A Twinj Tale – Part 6…nacheez is back…

Helloooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo everyone…
See I m back….
I know I m late….OK OK very late…
But kya kru…pehle accident and then exams ..puri pagal ho gyi thi…
But now I m free…so thought to post my epi….see samay ka sadupyog koi mujhse seekhe…😁. 😁.
First of all…wishing all of u a belated merry Christmas…❀❀❀🎊🎊🎊🎊. πŸŽ‚. πŸŽ‚
May the spirit of the season bring you closer to those whom you cherish so much. May this be a year of celebrations for everyone …Merry ChristmasπŸŽ…πŸ»
So now epi time…
And thanks a lot to those who prayed fr me…
As well as those who commented on my ff..

Thanks a lot…from nacheez…😍 ❀❀❀
Recap:- twinkle wants riyaan to buy a short dress fr her…she goes to his house…and from there she goes on riyaan’s bike…And riyaan in twinkle’s car…
So epi starts here….
At the canada airport…
A boy who is wearing white shirt and blue jeans and black sun glasses comes out of the airport. All d girls in the airport are just looking at him.suddenly the guy winks at a girl and d girl smiles at him.(and he is our hero Kunj sarna.)
After him a beautiful girl comes out who is wearing a blue colour one piece ( which devika was wearing on her swayamwar in tei )she is jahanvi.
J:- bhai.when will u stop flirting.first u used to do it in india and now in canada too.
K:- wats wrong in flirting.it is the main reason behind d glow on my face.
J:- u and ur stupid logics.btw when will u stop flirting.
K:- when I will find my dream girl.
J:- ooo.dream girl haa (teasing) so tell me wat r d qualities dat u want in or dream girl.
K:- So u want to know d qualities I want in my dream girl has.
J:- yes,.
K:- so listen, I want a girl who is beautiful like sunio ,brave like doraemon,clever like nobita,her voice should be like giyan…πŸ˜‚
J:- bhai,so u really want a girl having these qualities.ok,so I will find a girl for u (teasing)
K:- no no I m just kidding.
Suddenly a car arrives in front of them..a man comes out of the driver seat and gives the keys to them…
K:- first sit in d car den I will tell u d qualities I want in my dream girl.
J:- okay.
(Kunj and jahanvi both sit in d car.Kunj starts driving.)

J:- now tell me which qualities u want in my future Bhabhi.
K:- OK.so listen.I want a girl who is a punjabi sherni. Is brave and never tolerates injustice.has innocence in her eyes,has a beautiful and big heart,will care for my family,and most important thing she should have lots of tashan and should also have d guts to fight wid me …u know na shaadi ka asli maza ladne mein hai…
J:- wow bhai wow u r amazing.mujhe nahi lagta Ki is janam mein aapko aapki dream girl milegi aur aapki shaadi hogi.
K:- milegi zaroor milegi.aakhir rab ne mere liye koi toh antique peice banaya hoga.
J:- OK.let’s see.
Kunj and jahanvi were so engrossed in their talks that they didn’t notice a signal and when they noticed it ,Kunj applied breaks wid such a force that it hit a bike.
J:- kya bhai ye kya kya.india se aaye nahi ki ek siyappa kr diya.dekh k chalana tha na.dekho takkar mar di.

K:- haan haan saari galti toh meri hi thi tu toh doodh se dhuli hui hai.meri dream girl Ki qualities mai tujhe khud hi sunane lag gaya.pagal hu na mai.
J:- OK stop taunting me.vaise agar maine pucha bhi toh itna emotional kyun ho gaye Ki signal bhi nahi dekha.
K:- let’s stop fighting.ghar jaake lad lenge .ab chal dekhte hai us aadmi ko Jo gira hai.
J:- theek hai .btw how do u know he is aadmi.vo ladki bhi ho sakti hai.who knows aapki dream girl (teasing)
K:- shut up. Chal niche utar.
(Kunj and jahanvi get down of d car and see a guy wearing helmet laying on the ground)
K:- (whispering)dekha ye aadmi hai.I win.tu faltu mein mujhse lad rahi thi.ladkiyaan bike nahi chalati.
J:-okay fine.I loose.let’s help him.

Kunj forwards his hand to the guy who was fallen on ground.but the guy shoves his hand away and says I don’t need ur help…aankhen hai ya aaloo.dikhta nahi hai kya.
K:- ladkiiiii…..(mouth open)
J:- bhai mu band kar lo.dinosaur ghus jaiga.vaise I won.ladki bhi bike chala sakti hai.
K:- OK .u win.(changing topic) chalk uski help Karen.
K:- I m sorry.U can hold my hand and get up.
Guy:- no need.I can help myself.mujhe kisike help Ki zaroorat nahi hai.
K:-(whispering) kitni khadoos hai !!!
J:- bhaiii.
K:- OK. (To girl) bhalai ka to zamana hi nahi Raha.
G:- bhalai.no need of it.and she stands herself.
K:- BTW can u pls remove ur helmet.I need to see d face of d first person wid whom I fought during my first visit to canada
G:- do u think I m or servant that u vll say to remove it and I will do as i say.my name is twinkle taneja and I always do wat I want.I don’t need somebody else’s orders to do something.
(Ya u r right the girl is actually our twinkle taneja).
K:- (to himself) kitni akdoo aur badtameez hai.
Listening to all did jahanvi laughs secretly.

J:- (self talk) wat a girl.isne toh bhai ki bolti hi band kar di.agar ye meri Bhabhi ban gayi toh maza aayga.no.no.jahanvi stop thinking all dis.bhai won’t accept her at all.but she has most of d qualities dat bhai wanted in her dream girl.babaji pls help me.kuch aisa kro ki ye hi meri Bhabhi ban Jaye…
By the time even riyaan came in the car..
And saw twinkle from a distance…
R:- ya khuda….phir se…mai kya krun is aafat ka…
Phir se accident kr dala…
And who r those two people…kahi twinkle ne unki hi gaadi ko takkar toh nhi marr di…
Kya riyaan tu bhi yahan baith k guess kr rha hai…
Ja vahan ja k dekh chakkar kya hai…
And he drives towards twinkle…
Comes out of the car in full attitude… As if aaj kisi ko thok hi dega…
But as soon as he comes in front of Kunj and jahanvi…
R:- (with folded hands and head bowed down) sorry sorry so sorry…I m extremely sorry on behalf of this girl….
Kunj and jahanvi confused …
Kunj:- vo…police…
But before he could complete…
R:-nhi pls police ko mat bulaiyega …pls….ye bechari dil se sorry hai…
Now he turns towards twinkle…
Hai na twinkle..tu srry hai na…
But here twinkle was frowning…
Seeing her riyaan turns her head again towards Kunj and jahanvi…
But before he could again say something…
Twinkle comes and holds his collar…

T:- oye…srry k bache..ye kya srry srry kr raha hai..
R:- are tune accident kiya na…ab tu toh srry bolne se rhi toh i thought mai hi bol dun…ab agar in logon ne tujhe police k hawale kr diya toh
T:- and tujhe kisne kaha ki maine accident kiya..
R:- mere dimaag ne…mai itna buddhiman jo hu…
T:- o hello buddhiman prani…fr ur kind information maine accident nhi kiya balki in logon ne mujhe takkar mari…
R:- (towards jahanvi and kunj) Sacchi?
K and J (sadly) hmmm…
Riyaan -now in high and full confidence tone..chan twinkle laga phone police ko…in logon ko jail mein dalna chahiye…chakki pisni chahiye…
T:- o hello hum india mein nhi hai…we r in Canada ..yahan jail mein chakki thodi na pisna padta hai..
R:- srry srry bhavnain mein beh gaya tha…lekin ab police ko bula..
T:- rehne de na…vaise bhi this is their first visit to canada..i don’t want ki inki first visit kharab ho jaye..i m fine..just minor injuries…(pointing towards her which was bleeding)
R:- are twinkle tujhe toh chot lagi hai…wait…let me bring the first aid from the car..

T:- ok…and
Suddenly she turns towards Kunj.
T:-o hello Mr.khadoos.don’t be in any misconception dat I told all dis to save u…
Its just I didn’t want him to create a scene here…and handover u both to police..
K:- ( to himself ) as if I thought dat she did dis to save me.miss arrogance.
T:- did u say something.
K:-( sarcastically) no I was talking to myself..
J:- thank u so much..fr saving us..

T:- koi nhi…
T:-( to jahanvi ) btw is he ur brother.
J:- ya.:-)
T:- (whispering) does he has d habit of talking to himself.
J:- (laughingly ) yaa by birth:-P
K:- ahem! ahem!
K:- (self talk) ye kaisa zamana hai bahar k log to the hi.ab meri behen hi meri izzat ki maa behen kr rahi hai. Kisi ne sach hi kaha hai ki ghar Ki bhedi Lanka dhaye.
J:-( teasingly) kya hua bhaiya kuch problem hai.:-P
K:- nahi toh .kaunsi aur kaisi problem.I m fine.
T:- now u both go before riyaan comes and starts his CBI enquiry.
J:- Can I ask u something.I know its personal but is he ur boyfriend.
T:- who riyaan (Laughing)No no not at all .he is my best friend my riyaa…
J:- ohh…
K:- ab agar tum logon Ki chit chatting khatam ho gyi ho toh…can we leave miss..jahanvi sarna..
J:- haan let’s leave…
J:- bye twinkle…And thank u too.
T:- never mind…bye…
J:- bhai say bye to twinkle(teasingly)
K:- yes bye..meet u never…
T:- same here…huh…
And they both leave…

To be cont’d…
Hope u all like it…

Comment krna mat bhulna…
Love u all…
Sorry precap toh bhul hi gyi…
Precap:- twinkle to get a shock…a hyper one…
So now epi complete…
And thank u all of u.
Keep smiling…
Take care…
Meet u all soon…
Will surely post next epi asap…..

☺☺☺☺☺😁 😊


  1. Ritzi


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    Finally!!!! Yeye yeye …..u can…lalalalala….woopieeeeee……such an interesting epiiiiiiiii I swear! Pls now don’t take tooooooooo long to post the next one

  2. RUTU.....


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    Hi I know you don’t know me because I’m new here but I read all your ff you write really good this episode is best twinj tashan is just amazing 😊😊😊

  3. Adya


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    OMg…. Welcome back shubbu darling !!
    Chalo meri baat ki kuch to izzat rakhi .. thank God !!
    Well the episode was damn hilarious..Maza aa gya yrr… Keep writing like this!!!!
    Plsss post the next one soon… Nd hnn belated happy birthday…
    Love you cutie !!!

  4. Chiku


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    Awwwww❀️❀️❀️Its lovely. Soon cute. I seriously loved each and every dialogue of ur ffπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚β€οΈπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆspecially CBI enquiry.
    Post soon

  5. Kruti


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    Shrutiiiiiiiiiiii……..πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ yar tera comic sense kamal hai….I read d old parts of d ff nd this one to nd pura time i was ROFL……Kamal hai matlab Just loved it……Shruti u know what… .I want to laugh more…..so ab jaldi nxt epi likh ke post karo……I cant wait

    Loads of loveπŸ’•πŸ˜˜

  6. SidMin


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    LD ………….
    Loved it awesome πŸ™‚ Dialogues kaha se late hai tine awesome the sab ….
    Loved it πŸ™‚
    Kunj ke entry finally hoagae πŸ™‚
    Tashan ekh dam kamal ka tha and voh dream girl ke qualities Doremon se inspire hai (LOL)
    Loved it πŸ™‚ Love you πŸ™‚

  7. Ramya


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    Thankyou so much
    Ab ye soch rahi ho ki thankgod kyu
    Affterall unhine mere achi si bff mere sis ko tik jo kardi fit n fine
    N episode ka kya bolu words ki Kami hai itne sarreee ache ache dialogue n ache ache scenes ufff Maarhi daala amazing aur twinj ko kitna ache se milaya I loved it soooooo muuuccchhhhh
    Love u keep smiling

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