A Twinj Tale – Part 2

Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
(Itna long lasting hey to aaj banta hi hai.tum longon k comments ne mujhe on cloud 9 no no yamraj k palace tak pahuncha diya hai.)
Like seriously Frnds thank u so so so much fr ur comments.
Aap logon ne is nacheez ko khush kr diya.
Toh aaj ye nacheez aap logon ko double khush karega.
And sayeeda aapke do lafzon k liye shukriya.
Allah aap pe hamesha mehrbaan rahe.
Aur tum mujhpe mehrbaan rehna.
And haan saare commentors ka mere hriday( heart) se shukriya.
Aage bhi comments krne Ki guzaarish hai aap logon se.
Aur silent readers aap log bhi hampe thodi mehrbaani kre.
Dil o jaan se guzarish hai.
Ab lagta hai mujhe apni pyaari pyaari baatein( if at all u get a smile on ur face) thodi der k liye band krni chahiye.
Vrna diabetes ho jaiga…..

So ab intro time.
(Saare padhne waale logon se namr nivedan hai ki kripya chehre pe mand muskaan banaye range.dil ko sukoon milega….)

Chalo so let’s introduce u to our characters…..

Leela taneja:- she is d owner of LT group of hotels all over Canada.she is a single mother who is a workaholic and due to this leela and twinkle dont have friendly relations.

Twinkle taneja:- I don’t think she needs any introduction because u must have understood from d first epi dat wat kind of girl she is…..
But just for formality I have to tell u.
She is d only daughter of leela taneja.she hates her mother as she thinks dat her mother is just concerned about money and nothing else.she wants to go back to india where once they used to live because…….(na na na abhi nahi.sabr rakhe.phal gulab jamun milega). Twinkle is a rare combination of beauty and brain.
(Beauty to aap sab log zee tv pe 8:00 pm ko dekhte hi hai/the.par brain mai dikhaungi.
Apne style mein.)
Twinkle is 24 years old and is studying at Canada university along with her buddy Riya (riyaan).aage ka intro u will come to know while reading d epi.
Now comes twinkle ka Riya.
Riya urf riyaan sadaf:- twinkle ka best buddy.riyaan and twinkle’s friendship is known by everybody.jab bhi twinkle ya riyaan dono mein se koi class k bahar dikhta hai.toh samajh lena agle 10 min mein dusra koi na koi siyappa krke bahar aa hi jata hai.
Riyaan’s parents live in USA.isliye apni aazadi ka full on faida uthata hai.
And Iska bhi intro a age epi mein pata chal jaiga.
Steven urf satnam Singh :- twinkle ke ghar pe kaam krta hai and twinkle ise leela ka chamcha kehti hai.
Now more characters aage introduce honge…….

Toh now epi time….

Recap:- twinkle k gaal pe zordaar chata.riyaan ki tang khichai.

Now part 2…
Location:- Twinkle’s house
Time:-12:00 pm
Twinkle is in d same dress jisme usne kal ka stunt kiya tha.dis means she is sleeping from last night.let’s c wat happens.
Omg twinkle is not sleeping actually she is acting.pata nahi kyun.
Suddenly she hears somebody coming towards her room .she quickly closes her eyes .
Suddenly a man enters.he is Steven.
S:- mam, good morning (at 12:00 pm 😛 😛 ) here is ur lemonade.
T:- (slowly opens her eyes) gm leela k chamche.ye lemonade kyun Maine mangvaya kya.
S:- mam leela mam ne bheja hai.fr u .because u were drunk yesterday.
T:- mai aur drunk so k mai uthi hun aur mujhe tu neend mein dikh raha hai( she forgot about yesterday)pagal ho gya hai kya.suddenly (she remembers about yesterday)
Ha ha toh haa kal mai drunk thi but Iska mtlb kya ki tu mujhe lemonade dega .go and bring wat…( she sees levels standing outside her room.) Vodka fr me.
Kal beer pe thi aaj vodka.
Leela,who was standing outside couldn’t control so she entered her room.
L:- steven.,apni mam ko bol do Ki vodka nahi milega.lemonade peena hai to peeye vrna rehne de.
Steven says d something to twinkle.
T:- oye leela sorry sorry leela taneja k cham he bol de inhe ki mujhe lemonade nahi chahiye.aur jaa jake breakfast arrange kr.mujhe apne bf she Milne jaana hai.so pls.go from my room .I need to get ready.
Steven turns to say d same thing to leela but she has already gone.
(Samjhdaar jo hai)
Steven also goes out of d room.
T:- (self talk) so mrs. Leela taneja aaj dekho mai kya kya krti hun.aaj agar aapke paairon tale jameen nahi khiska di toh mera naam bhi twinkle taneja nahi.dekhte jao.kyunki asli picture toh abhi shuru hogi.aaj toh sirf steven k saamne aapki insult hui aaj aadhe Canada k saamne hogi.
Saying dis she texts something to riyaan.
And after texting she edits riyaan’s contact and writes something else instead of it.
(Suspense hai)

Location:- Riyaan’s house.
(Even his house is a beautiful one.let’s go inside.
Yahan ki haalat dekh k mujhe lag raha hai ki mai abhi behosh ho jaungi.
Aaisa lagta hai yahan saalon se safai nahi hui hai.
Kisi ne sach hi kaha hai all dat glitters is not gold ya aaisa hi kuch)
( shabdon pe nahi bhawnaon pe dhyan dena)

Riyaan’s room
Iska room iske hall se zyada khatarnak hai.
Aisa lag raha hai ki yahan kal ladaai hui thi.and now I can’t believe wat I m seeing.
Riyaan is still sleeping (aakhir dost kiska hai)
Suddenly his phone beeps and he gets up.
He rubs his eyes nd says zaroor twinkle ka hoga.
And he was right.it was of twinkle.
He reads:-
Oye kumbhkaran k bacche mujhe pata hai tu so raha hoga.jhooth mat bolna.
Toh jaldi se uth jaa and pls ye mat bolna ki aaj Sunday hai because I know it.and sabse important baat agle 15 mins mein mujhe call krna.aur nahi kiya toh.batane ki zaroorat nahi hai.toh uth jaldi.
R:- pata nahi ab ye kya karegi.bas koi seedha kam kre.vaise I m sure ki koi ulta hi kaam karegi but…
Ya Allah rehem kar.
Chal riyaan beta uth jaa.vrna aaj tera vahi hoga Jo manzur-e- twinkle hoga.
Saying all dis riyaan gets up and goes in his bathroom.
( now I can’t tell u wat he is doing there.sharam naam Ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai).

2 b continued……

Now my epi 2 ends here.
Comments mein tareef zaroor krna.
And sabse pehle comment krna.
Vo bhi haste haste.
And aaj bhi is nacheez ka ff padhne k lie aapka
Dil-o-jaan se shukriya.
Keep Smiling.
Love u all….
Hope u all like it…..
Sorry sorry precap toh bhool hi gai.

Precap:- twinkle ka karnaama…..and leela ke izzat ka mango shake……
🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
Bye.
And haan kal jin sajjanon ne mere ff pe comment kiya tha unke liye
Sayeeda:- apki ye bandi fan ho gayi hai…
Zikra:- aapka hukum sar aakhon pe…
Shagun:- aapki murad zaroor puri karungi…
Chandra:- khao khao khub khao.aur haste raho.love u too.
Jasmine:- u r James bond…
Shreya:- haa mai vahi hun.aur mera fan banne k lie shukriya.
Bulbul:- is nacheez ki khush kismati…
Twinj fan (tamanna), Rashi, lama,:- bas aaise hi comment krte raho.
Dreamer:- I m like ur name a twinj dreamer and btw thank u fr ur comment.
Crazy:- thankuuuuuuuuuuu so so much.
Fan,amii,aastha,kruti,afreen,Sonali:- yaar tussi great ho..
Lover:- haan keh sakte hai.tumhari dosti ka asar hai.

And now fraud,survi and swara…
3 important persons of my life….
Thanq uuuuuuuuuu so so so so much fr being my Frnd…

Credit to: forever fan of twinj

26 comments

  1. Sayeeda

    Ya Allah…..kaise koi itna bol skta hai …….r kisi ka bolna itna cute kaise lag skta hai……
    Tumhare ff se zayada tumhari baatein suune mein maza aya…ab ye mat sochna ke mujhe is nacheez ka ff nai pasand aya …balki bahut pasand aya ….
    Don’t worry I will always comment kyuki mujhpar Allah mehrban hai r hum aap pr …lolzzzz….
    Good going …keep it up…nd yah I wrote this comment having a big smile on my face…love u..

  2. Shatakshi

    |Registered Member

    OMG…that was really epic yaar
    U know I didn’t read ur 1st chapter… But as.soon as I read ur intro…I immediately searched ur 1st part n read it…
    Tu to tei ki pataka h…seriously
    Itni baat koi karta h kyu…but u know what u r soooo cute… N ur ff is just Awesome
    Plzzz do continue the next part soon????

  3. zikra

    Yaar tumto bahoot hi amaizinggggggg ho yaar kya epi tha I mean so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good n han mera hukum sar akhon me rakhne liye shukran shukran luv d way u speak n btw iss nacheez ka naam kya hai plzz do tell me …..???????????????

  4. Shreya

    Oooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm?????a long lasting osm coz u r osm di…aap duniya ki sabse cute wali , lovely wali nacheez ho…aur aapki vo pyaari paayri baatein….muaaah???..apko KO main name Dena chaahti hoon SMILE SWEETHEART… Apne toh mujhe apna ff bana liya…fanfic nahi fan forever…. And the epi was awesome??????

  5. Aastha

    |Registered Member

    ab samaj aaya teri dosti crazy s kaise hui.. tum dono itni cute baate karti ho isliy…
    ff s jyada tu teri baate pyaari thi …luv u dear
    and ya i wrote dis with a smile on my face.

  6. Lama

    Amazing yaar…if u dont mind may i call u Chatter Box….just kidding…pr pata h aisa lag raha tha ke tu mere saamne baithi h or baatein kr rahi h…tujhe pata h tu Allah ka ek bahot payaara sa sample h…dil khush kr diya…love u meri jaan ??????

  7. zarmeen

    ya Allah kya urdu bolti hua masaha allaha dictionary ki bhi zarurat nahi pada gai aap ka ff say aap ki bate muhhhhhha love it ♡♡♡♡♡♡♥♥♥♥♥♥♡♡♡♡♡

  8. Dreamer...arundhati

    |Registered Member

    My god koi itna kaise bol sakta hai….but I loved ur shudh hindi talks…really u r tooo adorable and shatakshi di is right ur tei ka phataka….osum epi
    Dear tu aise hi bolti reh I just love hearing ur bakbak
    And of course reading ur ff
    Ctd asap

  9. Lover

    |Registered Member

    Nice episode dear and eagerly waiting for next episode to see what siyappa twinkle has created now.I miss your ff a lot dear.

  10. sana

    hiiiiiii..amazing talking queen(ur new name dont mind haaa)
    kya baat krti ho tum
    ur epi was just awesome
    waiting for twinkles karnama n leela s izzat kaa falooda
    hehe
    can i ask u wat i ur name n how old r u?

  11. Pinkistar

    Really sayeeda is ryt u r amazing nd ur sense of humour fabulous I guess u r vry funny the way u started is vry good nd u can’t be a nacheez u r………no words to describe u??

  12. bulbul

    Loved it loved it loved it loved it are Yar is nacheez ki gustakhi dil ko chuu gayi and sorry for commenting late actually my schools are open and you have asked my age it is 15 and yours

  13. Bhavika

    |Registered Member

    ye nacheez toh badi mazedaar cheez hai hamare hridya ko sukoon pahunchane ke liye shukriya evam hamari duaayen aapke saath hai kripya aise hi likte rahe tatha JALDI POST KAR YAAR PAKA MAT BORE HO RAHE HAI JALDIIIIIIIII KAR
    SORRRRY I THINK AAP MUJHSE BADE HO BUT I BELIEVE THAT U R LIKE MY FRIEND OR DOSTI MAI SAB JAYAZ HAI ..

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