TWINJ ki TASHAN-E-SHAADI ~By Zuha {Episode 13 + Summary}

Hey friends! How are you all? I hope all are doing well! Well I am good as always and back with the next episode of this Fan Fiction! Thanks to everyone who commented previously and I hope you guys enjoy this episode as well!

Well readers, don’t miss out the A/N at the end!

Episode 12

Here is the summary of episode 1-12 as one of my reader (Maria) asked me for it!

Summary (Episodes 1-12) :- The story opens at a mall where a girl is shopping for her wedding with her 2 other friends. The girl is revealed to be Twinkle and the other 2 friends of her are Soumya (from Ishqbaaz) and Manvi (from Yeh kahan aa gaye hum). On the other side 3 boys are introduced, one of them is getting married soon who is Kunj and least bothered about his marriage. He is a play boy and is known of his casanova personality and he fears to get married as her mother and father separated when he was young and since then he was brought up by her bebe as her mother turned a drunkard. The other 2 are revealed to be Rudra (from Ishqbaaz) and Rahul (from Yeh kahan aa gaye hum).

Twinkle is a girl who believes that marriage is an auspicious relation and takes relationships delicately as she fears to lose her close ones as she has seen her father abusing her mother and then leaving her for another woman.
Twinkle gets excited when Kunj calls her 1 day before their Mehndi ceremony and asks her to meet him and thought to reveal that he is least bothered in marrying her. An excited Twinkle asks Manvi and Soumya to arrange a meeting for them. Rudra warns Kunj to act as a good boy and if he confesses his true identity so it may worsen Usha’s health. Soumya takes Rudra’s help in arranging Twinj’s meeting and a series of funny moments are followed. Kunj and Twinkle have an unplanned/unintentional date in which a dream sequence is shown of love confession. Many funny moments take place during the date but one thing which disturbed twinkle were Kunj’s words, “Oh god this wedding is such a headache. Glad it will be over in 3 days!!”

Sangeet ceremony takes place and an entry of a lady is shown who is revealed to be Ishana (from Ishqbaaz) and has a certain enmity from Kunj!
All this while an unusual spark is noticed b/w RaNvi and a past follows them (not revealed)

On the wedding day, while Twinkle is getting ready she gets a message (video) by Ishana which Twinkle misses out but the video; It is a dark, rainy night and a midst all a car is seen, driven rashly. The car is focused and the driver is revealed to be Kunj! Driving in an inebriated state after having a fun @ party. It was around 3.00 of night. The place was dark and isolated. Suddenly, out of nowhere, a man with long hair, dressed in a white, loosed shirt and a pant is seen crossing the road. But as of the high speed and Kunj’s condition…….The car raced over the man!!!!!!THE Man is revealed to be Omkara (from Ishqbaaz) who is alive and is in coma and Ishana was the witness of the accident and hails Kunj responsible for the accident. Twinj marriage takes place while Ishana swears (in front of Om) that she will ruin the life of Kunj and Twinkle (as now she is associated with Kunj). Twinkle had her farewell from Taneja Mansion in a very emotional way by her mother (Leela) and friends, Saumya and Manvi.
On the wedding night Kunj reveals her beast/devil side and Twinkle who started to develop a soft-corner for Kunj began hating him……

Continued….

(This episode is continued in Twinkle’s voice but if I feel then I will add Kunj’s voice or ‘narrative voice’.)

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It was about 11 of morning when I reached ‘Hotel Twilight’ well fortunately everyone in the house was sound asleep as of the tiredness of the wedding. I marched up to the reception and inquired, “Kindly, can you check is there any check in by the name ‘Kunj Sarna’?” The receptionist looked at the computer to check and said, “Sorry Madam but there is no such registration!” I looked on disappointed, when something stroked my mind and I asked the receptionist, “Okay, can you please check any booking by the name Alisha?” After having a glance on the computer screen the receptionist replied, “Yes Madam, but there are 2 registrations by the name Alisha, one is Alisha Khanna and the other one is Alisha Malhotra, which one are you searching for?” ‘Oh Shit! I don’t even know her surname’ was the thing which came in my mind.

I requested, “Can you please let me see?” The receptionist agreed and I got into searching. Alisha Malhotra who is in room no.507 has booked the room for 10 days whereas Alisha Khanna has booked the room no.123 and for a night! “This is the one” I said to the receptionist, “Can I get the keys of Room no.123?” the receptionist replied, “Sorry Madam but we cannot allow you like this!” I requested, “Actually Alisha is my best friend and she has called me only but I called her and she is not receiving. If you want you can accompany and just open the door for me!” The receptionist seemed to be satisfied and agreed for this thing!

We reached ‘Room no.123’ the receptionist opened the door and left from there immediately. I walked inside the room, which was pitch dark, the curtains were draped over, and there was no source of light in the room. I suddenly tumbled over something resulting me to lose my balance, and my hands fortunately fell over the electric socket. I switched on the lights.

Though I switched on the lights but my world doomed in darkness to find my husband (Kunj) in the embrace of someone else in an intimate situation. Unstoppable tears flow down my eyes to find Kunj shirtless with Alisha. I shouted out loud, “KUNJ!!!” He did not wake up, I walked near him and shook him tight and he woke up! I threw his shirt over him and the girl (Alisha) with him also woke up and all I said to her was, “The best jewelry of a girl is her self-respect and her beauty is modesty and you lost both of them!” And walked away from the room with a disgusted look and a flow of tears!
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(Kunj’s voice introduced)
I wore my shirt, and buttoned it up. I ran towards Twinkle. Outside the hotel I found her crying, I walked towards her and uttered, “Twinkle…” She turned towards me with rage in her eyes and said, “Enough Kunj!! (Showing her palm) Enough! What do you think of yourself? Huh? You can do whatever you want and I will sit back quietly? If yes, then you are wrong Mr.Sarna! I am Twinkle Taneja, the pride of my mother and I can’t be so weak. You are taken advantage of the fact that I ever loved you, but no more! Mark my words, WHEN I LOVE SOMEONE I LOVE SELF-LESSLY, AND WHEN I HATE SOMEONE I HATE SELFISHLY!”

She walked away from there, wiping her tears. I don’t know why I am feeling guilty of hurting her, though she does not matter anything to me but still her tears are piercing my heart. She is hurt but I am getting affected. What is happening to me?

My chain of thoughts was broken by a voice, “Kunj!” I turned around to find Alisha there. She walked up to me and said, “Kunj, what the hell was this stupid girl doing her? And how dare she is to yell and point finger over me! Bl**dy…” “Alisha!!!” I shouted, losing my control!! I don’t know why but I wasn’t able to bear a word against Twinkle! “Wow Kunj!” Alisha said, “It has hardly been a night since you get married and even don’t have any physical relationship but still so much of possessiveness…Have you fallen for that Behen ji?” That was it, I screamed over her, “Shut up Alisha! Don’t forget that you are talking about my wife, Mrs.Twinkle Kunj Sarna!! And don’t you dare try crossing your limits! Just for your kind information, she is my wife and whatsoever relationship I have with her and whatever behavior I have with her is our personal matter and I will certainly not like if any third person will intercede in our matter!” I said pinning her to the wall in full rage. She got scared as I continued, “Understand? You better understand!!” Releasing her I said, “The amount will be transferred in your account by 12 noon!” And after saying this I walked away from there!!
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(Narrative Voice)
Twinkle entered Taneja Mansion sobbing, and rushed up to her room, whilst Bebe and Usha were sitting in the dining hall. Bebe stood up from the seat and shouted, “Twinkle Puttar!!” But Twinkle ignored her and headed towards her room, took out a suitcase and started packing her stuff while she continued weeping. Bebe entered the room and was shocked to see Twinkle doing all this and questioned, “Twinkle, what are you doing?” Twinkle did not reply her and continued packing and once she packed her stuff she headed straight to leave whilst Bebe’s questionings. As she reached in the living room, Bebe stopped and took her suitcase and stated, “What is wrong with you? I am continuously asking you where are you going?”

The very moment Kunj enters Sarna Mansion, Twinkle looked towards him with teary-eyes and said, “You better ask Kunj!” She took her luggage and moved out of the Sarna Mansion, walking pass by Kunj, the duo looked at each other with intensity and pain in their eyes, but it did not affect Twinkle anymore and she headed outside wiping her tears.

Bebe and Usha looked towards Kunj, Bebe stated, “Kunj…” But before that Kunj left from there, and moved outside where Twinkle left.
He caught up with Twinkle in the parking area and held her by her arm and turned her towards him and asked, “Where are you going?” Twinkle replied, “What is the need to tell you and by what right are you asking this question?” Kunj tightened his grip, making Twinkle hurt and exclaimed sternly, “By the right of being your husband!!” Twinkle replied with a painful voice, “You really call yourself a husband? Kunj really? Husbands never hurt their wife, (Pointing towards her hand, when Kunj realized and left her hand) they never leave their wife and spend nights with others! Husband and Wife have a relationship of equality and our relationship…The relationship shared between husband-wife makes life beautiful as heaven not worst like hell! This is not a relationship Kunj, it is a cage in which we 2 are bind together!!” Kunj looked at her and said, “3 months..Agree for staying with me for 3 months for the sake of my mother and then I will free you by divorcing you!” Twinkle did not react and stood there – stubbornly. Kunj’s eyes were now filled with rage and he asked, “Are you coming or not?” Twinkle stubbornly replied, “No!”

Kunj caught Twinkle hand and twisted it tightly, hurting her and asked, “Are you coming?” Twinkle’s reply was still the same, “NO!” Kunj grabbed her by her hair, and pulled her inside, while she shouted. Usha and Bebe saw Kunj dragging Twinkle inside and hurting her badly. Both of them tried stopping Kunj but in vain. Kunj dragged Twinkle to their room and threw her on the bed. Twinkle cried out while Usha and Bebe banged the door, asking Kunj to open the door but in vain. Kunj took out a hunter!! He proceeded towards Twinkle with the hunter, making her afraid and she pleaded Kunj not to come near her but in vain…………………………………………………………….
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Precap: 1)Twinj coming to Taneja Mansion … Usha and Kunj talk………………….
2)Reception… A woman enters Sarna Mansion, Twinkle calls her out, “Ishana!” Kunj who was facing the either side, turned and was shocked………………….

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So, the update ends here. I hope it was worthy reading an you guys enjoyed.

Well I guess that many of you are disappointed by this shade of Kunj, also it has never been portrayed in any FF as far. The idea is like ‘Beauty and the Beast’ that at first the beast Kunj will torture Twinkle but no fear as I am here I will not let you guys hate Kunj after all I am an equal fan of Kunj as you guys are 😉

Well I will be ending the update here and don’t forget to comment as I will be waiting to know your views regarding this episode 🙂

Love u all!

Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

43 comments

  1. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    I loved it 🙂
    I was waiting for your ff like heaven (Good things )
    I just Loved it well I like this shade of Kunj it is just because in some corner he has some soft feelings for Twinkle 🙂
    I love the way you write the scene description 🙂
    Love you 🙂 Try posting soon 🙂

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      Hey Shruti (di),
      Aw…Your comment is so adorable, it made me smile 🙂 Thanks for such a sweet comment! Well I am glad knowing that you are enjoying this shade of Kunj as well 🙂 It really makes me feel happy when readers say that they were able to depict with the emotions of the characters 🙂 Thanks for all your love ♡♡♡Love u dear ♡♡♡
      (Will post the next part soon!)

      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

  2. Ramya

    |Registered Member

    Zuha awesome episode
    Bt I don’t like ds kunj he hurts twinkle a lot I’m feeling verry bad fr her I hope he won’t bear her
    Love u

    Post soon keep smiling

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      Hey Ramya,
      Well dear firstly thanks for your comment! Well the thing is a lot deep behind Kunj’s character which is ought to reveal and till then you have to bear this ‘Beast’ Well I will be posting the next episode soon. Thanks for all your support 🙂 Love you too ♡♡♡

      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

  3. Maria

    |Registered Member

    Thank you so much for the summary. And about the episode it was mindblowing but I hated it when Kunj behaved badly with Twinkle. But I’m eagerly waiting for everything to get sorted out. Post the next one soon! Waiting eagerly for it!

    With Love💕

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      Hey Maria,
      No need to thanks dear 🙂 Thanks for commenting! Yeah, the way Kunj is behaving with Twinkle is quite wrong but sooner or later he has to fell for his Sayappa Queen or maybe??? Anyways once again thanks for commenting and I will try to post the next episode soon 🙂
      Loads of Love and Support ♡

      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

  4. Kritika14

    |Registered Member

    WOW! So now the real story begins! Ishana is back and I swear, I’ve waited so long for her return. Kunj is really such a beast but I’m sure this will surely turn into something in the future! Really eager to read the next episodes. Post soon!

    Lovess! xx

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      Hey dumb head 😉
      Well I am glad that you are glad with the way in which the story is proceeding 😉 Also Ishana’s comeback will be a blast and your long wait will be over (once I post the episode) Well as of your favorite dialogue (post soon) I will try to post soon 🙂
      Loads of Love and Support!

      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

  5. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    Hey zuhu
    😣😣😣😔😔kunj did so bad with twinkle. How can he do this with his own wife??? This thought is also so scary.
    I dont know wat to comment today…….. wish kunj changes his behaviour. U know twinkle should go away from here amd then something should happen and he should realise her value….
    Post next soon
    Love u💜

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      Hey Kuku,
      Mera bacha, sad hai? So sorry dear, for making you sad by this behavior of Kunj, but it was the demand of story and was needed so that story line could proceed ahead! Well let’s see what happens next and I will be posting the next episode soon.
      Loads of Love and Support !

      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

  6. Ayu

    |Registered Member

    😱😱😱i am blown away! I cant even describe the turmoil of emotions in my heart…i hated this shade of Kunj to the core! Yet, i loved this courageous shade of Twinkle! Really can’t wait for the next! Pls post soon😘

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      Hey Ayu,
      Firstly a big sorry for making you blown away by this shade of Kunj but at the same time I am glad that you enjoyed the courageous Twinkle and she ought to be courageous after all she is our ‘Punjabi Pataka’

      Thanks for commenting and I will definitely try to post the next episode soon.
      Loads of Love and Support!

      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      Hey Sidmin,
      Thanks for leaving your comment! Well about Kunj’s nature, it’ll gradually result in something bigger and about the feelings, you may stick up to the Fan Fiction to get the answers of your questions!
      Loads of Love and Support!

      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

  7. Sohi

    |Registered Member

    The episode was good and emotional kunj behaved very badly with twinkle feeling very sad for her I think just think 🤔 that kunj will beat himself instead of twinkle and ya I liked twinkles dialogues very much do continue and plz post soon

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      Hey Sohi,
      Thanks for leaving your comment with the beautiful words. Well about your guess let’s see what’s going to happen with Twinkle.

      Also thanks for appreciating Twinkle’s dialogues. I will try to post the next episode soon!
      Loads of Love and Support!

      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

  8. Komal123

    |Registered Member

    You said right that I hate this shade of kunj but I love he so much!
    And I love your writing too!
    Post next episode soon 😘

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      Hey Komal,
      So true, Kunj is lovable in all shades! Thanks for leaving your comment and appreciating my writing skills 🙂 It really means a lot to me!
      Loads of Love and Support!

      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

  9. Priya23

    Oh my god…..sista….what was that…..?????
    U left me speechless by ur writing……
    ×××××…..bolti band….×××××……
    I don’t no what say word is less in front of my words….pain, anger, care, possessive ness, is everything u describe perfectly and so well…..reading it m filling like goosh bamps all over in my body….and while reading this m concentrate only in this epi and not anyone else believe me and when it come to last m filling like ohh shit now its come to finished…whyyy..?? I want to read more….U no i to like this kunj because of his lill feelings he has 4 twinki…….and ohh god kunjs anger its sooooo much high….now my curiosity level is high that what going happen in next…..
    Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post next epi soon…ur Api is rqusting u……..
    Sorry m bak baking to much and sorry 4 long cmnt…..
    Love u lodssssss……sista…
    Keep smiling…..umaaahh….

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      Hey sista,
      Oh My God! Such a lovely and appreciating comment for me? Unbelievable. You literally made me blush after reading this comment by you.

      Thanks a ton for you immense love ♡ Well this Kunj is a beast so anger level needs to be high 😉 Well I will try posting the next episode soon(And now you have requested so I will definitely post soon!)

      And dare you say sorry. I hate my friends apologizing me. Okay? So you better never say ‘Sorry’ at least not to me! And I love your ‘Bak Baking’ so you may continue as long as you like and ‘Long comments’ are a pleasure to read so continue with them as well 😛
      Loads of Love and Support!

      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

  10. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Hey Zuha,
    This episode was really amazing. Moreover, the shade of Kunj that you’re showing, even I did. Yay!! We think alike. Don’t worry. People like Kunj in negative shade here. Wierdos like me!!😂😂

    But I’m scared that he’ll hurt Twinkle all the way again like I made him do it. Anyway, I’m waiting for the next update already. Do post soon.

    All love,
    Ria.

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      Hey Ria,
      Thanks for commenting Ria. Yeah, I remember in your OS! Well look same thinking of ‘2 Insane and Weirdos’ 😛

      But, let’s see what’s going in Kunj’s mind and what is he about to do 😉 I will try to post the next one soon 🙂
      Thanks for all your love dear!
      Loads of Love and Support!

      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

      • Ria

        |Registered Member

        Hey Zuha,
        Not the OS, but in ‘Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?’ It was all about domestic violence at the beginning 🙈🙉🙊

      • Zuha Fatima

        |Author

        Well I didn’t read it from the starting but I read its Raglak version (sorry for not commenting!) So yeah we have same thoughts, ‘Khurafati Dimaag’ 😛

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      Hey Simyy (Api),
      Thanks for your comment. I’m sorry for making you dislike this Kunj and at the same time glad that you enjoyed the episode! I will try to post the next one soon.
      Loads of Love and Support!

  11. Baby

    |Registered Member

    yeaahhhhhhhhhhh………….it is dat i cant hate kunj bt i cant love him……
    ohhh my gd srsly m crying it was sooo rude a hunter…..
    like srsly i cant believe it………
    m really like yeah he sprtd twinkle n felt bad for her wen alisha was saying smthing bt
    yr zuhu m crying like why n how can a husband be like dis
    n now toh he showed his dis shade to bebe n usha as well
    speechless dear worth reading
    plsssssss plsssss post nxt asap
    cant w8 😀
    love u lods♥♥

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      Hey Baby,
      So true, Kunj can never be hated, at least not by us (Crazy Siddhantians 😛 )Well this rude Kunj is ought to be rude and don’t worry I won’t let him be so rude 😉

      Aw, dear no need to cry, when I am here then no fear, I will fix everything at its right place 😉 Thanks for all your appreciation. Will try to post soon 🙂
      Loads of Love and Support!
      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      Hey Aanya,
      Thanks for commenting and sharing your views. About Kunj’s character there’s a lot deep about him so you better gear up with the Fan Fiction 😉 Will try to post the next one soon.
      Loads of Love and Support!
      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      Hey shrutu,
      Thanks for your beautiful comment. Also no need to be formal and thank me, after all we are besties 😉 (By the way are we?)
      Loads of Love and Support!
      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

  12. Adya

    |Registered Member

    Zuha my cutie !!!!
    OK fine … I know in late bit yrr what can I do !! You know what?? I just hate that stupid school nday those idiotic project but indeed I love my frnds out there !! Hehe..
    The episode was Wooow… nd don’t you even think in urban dreams that I’d hate kunj !! Are he’s my jaan…. 😂😂😋
    Chalo..then I’ll be waiting for the next one… hope I won’t be late as always!!!
    Love you …

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      Hey Adooo,
      Thanks for commenting and no need to be apologetic! I can completely understand your situation 🙂 Of course no one can ever hate our cutie pie ‘Kunj’ 😉 I will try to post the episode today itself (If possible!) and no worries if you’re late 🙂
      Loads of Love and Support!
      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

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