A Twinj Tale – Part 3

Helloooooooooo
Yaad Hun ya bhool gaye mujhe.
Chalo koi nahi abhi yaad aa jaungi.Meri baatein aur mera ff apki sahayta (help karenge)
And bulbul apne ff ka intro and 1 epi post krke kahan chali gayi yaar. I m missing it.
And shatakshi yaar it was nice talking to u and haan u know na the reason behind dis epi.
Tara hey how r u…
Dreamer arundhati ab shayad recollect ho jaye ki mere ff ka kya naam hai
Sayeeda lo apki muraad puri kr di.and haan agar vo koi mai hun toh kuch bhi ho sakta hai.Allah ne banaya na.remember aapne mere last epi mein bola tha Ki koi kit a bol sakta hai.and haan mere lie aap hi koi naam suggest kr do.
And haan u know na mere ff ka ek golden rule hai.
U have to keep mand muskan or smile on ur face
U know na sukoon milta hai….
Now a dil o dimaag wala
S H U K R I Y A:-) πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
Mera ff padhne k lie.
And haan crazy di apke lie jo love, affection, respect and izzat hai vo jataya nahi jaa sakta usse sirf bayan kr sakte hain……….
Important notice to all commentors…..
Mujhpe mehrbaani kare aur comments se nawaze
Zikra lama amii bas bhot hua ab agar ek aur lafz kaha

Toh mujhe diabetes ho jaiga…
Kitne cute lines…just fr me….
Really u all r awesome….

And other commentors tum logon ke lie mere kuch alfaz (words)neeche likhe hai.
Zaroor padhe …
And even while commenting on dis ff….
Sab mujhe ye zarooor batayenge ki hasi aai ki nahi…okay.
Now ab mujhe apni pyaari pyaari baaton ko full stop laga dena chahiye….
(If at all u get a smile on ur face)
So ab haste haste padhna start karo
πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

Sorry to disturb but sacchi sacchi bhagwan ki kasam kha k batao
Miss kiya ya nahi???
Epi starts here…..
Recap:- twinkle ka nakli hangover,leela k saath word war and riyaan k lie farman.
Contd.
Twinkle ‘s house(TH)
Twinkle is in her room wid her phone in her hand…..she is talking to herself…
Twinkle:- Babaji aaj tak maine aapse kuch nahi manga right?haan haan sirf aaj nahi manga.toh ab mang leti hun.
Pls is gadhe riyaan ko sadbuddhi dena ki vo mera kaam krde.agar mera ye plan successful hua toh shayad main India jaa paun and usse mil paun…
Chalo now I should get ready.agar usne call kr diya toh ..
Saying dis she goes in her washroom and gets ready……
After 10 mins
Twinkle comes out of washroom fully ready (she got ready in 10 mins.practically impossible ,par mere ff and twinkle ki life mein kuch bhi ho sakta hai.)she is wearing white coloured top and jeans.She takes her phone.
T:-(self talk) chalo 5 mins left.bas ye gadha phone kar de .babaji bacha lena.
Saying dis she comes out of her room and walks towards d dining table for breakfast.
On her way she passes through leela’s room whose door was slight open .she was walking and had moved some distance ahead when she listened something and after listening she comes and peeps in Leela’s room.
Leela’s back was facing towards twinkle so she couldn’t see her.
She was talking on her phone.twinkle was listening to wat leela was talking.
After she finished her call twinkle had a grin on her face.
T:-(self talk) o thank u thank u thank u some much babaji kya mast mauka diya hai.vo toh room mein Maine ainvayi hi keh diya tha ki leela taneja Ki aadhe Canada k saamne insult karungi aur aaj hi aapne mauka de diya.wah sacchi mein tussi great ho.
Ab dekhna is baar mai is mauke par chauka nahi nahi chakka lagaungi
(Now I will hit a four no no six )
Saying this she started walking towards d dining table.
After reaching near d dining table twinkle sees leela sitting on sofa reading newspaper.so she cleverly kepts her phone near Leela’s table and comes back to her place and sits on her place.
T:-(self talk) chalo jaal bicha diya hai bas ab shikar phasne ki der hai)
T:- Steven jaldi lao mera bf.I m getting late.
S:- yaa mam coming.
Steven comes with breakfast and arranges it on d table.
S:- leela mam bf is ready.pls come.
Leela comes on d dining table and sits on her chair and starts eating.
Here twinkle is also eating but she is tensed and sees her watch.
T:- (st) are I knew it ye gadha koi bhi kaam sahi se nahi kr sakta bola tha 15 mins baad phone krne.but abhi tak nahi kiya.agar aaj mera plan flop hua na toh Iska kya haal hoga yeh mai bhi nahi janti.
Here after every minute twinkle’s anger increases .

Location:-(riyaan’s house)
Here riyaan comes out of washroom.He hurriedly goes and sees her phone.
R:-(st)ya Allah 20 mins ho gaye.ab pata nahi kya hoga.twinkle toh mujhe kaccha chaba jaigi.lekin phir bhi chalk abhi call krta gun.shayad bach jaun.pls god bacha lena.abhi mai kunwara hun.itni jaldi nahi marna chahta.
T.H.
Here twinkle’s anger was on 10 cloud and she was cursing riyaan in her mind.
And here leela’s bf was over and she was about to get up when twinkle’s phone rings…
T:-(st) hash!(heaving a sigh of relief )thank god accha hua ki isne phone kr diya varna pure plan pe pani phir jata.
And guess wat d ringtone was munni badnam hui.
Leela listening to dis gives twinkle a disgusted look
L:- do girls of good families keep such songs as ringtones.
T:- (gives her whatever wala look)
T:-now can u give me my phone.
Leela was about to give twinkle her phone (with a disgusted look)when she sees jaanu wid a heart emoji flashing on d screen.
She gives twinkle her phone and asks something.
L:- who is dis jaanu?
T:-(ignoring look) don’t u understand.my bf.
T:- now can I talk to my bf.if u permit.
Saying dis she picks up d call
T:- o hello jaanu.
R:- jaanuuuuu???mujhe toh laga tha Ki tu mujhe kaccha chaba jaigi but tu jaanu bol rahi hai.tu theek toh hai na.
T:- ya baby,my darling.I m fine.
R:(confused) darling???baby????jaanu???
T:-awwww mera baccha…
R:-dekh twinkle ya to tu pagal ho gayi hai ya tune pee rakhi hai.varna tu mujhe baby jannu baccha bulaye ye possible nahi. aaj tak tune mujhe sirf gadha,bewakoof,kutta,kameena aur na jaane kya kya bola hai .aaj achanak babu,baccha,darling.
T:- my baby is missing me.
R:- miss vo bhi tujhe ha ha ha.aur kuch nahi mila kya Jo tujhe miss karunga.tujhse toh picha chudana chahta hun.
T:- aww baby u remember our yesterday’s kiss
R:- kiss?? Oye bhool gayi .kal tune mujhe laat,mukka and jhapad mara tha.kiss toh dur ki baat hai.
T:- ooo so u wanna take me to date.
R:- date ?? Dekh tujhe sirf mai boxing match dikhane le jaa sakta hun.chalegi.kyunki date wate tere type ka nahi hai.it doesn’t suit ur personality.
T:- so ok I will be there at Lt hotel sharp 8:30 my shona.
R:- pehle ye ajeeb ajeeb shona darling baccha jaise shabd mat bol.mujhe kuch kuch hota hai and secondly tu bhool rahi hai LT hotel is leela taneja’s hotel.so wahan date is next to impossible.to ye bhool ja.
T:- OK my baby I will wear d mini skirt and backless top which u gave me.
R:- oye hello which dress.firstly aaj tak I have never giv en u a handkerchief and u saying dress and secondly tu twinkle hi hai na because as much as I know tujhe short dresses she nafrat hai.
T:- anything fr u baby.we will meet today in evening .pakka
R:- kash evening hi na ho.(low tone)
T:-did u say something.baby
R:- meri itni himmat(in a low tone)
Nahi nahi
T:- OK baby bye love u muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
R:- cheeeeee and hate u…..
T:- OK bye…
And twinkle disconnects his call.
Here leela was angry really like a volcano and was about to burst.
T:- (self talk) good job twinkle
Teer ekdum sahi nishane pe laga.ab aaiga asli maza.
T:- Steven I m going out and will be late so tell ur madam not to disturb me haan okay.
L:- twinkle wait.who d hell was d guy aid whom u were talking
T:- (gives her an ignoring look)
L:- I m asking something.are u listening?
T:- u want to know who was he .he was my bf.my darling.any problem
L:- and are u going wid him to ur bl**dy date.
T:- didn’t u hear me.yes I m going,
L :- no u r not.and dat too in my hotel.not possible.
T:- who cares for it.I m going and dats final.who r u to stop me.
And saying dis she goes from there.
Here even leela angrily goes out of d house and asks her driver to take her to office.
Twinkle here goes to her room and calls someone.
To be continued……….
So ab epi khatam .now talking time.
Ab ye batao kis kis ko hasi aayi.
Sach sach batana….
Now ab mere do alfaz un sajjanon k lie jin hone mere pichle ff pe comment kiya…
Starting with….
Sameera wah wah yaar u and ur ff
Kya likhti ho ur ff is just damn good.rab milaya ri8??
Crazy di kya yaar choti began se izzat mang rahe ho…
U know na…
Sayeeda:- bas ye yaad rakho Ki mere har ff pe apka comment zaroori hai.bhoolna mat.and bolne mein I m PhD .

Amii and Zikra yaar even u a r MBBS in talking…..bas comment krte raho.dats my guzaarish.

Gopika dhanya bhag hamare tumhare comment pake.bas aise comment krte raho.
Shatakshi ab toh tum meri frnd ho so u r not requested but ordered to comment.so krte rehna.and kaisa laga epi.batana zaroor.
Shreya kya yaar itni tareef Ki ab aankho se aasun band hi nahi hore like seriously.than fr commenting.and haan u have given me a nice name .thanks again fr it.
Aastha u know na like poles attract each other:-P πŸ˜› and haan kaisa laga epi mera.batao batao.
Lama:- koi nhi chatter box hi sahi.nice name.and haan sample toh mai hoon hi.mere ff padhne k lie shukriya..

Zarmeen sirf aapki aur jodha akbar Ki mehrbaani hai.Bas aaise hi comment krte raho aur cache acche episodes likhungi.
And haan aap hi mere lie koi khubsurat naam suggest kr do.
Dreamer arundhati I m angry wid u.itna late comment kya tha pichle ff pe.aaj k baad urs should be first and tareef k lie dhanyavad.
Lover teen comments haan.itna accha laga kya mera epi.and haan thanx fr commenting.

Twinj fan (tammanah):- thanks fr commenting.
Sana u know 3 more people have given me d same name but alag alag bhasha mein.

Pinkistar nice name yr.and haan dhanyavaad fr commenting.bas haste raho mera ff padhke aur I don’t want anything.
Sam pakka promise next time fr u in english.pakka.
Kruti- thanx a lot fr commenting.
And bulbul kahan chali gayi behen .sirf one intro and one epi and den gayab kahan gayi.jaldi likho we r waiting.
Ab a big wala mota wala $ h u k r i y @
Now ek promise ki u all will never get bored.
Either I will entertain u or my ff:-) πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
Bye
Love u
Hope u all liked and loved it….
Are sorry sorry precap baaton baaton toh bhool hi gayi..
So precap is
Ki twinkle will dance…(kaisa dance and kiske saath is all ur test)
Guess kro
Next week new epi.
And haan I will write weekly as my school has started and u know na 11
People think dis as ….u know dat.
Now a final bye..
Keep reading…
Love u bye…
And ….
Ab bas….
Next epi mein cont.karungi.
Bye….
πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

22 comments

  1. Lovely

    |Registered Member

    Diiiii…I was waiting like hell…thank you for posting… Aur sapne main bhi mat sochana that we can forget you ….apni muskaan koi bhulta hai kya??..
    U know naa ur name means musical notes and asusic makes me smile u also do the same not only smile but also u make me life…made my day..???

    And the epi was…..Shruti.. And Shreya …ab main apni tareef nahi kar rahi its just both mean AWESOME….
    Well main bhool gyi bataana…I am Shreya… Don’t get confused…

  2. Angita

    |Registered Member

    Loved it .twinkle yeh Saab karengi toh mene socha hei nei.or sirf 19 minit me tayaar honi.wow loved it thank you

  3. sana (aamu)e

    are yaar tune to century maardi kya epi tha i m laughing like..hell yaar
    it was too good
    n i think tw will dance on sm item song with riyaan
    its only a guess ha

    • sana (aamu)e

      oops ot century it was super hit
      n i m only sana on tu (i think) but u can call me aamu also
      waiting for next one

  4. Dreamer...arundhati

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    Di dhanya bhag hamare jo aap ke sumdar amrut jaise sabd sunne mile.
    Hun sheikchilli nahi jo dimmagipulao banakar us me ghul jaye..hum aapko kaise bhul sakte hai.
    Seriously di missed u alot and aapki writing to I was waiting like hell…sorry 4 that late comment..gussa mat hona ha di
    Lovely epi
    Excited 4 the next epi.
    Luv u and ur writing loads

  5. Sameera

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    Yeah what a nice epi I was eargerly waiting for that thank u so much for posting n yes my ff name Rab miliya????
    Love ur talks so much plzz plzz it’s a request post ur next epi asap

  6. Sayeeda

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    Soooooo sorry for commenting late as I was hell busy with my office nd half nd hour before I read ur ff nd commenting now ….
    Kitne Dino se tumhari cute baatein sunne ka wait kr rhe the hum …nd aaj finally dil ko sukoon milgaya is nacheez ki baat sun kr ( zayada filmy hogaya na ) but what to do jab ff writer hi itni filmy hogi tab readers KO toh filmy hona padega ….
    Episode was tooooooo gggggoooooddddd…….amazingggggggggg……full on super duper blast ..

    plzz post next soon …

    • forever fan of twinj

      Matlab puri duniya ka zikr kiya apne thanks giving ceremony mein par is nacheez ko bhool hi gaye haan……
      Very …………

  7. bulbul

    Are yr maine pure 5 episode likha diye or is nacheez ne padhe bhi nahi very bad Yar I missed you your talks your ff so much Yar I was waiting for so long for it

    An or kuch karoon ki regular post karegi or is kaneez ki galti maaph ki humne or has I to pakka hi

    Aaj yr it was so so funny my bacha shona…………

  8. Shatakshi

    |Registered Member

    Oye….kya likha h yaar???
    Haaste haaste pet phul gaya…
    It was damn interesting…
    Loved it to the core❀❀❀

  9. zayb_zikra

    Listen me mmmmm kya likhu ab mai…???????
    I dont have word dea…..????
    Batao apka is pyara ff n apki itni pyaari tq speech padke toh mai speechless hogayi hehheheh……???????
    Sach kehri hu hpbahut maza aya …….???
    N riyaan my gosh he’s so cute yaar …..????
    Twinkle my darling she her talks omggggg lol rofl….?????
    Luved d way she was talking……???
    Ab kya batao dea ki kitna miss kiya???.
    Kya kahu ab iss naacheez ko apne jus tarah se shukriya kiya….??
    Shukran shukran dea …..☺☺????
    Ur talks omgg kaan taras gaye the humare u kno…???
    Kuch zyada filmy nai hogaye?????????
    Acha chale i ll b waiting for ur ff……
    Mmmm. Luv u mmmm mmmm mmm luv u to d moon n back….
    Loved d epi to d core…….???????????
    Hatts off to u…..????????
    Chalo bieee do cont asap……..???
    U will b missing for nxt one week ….????
    Bt ya luv u….???
    Keep smiling…..??????
    N keep loving….
    N most imp do cint asap……??☺?????

  10. Lover

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    hii you know what inn tu walo ne mera comment delete kar diya idiot so wapas se type krti hu haa kaha thi mei ok I get it I know you are angry but what to do Jo bhi sikha tumhi se sikha na so pehle Maine soncha comment na karu tere jaisa khanjus banu but phir tujhpe pity aa gayi so kar diya ok now about your episode write so let me tell it full of comedy just like comic books just kidding.
    and you know what tere ke bare mei likhti hu
    S:sweet talk
    H:hard works
    R:rocking mind
    U:unique ideas
    T:too good writing skill
    I:interesting one
    inn sare chizzo ka brand lagane ka mann kar rha hai but kya kare nahi laga skte so comment hi kar diya aur agar next time se kanjhusi ki to I will never talk with you.bye.and tere ff ke liye ek song ok sunn likhna sikha padhna sikha diya tere ff ne mujhe tera dost bana and I think itna kaafi hai tere liye bye.

    • Lover

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      i mean tere ff ke bare mei likhti hu ok and pehle bol deti hu jyada phul maat Jana khushi se kyuki I think ki ye tere ff ki quality hai naa ki teri ok.I hope tu samajh gayi aur nhi samjhi to bata dena samjha dungi??just kidding ok chill.
      I don’t like your episode sorry
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      ok don’t be sad as I know school time hai tera so mei ye bolna chahti thi ki I don’t like your episode because I love it okand love you too as its my name na lover naam to padha hi hoga
      kuch jyada ho gaya kya, koi nahi ho bhi gaya hoga to sambhal Lena Mann kar RHA tha likhne ka lol .

  11. twinjfan-(tamanna)

    are kya likhti hai…training leke aai ho kya…seriously. …it was just fun reading it ..tere ff se zyada baathien hian…I was laughing like a mad…really loving the character of riyaan…hahaha….awesome. ..Tujje na comedy movies direct karni chahiye…

  12. crazy

    Love u toooo much swthrt…
    I m not n tu these days but still tune muze watsapp pe link send karneka kast liya
    Wowwww I mean my lazy lump doing such get work n me not cmmnting not possible ri8!!!
    Hahaga love u n ur ff

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