Twinj OS….( by ridhima)

Hey guys i know i was nt supposed to write bt kya karoon….sidmin jeene hi nhi dete….??…..
So i m nt able to write a long part so thought to give a shrt Os… which i have written in 3 days…??….
Vaise i m choooooo chooory ki i m making u w8 for my ff this much….bt kya karoon yeh kambhakat haath likhne hi nhi deta……
Nd i dont want to rush wid the story… so i hope u will understand me like always….. vaise after this pakka i will try to be regular….( haww….mazak nhi hai sachi muchi….)…. kya karoon dr ne last warning di hai toh pange nhi le skti na…. varna hospital mein admit kr denge….???….

Acha ok enough of my bak bak..lets start the story……

The story starts wid the current situation…..(wid a feww changes….woh age jake pta chl jayenge)…
Rocky( naman shah) came nd asked twiraj for planning his wedding…. they agreed….
Rocky left the place smirking evilly….
Rocky(in mind.)- nw i will take my complete revenge…jst wait nd watch mr &mrs. Yuvraj luthra…

Inside

Twiraj were so happy getting the new contract…… bt suddenly tw eyes get wet…
Tw(to uv)…- uv i m lucky to have a friend like u…..
Uv- ooooo….madam enough of this drama stop this right here….dont start meri maa….. u look good while fighting not wid tears..( wiping off her tears….)…..
Tw- let me speak today uv…. i m nt doing drama…i jst want to thank u….for watevrr u have done to me….bt this fake marriage is spoiling ur life….get married….nd live ur life happuly…
Uv- o ms.amritsar stop it…meri maa mujhe shaadi nhi krni abhi..let me stay single nd happy….
( guys twiraj are nt actually marrried jst pretending in front of their families…)….

Few days passes……
They strted preparing for rocky’s marriage….
Rocky tried his level best to create rifts between them nd somehow gets successful in this…..
Twinkle again strted thinking tht uv is nt changed nd he is pretending…….
( i dont want to drag this part bcz i m nt able to write sorry…???)…

On the day of engagement……

Twiraj were arguing on a matter…..wen rocky came from behind nd make uv arrested for killing kunj…… all wanted to stop rocky…..
Tw was moving forward toward him….- mr.rocky hw can u say this…??? Uv is nt responsible for this…nd hw can u say all wen u dont know anything abt us….????( almost shouting)….
Rocky held her from her shoulders nd said calmly…- tw i know all this bcz i m kunj…..
Firstally no one listens this ..bt after realising all got shocked…. nd was nt able to believe their ears….
Tw- no..u r nt…hw can u say that….??? Do u have sme proof….???
Rocky- u wnt proof of our love tw….( teary eys…) bt its ok if u wnt i wll give u…he showed her his reports of plastic surgery, dna reports etc etc….
Tw was nt able to believe this….tears started to rolll down her eyss……
Rocky- nt only this bt uv tried to kll me i swear… i was thinking u wrong….bt tat day i gave uu contract i cme back nd heard ur talks…. i know u r nt at fault……i love u tw i love u soo much…( saying this he hugged her……..
Tw was still in shock….she was happy tht kunj is back bt this all is nt less than any dream for her…..tears were continously flowing down her eyes…..
they departed…..uv was abt to be taken to jail bt tw stopped him nd said he is changed… they forgived uv nd all set then…..
rocky- tw today is my engagement…bt i want to be again get engaged to u…will u provide me wid the honour…..
Tw was still confused bt she nods yes…..
They were standing on the stage……
Tw( in mind) – i dont know why i m feeling soo restless…. kunj is back to me…i shud be happy br wat is happening to me….. o baba g plz save me…..???……
Rocky was abt to put ring in her finger bt the ring fell down nd rolled nd rolled nd stopped near smeones feet….the person bend nd picked up the ring…..nd the person is no one else then kunj…..( sidhant….???…)… he was as usual looking hot bt was injured…??…. his charming face was having so much cuts nd all forhead was bandaged…..
All were shocked to see him….???……bt our kunj is kunj
Kunj- siyappa queen……u wnted to marry him….????….
Listening this tw nods her head in negative nd ran to him nd hugged him tightly…….
Twinj were hugging eo…..bt reality striked tw mind nd she departed herself….
Tw- kunj tum…??? (Pointing towards injuries…)… yeh ???? Agr tum kunj ho toh woh kaun hai….????
Kunj- tum batage ya main bataon….???( to rocky…)…seeing his silent….he continues….
Tw i m kunj….he is rocky….. once was my friend…. bt in our trip to goa…he was the one who tried to kill me wid anita anty…. uv tried to save me…. bt he didnt kill me…he saved me… nd torcherd me everyday…. bt wen he said me he is going to marry u …i was nt able to stop myself nd i managed to cme here….. bt still i dont know why he did this….????
Rocky….-( finally speaking)..- huhhh…..why i did this ???? I did this bcz i hate u mr.kunj sarna… i hate u soo much… u were always the no.1 in everything… i have done much more hardwork then u…bt still i was always lacking behind…….. so i thought to live ur life….. i have nt killed u bcz i wanted to show u hw it feels wen ur smething….is snatched from u….
Bt i think that was the most worst decision of mine…i shud have killed u then nd their only…..
Chataaakkkkkkkk…..
Yup yup our tw slapped him……
Then he wss taken away from their……
Tw went to kunj…. he opened his arms to let her cme in….bt instead tw forwarded her hand….nd wid eyes tell her to put ring in it…..
Kunj understands it nd decorated her finger wid the ring…..staring her lovingly….
Like tis they get engaged nd remarried….. .

Amd happily lived ever aftrr…..

**********THE END************

Guys i knownit must nt be that good hw it must be…??? Bt plz tamatar eggs jutiya chapaaal mat phenkna bahut dard mein likha hai….aaaahhhh mmy…????…….
Sry sry…plz leave ur precious comments…..
I will be back soon….( shyad…)…
Miss me haann..??? I toh miss u all sooooooooo much..

Love u all….???

27 comments

  1. Sara

    OMG if only the show goes on like this…I would be the happiest person alive! This was so good!!!! Deep down still wishing for Sidhant to come back……

  2. Shreya

    Trust me riddhima…after soo long i’ve felt this good while reading something from this new track!!!! Tere writing mein ghee shakkar! Hope that siddhant comes back!!!! I’ll be very happy!!!!

  3. Lovely

    |Registered Member

    Ridhiiiii..di awesome.. U know day be4 yesterday when I had a glance on Tei I thought that Rocky isn’t even like the shadow of Kunj..may be till today real Kunj is a captive of him..And something like this happens…
    And see today you wrote it …amazing aap toh antaryΓ ami ho..????
    Love you..and plz plz pange mat lo…do rest properly.. and I dono about others but I can wait for As much time as you take to post again……
    Get Well Soooooo oooo oooo oooo oooo oooo n???

  4. Angita

    |Registered Member

    Im missing you and awesome awesome awesome os. Take care of yourself
    Varna hospital meh admit karni hongi,samji?

  5. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Yrr ..Riddhi thank u soooo much for writing this OS…I felt like it is happening in real….
    I just hope once TEI writer’s read this nd make the current story plot change to this one….it’s so good …
    Hope our Sid come …miss him a lot…

  6. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    ridhima…….this is just awesome kash ye real wala TEI ki story hoti
    take care of urslf and get well soon

  7. Saby

    |Registered Member

    riddhima…….
    after sidhants jdj this segment shud surely come…..
    i just pray this happens in tei……..
    the same way wat uh potrayed…….
    loved it….. missing kunj’s killer one eyebrow wala look….
    ovio of sidhant… naman doesnt know to do that….

  8. Aishwarya.twinjfan

    |Registered Member

    Great ridhima it ws just fantastic.
    I hope this happens in real TEI also.
    U knw one thing even i ws thinking just the same story in my mind for my ff anyways no prob i’ll the concept.bye
    Nd ur OS was fab
    Do cont

  9. Aishwarya.twinjfan

    |Registered Member

    I think u shud post thiz OS in fb TEI pg so the admins of TEI may consider this nd bring bck sid after jdj. This was just a suggestion if u want u can do it.

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      I would love to do it….agr isse sod wapis aye…. bt i dont know hw to do it…????….

      Vaise thanks for ur comment…

      • Aishwarya.twinjfan

        |Registered Member

        Sry nw only i saw ur reply
        Ur welx
        Nd one bad news ridhi:
        Due to today’s epi if we see the story this cant happen bt after sid’s jdj they can bring back our kunj(sid) by showing tht kunj undergoes a plastic surgery nd gets his former face

        Nd i hv been tring to contact sid if he will join back TEI after jdj bt i didnt get a reply so if i get i will post abt it in my ff epi.

        Nd ya pls do read my ff tere mere pyaar twinj.

        Bye. Luv u πŸ˜™πŸ˜™

  10. kinjal

    Arey yar awsome tha???my emotions are beyond the world after reading yr ff…are sach me ham sid k fan logo ki tumne unkahi wish ye ff puri ki…kaaasshhhh real TEI me bhi kuch esa ho jaye to i will like this only????

  11. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Wow wished the serial too could end like this I mean happy ending with our SidMin πŸ™‚ won’t it be good I think the CV’s should learn from You

  12. Baby

    |Registered Member

    omg rishima di u wre amazing kya bolu di kash aisa asliyat mein ho jaye u we crct thnk god u bot sid bck di luv u soooooooooooooooooo mch kya likha hai di sch men osm

  13. Monica

    |Registered Member

    Really hoping for the serial to take this track. anyways coming to your os, it was short and amazing. One small request… if you dont mind and have time .. could you read my ff called – the enticing little incident (Twinj). Sorry to concern you. In addition .. do write more os.

  14. Fatarajo

    |Registered Member

    Now I really really wish this happens in the show for real now getting hopes for Sid to comeback soon πŸ™‚ I hope somehow TEI makers read this and really do so and then once jhalak ends they show sid’s re entry again wow what an idea riddima. Hats off to u yaar, I was really missing sidmin badly but ur ff made me smile πŸ™‚

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