A Twinj Tale – Part 4

Helloooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo (I know I know bhot bada ho gaya na)
Go kya hai na emotions mei beh gayi thi…
Akhir itne dinon baad jo mil rahi hun….
Pata hai kitna miss kiya aap logon ko..
Accha ab srry directly bol deti hun..
Itna ghuma – firakar nahi bolungi….
Maaf kr do plsssssss…..I m really very sorry…
Dil se sorry…..ab itna gussa bhi kya karna….
U know na gussa krne se health pe bura asar hota hai….
Ab lagta hai thoda toh dil pighla hoga….
So ab mai story continue krti hun……
And usse pehle u know mere pas kuch aacha hai share krne ko…
Bataun ……….
Bad mein batungi
Abhi ff padh lo
Aur yaad hai na chehre pe mand muskaan anivarya hai…
Chalo ab Baaton ko side mein rakh kr ….
Padhna chalu krte hai…Baaton ka kya hai vo toh hoti hi rehti hai….

So now epi time….
Vaise miss kiya tha ya nhi haan….batao batao…jhooth nhi bolna…god is watching u…

Chalo ab disturb nhi karungi…pakka
Haan so ab recap
Twinkle ka prem vartalap (conversation ) wid riyaan..and leela ka jawalmukhi wala
roop…
After going to her room ,twinkle calls someone…
T:- hello
R:- twinkleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
T:-mera naam twinkle hai twinkleeeeeeeee nhi.
R:- wow wat a great discovery accha hua tune mujhe bata diya varna mujhe toh pata hi nhi tha …
T:- vahi toh tujhe mere shukraguzar hona chahiye ki mai teri frnd hun..c I m so smart..
R:- haa teri smartness toh Maine dekh hi li hai…phone pe..waise wo sab kya tha.
T:- mera tere lie pyaar.kyun accha nhi laga kya..
R:-(acting) awwww.how romantic.my darling.my jaanu..how sweet of u..
T:- cheeee these words sound so ajeeb…
R:- o hello yahi ajeeb words tune mujhe abhi kuch der pehle phone pe kahe the..my darling..
T:- ye darling working bolna band kr .mujhe koi shauk nhi chadha hai tujhe ye ajeeb words bolne ka…it was just situation ‘s demand…
R:- zara batane ka kasht karegi ki kaise situation ne tujhe jangli twinkle se tehzeebdaar twinkle banne pe mazboor kiya.
T:- vo actually…I had a…I had a plan in my head..
R:- o fish.it means tere dimaag mein phir se kisi khurafaati idea ne janm liya hoga .btw plan k lie ye sab krne ki kya zaroorat pad gayi..
T:- vo actually…vo na…
R:-ye tera recorder rewind mode pe kyun hai..bolegi bhi aage.
T:- vo na ..vo sab maine leela taneja ko sunane k lie kaha tha..
R:- twinkle khuda k lie ye mat kehna ki vo sab tune leela taneja k saamne kaha tha..
T:- haan aur nhi toh kya.tujhe kya lagta hai Ki mai tujhe darling aur baccha bolungi kya aise hi bolungi .kya mujhe kisi pagal kutte ne kata hai..
R:-twinkleeeeeeee.have u lost it..tu pagal hai kya.vo sab tu unke saamne bol rhi thi,.
T:- first of all my name is twinkle not twinkleeeeeeeeee…
R:-vo kiss and date wala sab kuch tune unke saamne bola

T:- haan..
R:- twinkle tu marvaigi mujhe..tujhe pata hai na teri mom ko ye sab pas and nhi ..phir bhi.
T:- she z not my mom..And secondly itni overacting mat kr..ab sunn tujhe mere saath date pe chalna hai..
R:- r u asking or telling?
T:- do u think I will ask and dat too from u.I m telling u..
R:- no ways haan. I don’t wanna die at an early age.
T:- wats d connection between date and death.
R:- tere body guards kya naam tha unka……..haan chintu – pintu.
T:- chintu pintu?
R:- haa ur chintu pintu.remember rahil ahuja in our college.usne ek baar tujhe date k lie kya puch diya.tere chintu pintu ne uska ye haal kiya ki bechara vo 2 week tak hospital mein pada raha .aaj tak vo itne sadme mein hai ki abhi tak tujhse har saal rakhi bandhwata hai aur di di bolta hai.mujhe meri haalat aisi nhi karwani..
So I m not helping u in dis plan.
T:- soch le..yaad hai karan arora.usne ek baar mujhe help krne se mana kr diya.2 month tak hospital mein pada raha.abhi tak shock mein hai.ab d choice is urs tujhe 2 week hospital mein rehna hai ya 2 months…soch le ..u have 5 mins.I will call u again after 5 mins….
Twinkle cuts d call
T:-(st) riyaan I know u will help me .tu Mera bestest buddy hai..sorry I m blackmailing u but tere siva I won’t b able to trust somebody.aur vaise bhi tujhe apni jaan bhot pyaari hai.so tu help krne k lie zaroor haan kahega vo bhi 5 mins se pehle..
Here riyaan’s self talk
R:-(st) ya Allah.ab mai kya krun ek taraf kuan toh dusri taraf khai.kya krun.date pe gaya toh 2 week hospital mein nahi gya toh 2 month..kya Karun…
Lekin twinkle meri frnd hai.usne meri bhot baar help ki hai.uske lie Jaan bhi haazir hai.vaise bhi vo ye sab us insaan se Milne k lie kr rahi hogi….chalo ab senti mode se tashan mode mein convert ho jata hun.varna agar usse aise baat kiya toh hawa mein udne lagegi…Aur phir awwwww.wala vo apna look degi and meri pyaari riyaa keh kr mujhe chidhayegi…
T:- 1,2,3,4 and…

Suddenly her phone rings..
T:- hello
R:- vo mai soch raha tha ..
T:- tu sochta bhi hai
R:- shut up…
T:- accha bol…
R:- vo I was thinking ki chal tere lie tere saath date pe bhi chalne ko taiyar hun.vo kya hai mera dil bhot bada hai..isiliye socha ki I should help u.
T:- haan haan pata hai pata hai tera dil burj khalifa se bhi bada hai…
R(acting) vo toh hai.
The screen shows both of them smiling…
R:- twinkle
T:- haan bol
R:- ye silent hasne se better hai ki zor se has le.(dis is my typical dialogue)
And they both start laughing…
T:- I luv u ria.
R:- cheeeeee I m a boy toooo.
T:- wat do u mean …
R I mean me boy u tomboy.luv not possible…
T:- agghhhh
R:- ha ha ha
T:- shut up..
Ab sunn I will be at ur house in next 3 hours..
R:- oooo
T:- stop doing oooo and listen I m damn sure tera ghar dekhne layak nhi hoga…toh tere pas 3 hours hai use arrange krne ko…
R:- no its arranged
T:- r u sure
R:(revolving his eyes ) naaaaaa.
T:- I knew it…
R:- dats y u r my darling….and he hurriedly cuts d call
T:- riyaaaaa.

And she starts smiling….
And suddenly he texts her
Waise tujhe yaad ho toh maine tujhe kabhi backless dress nhi di toh uska kya karegi.badi badi phek rahi thi a hi thodi der pehle.ab smile krna band kr aur soch..
Twinkle:- oh shit.naya siyappa.:-P πŸ˜‰
And the episode ends here…
To b contd….
So kaisa laga mera episode…boring tha na…
Ab kya karun nacheez ka dimaag aisa hi chalta hai….
O sorry sorry phir se precap bhul gayi…itna bolti jo hun…
Stupid me…
So here z d precap…
Precap:- entry of d most awaited character.in my style….

Chalo ab epi katam .so baatein chalu…
Haan toh jin sajjanon ne mere pichle epi mein comment kya unke lie Mera hriday se bad a sa mota sa
$HUKRIY@
And unke lie mera dher saara pyaar…:-) πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
Sidmin thanks yaar mere pichla epi padhne k lie ..
Dolly wow meri koshish safal hui and haan comment krte rehna …
Purnima thanks fr commenting..
Shreya thanks yaar..and haan mere naam ka meaning shayad vo hi hai…
Angita thanks fr commenting buddy
Sana thank u fr commenting
Arundhati itna pyaar haan.keep smiling..:-) πŸ™‚
Fan thanks fr ur diamondish comments..
Sameera dekh I m back..
Sayeeda ,my simran meri sabse acchi dost…thank u so so so much fr commenting…dekho mere ek saal pure ho gaye..
Bulbul dekh is nacheez ne teri murad puri kr di..
Shatakshi fr u tere lie likha so that tu jaldi theek ho ja…get well soon..:-) πŸ™‚
Apoorwa is nacheez k epi pe comment krne k lie apka shukriya…
Zikra itna bada comment seriously..

Aapka dil.-o – Jaan se shukriya…:-) πŸ™‚
Loverrrrrrrr bhavna mein baha diya tune seriously itna accha comment..
Sidmin lover thanks dude…
Twinj fan tammana kya yaar chane k jhaad pe chadwa diya…itni tareef…I will surely think about this..
Baby thanks a lot..raaz hai..
Now crazy diiiiii…my fraud…thank u thank u thank u so so much fr commenting..
Chalo now time to go..
Phir milungi jab time milega….
Tab tak keep smiling:-) πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
And bhool k bhi bhoolna mat..
Byee……
Accha han actually pata hai mujhe abhi kuch din pehle hi new frnds mile and pata hai jab I was writing dis I remember all of them everybody…my acche dost..

Chalo ab final bye:-) πŸ™‚
Love u buldozer πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
Here z d link of my previous epi…
www.tellyupdates.com/twinj-tale-part-3
And haan smile krna kabhi mat chodna.:-) πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

24 comments

  1. Lovely

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    Shrutiiiiii diiiiiiiiii…Itna wait mat karaya Karo……Acha ek baat bolu ..see aaj main school nahi gyi..bore ho rahi hoon so aapkko pakaungi..chalega??..chalega nahi daudega…
    Haan toh baat aisi hai ..aapko dil pighlane ke liye itni musshakat ki zaroorat nahi..Coz apka ff dekhte hi I start jumping on my bed.. Saying..”aa gya aa gya ..Shruti di ka epi aa gya..”
    And epi.. Epi toh ekdum dhasu tha yaar and I love thin Smart Twinkle.. I know she wants to go to India for Kunj..(agar nahi toh ….
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    Sorry kyu maangu??..aap dikha hi aisa rahi ho!😜😜)..and Bad HERO ki entry ho jaaye..aap apne ff main hero ka wait Kara rahi ho aur main Heroine ka..hehe..
    Acha aap mere saare ffs padhti ho??..ab puchogi..Shreya Tu kaun kaun se ff likhti hai..??..isiliye aapke puchne se pehle bata deti hoon-
    Yehi hai Ishq
    Our Love Story- Twinj Love
    A Tale of OBSTINANCE and LOVE- Twinj..
    and chinta mat Karo.. Saare ekdum dhasu hai!!..
    Meri smiling Sweetheart aap har baar smile Lana kaise manage kar leti ho?..I think ye aapke nature main hi hai..haina..I know I am true..
    Mujhe Psychiatrist ban jaana chahiye so that I can manipulate with human Mind!!.. Mera toh hai nahi..auron ka hi sahi😜
    Vaise apne naam ka MATLAB ek aur hai- Expert in Vedas..
    Aapne Ved Padhe hai kabhi?? ..koi ni Maine bhi nahi padhne..

    Chalo bye..Apko
    Love you Jet fighter..😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘

  2. Lovely

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    Alle yaal..itni bak bak ki..ek baat toh bhul hi gyi..
    Post soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo………………………..n..
    Jaldiiiiii
    Ab final babhye..mere saare ff par comment Karna..Okay..
    Love you😘😘

    • Lovely

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      * this smart Twinkle
      Bas HERO..
      Aapke naam…
      spell checks …
      Ab pakka I’ll not trouble you..
      Love you ..returns😘😘😘😜😜

  3. Sayeeda

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    Aahi gayi meri Amrish puri ..shukr hai tera ek saal poora toh hua wrna mujhe laga tha pata nai aur kitne saal lagenge tumhe apna ff update krne main…..Accha hua na ke update kr diya wrna tumhari ye Simran tumse bahut gussa hojati ….nd u know na main gusse main kaisi hojati hon…full on serious type …

    Since long time I was waiting to read this cute ff not bcoz the ff is cute but more than ur ff ur talks r cute ….
    looo ab gussa hojaogi ke Maine tumhare ff ko cute nai kaha ….coz ur ff is splendid ….amazing….. awesome ..
    Today’s episode was soooooo lovely nd funny also …
    Ab jaate jaate ye bata next yrr kab aega tera Jo tu post kregi….
    love u..

  4. Baby

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    omggggggggg shruti di lyk srsly ummmmmmmmm u r vry late mein apse gussa ho jaun nhi nhi nhi nvr i m nt gona b lyk twinkle ki usse uska pyar itne tym baad mile or voh usse gussa ho jaye mein aapse gussa nhi hun kunki u r bck wid a bang di luvd d epsode it ws fab bcz u r fab luv u missed u sooooooooooo mch post nxt asap di pls pls plssssssssss

  5. Bulbul23

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    Kya LGA chotu sa comment karne bad chodo dungi kabhi nahi………..akhir kitna matalb ke kitna wait karwaya han tune to yr rulla diya tha ek sum dimag khrab hue rakha tha mera but bhagwan ne na Jane tujhe akkal de di and finally u posted ur ff ……….

    Like seriously koi itna wait karwata hai is nacheez ke liye han or agli plbar phir late hui to main to comment ni karne wali

    Soch le time pe aajaya kar yr plz or is bar tune thodi kam shayari likho hai and by the way tera nam Shruti hai very nice name

    But jaldi se post soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

    Okkkkk bye love u nacheez urff shruti

  6. Sameera

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    Omg aagayi finally u know kitna wait kiya maine n ha miss b kiya tujhe aur jaha tak epi ki baat hai wo hamesha ki tarah jhakkas hai ha mein to soch rahi hu aaj subah kaha se nikla Teri epi dekh k
    Ab plshh aur wait na karao jaldi se next epi post kardo can’t wait for hero entry πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚love u n missed u alott

  7. dreamer..arundhati

    Finally tu aai vapas.., kitna rukaya but chalega.., itna cute epi tha,.,, but plz next epi jaldi la

  8. Laddoo

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    SCOOTY……maate aap apne charan laiyye…hum aapke charansparsh karna chahte hai…
    Isse mazedaar ff shayad life mei nhi padha…meri Amru itti intelligent hai? Arey behen kiski hai😎….anyways….jald se jald post nhi kiya na toh I’ll kill u…sachhi bol rhi hu…ye 3 hafton ke gaps diye na…tohπŸ˜ˆπŸ˜ˆπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘Š
    Taiyyar ho jao…
    Tab tak ke liye tata bye bye…

  9. Shatakshi

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    Hey nacheez
    Episode se zyada teri baate dhamakedar h
    N I was going to ask ki kunj kaha h…but precap seems interesting❀❀

  10. Sayeeda

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    Hey ….what the hell ….if u don’t like it it’s ur problem …nd u keep ur shitty comments with u only …
    When u don’t like the ff then why did u read nd moreover why did u commented …u guys don’t have any work rather than disgracing the person …u really feel love nd enjoy while bashing the other’s ….u better understand that ur words can hurt someone …God is watching all of us ..

    And if we r commenting nd liking this ff is our choice u r none to judge it ……u better stay away from this ff …

  11. SidMin

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    I did not miss you at all coz
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    Yaad unhe kiya jata hai jenehe bhula jata hai (Hum almost har rooz tho baat karte hai)(LOL)
    Loved it Shruti,yar khya bolu people with the name Shruti are very good writers (Talking about you not me) Loved it and next episode Kunj’s entry !!!!!!!!!!!!
    waiting for the next episode and ha post it soon

  12. zayb_zikra

    Omggggggggggggggggg my nacheez is back….
    Yeyeyye yuppie….πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    I mean srsly..????
    Like srsly????.😝😝😝
    Arre zyada mat socha ki kahi pagal wagal toh nai hogai????
    Ki kahi late ana ki sadma wadma toh nai lagaya…πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜
    N for ur kind information….
    Aisa kuch nai hone wala haa….
    Ye baat ap apne dimag me bita lo tho acha hai….πŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜‚β€β€β€πŸ˜‚πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜›πŸ˜›
    Like m using this emojis….πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Kyu m speechless……
    Still finding words to describe it…..❀❀❀❀❀
    Srsly hats off to uh…..
    U n ur talks omggg kya kahu…???
    Batao toh Zara…???
    Nai nai aj toh Matlab bata hi do Yarr….
    Ye hamesha shocks nahi..πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…
    U r talks omggg damn cute….😘😘😘😘
    I swear m in love wid ur talks n ff..
    Bt kya kare..??πŸ˜žπŸ˜žπŸ˜ŸπŸ˜ŸπŸ˜ŸπŸ’™
    Ap hamesha itni jaldi ate ho ki hum ko toh ruladete ho yaar…😭😭😭
    Yaar this is nt fair ha….
    Ok nw commin to ur epi….
    Yaar it ws fab…
    Marvellous…..
    Superbbbbbbb yaar…..
    Muaahhhhhhh….😘😘😘😘😘😘
    Kamal hai…..
    N most awaited entry…..❀❀❀❀❀
    KUNJ SARNA…..❀❀❀❀😘😘😍😍😍😍
    Omggg can’t wait.. .😭😭😭
    N commin to ur talks …!!!
    I mean koi itne bate kaise karsakta hai yaar….
    They r jus freaking awesome….❀😍😍😍❀❀❀❀❀
    Ok nw zyada nahi bolungi….πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜›
    Bass’s do cont asap…….
    Pleaashhhhhhhh..,….
    As I can’t wait for so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH long…..
    Ab itni achi bate aur amazing se epi deker kar ke…
    Late se ana ye koi achi baat thodi na hai..???πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜
    Haina Sachhi Sachhi batana ….😜😜😜😜😜
    Ok nw finally bieeee….
    Lub uhhhh…..
    B back soon…❀❀❀❀❀❀

  13. Affaa

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    Haiii wala why didn’t post my comment…
    Xxx I request please don’t hurt other….your comment means a lot to writers so please think ten times before comment…
    Xxx I first commented it didn’t post…that I bashed a lot…I told shrutii that a bashed you…do you know what she replied she told poor xxx you may hurted by my words…and my dramebaazzz is the best…so please…

    Looo Dramebaazzz what a writer your Masha Allah fabulous…outstanding I proved of you…amazing ff each and everything I just loved it…Thank you soo much for informing about your ff…
    Fantastic…

    Love you lotsss my jaann take care….

  14. Saby

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    Shruti…. Meli Jaan….
    dekh an yeh mat bolna jaan bol bolke jaan le lugi qki aesa kuch karneka irada nahi hai mera….
    Tu sachi tape recorder hai Jaan…
    Kitna bolti hai… Lagta hai meri sari chumms aesi hi hai…. Chatterboxes…
    Pata hai I m so sorry to miss such a good ff… Seriously I didn’t read it before… So I went through the 1st epi then 2nd then 3rd and finally read this… It was more than worth… Amazing…
    Muje hai seriously twinkle k dialogues uske nakhre bohot pasand aaya….
    Chal bye now… Love uh sho much pehlese bt now love ur ff too……

  15. Bhavika

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    I was not missing na na uuuhum nahi no no bilkul nahi
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    AREY KAISE MISS KARUNGI ROZ ROZ TOH CHAPPAD CHAPPAD SUNTI HU
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    aur kam ki baat ek nahi karni hoti hai aur always on wrong time
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    meri toh zubaan tedhi ho gayi bol bol ke ki likh do mata likh do post kardo episode bhagwaan ke liye but nahiii hamara toh jab bukhar kam hoga… kaan sahi hoga… mood hoga….din hoga …samay ayega…story suujhegi tabhi likhenge ham toh .

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    abhi agla episode time pe nahi post kiya naa FIR BATAOONGI MAI soch lena
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    abhi ye mat kehna khud do post karti nahi hai mujhe badi ayi kehne waali HA HA i KNOW I KNOW mere exams hai naaa so after exams sure

    JALDI KARNA and JUST LOVED the episode

    pehle smile itni – thi fir _ ho gayi aur fir______ itni then_____ itni aur fir itni kitni kitne????_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________- ouch jabda dard kar raha hai bhai saare daant bahar nikalne waale hai ABHI JALDI POST KARO WARNA WARNA WARNAA………yaar mai kar bhi kya sakti hu but REMEMBER MAI BOHOT KUCH KAR SAKTI HU HAAA ND U KNOW WHAT “”””””””””BHAVIKA se PANGA is not CHANGA””””””””””””””””””””””””””””:) πŸ™‚

  16. Lover

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    Haa so comment kar diya ye le……..
    Ok isse apne ghar ke bahar laga le mujhe ye bolna tha mera naam bhi famous ho jayega iss karan kya sahi kaha naa.

    Now your ff was just
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    Hyfdunvch & gjrunbjggj
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    Kya NAHI samajh aaya iska MATLAB fabulous and mind blowing like always…..
    Actually ye mere dictionary ke words hai jise Maine khud likha hai…

    Now bahut ho gaya comment karne bola tha ye NAHI ki kitna likhna hai
    Jaldi post karna and I am blessed to have a friend like you.love you hmgyh (it means bye).

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