Twinj- Marriage, betrayal ,love(58 and 59)

Episode-58
The episode starts with shocked face of mahi staring that girl..
M- (to kunj) She is that cheap girl (angrily) who is the reason of my uv’s sadness..
k- haa mahi.. she is the only one..
(angry)
i will go n see bhai..
m- even i will also come..
k- no .. mahi.. plz u be her..
m- hmm..ok
(twinkle was with family with aadit)

Now mahi was standing alone cursing that girl in her mind ffor her husband’s pain …
just than same girl came to her..
girl: (smiles) hi.. myself.. kanika malhotra..
m- (anger) hmm.. i m mahi uv sarna..
girl: (acts shocked) What?? u r uv’s wife?? (faking sad) i m sorry to say but ur husband is so cheap man .. once he tried to molest me..
(fake crying also..) (huh! such a cheap girl..)
m- (turns) what
kanika- yes..(smirking ) he.. he,..

Mahi turns n give her a tight slap to her..
All who were present there was totally shocked even the sarna family..
m-(angry) what u said.. my uv is cheap han..
Again she slapped her…
All were just watching them open mouthed.. while she was just slapping her again n again showing no mercy…

The whole scene was seen by uv n kunj.. they were also shocked seeing her in durga avtaar..
k- bhai.. see .. she is mahi only.. who is so calm n polite..
i cant believe..
(pushing him towards her) jaa. bhai.. now only u can control ur kaali mata..
i m to afraid seeing her..

uv was so shocked to react anything..
k- what are u thinking bhai.. go n handle her otherwise she will kill her see.. how she is slapping her..
(mocking) how dare u to say my husband cheap..

bhai just react something n goo..
uv-(not in proper sense) o.. ok.

uv went to mahi .. while she was still slapping her..
uv-(holds her hand) mahi.. mahi baccha.. leave her..
m- no.. no i wont.. how can she blame u?? i will kill her today..(angry) cheap woman.
uv- (cupping her face) mahii.. (she was not listening but was just staring her with her anger filled eyes) mahi.. baccha look at me..(she looked into his eyes..) see.. u are with me na..(she nooded)
bas.. i dont need anything..
u believe me na..(she again nooded) when u are with me .. i dont care what she says..

whole fa,,mily was in tears listening this..
m- noo.. (again slaps her) i will not leave her..

kanika- mahi.. vo.. i.. im.. im sorry.. plz.. (shiverring due to fear n becoz of her slaps
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m- how could u say like that?/
uv-(angrily) mahi.. i said leave her.. dont u get me..

MAhi jeks and leave from there..
Aadit starts crying loudly in twinkle’s arms seeing this horrified scene.. n her mom in such a dangerous avtaar..
tw- shh.. shh baby.. aw.. my baccha dar gaya..
mumma ke pass jaana h..
aadit- ounwww.. ounww.. mma.. ma. amaa.. uaunn uaunnn…
twinkle was walking n taking with aadit to make him calm.. n left from hall behind mahi..
Mahi was sitting on the garden bench on crying silently..
Twinkle reached there.. n placed her one hand on her shoulder n showed her the cring aadit..
She forgot everything n took him in her lap n started pacifying him.. laughing n talking to him.. (a mother forget everything seeing his baby in pain.. she cant handle her child crying.. same is the case her.. she just forget everything happened before sometime n happily started playing with aadit)
He also started laughing seeing her lovely mother like before n held her mother’s saree’s corner.. he was laughing n giggling with her mother..
Twinkle was just admiring mother son duo..

@other side–
As mahi left..
uv turns towards kanika (smiles proudly) she is my wife MRS. MAHI UV SARNA.. i choose her as my life..
n i wanted a girl like her n not like u.. got it..
and he left from there..
Kunj went towards her now.. who was crying..
k- still u r here.. or u want more slaps..
She was about to go but kunj stops him..
k- ek min..
kanika-(surprised) k- so.. ms kanika..
jaane se pah;e sabko sach to batati jao.. ki why did u played with my bhai’s feelings..
kanika- wo.. wo m..(fumbling with words)
k- (angry) wo m kya??
kanika- (fears him) wo actuallly.. uv rejected me to marry na.. so .. i wanted.. to teach him a lesson.. to say no to me….
so.. i .. i .. and papa… both planned this…
i m .. im .. sorry..(crying)
plz forgive me..(joining her hands)
k- now get lost from here..
whole family was in tears..
k- aab roke kya fayda?? there is no of these tears now…..
becoz of ur mistrust bahi became alone.. he used to cry a lot.. no noone was there to console him at that time…
one year .. whole one year he was alone n was trying to proove himself right in front of u all.. but no..
(pointin to manohar-usha) no one care dfro him..
then mahi came in her life n he started living again.. .
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.
Wiping his tears..
k- but now i m happy for him.. becoz he got what he deserve.. a lovely wife n a naughty son.. still he is craving for ur love but u ignored him to hell..
today also when he received the award.. (to manoher) he wanted ur blessings but no.. u showed ur hands to stop him..

manohar was in tears n was guilty for not believing his son…
kunj left saying this…

Screnn freeses………..
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Episode-59
@ Mahi mention—
Whole famiy reached home.. n all were silent.. aadit was sleeping in mahi’s embrace..
She took him to their room n mae him sleep properly in bed.. put pillows on both his sides..
Everyone was going in their rooms ..
twinkle was not feeling well.. he head was paining .. but she is controlling not to show anybody..
She was climbing stairs.. her vision blurred.. she managed somehow..

But after one or two steps.. she lost her consciousness.. n was clutching her head tightly due to so much pain..
Kunj was behind her only.. He saw her loosing her consciousness.. n hold her on time…
k- tw..(patting her ceeks) twinkle.. what happened?? open ur eyes..
But she was in sub conscious.. n was clucthing her hairs tightly..
tw- ahh! my head.. is.. is.. p. pai.. paining..
ahhhh..
kunj panicked n bought her to her room n called everybody…
everyone came to her room n saw her in pain…
Uv called the doctor immediately..
Twinkle is now fully unconscious..

After sometime.. doc came…
n checked her n asked everybody to go outside..
He came n kunj bombarded him with his questions..
k- what happened doc?? aachanak.. she was alright in even..
then what happened suddenly??
she is alright na?/
she was in so much pain.. (he was on the verge of crying)
doc- that’s what should i ask from u??
she was recovering well.. but what happened to her suddenly..
i have taken her bl;ood samples.. tomorrow reports will come n i will tell u about her sudden pain..
but till then take proper care of her.. she is too weak..
n yeh plz dont stress her..
k- yeh doc.. sure..
Saying this kunj went in twinkle’s room n sat beside her hlding her hand..

Outside uv dropped doc home as it was night..
everybody was hell tensed n sitting in hall silently..
m- dont know what’s happening in our house these days..
usha- dont worry puttar.. sab theek ho jayega..
mahi nooded…

after some moments of silence..
mahi- (to manoher) papa ji.. now to u dont have any complaint with uv na..
You will talk to him na.. now to u know about his innocence..
manohar- (teary eyes) i m soo sorry beta.. i m very guilty that i didnt believe my own child.. n believed that cheap girl..
How will i face my son?? now after all this..
i m very guilty..
UV came back after dropping doc n listened to his dad’s guilt..
n rushed to him n sat in his feets..
uv- no dad.. plz dont be guilty..
aapki jageh koi bhi hota to vo aaise hi reacct karna.. it was noot ur fault..
m- how can say that beta?? i m ur culprit..
without your any mistake.. i gave u such punishment.. i separated u from ur family..
i saw ur maa crying daily but no.. i didnt do anything.. atleast i should have given u a chance to proove urself.. b ut no.. kunj mujhe kehta rha.. but i didnt listened to him..
i m sorry beta..(crying..) i m really very sorry..
uv- (crying too) plz dad dont say sorry.. n i know my dad is so strong..
i cant see my dad crying for any reason.. (wiped his tears n put his head in his lap in sitting position only..)
Manoher patted his head n again apologised for his mistake..
now uv got up from his lap n signalled him not to say sorry again.. n kissed his hands.. (teary eyes)
uv- (innocently) now u will not keep me away from u na..
manohar nooded teary eyes..

Environment was getting so emotional so to cheer up everybody mahi spoke..

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sorry sorry i need to stop here only.. i need to go somewhere.. sorry really sorry.. may be i will again not post for a week..
isliyae sorry in advance.. thats why giving u two episoded together..

byee take care.. see u soon..
i m in hurry.. byee..
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13 comments

  1. SidMinTwiNj

    SidMinTwiNj

    |Registered Member

    Hey mona
    Tysm for 2 epis on same day… I so loved each and every bit of it… Kunj saying to UV Jas bhai now only u can control ur Kali mata is ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ I loved how Mahi slapped that cheap girl… I’m glad that UV is proved innocent n manohar n UV united… U very well portrayed emotions… Twinkle Ku kya hua… I’m shocked she was recovering then what happened to her suddenly? Dear when will twinkle get to know that Sid is only Kunj her betrayed husband? I’m very desperately waiting for this confrontation… Plz try to post next asap… Just can’t wait for next epi… Dear show more TwiNj scenes…

    Love youโค

  2. SidMinTwiNj

    SidMinTwiNj

    |Registered Member

    Hey mona
    Tysm for 2 epis on same day… I so loved each and every bit of it… Kunj saying to UV Jas bhai now only u can control ur Kali mata is ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ I loved how Mahi slapped that cheap girl… I’m glad that UV is proved innocent n manohar n UV united… U very well portrayed emotions… Twinkle Ku kya hua… I’m shocked she was recovering then what happened to her suddenly? Dear when will twinkle get to know that Sid is only Kunj her betrayed husband? I’m very desperately waiting for this confrontation… Plz try to post next asap… Just can’t wait for next epi… Dear show more TwiNj scenes….

    Love youโค

  3. SidMin

    SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Awesome ๐Ÿ™‚ Loved it ๐Ÿ™‚ finally UV is proved innocent in front of Manohar ๐Ÿ™‚
    Mahi’s Durga Ma avtar was superb ๐Ÿ™‚
    Loved it ๐Ÿ™‚
    Love you ๐Ÿ™‚
    Try posting soon ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. Asna

    Awesome episode monaa darling… i m loving all the moments and feeling as its a serial not a fiction… i m also inspired by you n sry i can’t comment on ur previous episode… keep writing… post the next soon… lots of love๐Ÿ’—

  5. Asna

    Awesome episode monaa darling… i m loving all the moments and feeling as its a serial not a fiction… i m also inspired by you n sry i can’t comment on ur previous episode… keep writing… post the next soon…

  6. Eulalia

    I m a silent reader of ur ff 2day i commented fr d 1st tym. U knw tht ur epis r minblowing fabulous nd wht nt.i luv ur ff a lot plz try 2 post whnever u gt tym bt soon i knw i m selfish.btw in whch std u r sry dnt tk it personally jst asking

  7. SidVee_Yashvee

    SidVee_Yashvee

    |Registered Member

    Amazingggg.. mahi’s angry avatar was awesomee.. both episodes were awesome today.. n thank god ke finally uv is proved innocent in the eyes of manohar.. do cont soon โค

  8. Ramya

    Ramya

    |Registered Member

    Awesome monaa
    I loved it I loved mahis Kali maa avatar ufff yr just lovely n mahi trust uv a lot I loved Ser bond
    Loads of love keep smiling

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