Twinj- Marriage, betrayal, love(45)

i m really very big vala sorrrrrryyyyy.. i m soo sorry.. gys for not posting for so many days… sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry… but m kya karun?? sab kuch itna suddenly hua ki pta hi ni chala…
first my extra classes in college n then my trip with family in mid sem break n then again bada vala jhatka with sudden home exams.. i hope u didnt forget me n my ff..
u remember na.. nhi to plz ek bar last episodes padh lo plzz…. to okk.. i think i should start with the story without any further bak bak otherwise.. u will say ki pahle to itna late n aab itni bak bak..
but again sorry for late..
chalo start the episode…
precap- twinkle on hospital bed, kunj confrontation with his family, he got to know abt twinkle being his wife, mahi’s sudden labour pain, uv consoling mahi during delivery..(my favourate scene)
n then mahi’s delivery… uv’s happiness
…. sorry sorry forget to mention.. kunj’a love confession to himself..;)

Episode-45
@hospital…
When kunj was sobbing hugging his dad.. doctor came out from twinkle’s ward.. seeing him both dad-son ran to him to ask her about twinkle…
k- doc..how how’s MY Twinkle.. ?? she is fine na.. kuch hua to nhi na usse.. (still sobbing)
manohar- ji doc.. mere beti theek to h na..
d- dekhiyae… humse jitna hua humne kia?? aab unki condition pahle se better h..
kuch der me unhe hosh bhi aa jayega..
k- (happily) what!! my twinkle is fine..(folding hands n looking upward) thank god.. (sigh in relief)
(again looking at doc) doc … can ca.. can i see her.. (still stammering n looking at manohar for his permission also)

Listening to doc’s word.. manihar is releived too as she is gonna be fine soon..
but doc interrupted i between..
doc- dekhiyae.. app pahle mere puri baat suniyae…
unki jaan to bach gayi h..(deep breath) unhe kuch der me hosh bhi aa jayega.. but..
k- (interrupt) but.. but kya doc??
d- (somewhat irritated with his ques) mr sarna would u let me complete my words..
k- y.. yeh.. yeah.. plz ..
d- ji bhot blood loss ki vajeh se unke dimag pe asar hua h.. we cant exactly say ki hosh me aane ke baad unki kya halat hogi.. v hume tabhi pata chalega..
humne kuch tests kie h jinki reports raat tak aa jayegi.. the only we can tell u something… untill then just hope for the best.. kuch bhi ho sakta h..
(patting kunjs shoulders)
k- kuc.. kuch bhi.. ho ho ho sakta h mm..mmatlab..??
kuch kuch ni hoga twinle ko.. pta h meko.. kuch bhi nio hoga.. (mummering this again n again he sat back on nearby bench hiding his face in his palms)
m- (to doc) doc .. m .. m kuch samjha ni.. abhi to aapne kha na.. ki kuch der me usse hosh aaajayega.. to to fir.. kuch ho sakta h ka kya matlab h??
d- dekhiyae.. dimag se judi koibhi prob ho sakti h..
plz pray to god.. (patting his shoulder doc went)
after sometime nurse came…
n- mr sarna.. humne patient kospecial ward me shift kar dia h .. aap log aab patient ko dekh sakte h..
Listening this.. kunj immediately rushe dtowards ward’s door..

After reaching at the door.. he remembered manohar’s word of not meeting twinkle… she closed his eyes.. n tear escaped from it.. he slowly saw back at manohar asking his permission to go to her..
Manohar seeing his condition allowed him through his eyes..
Taking a posetive reply froom his father he rushed inside..
seeing the love of her life in such a condition, his heart ached..( twinkle was lying on bed.. some wires from big machined are attched to her body… having mask on her face.. oxygen mask.. n bandage on her forehead n on arm… )
he closed his eyes tightly feeling her pain.. he slowly went towards her n sat beside her on nearby stool.. n starte dcaressing her head.. n started speaking to her softly..
k- hey listen syappa queeen!! u know everybodyy is waiting for u to get up.. n here see u r sleeping from so much time.. itne syappe kyu yr??
sahi naam dia h na maine tujhe..
ohh aacha accha … gussa h mujhse.. tabhi ni uth re.. yr twinkle tu jo bolegi m karunga bas ek bar tu uth ja plz.. i cant see u in this condition yr.. why are u not understanding??
aacha tu kahegi to m tujhe syappa queen bhi ni bulaubga.. pakka promise.. (pinching his throat lightly)
(realising what he has done) sekh aab to tere pyar me itna pagal ho gaya hu ki baccho vali harkatein bhi kar ra hu..
yahi cahti h na tu pata h meko..
slight smile appeared on his lips thinkg abt his time spent with twinkle..

— flashback —
winkle n kunj were in car n car stopped at road side due to traffic..
twinkle saw something out of window…
k- hey syappa queen .. ab kha dhyaan h tera.. fir mat utar jaana car se last time ki tareh kisi puppy ke piche.. (remember the cscene)
tw- (kept quite)
When she didnt answer, he saw at the direction she is looking…
Her eyes were shing seeing the scene..
Some children are playing in the nearby garden..
tw- sadu.. (shaking his arm .. still looking that side) suno na… are sadu.. hum park me chalein kya unn bacchon ke saath khelne..
Kunj reaction was like..”u r impossible” shooking his head..
k- are u a kid??
tw- hey u.. jyada bano mat ok.. m kya tumhe buddi dikh re hu… ofcourse i m still a kid…
tumhe pata h sid.. her insaan me ek baccha hota h.. jo kabhi na kabhi to dikhayi deta hi h…
k- was like.. tumhara kuch ni ho sakta..
saying this she stepped out of the car n kunj has to go behind her…
she directly went to the children palayig… n said somethng in their ears.. n started playing hide & seek with them with blindfold..

kunj was just watching her antics… admiring her without realising..
now its twinkle’s time to get blindfolded… she was running here n there in the direction of voice.. suddenly she put his feet onto a big stone n she trembled n she was going to fall… she controlled herself.. (kunj ran in direction of her to save her)
but alas.. she fall down.. n
tw- owch.. (rubbing her back)
she removed her blindfold.. children her upto her n helped her stand up… but she was laughing whole heartedly after falling also..
if anyotherone wouldhave been in her place, he would have cried out loud… but she is to syappa queen na.. so she started laughing.. n stood up … bid bye to children n came in my direction …
kunj can easily saw her being uncomfertable in walking but still she had smile on her face..
she face d back at children n bidding them bye n walking backwards.. n was again going to fall… but this time our hero saved her…
n she closedher eyes in fear of falling again…
when she realised that she didnt fall she opened her one eye to see where is she…?? seeing herself in kunj’s arms she stood up quickly n went towards car.. leaving kunj behind..
k-(mutteing) sach me syappa queen h.. (shaing his head )
he too went to his car n drove off…
— flashback ends—

yaad h na tujhe.. vo din.. kaise giri thi… fir bhi has re thi ki bacchon ko bura na lage.. haye mera dil to vhi tujhpe flat ho gaya tha.. bas realise hi ni hua…
aur aab jab hua to tu mujhse baat hi ni kar re h..
Describing his happy moments to twinkle a tear skipped his eyes n it fell on her hand.. to which she reacted by slightly moving her fingers which got noticed by kunj n he shouted for doctor…
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screen freezes………….
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kaisa laga episode..??
batana zarur..
vaise socho socho.. twinkle ko kya hoga??
kuch serious?
kya vo kunj ko maaf karegi??
how will kunj face her??
aur kunj ko uski family vapas accept karegi??
aur haa… uv ka kya hoga??
socho socho..:) 🙂

Koi ni koi ni… jaldi hi in sab ka ans milega.. but uske liye aapko padhte rehna hoga.. “twinj- marriage, betrayal, love” sirf aur airf tu par..
haste rahiyae, kush rahiyae… aur ff padhte rahiyae.. he he..
bbyee friends.. hope to see u soon…
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15 comments

  1. SidVee

    Awesome epi n emotional too.. kunj’s pain was beautifully described.. was waiting for ur ff since long.. umm, maybe she will lose her memory🤔 or partial memory loss🤔 uhh I don’t know.. Plz do cont soon ❤❤

  2. Adya

    |Registered Member

    Ohhhhhhoooo yrrr monaaaaaa diiiii……

    Where were u ????hnnnn Bina batae bhagwan Gyi thi…….hnnnn VERY BAD ……nd the episode was like Mar dala…hayeeeee maar dala……… aweeessssooooommmmmeeeee di…….love u.

  3. Payal...

    |Registered Member

    Mona kitne din bad post kiya today I was going to message u but before that I saw ur update………….ab pls jaldi post karna raha nahi jata yeah Mera favourite ff hai na isliya pls pls update next one today
    anyways nice update

  4. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Loved it
    I was waiting for your ff and finally you uploaded it
    The part where Kunj was thinking about the moments Twinj spent together was so cute
    Post soon
    I hope Twinkle does not loose her memmory

  5. Prishamanhotra

    Foe how many more days are u gonna show the hospital dramalike it is gud but still u are showing this one fom almost 1 month

    • Monaa

      |Author

      Yr… Aab to twinkle to bhi hosh aa gaya h jo .. Hope ye drama jaldi hi end hone wala h… N upar se aab twinkle doc banna chahti h to hospitals to milte rahange..😜

  6. Vipul

    |Registered Member

    Hey ……!Monaa hi…..I’m shalini…. I was a silent reader of all TEI/twinj ffs n have recently joined TU n writing a ff also….. n ur ff is one of my favourite ff…..really I love it.

    Now cmng the epi…it was superb mindblowing amazing epi as always…….today kunj’s emotions were too good n there fb moment was sooo cute …..pls post next asap….
    Loved it soooooo much

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