Twinj:Immortal struggling love Chapter 13 (a mermaid story a new love starts) by ROSH

Note:guys i am nt hqppy with ur respomse fr my story r u ppl liking it or not, i wamt to know feel free to share ur views n cmnt plzzz even silent readers ur one minute of time fr cmnting will encourage me a lott so plz do comment.

Damini ur story is awesome I am waiting do continue dear…lovely make it too romantic plzzz fr me

Get ready fr one more new love story…..Happy reading♡♡♡

Chapter 13:

●Place:Atlantic oceans

Even I (rosh)also felt bad fr twinj tragic end of love so I was roaming alone in the Atlantic beaches as I noticed LOVE standing thr, hope she is waiting fr me, as she wanted to tell me othr story of twinj n narrate u ppl by me.

I went to her she said,

♡♡LOVE ♡♡:
A new morning for love, a pleasant sunrise as sun rays r kissing the blue water of ocean.
Clear blue sky is reflected by the water with waves running towards the shore.
HI frndss I am miss .LOVE. join me
Come lets move into water,I am able to feel the chill Ness of water ohh…my legs r chilling bt nice, ohh heart is beating yaar as water level is raising above me body level.

Come on dive, guys Wear ur oxygen masks as I am taking u into deep sea.

Saying this LOVE dived into water.
Come lets follow.

(I will narrate a story in direct way only)

A beautiful deep ocean,I believe of new world exist in deep sea. It was all dark at first bt it was beautiful, as a school of small fishes welcomed me with a warm love. Beautiful corals, sea weeds,
Porifera n all.
(Imagine scenes of zindagi na mileage dobara)

I was mesmerized seeing all that as I was lost thr, miss love came to me.

Love:hey cone we have to go still deeper
(She signed as we can’t hear anything in sea naa, only sign language)
Me:still deeper, is it safe?
Love:ya come i will show u twinkle.

She dragged me.
I was shocked to hear twinkle is in deep ocean I was amused.
With lots of curiosity I followed her.

As I was shocked to see a beautiful mermaid… they exist?? I was shocked.

A beautiful mermaid of half women n half fish with blue tail n long hair with a necklace n blue eyes was sitting, yess she was twinkle only.
(See dp of story)

Me: bt wt abt kunj??
Love:wait n watch dear

With lots of doubts like she is a mermaid wt abt the kunj hw they will meet ohh. .god like u even I am also confused bt curious wait n watch…!!


Next epi will be posted tonight
Hope u all like it plz share ur views…
Do cmnt it means a lott

Roshini rockstar


  1. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    Awesome. I am also sad about twinjs tragic end. 😞
    But ur ff is amazing rosh. I really like it. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
    Olz jaldi se oost karde.
    Srry mien comment nahi kar payi last tym. Bussy thien 😘❤️

  2. SIDMIN-Daamini

    |Registered Member

    Meri roshugulla!!😘😘 …….it was soo interesting………..really …from where u get such amazing ideas ….I really love the way in which u write ………n dear thank u so so much ……..really u made my day …I’m feeling so special n yaa surely too add the romantic scenes soon …if u really want so how can I deny n try my best to post it soon also …love u N post ur next one soon coz it’s gaining my curiosity…………😍😍😘😘😘

  3. Ramya

    Hey roshini it’s my first comment fr ur ff
    I really loved it to core so plss never dare to end it n I have a doubt wt happened to ku after twinkle death I want to know
    N ha this new story is slightly confusing bt I have by reading further my all confusion will go
    Ur ff is amazing

  4. Lovely

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    Rosh…too good …I completely agree and apologize for the fact I haven’t commented from long…actually I think you changed the title and I din knew about that..I din knew that Rosh is the same Roshini Rockstar…
    So sorry..
    But I read all the parts which I missed… And I really felt a bit bad for that tragic end
    ..I hope Love wins..

    And Twinkle and Kunj become Twinj in the last janam because ab bhi vo ek nahi honge naa…

    Loved it..muaaah..😘😘😘

  5. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Wow Loved it an unexpected twist and a very different story line please do continue soon 🙂 Post soon 🙂 can’t wait for Kunj’s entry 🙂

  6. Baby

    |Registered Member

    roshini di oh my god how do u get dese ideas i mean luvd it
    post nxt asap cnt w8 wowowowowoowowowowowo
    osm n if she is mermaid den wts kunj oh god uhhhn cnt w8
    luvd it di luv u post asap……………..

  7. Sana(sanu)

    Superb rosh….

    Eagerly waiting for nxt … Post soon as i cant wait anymore…..

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