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TwiNj OS : ROSE By Fenu

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Hello Cuties Sisters and Handsome Brothers !! This is Fenil . I’m here with my first ever OS on Magical Heavenly Couple TwiNj. I choose Rose day due to lake of ideas. Actually another OS is in working progress Raf sissy (YRKKH) and Presha Sissy,Yashu Sissy(TEI) request many time so I read this so can I open my account here also heheh Main OS will take time. Here Twinj have arranged marriage.
Happy Reading !!
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ROSE DAY

Kunj was extremely busy the whole day but one thing he did not forget. His love life was to be the best, thought he. This was an example of having a proper Valentine week after falling in love in an arranged marriage. It was after all his first valentine week. He missed her always, not a second did they spend without missing each other. He waited for the night so that he could make her happy once more.

Twinkle had no clue about anything of this sort; she was busy with the family and tried to live a calm life after all that that had happened, continuous attacks on her and on her Kunj by Pallavi and UV-Anita Aunty (for God sake they are changed now). Kunj meant everything to her. She loved him and did not even think of losing him. Her heart would ache for him always but his professional life was also important.

As evening approached, Kunj was desperate to reach home and surprise Twinkle, his first and last lady love. His life was bliss after she had entered. The immature Kunj was now mature but still jovial. He just wanted time to fly so that their valentine week would start very soon.

Twinkle anticipated his arrival, she was waiting to get his glimpse after the whole day, and newlyweds were missing each other. She also busy with her fashion design projects so time went slowly but love is love na upper se yeh Siyaapa queen chup chap baith nahi sakti but managed today.

The family had a wholesome dinner and the newlyweds retired to their room. As Twinkle opened the room’s door, music played. Balloons were decorated the whole room. There was a table filled with a lot of cards. A corner was having many bouquets of flowers, all kinds of flowers.

“Kunj where are you??” exclaimed Twinkle

“Kunj??”

“In the Flower, My Rose is U.
In the Diamond, My Kohinoor is U.
In the Sky, My Moon is U.
I m only Body, My Heart is U.
Thats Y i always Miss You…!!”

“Kunj…. ” Emotionally attached with those lines of her hubby said for her.

“Twinkle Happy Rose Day!!” He came out from behind the curtains.

“Kunj I Love You….Happy Rose Day ”

He had planned something really special for her. His life was after all filled with a rose.

“Twinkle …I have got you this red dress….with this heart cut of the back…please wear for me…. ”

“Of course Kunj”

Twinkle switched into the western attire while Kunj waited.

“How am I looking” She questioned

“Gorgeous” He was lost in her eyes.

“Kunj…” She broke the eye lock.
He moved around the room while she was clueless and in the end picked a box of donuts, Twinkle ’s favorite.

“Twinkle …your favorite Donut….” He tried to feed her.

“And first bite is yours for all this…” But she feed him.

“Abhi baki hai my Siyaapa Queen!!”

“Kya??”

“Wait and Watch”

He moved to the corner where all the flowers were kept. He picked a Green Rose and came near her.

“Twinkle ….accept this rose of mine….” He handed her the green rose

“Twinkle green roses signify life growth and cheerfulness….I request for a fresh new start of our life by forgetting all the bygones”

“Kunj I’m taking this rose with promise I will support in making our life cheerful….” She spoke as she took the rose

He picked an Orange Rose and came near her.

“Orange roses are for passion, desire and fascination….Twinkle I request your support through my life….for you are my passion and desire” He handed while he spoke

“Kunj I’m accepting this rose and I would be your side always and Thanks for permit me for my fashion designing career ” She collect it and thanked him.

He picked a White Rose and came near her.

“White signifies truth, purity and innocence…Twinkle you are my jeewan sangini and one who is truthful and pure….I love your innocence….your smile…Be mine and do more Siyaapa ” He handed her the While rose of peace.

“Kunj….Life wouldn’t be like this without your childish and innocent face…I am always yours , you always tolerate my stupidest actions and tantrums !!” She accepted him wholeheartedly.

He picked a Yellow rose for her.

“Twinkle with this yellow rose I request you to be my friend though my life and be my partner in crime and companion ” He presents the rose.

“Kunj, life is meant to be bound with friendship and I bet I would be a better friend than a wife….and of course You’re your best companion ….” She accepted.

Kunj forgot to tell her that all of this was being recorded on the camera.

He then got a pink rose for his beloved.

“Twinkle ….Pink shows that the person is cute, adorable and blissful….You are cute and adorable….You are bliss in my life…I LIKE YOU”

“Kunj you the one filling my life with memories and making it blissful….”

He now tied a cloth around her eyes and went and got a special rose.

“Ab kholo!!”

“Kunj yeh kya hai??”

“Twinkle ….yeh RED ROSE accept karo….I LOVE YOU”

“Kunj….You are my life and RED ROSE toh mera hi hai…after all you are that RED ROSE…..I LOVE YOU TOOO!!!”

“Toh ek dance??”

“Zaroor Mr. Romantic Sarna!!”

Kunj sat on his knees ask Twinkle for dance while forwarding hand. Twinkle puts her hand in Kunj’s hand and smiles.

“Janam janam janam saath chalna yunhi
Kasam tumhe kasam aake milna yahin
Ek jaan hai bhale do badan ho judaa
Meri hoke humesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna alvida”

Kunj’s one hand was resting on Twinkle’s waist and Twinkle’s on his shoulder and their other hand entangled. They dance slowly and beautifully.

“Meri subah ho tumhi aur tumhi shaam ho
Tum dard ho tum hi aaraam ho
Meri duaaon se aati hai bas ye sadaa
Meri hoke humesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna alvida
Aha ha ha o
Meri hoke humesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna Alvida”

Kunj then lifts his lady up in the sky, and then he gets her back to the ground and they dance matching each other’s step. And then Twinkle is in Kunj’s arms.

“Teri baahon mein hai mere dono jahaan
Tu rahe jidhar meri jannat wahin
Jal rahi agan hai jo ye do tarfa
Na bujhe kabhi meri mannat yahi
Tu meri aarzu, main teri aashiqui
Tu meri shayari, main teri mausiqi”

Kunj twirled her around and pulled her more closer… leaving no distance between them.

“Talab talab talab bas teri hai mujhe
Nason mein tu nasha banke ghulna yunhi
Meri mohabbat ka karna tu haq ye adaa
Meri hoke hamesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna Alvida”

They go away from each other then runs to each other and Kunj lifts Twinkle and made round. He pulls her close and share a eye lock They were lost in each others eyes so deeply.

“Meri subah ho tumhi aur tumhi shaam ho
Tum dard ho, tum hi aaraam ho
Meri duaaon se aati hai bas ye sadaa
Meri hoke humesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna Alvida
Aa alvida
O na na”

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@Ramya Sissy , Appiwala Birthday.

First OS for Twinj or SidMin. I’m very happy finally I write something for them and list is still pending Archi,ishveer,karvi,Prem and Heer,NeiRa,IshPreet,RuMya many more but ideas hi nahi aa rahe.Koi ache ideas ho na toh mujh jaise innocent soul ko de sakte ho aap. Aaj toh Two one ff and this OS post kiye hain ab two days ke baad Archi and again ff…lol yeh PM jaisi cheez na hoti toh achha hota sab msg send karte rehte who Ff kab post karega who kab….lol no mind. (hey bhagwan aaj toh ladki o ki tarah bak bak ho gayi )

@yaashika, u said in Aamu’s OS that I m good writer but how can u say anyways this is my first for TEI.Thank you dear.

@Raf,Yashu,Presha, Thank you for req nd see today I wrote.

Just give your precious views !!

Keep loving Twinj and TEI !! Abhi bhi time milta hain toh mein toh Zee Anmol ki visit kar leta hoon abhi toh Mahi wala track chal raha hain…

Love Yaa !!

See you soon with Twinj and Simple+Yuvraj/yuvi (combo name comment mein dena).

92 Comments
  1. Presha

    Aww😍😍😍
    So cute nd sweet…
    Just loved it…
    Fantastic os…
    U know the best…

    Thank u for this….
    Next soon…😜😜😜
    Byee

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much.
      U r first comment special for me.
      Glad that u liked it and found it as cute.

  2. Aamu

    Mindblowinggg… 😍😍..
    Sweet and cute one broo…!
    It was amazing..
    Well loved twinj dance at the end..
    The song..! The dance and twinkle’s dialoguess…!

    Perfect..!!😍👍

    Loved it..👍

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Aamu.
      Glad that you liked it.

  3. Yashasvi

    Yehhhh at last u posted bhai….
    thank u yrrrrr…..
    aapne meri wish par isse post kr dia…..
    and yes u did it….
    i knew that u would do it……
    well it was so simple, sweet , lovely….
    in love wid it’s simplicity…….
    really i just loved it yrrrrr……
    wowww twinkle is sooo lucky to get so many roses that too of different colors….
    wish some one gives mee tooo…. hahaahhaa…..
    well vesse i dont like simple n yuvraj’s jodi so please if u can take any body else….
    it would be better…
    vesse choice is yours n i would definately read that os too….
    waiting fr it…. n i asked for a funny os ….
    please make next one funny….
    ok byeee bro,,,,,

    and ramya again happy b’day …..

    Keep smiling and stay blessed😘😘💕💕
    LOVE u !!!!!!!!!!!!! 💖💕💖💖💕
    Your Yashu !!!!!!!!!!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Yashu.
      Yeah I have to fulfill my sisters wishes.
      I love simple and Yuvi’s pair…so comprising with that.
      I started Avneil FF too but there was a not respond so I stopped in middle.
      Glad that u liked it.
      I love simplicity so I also love to add in my work.
      Will try to make it funny.

  4. Cheena2001Cp

    Super Awsome Fenil. 👌👏👏 It was really beautifully written …..
    And I got a that is YuvLe [ Yuvraaj+Simple]
    I knew that Yuvle will be satisfied in TEI also and it did happen…..YuvLe means Yuvraaj and Simple 😀😂😂
    Byee 😘

    1. Cheena2001Cp

      Waise Yashasvi ne sahi kaha….now I think AvNeil is a beautiful couple. Even I didn’t like Uv and simple…isse acchi toh woh Annie ayi thi naa woh hi lagti hai

      1. Yashasvi

        sahi keh rhi he tu cheenu… aur tu mujhe yashasvi kab se bolne lagi ?????
        so formal yrrrrrr…….. nt fair…..

      2. Cheena2001Cp

        Aree Meri cutie Yashu 😘…

      3. Fenil

        I m fan of Avneil…I started FF but there was no response so I stopped in middle.

      4. Ayesha51

        yah cheenu….me too…agree withu…I also like avneil …its a beautiful couple. …I don’t liked uv’s character in tei n his chemistry with simple but in naamkaran neil is rocking the screen with avni…♡

    2. Fenil

      Thank you so much Cheena Dear.
      glad that u liked it.
      Thanks for the shipping name.
      I love simple and Yuvi’s pair.

      1. Cheena2001Cp

        Sorry Fenil bro…..no Bhaiya 😃

  5. Twinj

    Hey ya
    Toh finally twinj ke liye likh diya…aur woh sanskari shivaay wala kabh post kar rahe hae…n this was just so beautiful…awesome …lovely.. simple tha but it was written so beautifully…mindblowing..

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Dear Twinj.
      Glad that u liked it.
      Sanskari Shivaay ….I posted 2(A) …will post soon.

  6. Twinj2000

    Nice os bro !!
    Keep posting

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Dear Twinj2000
      Glad that you liked it.
      Will try.

  7. Superb os loved it
    Next post soon

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Dear
      Glad that u loved it.

  8. Shalini15

    Lagta hai kisi par mera asar ho gaya hai bolne ka 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 firstly welcome to our TEI page 😀😀😀😀😀 nd I’m happy to see your writing piece on twinj even I was about to say you that write something on my favourite couple Twinj nd here it is 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 Anyways don’t worry aaj jyada bak bak nahi karungi 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
    Awesome mind blowing fabulous superb OS. Dialoges were amazing. Loved twinj dance so much. Do come with another story.
    Nd about any idea… can you write any article on combo of Twinj nd AbhAran??.based on friendship nd spicy love story ??? Actually it’s my wish to read something like that on both of my favourite couples so told you. It’s not pressure on you. Hope you won’t mind 😊😊
    Aaj bhi jyada long ho gaya 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
    Bye
    Lots of love 💛💛💛💛💞💞💞💞

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Dii.
      Glad that u liked it.
      Hehe sayad sangat Ka asar friendship ki Hain aadat large hi hi page hi.
      Yaa I can write…will take some more time.

  9. Awesome…..loved it a lot
    Sorry mujhe bade bade comments likhna nahi aata…but mujhe sachi mein bohat accha laga aapka os

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Vanisha Devi.
      glad that u liked it.

  10. Aamna_2690

    PERFECT 😍😍
    Loved it ❤❤
    Amazing OS 💕💕
    It was Lovely and Cute 😘😘
    It was beautifully written 😍😍
    Well potrayed emotions 💜💜
    The way Kunj gave her roses and her return promises were just fantastic 😍😍
    U did a Great Job Bro 🖒🖒
    Hope to see U writing more on TWINJ 😜😜
    Bye 😊

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Dear.
      Glad that u liked it.
      So many beautiful words u wrote…Thanks a lot.

  11. Lokesh

    Simple +yuvraj = sivraj , siraj or sivi ( simple n yuvi )

    1. Fenil

      Thanks for the combo name.

  12. Lokesh

    Os was really awesome. Ur selection of song their timings , info abt roses , dance steps as per timing , romantic lines even dat dress. Everything was just perfect and adorable. Keep going bro our well wishes are always with u 😍😍😍😍.

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Lokesh bro.
      Your first comments means a lot for me.
      Glad that u liked it.
      Thanks for wishes.

  13. SidMin23

    Cute and sweet os and welcome to twinj world and waiting a lots more of ff and is from u keep posting on twinj.

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Sidmin dear.
      Glad that u liked it and found it as cute.
      Will try

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much dear SS
      Glad that u liked it.

  14. Yashu24

    It’s awesome Bhai just can’t say its wonderful, amazing!!! Beautiful!! 😍😍😍😍😍 Aapko kya pta bhia jo serial maine deakhe bhi nhi na unka fan bhi aap bna dete ho ❤
    Everything was awesome!!! 😍😍😍 Just today I opened your wall and found this os so I thought to read it and it was my totally right selection I loved it very very very very much ❤❤
    Keep writing like this Bhai
    Keep smiling
    Take care ❤

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Micky sista.
      Glad that u liked it.
      Yeh jyada ho Raha Hain…aap na MERI basic tariff large ho phir mere cheeks pinkish ho Jaye Hain.
      Kidding….Kam se Kam mein much toh Kar paya Aapne shows Nahi dekhe but OS see love ho Gaya show se.

  15. First of all I would like to thank Uuuuuu bhaiya for writing this OS…
    Thanx a lot for fulfilling my wish n for sending the link too…
    I’m Sooo glad bhaiya!!

    Now Coming to this OS…
    It’s a wonderful one bhaiya…Amazing…
    Liked this concept a lot…Totally it was awesome bhaiya…Each n every dialogue was just perfect bro…I must say u r a GREAT WRITER Shinchan bhaiya.. u have described Each n every colour of rose very wellll bhaiya…..
    Waiting for another which is in progress… it’s ua first work on TwiNj but it’s a Fabulous one bhaiya..,. Aap jaise writer k lye toh kuch bhii impossible nahi hai bhaiya…. I mean u told na k due to lack of ideas, U have included rose day in this OS..That’s why… Very welll done bro… I’m Sooo happppyyyyy while reading this…Thanx a lot bhaiya….Eagerly waiting for another OS..keep writing bhaiya…Ua works r worth reading bro..

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much RAF Sissy.
      glad that u loved it.
      Yeah…Aapne one wish ki Woh toh mujhe Puri Karni hi this na.after all I love my sister.
      Bahut tariff ho gayi.
      Sinclair bhaiyaa loves u a lot.

  16. Aap bhi girls ki tarah bak bak hogaye…Lol…

    1. Fenil

      Hhhhh…lol

  17. Ayesha51

    awsm fenil bhayu
    loved the concept

    plz post some more articles on twinj

    plz plz plz bhayu

    fabulously written

    I’m also like ur sis naa

    & u know my mamu also born in the same year ….

    u have seen his pic already

    can I too become ur sis ….???

    love u bhayu ♡

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Aayesha sissy.
      Glad that u loved it.
      Yaa I remembered your Mamu’s pic still.
      Not need to ask.
      Love yaa more.

  18. Ramya

    Hey thank you thank you thank you so much
    You don’t know me indeed you posted it on my B-Day
    And Im seeing today
    So sorry for it dear
    And you really made my day.
    Thank you so much
    It’s such a lovely and amazing person os the way you described about flower I loved it.
    Post more and more on twinj
    Will love to read it.
    Thank you once again
    Have a great day

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Sissy.
      Glad that u loved it.
      It’s indeed happy wala day my entry on Twitter on you birthday Yaad rahegi life Bhar.
      Thanks a lot.
      Love yaa

  19. It was so cute..
    You can use simraj (sim+yuvraj)

    I m also the member of TU but i havent logged in now.

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much dear
      Glad that u found it as cute.
      ohh no prob, your comment means a lot.

  20. awesome fenil
    lovely os!
    keep writing post on twinj
    tum pure valentines week pr os kyn ni likhte? try it !
    I m sure u will write amazing!

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much yashika
      Glad that u loved it.
      nice idea…U gave me list of days…i will think

  21. Kiya1234

    Nice os
    😍❤️❤️❤️

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Kiya.

  22. TuttiFrutti

    Its just Fab Fenil Bro.
    Awesome OS on Twinj
    Super se bhi upper.
    Marvelous

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Shirali.
      Glad that u loved it.

  23. Manuu

    U know what this is my first OS which I hav read in tu..bhai i must say it was super se upar..jst luvd it..

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Manu.
      glad that u liked it.
      Wah kya baat Hain achha his Aapka time waste Nahi hua.

      1. Manuu

        Bilkul waste nahi hua bhai..aise kaise waste hoga..once again it was awesome os

    2. Fenil

      Thanks Manu.

  24. Welcome to TU bhai
    I didn’t knew that you write so well
    It was fabulous ❤……Amazing❤….. Fantastic ❤…… Marvellous ❤……. Awesome ❤……Awesome❤………❤
    U nailed it bhai
    Loved it to the core
    Lack of words to describe this is beauty
    It made me Speechless
    Come with a ff on twinj
    keep ​smiling
    Take care

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Zoya sissy.
      Glad that u liked it.
      Arey mere writing ke charche toh poore TU mein Hain…lol
      FF Ka sochunga

  25. Its amazing bro…..i read it now as i was ill….its super amazing and its ur first os that i read u r really a great writer. and flowers scene was superb..do come up with a new os

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Maryam.
      Glad that u liked it.
      Will try to write more.
      Take care.

  26. Sana785

    It was superb…..
    Outstanding….
    Mind-blowing…..
    Fabulous…….

    1. Fenil

      Thanks a lot Sana Dear.
      glad that u liked it.

  27. Nishuu

    It was awesome amazing mind blowing
    Just loved it sooo much
    Plzzz post like this type of stories
    Keep smiling

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Nish Dii.
      Glad that u loved it.
      Will try to write more but for that I have to finish my current works….hehe

  28. Sachu

    Hi Fenuu loved ur OS. Keep writing and always keep loving ur sisters like this bro. It was great reading and who told ur lacking ideas dude. Lots of love from me n ur little nephew………

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Sachu Dii.
      Your comment means a lot .
      Glad that u loved it.
      Yaa will never stop writing.
      Love yaa Sissy and Champ.

  29. Aarti32

    Bhai, aap bhi na..ab Meri bucket list mein ye roses wala part bhi add ho gya h, all thanx to U!! Lagta h bohot research ki h aapne roses pe..n wo kaam kr gyi, kyuki ye ab tak ka Mera favorite OS h

    1. Fenil

      Hehe kya baat Hain ideas collect Kar rahe ho aap.
      Aaru yaa for OS some research Kiya that.
      Thank you so much
      Glad that u loved it and it became Ur fav one.

  30. hi bhai i loved the concept of ur os
    I too basically write conceptual os’s so urs was like icing on cake
    u nailed it
    kya kehne aapki writings ke , truly ur writings r popular all over TU
    The os was aweeeeeeeeeeesomeeeeeeeee
    I am lacking words
    Now important suchna
    update do dil and anika ka sanskaari shivaay soon
    I love those ff’s ff’s especially my ishkara’s do dil
    i read it just bcoz of ishkara
    Update asap

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Polly sissy.
      glad that u loved it.
      U always do comment on my work.
      I will first finish TS then will continue FF.

      1. just like u always support me , i too
        thanks for ur constant support as well bade bhaiya

  31. twinj i love them
    It was amazing work.
    loved it to the core.

    1. Fenil

      Thanks a lot

  32. i love the concept of ROSES
    Love this OS
    Awesome
    Mind cather OS

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Dear.
      Glad that you liked it.

  33. Awesome OS
    Twinj missing them.

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much.

  34. Awesome OS.
    i love the Roses and thinking behind it

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Riyu.

  35. Wow
    its so beautiful.

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much

  36. Kya bolo yeh bahut hi achha tha, i don’t know english

    1. Fenil

      Awesome that u came.
      Thanks.

  37. very Nice

    1. Fenil

      Thanks Dear

  38. Lovely OS

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much

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