Twinj os #sorry my love (Valentine day special)~adeeba nd authors note

Hey guys i m back wid a os…plz bear wid me…
Kunj’s pov
Hey i m kunj sarna..the most wanted munda of the college girls r ready to die for me but i only love twinkle…yaa twinkle taneja she used to love me in skul days but i took her as a time pass but when she left i realized my feelings for her…she is new to our college nd i have to hide my identity frm her but i m too famous in college all the girls talk about me so twinkle just know kunj is a boy she doesn’t knows my full name nd she had never talk to me…..she had became a simple girl but in skul days she was a sherni but i love her in all way but now my love for her is pure..i know when i will tell her the truth about me she will be shattered but now i have to tell my thoughts were broken when i saw twinkle she was wearing red gown wid heels nd her hair was open she was looking beautiful but i can’t tell her the truth in front of everyone yaa there is a Valentine function in our college…..
pov ends

twinkle’s pov
I saw him there were many boys nd girls but my eyes caught’s his name yaa kunj…he was wearing a black T-shirt wid black jeans nd grey bleasure….uff he looks so cute but i can’t love any boy after that stupid kunj sarna cheated me…i was just talking wid my frnds when someone caught my wristcan i could see he was kunj….excuse me leave my hand i said…plz come wid me i want to tell u something he said nd took me to a beautiful place which was a set up…
pov ends…

kunj’s pov
I could see she was nervous than i closed my eyes nd in a one breath i said” twinkle i m the whom u loved 10 yrs ago but when u left me i realized my feelings for u can u plz forgive me” nd suddenly chatak!! yes she slapped me…nd said” i trusted u but now ur words mean nothing to me bcoz ur action spoke the truth nd plz don’t ask forgiveness got it” nd she left..i sat on my knees crying bitterly but the only thought struck in my mind was of twinkle where she had gone?? i said nd followed her…
pov ends..

I can’t control my tears i m shattered now again he came in my life i was walking in the road than someone suddenly pulled me nd it was kunj i can see his eyes was red due to continual crying nd than he said” r u mad the car was coming frm behind what had happened to u if i had not come not time…its my problem don’t u interfare got
.i said nd i again added do u want forgiveness than stand in middle of the
road nd i could see he got up nd stands in middle of the road i was shocked nd i saw a bus was coming nd i caught hold his hand nd pulled him nd we both fell this to the other side of the road he was upon me…i said” r u mad u r going to give ur life for me…if this was the only way u can believe me than i m ready to give my life for u i really love u i m srry my love plz forgive me..nd i said NO nd got up nd walked nd i heard he started to sing a song…(guys its frm airlift soch na sake)

Tennu itna main pyaar karan
ek vich sau baar karan
tu jave je mennu chaad ke
maut da intezaar karaan

He gave me a rose nd said happy rose day nd than sat on his knees nd said happy propose day..nd i took the rose nd walked off…

ke tere liye duniya chood di hai
ke tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
main tujhko kitna chahta hun
yeh tu kabhi soch na sake…

He again gave me a chocolate nd said happy chocolate day…thnan he gave me a small teddy nd said happy teddy day…nd i took the chocolate nd teddy nd walked of

kuch bhi nhi hai yeh jahhan
tu hai toh hai isme zindagi
ab mujhko jana hai kahan
ke tu hi safar h aakhri…

He than hold my hand nd said” i know whatever i have done was wrong with u but now i really luv u nd i promise happy promise day…SORRY MY LOVE…my eyes was full of tears nd than i sing..

ke tere bina jina mumkin nhi
na dena kabhi mujhko tu faasle
main tujhko itna chahti hun
ke tu kabhi soch na sake….

nd i gave him a tight bone crushing hug nd said happy hug day….nd he said” we celebrated the Valentine week but kiss day is still left…i was blushing than i hold his coller nd smashed my lips wid his he taste so good…we were bitting sucking eos lips later we parted away…later we reached a 5 star hotel he took me in his arms nd made me lay in the bed…nd came on top me first i was nervous than he said” it’s ok twinkle i won’t force u take ur time..nd was going but i held his hand nd said”plz make me colour in ur love (one of my favorite dialogue)…this was enough for his he dug his face in my neck nd started giving love bites while i moaned his name….he unzipped my gown frm back nd opened it frm half he kissed my soulder giving me wet kisses nd love my bites i was enjoying his torcher nd i opened his shirt nd omg his abs i can’t control now this was my turn to torcher him i satrted giving his love bites soon the clothes started to move frm our body nd he covered us wid blanket nd rest of the night was spent in pleasure able moans….


A/N : guys did u liked it..plz comment guys plz plz plz…nd i m leavingTU don’t be shocked just for a couple weeks so i can’t commenta to any ff or os writers plz forgive me but soon i will start to comment like i do before….nd plz comment in this os…

bye guys

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  1. Sameera

    Wow yaar adeeba soooooooooooo cute loved it sooo much yaar ?????

  2. Sohi

    Nice os dear

  3. Awatif_Rahman

    Adeeba omg why u so good I loved it ❤️❤️ I’m Gona miss you soo much
    With lots of love?????
    Love u?

  4. Simiyy

    Hey Adeeba
    I really enjoyed it
    Hope to see you back soon
    Loads of Love

  5. Presha

    Hey adeeba awesome dear just loved it

  6. SidMin

    Loved it …. The the is was just perfect and more ever beautifully written ….
    Loved it ….
    Will Miss you..
    Love you ❤❤❤

  7. SidMin23

    This is so cute and kunj and twinkle are love ❤️.

  8. Purnima.agrawal30

    Awesome amazing fabulous cute epi

  9. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous

  10. RUTU.....

    Awesome amazing fabulous os dear just loved it to core of my heart
    Love you so much and miss you ????

  11. awsm..os..dear

  12. Mia12

    Awwww adeeba,,
    How cute os u wrote,,?????
    I love it very much,,???
    Twinj romance was,,???
    I will miss u,, plz back soon,,☺☺
    With lods of love,,❤❤

  13. Baby

    ohhh god addy yaar too cute…….☺
    loved it sooooo mch wooaaa….
    beautiful……lovely fabulous os…….. 😀
    lods of love♥

  14. Aamu

    ????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????
    ab kya bolu…???.
    ok let me start…
    pata hai mene tumhara msg padha os read wala…to mene os open kiya…
    1.d os was beautifully written….it was shook cute n d last paragraph was??? awwwwwwwwwww….

    n now…
    adeeeeebbbbbuuuuu u r leaving TU..??
    reason to hoga hi..
    so no worrrry….
    waise b ab me bilkul b TU open nhi karne waaaallli so…..
    milte hai 25 of march..
    hope tu tab tak to aajaegi..?
    will missshhhh my sweet Frnd?
    wid loads of love
    u know from.whom?????????

  15. Shalini15

    Adee my cutei I’m really very sorry for late comment I was too busy so could not read nd comment please maaf kar do ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Anyways it was awesome mind blowing fabulous superb OS. Loved twinj scene so much. It was too cute nd sweet like you. ..

    Love you ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

  16. Ramya

    Aduuuuu awesome amazing
    Dear but u r leaving
    Dis is sad news fr me
    Today sad newsn
    But come back soon
    Love u keep smiling

  17. Aanya_pandey

    Awesome OS dear

  18. Affaa

    Haii Annuu… Yaar what a os.. Today I finished reading ur ff and os… It’s just fantastic yaar… Really I loved it… I must say ur mind blowing… I really loving ur personality… The way u write superb.. Keep it up yaar and love…

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