Twinj:Immortal struggling love Chapter 14 (a mermaid story a new love starts) by ROSH

Hi frndss I am having the biggest doubt whether u ppl r liking my ff or nt coz I am getting nly 7-8 cmnts nly if u r nt liking plz tell I will stop it, I wont continue coz I am making sme time fr u ppl to put up my ideas if u didn’t get response means it hurts a lott so plz tell whether I have to continue or not.

In all my Os I will give one gud msg here also I am trying to give nice msg at last so plz do support me.

Enough of my bak bak na let’s get back into story…

With lots of doubts like she is a mermaid wt abt the kunj?hw they will meet?ohh. .god like u even I am also confused bt curious wait n watch…!! All ur doubts will be answered my lovely frndss stay tuned!!!

Chapter 14:
Place: deep Atlantic’s..

Twinkle whose half body is of fish n other half is girl,her long hair is flying in water n blue ornaments of sea shells matched her. Her tail was sparkling and she is seen busy playing with the fishes. She is completely surrounded by fishes nly.
NEMO fish comes n directs her to come with her.
(Coz I love nemo as I used watch it in my childhood)
Twinkle : nemo wr ru taking me? Is everything fine?
Nemo nods in yes.
(Though it’s a fiction story Its better if nemo won’t talks as it’s a fish naa)
Nemo just points in one way showing twinkle to follow her.
Twinkle followed the nemo.
Nemo took twinkle almost near the shore bt twinkle stopped.

Nemo saw that n returned to her n was signing her to come.
Twinkle:no nemo I can’t cross this water as per fathers conditions. He will say that humans are nt gud thy will harm us. I know u r taking me to shore bt i cant cross fathers rules.

Everytime nemo tried to bring twinkle to shore to make her sea the human world bt everytime nemo failed as twinkle was scared of her father as well as the cruel humans.
But
This time nemo was soo stubborn.
Twinkle:nemo y ru soo stubborn,plz come back naa…!!listen. Nemo I said noo….

Nemo without listening to twinkle started moving towards the shore. Twinkle initially denied bt when suddenly nemo got vanished in water twinkle was tensed n she went in search of her.

Twinkle was initially scared but she dnt want to see her frnd nemo in trouble so she went in search of nemo.

Twinkle s pov:
Ohh…god I have came too far from home but I can’t find nemo any wr. I wamt to take her back home orelse I knw she will be in trouble.
I am almost near to shore I must be carefull if anyone notices me then I wil be in trouble.

As I reached the shore I was amazed to see the humans…Oh my God they have legs…hw nicely they r walking. Hope I too was a human. These ppl r soo lucky.
Before I could think of anything I noticed nemo.
I dared to call him,immediately I swam as fast as I could possible to catch nemo.

Hufff finally I caught her. As soon as I caught her u shouted on her.
U idiot, do u knw wt happens if these ppl catch u…r u mad or wt, these days u r soo stubborn I will complain to dad about u…se coz of u I came far away. Come.

I could understand nemo s expressions,she knew that I wanted to see this world but due to my restrictions I couldn’t but some hw due to nemo I was able to see this world.
As I came to know she did it intentionally I just hugged her, she was happy.
She jumped from my hands n moved someway that means nw I have to follow her, she took me near to an island, as we were approaching near to island I could listen a sweet music.

As I looked up I was utter shocked n my jaws dropped, as i looked at nemo who was sooo eager to see my face.As i think so,she wanted to show this to me from many days.

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No Precap.

Hope it’s long enough!!!

Friends ss I am nt ready to continue as I am doubting whether u r liking it nt…do cmnt n share ur views I am writing these in nights aftr my studies without sleeping so dnt I deserve huge number of cmnts.

UR Roshini rockstar

14 comments

  1. Sameera

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    Amazing rosh loving it yaar
    Thought I was not getting time to read ff but I read it now n its just amazing yaar loved all the epi princess chapter amazing do cont soon 😘😘😘

  2. Purnima.agrawal30

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    awesome amazing fabulous cute epi….loved it….& don’t u dare to say that your ff is not good ….it’s amazing….love it……& don’t even think of ending it in middle….agr esa kra naa toh………..toh….katti….

  3. Sidhanshi

    Hey rosh u’r ff is amazing… I loved it… Plz don’t end it… Nd i really want to see kunj.. Is he a human or mermaid??? So plz post the next epi asap…

  4. sujina

    roshu dear…plz don say like tht…
    coz i was bg so i cudnt cmnt…plz cont as its story is extraordinary…as it is immortal so plz cont dear…love u

  5. Lovely

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    Hey Josh…this was really amazing.. Soooooo cute…I am loving it and even I love nemo…muah..
    Exams chal rahe hain tab bhi comment kiya so that you continue and know that we all love you
    😘😘😘😘

  6. Baby

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    roshini di plssshhhhhhh dont end it fr dis si of urs
    i m jst luving dis 2 d core oh god its to mch diff
    di i dont no bt u cant end i ll give d cmnts always i thnk i do so bty i dont no y ppl r nt cmnting
    i no dey all r hving exams dey ll cmnt aftr dat bt pls sdi dont end it i luv it 2 d core its so beautiful n diff
    n i thnk d sweet song is sung by kunj isnt it
    di post nxt asap cnt w8 oh god suspense hai merre liye di i luv ur work ur ritings ur hard work and you too soooo pls dont leave us dont leave atleast in dis suspensial world heheh………jyada hogya sry…………luv u di n post nnext asap……….

  7. SIDMIN-Daamini

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    Omg roshugulla ( hope u don’t mind me calling u like this )
    This was so awsome….I mean …..I was really amazed n amused by the this epi N u left it at suspense ………oh God can’t wait ….n sorry for being late as I was busy with my studies as tomwr is my exam n ur is third ff I’m readiing of day 😊😊……so now hope to see ur next epi posted by tomwr 😁😁😁😁😘😘😘😘😘…love u 😘😘

  8. SIDMIN-Daamini

    |Registered Member

    N dear Don’t stop ur ff ………..in fact all comments r going down in every ff coz of mains….I mean most r having their papers / exams n semester too ……..so Plzz don’t feel dejected………n sorry in advance as i wont be able to comment n stop writing my ff n quiting tu for a period of time …..I mean till my exams…..after that I will come back n if I get time so I will surely read it n in fact u can send me ur epi links on private message to me …….if I get time so I will surely read n comment too ……..love u N keep writing like this my sissy …..😍😘😘😘😘😘

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