TWINJ -MAVI Love circle (Episode 20)

OMG! just cant believe that in such small time i reached to 20th episode of my FF..
plzz one request to all do comment today with ur full open soon i m thinking to end this FF soon..
so if u love my FF do comment and let me know…(silent readers its specialy for u)
and one more thing….i know i m concentrating more on Twinj for few episodes
but guys dont orry more intresting is also planned for MaVi..
now enough of nonsense talks and lets procedd with the episode..

All see twinj comming in and smiling..
and leela says i think both are ready for marriage..

all say that tommo they shall call panditji for deciding the date..(muhurat)
just then adii have flash backs
how he saw kunj caring for twinkle and he recognized him as Riyas brother..but still dint utter a word…

just then he is interrupted by a voice YUVi
screeming This marriage cannot happen and enters angirly..
all were shocked at his behaviour..
he then makes a puppy cute face and says i m Best friend of kunj as well as twinkle and i m not called here..leela aunty and usha aunty u have disappointed me a lot..
but i liked that u arragned me something which i ll eat now..and feed Twinj by their own hands..
and what is that leela and usha ask together..
he removes the plate of samosa which he had hid back and goes towards Twinj..
who make ajeeebbb faces seeing samosas..
and get scared..
they both say they are full..
k-aree i just eat 2 full samosas which twinkle bought for me ..
t- i m on diet so i cant compromise with know na yuuvi…
so please..u-aree hows that possible..u guys are going to mmarry and u must have it by my hands..
he forces them to have ..
and comes to kunj..
twinkle gets worried..
and says sure we will have ..
kunj looks at her in pain and gives an tuff look..asking her no..
she says but first u..
leela-ohooo u guys continue..
she says we all are going for gurudwar..
as all is happening so good..
twinj shievs off relief..that they are escaped..
adi and riya stay back but they dont notice the..
once all lev..
twinj start hitting yuvi..
and uv is running here and their..
riya says-these all 4 look so good na..
and twinj look made for each other couple..
adii- even we look made for each other couple..
you neva said so..
btwn kunj is lucky to have Twinkle in his life..
so dooes twinkle replies riya..
and they both laugh and enjoy twinj and mavi’s mastii..
just then twinj feed uv..samosass
uv screems–cheeee.
who the hell prepared this yar…
any one can die eating this..
twinj start laughing..
and says so they were saying no to eat..
twinkle and u guys planned something else but this siyaapaaa queen became 2 steps forward and more over din tell me too..
twinkle interrupts and says ohh really..u din say me that u were only riya bhabhis brother..
and kept quite seeing me in such state..
i had said u i ll die but not marry any one else other than u..
u know how mad i had became ..
u gave me such good gift on my bday and i got shock of my life too..
ess laga zase paro tale zammen kisak gayeee(sorry,i dont know englisg version as ts a famous proverb of hindi)
kunj eyes her lovingly..
and says but i had said u..that i ll make everything correct..
Adii and riya were listening this..
twinj have an eye lock…mahi corrects her throt..
and they come to sences,…
twinkle turns to MaVi and asks if they are involved in kunjs plan too..

they nod no..
and twinkle and MaVi kunj..
k-What?(by making his eyebro bow)
they take cusions and start hitting him..
and run all three run behind him..
when they are shocked too see adii and riya standing behind them..
giving angry looks..
t-bhai..actually..i wanted..
riya and adii- its not fare..u guys cant be spared..
twinj and Mavi look at each other and are speechless..
riya-and adii together..tum teen aurkunj ek..
not fare..
both also get cusions and all start pillow fight..
kunj riya and adii one team
and twinkle and maVi other..
and all get tired..
and sit having some snaks..
r-twinkle by the way ur plan was awome..
when ever ur bhai would go mad on me after marriage..i ll give him warnings that if he dont bend down then they she ll make samosas..
the same way..
add-then i promise i ll neva miff with u..
all laugh..
twinkle-bhai..i know u got to know now that i and kunj loved each other from before..and i dont want the same to repeat and hurt u..
so we 4 want to talk to u something..
twinj look atmavi asking them to speak up..
they are shocked to listen what twinkle is trying to tll.
mahi-dii plzz.its not right time..
t-but its necessary..
k-yeah mahii twinkle is right..
u should..
adii is confused
twinkle says if not u..ill say..
uv-says no not now twinkle plzzz..
adii-i m relly worried now plzz tell..
t-bhai vo..
yuvi and mahi love each other..
adii-gets up and says what..
he looks at mahi..whos bending down her head..
and then at yuvi who is ignoring eye contact..
just then leela usha and all enter are happy to listen it..
leela hugs..mahi and says u cant imagin how good m i feeling right now…
now the friendship of me and anita which we had since i was married ..will turn to a relation..i ll call her noww.
just then they see the hall and says what is this…
all start gigglingg..
and riya speaks up saying we were playing and this happened..
leela calls up servent to clen the mess..

all leave for their home after lunch..
precap-leela informs anita..anita is super happy..
and uv decides to tell all that he dont want to marry..

feel free to comment as u are neva charged fpr commenting
jokes apart hope u liked it


Credit to: crazy


  1. Ur hater

    Thank god ur ending ur dumbb FF…
    U may feel bad but I literally hate ur FF like anything..
    I mean I love Twinj a lot..
    But ur FF has no story line at all..
    N is just dragging a lot..
    Make twinkle n kunj one n mahi yuvi one n end this shit..
    N it bl***y FF..

    • crazy

      I m really sorry that u din love the FF..
      I wish u could have said it b4 I could have changed the story line
      Neva mind tq for telling me this..
      I ll try my best to write a perfect FF..

      • Ur Hater i think ur mind is screwed
        hey crazy dont mind it i think he has gone mad
        ur ff is one of d best i read ever and yeah dont listen to thm
        i love ur ff we all love urr ff its mindbloeing

  2. Ruchi

    The epi was superb… But i am confused bcoz of the Precap…
    but i know u must planned smthng intrstng… 🙂

  3. Ur hater

    Aiyoooo plz stop crazy who Eva u r..
    As I literally hate ur ideas n writing so need of farmality
    N what ever u try to include it ll not be good I felt so..

    • Sanam

      Excuse me whoever u r
      Stop passing such cheap comments
      If u don’t like this ff ,then simply quit reading it
      Don’t u dare criticise anyone
      Crazy u r an outstanding writer and plz don’t stop ur ff as there are many lovers of it

    • Ruchi

      Who so ever u r…
      keep ur mouth shut… If u r so genius than write ur own ff…
      nd if u dnt like crazy’s ff than stop reading this ff…
      Crazy has not invited u to read this ff…
      Nd mind ur tongue…
      Sorry for being rude… But u only forced us to be rude with u…

    • Rashi verma

      Can u write better than this???? No ……she is a brilliant writer and we all love her ff…..stop giving negative comments……

  4. panchi

    crazy i jst love ur ff dear …… i rly love ur storyline from d core …….. and d epi was jst awesome ……. u r jst superb , mindblowing yaar ….. eagerly wtng fr d nxt one …….

  5. Anaita

    @Ur hater if u r so fabulous, fantastic, superb or whaterevr than why the hell u dont start ur own ff… who are u to pass such nasty comments on anyone… if u dont like then dont read no one is asking u…
    and crazy ur ff is just crazy like u… its just awesome… plz dont pay importance to these haters… u r unique in ur own self.. u r d bst… u have to continue ur ff for ur ff lovers…

  6. ur ff is awesome and ur ideas r amazing.plzzzzzzzzzzz don’t stop ur ff due to a single one’s dislike. I am an almost silent reader but today i can’t control my silence. So plzzzzzzzzzzz don’t mind anyone’s cheap comments. I am eagerly waiting for next one plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post soon

  7. Ur hater

    Could youvall pls stop…it ..i know u all also dono like it n jst say good fr hr sake … pleasE stop yr nonsence

  8. Lara

    Wtf!!! Have u lost UR HATER????? I mean srsly how cud a normal human being not like such an amazing ff… god have mut given u the talent of recognizing someonese talent instead of b***cing oabout someones extraordinary creativity…… damn!!! What sort of insane person r u???

    Anyways.. crazy…loads of love yaar.. i meqn its just fantastico…. n plzzz dont end ur ff yaar.. its soo damn gud n u dont need to end this ff if because of sum abnormal insane ppl… plzz post soon the next update.. muaaah…..n more longer episode yaar….plzz….continue….muaahhh…

  9. forever fan of twinj

    So u r blackmailing haan
    But seriouslyyy ur ff is as good as twin
    Now u must have understood how good is or ff
    🙂 🙂

  10. Aarti

    Those who don’t like the ff r free buzz off..if u find sumthng wrong in dis ff den do advise her how 2 correct it..don’t discourage her as u don’t have d r8 to do so..ek to koi itne efforts are aap Jaise logo k liye n aap itne cheap comments krte ho..its so not done

  11. Lama

    Crazy dear u r an outstanding writer…..u write so well….I love reading ur ff….plz don’t end it….and yes if someone is saying bad to ur ff & is misrespecting ur efforts ignore it because they don’t know how to respect others efforts…..God bless u dear…..don’t fell bad

    • crazy

      Le..just stop..akig /aunga Kannada tilitad enn le ucchaaa..
      Acch hubli Kannada dag biyatii Alla mangya…
      Btwn u called me tangiii?????
      I m so happy..
      Now Neva do that which u always try doing..
      Let me say this to all

  12. Dheemahee

    Hey crazy don’t end your ff soon I loved it a lot and todays episod was mindbloing keep it up

  13. Anaita

    Ur hater i wanna make one thing clear to u or shd I say i m challngng u… U said na u Love Twinj… than start ur own ff… i wanna read that ff.. and that ff shd bttr than this if not thn u have no right to cmmnt here…ohk if u dnt lyk the story but atleast appreciate d efforts… she isnt God who can understand ur taste man… tell her she would have definitely chngd her story… we all rnt mad to read this beautiful story… and coming to ur future ff plz in d credit do mention this “Ur hater” so that we all can understnd…

  14. Pooja

    Hey honey ?
    I’m a silent reader but today I have to say the your ff rocks. It amazing ? plz plz plz don’t end it ??????????????

  15. Hey dear don’t even think to end your ff I really love I wait for your ff as a mad person I am silent reader cannot comment all the times but please it is part of my life dear please don’t end it I am madly in luv with your ff I luv ur skills don’t even dare to end it dear and yaa don’t think much about those who don’t know anything to do other than making jokes of other feelings plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz its a request bcaz u can’t take my life from me dear.
    Like ur ff no I luv ur ff from the core of my heart……Luv u.Sorry if I had said something wrong in excitement but let me read first bcaz I am waiting for it like a hungry person wait for food like a mother wait for her child to return home etc please its a request love u

  16. and haa if don’t like then please there is no need for them to read this ff idiot full always ready to hurt feelings of others sorry if I have said something wrong

  17. crazy

    Guys I m just overwhelmed with ur comments..
    Bit take a chill pill..
    I m not such type f girl..
    Who care for such things..
    Anyways thanks for support..
    N my class dambosssss
    For I all n accha Kannada bhasheeee
    Thanks le machaaaa
    N those of my girls over their…
    Swaru n megduttt
    To so much girls…
    For supporting me..
    N dearooossss
    Tula mahiti na ki me kiti prem karte tumchaa varrrr..
    So I ll agree to what ever u say

    • Ur hater

      Another bad bang Han..
      Btwn I like the fact that u have such huge gang behind u to support..
      But not getting y r they supporting such bl**y ff
      But u know what I ll make u realize how worst is ur ff every time..
      Let’s c for how much time will all these support u…

      • Ruchi

        @Ur hater
        You dnt have some shame…
        Why the hell u r cmmntng on her ff.…if u dnt like it…
        If u r so awsum than go and write ur own ff…
        You r senseless creature…

      • crazy

        Are dammmm
        I m acting good to u n Neva used any cheep words too..
        If u just don’t like it then plz don’t comment too n read too
        As I m not forcing u to read…
        But its height champ ..
        U r testing my patience

      • Sanam

        Crazy was the last but one verse in kannada?
        If So It’s Quite Different From The Mangalorean one

  18. Salma

    Will you stop now enough of it here we are just apreaciat one effort she doesn’t have to be the best of best but yeah she is unique in her own way and she is an excellent write and so is her story so on that note if you don’t like her ff just buzz of and please quietly with out a noise coz we don’t need them in here and crazy nice story don’t end it please

  19. loveleen

    its an grt story crazy…plz dnt end soon…n i liked the way u maintain ur cool….n i too think we shud ignore all negative ppl here …whoever wants to cmnt ngtv let them bt as u knw crazy u hav postv ppl more fr u…plz continue writing dear

    • crazy

      Can’t u just buzzz off..
      I m act r I may dance r do what ever I want
      Who the hell r u to judge me..
      I had just asked ur views on ff
      Not bludring cmmnts..
      N who r u…
      I Neva reveald abt my dance r acting..
      N yeah if ever I knew u r u met me n backstage then let me know this..
      I eagerly want to know who r u?
      N plzzz just mind ur own business
      F only giving review on ff not my personal things…better get that in our mind..
      Sorry if I have hurt u
      But I said u b4 don’t test my patience

    • SMC

      Excuse me!What the Hell is ur damn problem,to put her down u know who is going down You.
      U r thinking that whatever u do we wl support ur god damn comment just shut up and leave this page…we don’t accept people who keep writin bakwaas and getting their own credit for that…..UR Hater…we have become Ur Hater…
      Just stop commenting rubbish otherwise we wl show u who we r….

  20. forever fan of twinj

    Aarti u have taken my comment in a wrong way
    I seriously didn’t mean it.
    I meant dat crazy’s ff is as good as twinj’s jodi and u thought something else and blackmailing thing was just a joke
    And if u r hurt den I m extremely sorry but I really didn’t mean it.

    • Aarti

      My comment wasn’t 4 was 4 those other stupids who just kept on blabbering n badmouthing this ff

    • crazy

      Just stop stooping so low yar..
      N y going on all them..
      U have problem with me n my ff so deal with me

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