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TWINJ: When Friendship turns into love (OS)

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Hello everyone. It’s Sarah from Pakistan. I’ve pbeen a silent reader since the last almost 5 months. I’ve been reading each and every single ff on Twinj. And, I won’t at all hesitate to say that you guys are doing an absolute amazing job. The way you guys describe everything is just beyond perfection. To be really honest, I first thought that these ff(s) ain’t of any use but I remember when I just started reading them, I was so freakin addicted to them. It’s for the first time that I’m trying to write an OS (one shot). I hope it’d be appreciated by all. Thank youu.
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Character sketch:
Kunj Sarna: a business tycoon. Has been forcefully married to Twinkle Taneja. Tries his best to maintain his friendly behavior with her. A very simple and down-to-earth person.
Twinkle Kunj Sarna: a very well known fashion designer. She too was forced for this marriage, but like Kunj, she too tried her best to maintain a friendly relation with him. A very sweet person.
“BOTH HAVE SOMEWHAT STARTED LOVING EACH OTHER BUT HAVEN’T CONFESSED YET”

Twinkle’s POV:
Oh God. Please help me for how to tell Kunj that I’ve to go London for the showcase of my new collection. I know quite well that kunj won’t be able to live without me. He’s so used to of being with me, sharing his entire day’s experience with me. I know that he too is so busy with his business that he can’t come with me. What to do.
*End of POV*
“Twinkle. Twinkle..” Kunj rushed into the room. “I’m here Kunj, what happened? All set?” Twinkle said from the balcony facing her back towards him. He quickly rushed to the balcony, picked twinkle up and twirled her all around. Twinkle was quite delighted to see kunj si happy. “Kunj what happened? Any good news?!” She asked. Kunj kept her down and said “oh yes Twinkle. Today I got the news that my name has been nominated for the *best business tycoon in India* in the Global business awards. I’m so glad. And you know what, the award show is in London, so we both are leaving for London this Saturday!” “No excuses” he added. Twinkle quickly hugged kunj and said “Wow. That’s such a big news. And you know what, the showcase of my latest collection too is in London. I was just thinking for how to convince you for coming with me! You know naa that I never feel comfortable without you.

Anywhere” “Aww, my darling wife” he said and pulled her into a tight hug. Both of them didn’t want this moment to end, but were disturbed by the servant who knocked the door to call them for dinner.” They both felt bit awkward realizing their position. Twinkle was blushing like hell, and hide her blush, she buried her face in Kunj’s chest. Kunj, who noticed her blush smiled widely and caressed her hair. When Twinkle realized what she was again doing, she quickly left kunj and ran out of the room leaving a smiling kunj behind.

After the dinner, they both returned to their room. Both were sitting on the couch using the laptop searching for which hotel to stay in. Kunj was scrolling down and showing Twinkle the hotels when he felt some kinda weight on his shoulder. It was non other than Twinkle who had fallen asleep on his shoulder with her hands around his arm. Kunj tried to wake her up but she tightened her grip with her hands over Kunj’s waist with her head on his chest. Kunj smiled, caressed her hair and kissed her forehead. He wrapped his hand around her and went in deep sleep. It was morning, when the sun rays disturbed Twinkle’s sleep. She woke up and smiled broadly seeing her and her beloved husband’s position. She slightly kissed his cheek and went to the washroom to freshen up. As soon as she left, kunj opened his eyes, touched his cheek and smiled. “Now I can’t wait to confess you my love Twinkle.” He mumbled to himself.

It was Saturday (the day when twinj were supposed to leave for London). After a long travel, they finally reached. They first went to their hotel and rested for a while. Then kunj took her to Kynance Mews(one for the most romantic street in London). Since it was quite late so there weren’t many people there. Kunj went to the middle of the street. He held Twinkle’s hand and said “Twinkle I know that we both were forced into this marriage. And I know it was quite difficult for both of us to manage with each other. And by time, we both became friends.

Actually, the best of friends. I don’t know how and when did this friendship turn into love. Yes Twinkle, I love you, I really love you very much. I don’t know how this all happened but what I only know is that this Kunj Sarna is nothing without his Life, Twinkle Kunj Sarna”. Twinkle was so damn happythat years started gushing down her cheeks. She quickly turned towards kunj and hugged him as tightly as she could. It seemed as she’ll never let him go! ” I love you too kunj. I too am nothing without you. I love you!” was all she was able to say. Suddenly they heard some sounds of claps, to their surprise, it was of the locals of London clapping for them. Kunj smiled at them while Twinkle blushed endlessly. They both entwined their hands and left for the hotel and the two bodies became one!

After a week, the winner of the Best Business tycoon in India was announced and it was none other than Kunj Sarna. Also, Twinkle’s latest collection’s showcase was a huge success. That trip to London was undoubtedly the best one for both of them!

*THE END*

So, I hope that you all enjoyed enough. Since it was my first attempt, so all kind of comments are welcomed. Apology for any kind of errors! Thank you. ❀

58 Comments
  1. Supriya18d

    It was so cute Sarah….i luv it so much…pls write more….luv uh….may Allah bless uh

    1. SarahKhan

      Thank you so much Supriya. Since it’s my first try, so if it’d be liked, then I’d love to continue with some new ones! πŸ™‚

  2. Lovely os Sarah loved it

    1. SarahKhan

      Thank you Sushmitha! I’m glad.

  3. Shrutu

    hii dear it was amazing and i was also one of those silent readers and today only i also wrote a ff my first ff . i am also scared whether everyone will like it or not just like u r at the very moment i can understand ur feeling dear
    By the way ur story was just beautiful
    Sorry for my long blabbering but i could not control myself this time

    1. SarahKhan

      Aw. Thank you so much for the support shrutu. I hope your ff was appreciated by all. Can you pls send me it’s link so that I too can read it?! Thank you once again. :’)

      1. Shrutu

        yaa sure and here is the link : http://www.tellyupdates.com/beintehaa-mohabbat-manan-first-day-college-part-1/ plzz give ur precious comment

  4. Ramya

    Hi Sarah
    It was awesome superb lovely os i just loved it each n every part was amazing dear do write more loved it n love u

    1. SarahKhan

      Thank you so much. This really meant a lot.

  5. Ria

    Hey Sarah,
    That was such a cute and nice OS. Please do continue writing.πŸ˜€
    Woild do you mind telling which grade are you in?

    Regards,
    Ria

    1. SarahKhan

      Thank you so much Ria. I’ll Inshallah try my best to continue writing.
      I’m in grade 10th. What about you?!
      Thank you once again.

      1. Ria

        11th grade.

  6. Sohi

    Hey sara iam glad that you had open up with ideas the os was full of love waiting for more writings of yours be happy and Allahafiz

    1. SarahKhan

      Thank you so much.

  7. Loved it yaar!! Cute os! Sarah

  8. It was great sarah!
    R u on insta?

    1. SarahKhan

      Thank you Maryam. Yes I am but not so active! πŸ™‚

  9. Adya

    Well…that was soo cute.. I jst loved it…
    Welcome to TU…
    Do write more…
    Loads of love

    1. SarahKhan

      Thank you Adya. I’ll try my best to write more!

  10. Ayu

    Awww that was so cute!!
    Welcome to the family❀️

    1. Thank you Ayu. ❀

    2. SarahKhan

      Thank you Ayu.

  11. Good one ………..would love to see u writing more

    1. Thank you so much.

    2. SarahKhan

      Thank you Shimmer. I’ll IA try my best/to write more after my mids. πŸ™‚

  12. Chiku

    Woaah sarah thats very cute😍😍😍😍loved it. U r amazing j must say.
    Welcome to tei family. 😘😘😘
    Loads of love πŸ’œ

    1. Thankyouu so much.

    2. SarahKhan

      Thank you so much Chiku. I’m glad to get comments from amazing people like you!

  13. Kritika14

    Hey Sarah,
    This was amazing! So cute and sweet! Write more of these. Moreover, welcome to the TEI TU Family!

    Lovess! xx

    1. SarahKhan

      Thank you so much Monica

  14. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous cute os

  15. Zuha Fatima

    Hey Sarah Api,
    Well I am also a Pakistan from Karachi, sorry if you mind but please tell me which city you hail from?

    Also this was simply superb with the purity of elegance πŸ™‚ I enjoyed it a lot, do come up with more sooner πŸ™‚

    keep writing….

    Loads of love and support β™‘β™‘β™‘

    Keep smiling πŸ™‚ Always πŸ™‚

    1. SarahKhan

      Hey Zuha. Thank you so much for such a lovely comment. And of course, why would I mind. I too am from Karachi. Yay. And yeah, Insha’allah, I’ll try to write more as soon as I get free from my mids. :’)

      1. Zuha Fatima

        Sorry for being a bit personal, which school are you studying from?

    2. SarahKhan

      No prob. Beaconhouse school system. What about you?!

      1. Zuha Fatima

        Well I am studying @ Dawood Public School (For Girls) By the way what id your main Subject?

    3. SarahKhan

      Ohh. I’ve actually taken pre medical with add math as an optional. What about you? And in which grade are you?!

      1. Zuha Fatima

        Sounds great! Well I am in grade 8 .. a bit younger than you πŸ˜›

        As for grade 9 (selection of subject) I ought to select English literature πŸ™‚ Let’s see what happens πŸ˜‰

    4. SarahKhan

      Haha. Best of luck for whatever you do! Tbh, I’d suggest you to take add math or computer science. Few of my friends who’ve taken English literature are honestly not at all happy. But then again, it depends whether you’re interested in English or not! Kudos.

  16. SarahKhan

    No prob. Beaconhouse school system. What about you?!

  17. Simiyy

    Hey welcome to the TEI family
    It was really good
    Write more

    1. SarahKhan

      Thank you so much Simiyy.

  18. dreamer...arundhati

    Sara welcome to our tu family…..
    Lovely one dear

    1. SarahKhan

      Thank you so much.

  19. Wlcm to the tei tu group…….Its soooo good and veryyyyy romantic episode……luv it very much yaar….plsssss write like more story’s..luv u..tc..byyy….

    1. SarahKhan

      Thank you so much Priya. I’m really overwhelmed by all the lovely comments!

  20. Hey sarah api welcome to TU family and sorry also for late cmnt and os was soooooo cute and amazing and one thing same that i am also live in Pakistan plzzzz do write more os like this bye luv u….

    1. SarahKhan

      Thank you so very much Anayaali. I’m really glad that you liked it! IA I’ll try my best to write more! πŸ˜„

  21. Twinjfan.tamanna

    woww…sarah( I hope u’ll not mind me if I’ll not call u di)… Actually I in 9th grade… I loved ur writing… it doesn’t seem as if its ur first piece of writing…. the story was so cute and I loved it to the core…

    love you

    1. SarahKhan

      Haha. Aww. Thank you so much Tamanna. And of course, why would I mind having you call me di. Infact, I’m glad as I don’t have any younger sibling!

  22. Aanya_pandey

    Such a cute story it ws yrrr

    1. SarahKhan

      Thank youu.

  23. Vipul

    Hey Sarah, firstly really very sorry for late comment actually hectic shedule you know… so I was not active on TU these days…

    Well welcome to the TEI TU family.. n your OS was awesome mindblowing… the way describe everything it dosen’t seems that it was your first time to writing any os…. it was simply superb n romantic… loved it… keep writing more like this…

    Oh sorry let me introduce myself…. hi I’m Shalini… you call me Neha also and me too writing a ff… pls do read it if you can……

    Well come soon with next idea…

    Lots of love n support…

    “Shalini/Neha”

    1. SarahKhan

      Oh my God Vipul. Thank you so very much for such a lovely comment. I’m really overwhelmed to see how warmly all of you’ve welcomed me here! And, never mind for the late comment. I really am glad that you liked it. I’ll IA read your ff too. Can you send me the link pls?! Thank youu once again. God bless.

  24. Vipul

    Your always welcome… n thanks you too n my ffs name- “TEI-Ishq chupta nahin chupane(A possessive & blind love)~Twinj ff”…. n sorry I can’t give you the link I hope you’ll not mind….

    “Shalini/Neha”

    1. SarahKhan

      Aha, it’s okay. I know its quite hard to get the links directly. Btw, you won’t believe, I was just reading your ff. I’m on chap 2 right now. I like the storyline really!

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