to see a man tall n fair in complexion,with a white shirt n brown coat over it n a cowboy pant. He had a cigar in his hand .
*end of twinkles pov *

(It will be nice to listen in thirds persons view,so go thru dialogue pattern)
The guy is kunj nly.

Twinkle= stop, don’t cme towards me, orelse I will jump.
Kunj=miss. What ru upto over here?
T=it’s nun of ur business
K=ya….but do u think u can jump?
T=what stupid question?

Kunj started to remove his shoes n socks.
K= it’s not an easy thing
He moves little forward.
T= I said stop…
He stood the nly
K=do u think it’s so easy to jump frm here n die, no miss. Plz come back
T= who are u to tell that? Never mind plz leave.

Kunj moved further
K=I…. will just… throw..this
He moved towards the railing n threw the cigar.
It’s nt easy miss, as u knw how cold it is, if u drown u feel like 1000 knives stabbing into ur heart all at once (this is my favourite comparison which he gives..heheheh)

Kunj looked at her, he could sense a little fear in her face.
K=do u think u can do it?
Twinkle looked down n was tensed to see her death infront of her.
She slowly uttered.
K=give me ur hand, slowly…
Twinkle slowly gave her hand.
K=dnt get tensed , u wil be fine.

He held her one hand n she turned towards him. While she was climbing the railing her long frock struck to her shoes n she slipped.
She lost her grip, nly kunj was holding her.
She was tensed
She shouted
K=dnt get tensed, dnt leave my hand.
Twinkle nodded in fear,Kunj tried to pull her up.
Slowly he made her hold his one more hand n drags her so that she reaches the railing n he pulls her up. With the support of railing twinkle climbs up.

Kunj pulls her away frm the railing n she falls on him.
At that time all the security ppl with Naman arrives thr.

Twinkle wakes up.

Precap: as u knw; kunj will be blamed n Arrested. Twinkle saves him. They become frnds….etc etc

Hope u r liking it. My next exam is on Tuesday so I am hving time.
Do support frnds no cmnts at all very less unbareable.
Let me clear frnds i will be quitting frm April 2017. I can’t help it out.

Tq fr ppl who commented fr last one. I will reply each of u in next epi.

Urs lovingly


  1. SidVee

    Wow really loved this epi.. the way kunj saved twinkle😍😍😍.. do cont soon ❀❀

  2. Chiku


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    Wowwwww it’s awesome 😍😍😍😍😍lovely. Loved it
    Plzzz post next soon
    Love uβ€οΈπŸ’œπŸ’š

  3. Anayaali

    Awesome job roshini and u know i have not watched titanic movie so its all is suspence for me and sorry for not cmnting in previou epi

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    Hey rosh this is my first comment on ur ff…this episode is amazing…loved it…aur haan I haven’t watched Titanic movie so reading ur ff and imagining SidMin TwiNj is a bliss…dear post ur other ff I was I was full of tashan and u were full of love ff…plzz…

  5. Baby


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    ohhh god roshini di srsly dis episode was wow.
    u know wat i bought a book from libraray named titanic☻
    bt den wen i visted tu dat day i saw ur ff n u know wat it stated titanic i was on cloud 9 dat i didnt had to waste my tym reading whole book n was soooooooooo happy n dat was it u r eally making me lyk wooohhaaaa d stry is going perfect i dont know d stry naa soo srsly njoying uff loveing itβ™₯β™₯β™₯
    love u lods di thanks β™₯☻β™₯☻β™₯☻β™₯☻β™₯

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