Twinj: tonight u r mine! (Os)

Hey guys Anushka here… I know I told many of u that I will try to post the episode before Sunday, but couldn’t as I didn’t got time… I was busy doing my hhw… So sorry guys..
So I m here wid another one slot…
Fiona , I m so sorry dear I think I won’t be able to write ff on twinj but i’ll surely continue writing one slot on twinj.
Dear writers.. I know many of u have been broken after listening that sidhant sir is leaving the show.. I know.. Some of u have decided to stop writing there ffs as u will miss kunj.. But I request u not to leave Tu…
Sidhant sir is leaving the show as he got a better project I.e jhalak dikhlaja (still not confirmed)
He surely must have thought something then only he took such a big decision. Recently he posted that “physically at peace but mentally Not” which surely means that he is stressed, coz many of us are asking him to return which is troubling him. So sorry to say guys but we should not force him to change his decision.
Recently I conducted a poll on tweeter that will u continue watching Tashan e ishq even after Sidhant’s exit.. And result were No with 71℅.
I felt sad.. Coz there are many other actors who r working in Tashan e ishq.. If the Trp goes down then eventually the show would end.
Have u thought how would those actors feel? Bad na….
And the reason would be that Sidhant sir left so there show ended.
After listening to this won’t Jasmine maam and zain sir feel that they r less important for the show.
Okay now I think if I will start this topic then it would take very much time so we will continue it later..

U can read my other one slots…

http://www.tellyupdates.com/twinj-true-love-never-dies/

http://www.tellyupdates.com/twinj-power-true-love-one-slot/

http://www.tellyupdates.com/twinj-true-love-never-dies-2-part/

http://www.tellyupdates.com/twinj-true-love-never-dies-3-part/

http://www.tellyupdates.com/want-2-luv-life-not-waste-lyf-twinj/

Guys thanq so much for ur lovely comments, I still cannot believe that I got 100 comments in my last one slot… I literally blushed while reading ur comments.

Here it goes….
Twinkle is, literally, breathtaking, amazingly amazing and beautifully beautiful. Her beauty is in her black shining eyes. Her eyes are the doorway to heart. Her eyes reflect her unconditional love and faith for me. She looks like an angel. I feel blessed to be her husband and I feel blessed that it’s a snowfall outside.

 

My train was three hours late, so I reached Amritsar later in the evening.( from Delhi to Amritsar, guys idk whether snowfall is there in Punjab or not but still in my os it happens as it is a winter month) The journey was long and tiring which wore out all my energy. But a small look of her at the platform re-energized me. The platform was very crowded and everyone was in a rush like the world is gonna end. There were thousands of eyes, but I was looking for the best of them- Twinkle, my love.

As Facebook promises, ‘Facebook helps you connect with people in your life’, it really connected us and brought in each other’s life. (Yes u guessed it right their love story began with the help of Facebook)

Our love had started on Facebook and did love marriage. Today we r meeting after so long becoz I work in a IT company and had to live in Delhi as I m a head manager of the company. Earlier toh she was also living wid me but due to Mom’s health she had to return to Amritsar for taking responsibility of house hold.(uff bichaari ke pass kitna kaam hai, Kunj is the only child of my parents. So In Amritsar, twinkle lives wid my parents and guys no cherry, anand,Bebe and surjeet in this os)

It was very noisy around. Everyone was greeting one another and the small vendors were shouting like hell. Trains were whistling and coolies were crying for money. Everyone in the hundreds cared about themselves only, and so did I, i mean i too started walking towrds my wifey. We approached to each other. I was planning to return to Amritser for over two months but had to cancel it due to back to back meetings. Finally I saw here completely. ( guys don’t think it in a wrong way… I mean now he carefully looked at her dress)

She was wearing a black jeans and a black-and-white pullover, complemented by a white scarf. She had applied a thin eye-liner and her cheeks looked rosy pink. Her eye-lashes were big and were kissing her upper part of cheeks.

She smiled at me and shook her hand with my hand and two gloves. “Feeling cold?”, she asked me on seeing the two gloves.

“Just a lil bit”. I was too shy to talk to her.

“Huh! You are shivering; but don’t worry you will adapt to the winter in few minutes”

“Yeah I will”, I said and cursed the temperature.

“Anyways, I’ve booked a room for us in Hotel Novotel (imaginary one) Its just a walk away”.

“So, you’ll coming with me?”, I asked in surprise and simultaneously cursed myself for asking such a dumb question as she said “us”.

“So, you don’t want me to come with you?”, ” so whom have u come to meet” she asked and punched my stomach in a funny way.

I must say she was strong. Her funny punch was a hard one but my two sweaters and a jacket saved me. I wrapped my hand around her and whispered in her ears, “I have come to meet my wifey”.

She smiled at me. I smiled and whispered again, “I love you Siyaapa Queen”.

“My name is Mrs. Twinkle Sarna, and not siyaapa queen. This is not funny, Mr. Sadu sarna, she corrected me and squeezed my nose.

“Huh! You have a habit of ruining my romantic mood. I call you Siyaapa queen, out of love but you just hate it”, And plz don’t call me that, I said and acted as if I was angered. I took my arms back and looked in other direction.

My trick really worked. She walked fastly to match my steps and held my palm. I smiled and felt special. The warm touch of her palm expressed her closeness to me. She came near to my ear and silently said ‘I love you too Kunj Sarna’.

We were approaching our way to the hotel, Hotel Novotel, but she stopped me in middle and took me to a coffee shop.

“So we will having coffee here?”, I asked.

“No. It’s grocery store. Don’t you see everyone bargaining with the sellers?”, and pointed a finger to everyone who were sitting on the red-round tables and sipping coffee??.
(Funny tune plays)
I felt stupid and decided to keep my mouth shut.  We went in and took the corner table.  We sat on the wooden chair, facing each other, but I avoided any direct eye-contact becoz I was feeling shy… Yes indeed I was…. Coz I was meeting her after 8months….. A quote on the adjacent wall read ‘Behind every loving couple, there are innumerable cups of coffee shared’. A waiter, wearing a red jacket, came and I placed my order of two cappuccinos.

I turned to her and stole a glance of Miss Pretty. She was smiling. Her smile was reflecting that she was very much happy and satisfied to finally meet me as we hadn’t seen eo from abt 8months. She was just looking at me. She had stayed at my place for abt 2weeks. And those days were so beautiful, i daily used to gets some kisses. But after she left, life became dull, we used to talk daily but that was not enough so I make a promise to myself that I will do work fast and go to meet her. And finally I m here.

I was equally happy to meet her and thought it’s more stupid to be quite at such a romantic place. So I broke the silence and asked, “But we could have had coffee in my room too.
T:-No”
K:-Y?
T:- becoz we r going to hotel not home. (Blushed)
K:- ohhh(naughtily) but still, we could have it there also.
T:- “But its costlier there”.

K:-“Ohoo my typical Indian wifey. Trying to save your hubby’s money?”, I asked mischievously and winked at her.

Her rosy pink cheeks blushed and she said.
T:- “No. Its not like that”

K:-“So, its like what?”, I asked and teased her in her tone only.

T:-“I thought you must be feeling cold, so this coffee will give you some warmth”, she gave the answer flat.

K:-“But there are several other methods to give me warmth too. Should we try that?”, I joked.

She narrowed her eyes and said, “ u won’t change”
K:- how can someone change when there is such a pretty women in front of him.

She blushed badly.
“What’s this, u r making me crazy.

Her pink rosy cheeks were magical like her. It stole away my nervousness and I became the Original Kunj Sarna the guy who never shied from anyone.

Had it not been a public place, I would surely have smooched her. We held hands and shared a romantic glance. I signalled her to let’s move out of the café and make love but she signalled back to have patience. We were not sharing any words but our eyes were talking. Our so-called ‘heart-to-heart’ was active.

Soon, we ended our coffee, paid the bills and moved out to reach the coffee shop. I was taking quick steps but she asked me to slow down.

We entered the room that she had booked for me and I was surprised.

As I unlocked the doors, a surprise welcomed me. I switched on the light and overlooked the whole room. She had decorated the whole white-room. The curtains were silk-red and the bed sheet was milky-white. A big rose-bouquet was kept beside the bed and a large hand-made card on the bed said, ‘I  LOVE YOU SADU SARNA’.

My mouth was wide-open as I dropped my heavy bag. “You like it?’, she asked me.

I didn’t say anything. The theme of white and red had conquered over me. I just gave her a tight hug, said, “Don’t you ever leave me Siyaapa queen. I’ll die without you my darling” and kissed her cheeks.

Her cheeks went red with blush. She closed her eyes and tightened her arms that were around me. I continued, “I always fear to loose you. I.. I.. I feel as if someday you’ll leave me and I won’t be able to stop you. I.. I… I feel as if I’ll loose you to someone else. This long-distance-relationship threatens me by all these thoughts. My life will be hollow Siyaapa queen, Promise me, you will never go”.

My eyes were red. I had tears of joy, accompanied by the fear of losing whatever I had in life – Twinkle.

Twinkle didn’t say anything and tried going off my hug. I asked her, “Hey what happened?”

She was in tears too. She sat on the bed and I sat on the floor with my head in her lap. Her fingers in my hairs and she said, “You hurt me Kunj. You hurt me everytime” She choked and continued, “I love you a lot, and then why the hell you think that I’ll leave you? You say it every time we talk and see u said the same thing again.

I turned my head up and was about to say something but she put her fingers on my lips. I kissed them lightly.

“No. Let me say… Why do you fear that I’ll go away with someone else? I’ll never. You are the most adorable person in my life. I have had some past with yuvraj but my present is you, Kunj”.

A tear fell on my chicks from her eyes. I hugged her waist and said, “I’m your present and ur future too darling don’t forget u have to eat this dal chawwal whole life, no keema, pulav, vada etc as u r married to me.

She brought her lips closer to mine and kissed me. Her eyes were closed but I was just looking at her. Her complexion was pearl-white, with a slight of red. Her lips were pink as a rose, and juicy as strawberry. Her earrings added to her beauty. She looked nothing less than a Disney princess like aurora, snow white, Cinderella and others. I felt blessed to have her and closed my eyes.

After the kiss, she asked me to have a bath. She said, “You stink. Go and have a bath. Kunj, have you even brushed your teeth?”

“I knew you couldn’t resist kissing me, so I had brushed twice in the train” I said and winked at her.

She blushed and I went in the bathroom saying, “It would have been nicer if you 2 take a bath with me” and she said badmash.

 
The bath was totally refreshing. The cramps gifted by the journey were gone; thanks to warm water and the cup of coffee. I made sure I come out of the bathroom in full clothes. Thought, we had just kissed but I made sure she didn’t face any embarrassment seeing me just in towel.

When I came back, I saw that she had switched off the lights and switched on the red night-bulbs. The lighting made the feel more romantic. I said whatever came in my mind, “Is this my honeymoon gift? She again blushed which drove me crazy.

She came close to me, smelt me and said erotically, “It’s a snowfall outside and I have informed mom that I’ll stay tonight at my friend’s residence and u plz don’t make me say lie to her next time. I hate lying to her. And today I just had to lie to her just becoz of ur surprise.

“okay i won’t but Tonight, you are mine …”, I whispered in her ears.

The warmth created by the heaters tempted me more. She laid on the bed and so did I. There was a soft and furry blanket too. My body was over hers. I kissed her forehead and then kissed behind her ears. She brought her hands under my T-shirt and clinched her nails on my back. We smooched.

I passed my hands gently over her spines. We kissed each other’s shoulders. I passed my hands round her navels and my hands went some above. The mood was all set just when I realized that she was a little bit uncomfortable. I stopped, kissed her forehead and said softly in her ears, “I have my whole life to make love to you. But now, I just want to hold you and feel you”.

“Thanks. You know me so well. You understand me”, she smiled and flashed her pearl-like beautiful teeth.

I smiled and kissed her closed eyes.

“Also, I want you to gain some strength. I don’t think that you can ‘satisfy’ me Kunj”, she said after a deep sigh and mocked at me.

I just gave her a slight slap on her lips, kissed her again and said, “Pahle istemaal karein, phir vishwaas karein”.

She hugged me and said, “I love you so so soooo much”.

Our legs were tangled to each other and the furry blanket was over us. It was perfect – perfect love.

Now, as I look at her, I feel complete. This is the world that I want to be in – forever
T:- U have the right on me, so u can do anything wid me, I would love it.
That was enough for me… I took that flurry blanket and put it on us. We took our marriage to the next level.

xxxx__END__xxxx
Thanq so much once again guys for showering ur love on me. I love u all so so so much. I know this is not that gud.
Guys do think abt watching tashan e ishq as I m gonna watch it becoz of other characters. I would even watch sidhant sir’s new project.
Sry for mistakes…..
Keep commenting?
Stay blessed?
Love u all?

Credit to: Anushka

119 comments

  1. Shatakshi

    Hey Anushka…I missed ur os a lot…but this was fantastic… U expressed each n every moment so perfectly… Loved it??

  2. abc

    Amazing…….. loved it…… i wont quit watching tashan -e- ishq while earlier i was thinking to do so.

    • Anushka

      Vidisha, I will surely write another one but can’t say when becoz it all depends on my mind. Well thanq so much for commenting

  3. mystery

    mindblowing dear
    i m sorry anu dear but i cant continue watching tei becoz i love kunj, the time i will watch it, i would be reminded of sid, so i wont watch it

  4. Shreya

    U know I rarely whatch jdlj but for sid sir I will definitely.. And will vote too bcoz if he will not win then it will really break my heart as he left tei 4 did….may he get the best he deserve….
    Well keep going with ur OSs …I love them all

  5. Olivia

    Hey Miss. Anushka, can I know ur age. Actually I wanted to know it… Just like that. Well please telle something about yourself. I m really impressed from you. Are u studying in a college. So what have you planned for your career, if you don’t mind I have advice for you, You can choose your future as a writer, you will gain a lot of success in it. Hey dear can you please write about yourself in your next one slot because today I have a lot of work so I won’t get time to check it.

    • Anushka

      Ohh Olivia dear I m 14, thanq so , I will surely write abt myself in my other one slot.

  6. dreamer

    Anu no words 2 describe dear….each emotion is described perfectly. I donno of I will watch tei or not but I will surely try too.the os was 2 good…luv u dear and ur writing.

    • Anushka

      Love u too dear. U left me speechless yr. All I can say is ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty sm

    • Anushka

      Thanq so much hima. Sure dear I will definitely come back wid one more one slot but don’t know when as it depends on mind

  7. twinjfan-(tamanna)

    I m srry anu i will quit watching tei…bcz it will remind me if kunj…n I also cant see twinkle with uv…srry if I hurt u n about ur os…l loved it…

  8. loveleen

    ohh anushka it ws fantabulous…u expressd d emotions so nycly….nyways aftr sid quits m nt gonna watch it….cz d stry wl go out of trck..if they had to make twiraj as couple den then they shudnt hav introduced kunj it cud hav gone smoothly n we wud hav liked it…bt aftr introducing kunj n making us twinj’s die hard fans hw cn they again thnk of chngng d hero….ths wl totally b a wrng trck…i cnt watch twinkle wid ny 1 else oder dan kunj….

  9. Kaavya

    Hey Anushka, when u told me that u write, I was like r u kidding me but when I read it I just could not believe my eyes. U r amazing Darling

  10. tara

    wowoooooooowwowowowo…lolzz idk wht i wrote…bt m simply out of words..anu u r fab…loved it…

  11. fiona

    is epi ne toh jaan he le li
    killer epi
    hey anushka u are good at describing things and used perfect word
    loved the epi

    and i was also thinking the samethat it sidhant sir’s life he can take his decision
    everybody wants to became more sucessful
    same pinch

    • Anushka

      Ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty ty so much Buddy. Yes I too think the same. Same pinch

  12. Romaisah

    Hey anushka it was amazing wats ur twitter name? Im also on Twitter 🙂 n yes i agree with every word u say i will still watch tei although it will feel a bit incomplete not seeing sidhant sir inside ?…

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