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Home»Fan Fiction»Twinj FF: Undercover [Chapter 1]
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Twinj FF: Undercover [Chapter 1]

Naina0923By Naina0923July 3, 201641 Comments5 Mins Read
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I am really happy with d response that I got for the intro Thank u so much guys!!! Your comments mean a lot☺️One more thing I am kinda new to writing so I might make a lot of grammatical mistakes. If I make any mistakes do let me know so that I can improve upon it.Today’s update will be Twinkles Point of view(POV).

Link for the intro http://www.tellyupdates.com/twinj-ff-undercover-intro/comment-page-1

TWINKLE POV

It was a Monday morning, I got myself some coffee and rushed to work. It didn’t take much time to reach there.

I went and sat in my cubicle and got started with my work. Tring! Tring!The phone rang. I picked it up. “Miss Taneja, Mr Mehta requests your presence in the conference room” she says. I get up and take my files and notes, I walk towards the room.

“Ouch!” I shout as someone bumps into me. The things in my hand fall down. Oh God! I pretty much knew who was behind this, the one of the very few people I despise and my rival. “Kunj Sarna!” I shout. He giggled.

“You did this on purpose didn’t you” I say. He bends down to pick up my stuff. I stand as he does so. He picks everything up and stands. Then when I was about to take it from his hand , he again throws them down and leaves. “You Jerk! I say irritated. But I realise that people were looking at me so I bend down and pick up my stuff and stomp towards the room.

I knock the door. “Come in” Mr Mehta says. “May I know why your late Miss Taneja” he asks me. Kunj smirks, I give him a death stare. “Sir it was because of…” I was about to finish my sentence when “That’s enough Miss Taneja we shall not waste more of our time, take your seat” Mr Mehta says. I sit down.

“There has been a report of a person who is part of a mob who has been creating quite a nuisance and is planning on planting a bomb” he says seriously. He looked quite worried too.

“Then what are we waiting for let’s catch this guy” Kunj says. Me and the others nod.

“It isn’t that easy Mr Sarna, apparently we are unaware of his identity” he says disappointedly. There was silence in the room. What? We are unaware of his identity then how are we gonna catch this guy I thought to myself.

“I know you all are confused as of what are we gonna do now” he says. We all nod disappointedly. “But, we have got the news that this person is staying in hiding in a small chawl here, and we have a few suspects” he says. There was sigh of relief in all of us that at least we have a little hope of finding him before its too late.

“Now we want the very best of agents to handle this mission” he says. “When I call your name I would like you to get up?” He says.

“Miss Zaidi, Mr Sarna” Kunj gets up with pride as Mr Mehta calls his name.

“Mr David, Miss Khurana and Miss Taneja” he says. I get up as he calls my name. I smile.

“Now out of you 5, Miss Khurana, Mr David and Miss Zaidi will be handling stuff here in the office and working on the whereabouts” he said.

Oh no! I know where this is heading to. I look at Kunj. I guess even he got where this is gonna go. We both look at each other for a few seconds. “And Miss Taneja and Mr Sarna will be going undercover” and there you go he said it. I am so not going undercover with Mr Kunj Sarna.

“But Sir….” Me and Kunj say at the same time. “Let me complete my sentence both of you” Mr Mehta says. “You both are gonna go undercover as a newly married couple” he said and gave us the shock of our lives.

Going undercover with him seemed like a big problem but going undercover as husband and wife, can this get any worse.

“No Sir! We can’t…Please” I mutter. Even Kunj blabbers something. “I honestly thought that you both would take this professionally I honestly didn’t expect this reaction from both of you” He said disappointedly.

“We selected the two of you because we thought that you could handle this mission but never mind then…” He said. No this is not right Mr Mehta thought I was trustworthy, I can’t give up on this.

“Sir…” I say, surprisingly even Kunj says at the same time. “I will do it” I said as I didn’t want the hatred towards Kunj affect my job. “So will I” Kunj says.

“Then that’s great then I will call you after a few minutes for more details on your Undercover mission” Mr Mehta says.

***

Hope you liked the first chapter. Do leave your comments

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    41 Comments

    1. SidMin on July 3, 2016 7:15 pm

      Loved it Twinj to go undercover as Husband and Wife thats so good for us Waiting for the next episode

      • Naina0923 on July 3, 2016 9:13 pm

        Thanx☺️
        Will write n update soon

    2. Saby on July 3, 2016 7:50 pm

      Naina? the epi was very nice
      Unique concept?
      And their fights…..
      Awesome waiting for more fights

      • Naina0923 on July 3, 2016 9:15 pm

        Thank u!!!☺️
        I assure a lot of fights ahead?

    3. Lovely on July 3, 2016 8:03 pm

      Amazing chapter… U wrote it so well

      • Naina0923 on July 3, 2016 9:16 pm

        Thank u so much!!!?
        Means a lot
        As I am kinda new to writing

    4. shreya098 on July 3, 2016 8:26 pm

      loved it..
      very interesting start..
      continue soon

      • Naina0923 on July 3, 2016 9:17 pm

        Glad that u loved it☺️
        Will continue soon

    5. Maggi on July 3, 2016 8:27 pm

      Wow…. Twinj cute fightz,professional yet raw… Luvd it:)

      • Naina0923 on July 3, 2016 9:19 pm

        There are gonna be quite a lot of nok jhoks ahead?
        Really glad that u loved it

    6. Sayeeda on July 3, 2016 8:43 pm

      Amazing one…..excited to see twinj as married couple …
      U described each scene so well..I’m so excited for next one…post soon

      • Naina0923 on July 3, 2016 9:20 pm

        Gosh!☺️
        Thank u so much Sayeeda!!!
        Will post soon?

    7. Fan on July 3, 2016 9:11 pm

      Wow they r going undercover as a married couple..iam very excited for the nxt epi..plz post it soon..

      • Naina0923 on July 3, 2016 10:54 pm

        Really glad that u liked it?
        Will post soon

    8. Shonaa... on July 3, 2016 9:30 pm

      It was amazing…. twinj cute fight nd now they will go as husband nd wife…. waiting for nxt one…. .

      • Naina0923 on July 3, 2016 10:55 pm

        Thank u so much!
        Glad that u liked it
        Will post soon

    9. Purnima.agrawal30 on July 3, 2016 9:58 pm

      loved it…..twinj nok jhok…maze aa gye…

      • Naina0923 on July 3, 2016 10:56 pm

        Thank u?
        More nok jhoks coming ahead?

    10. Shatakshi on July 3, 2016 10:20 pm

      Omg naina
      It was such a fresh concept
      Loved it to the core
      The way u express is just Awesome
      ❤❤❤❤❤

      • Naina0923 on July 3, 2016 10:57 pm

        So happy that u liked it
        Gosh! Thanx☺️?

    11. Romaisah on July 4, 2016 12:44 am

      hehe nice epi … I smiled at the reactions of kunj n twinkle :v

      • Naina0923 on July 4, 2016 5:47 am

        Thanx!
        Glad that I could make u smile?

    12. loveleen on July 4, 2016 12:48 am

      hey i liked dis episd….waitng fr nxt part…

      • Naina0923 on July 4, 2016 5:47 am

        Glad that u liked it ?
        Will post d next part soon

    13. kruti on July 4, 2016 5:36 am

      Nice beginning ….waiting for d nxt one

      • Naina0923 on July 4, 2016 6:01 pm

        Thanx Kruthi ☺️
        I will post d next one soon

    14. Kavina on July 4, 2016 6:03 am

      I loved it

      • Naina0923 on July 4, 2016 6:02 pm

        So glad that u loved it?
        Thanx for reading

    15. Angita on July 4, 2016 9:15 am

      Liked it.,…I loved it….superb

      • Naina0923 on July 4, 2016 6:03 pm

        Thank u so much for reading!!!
        Really glad that u liked it☺️

    16. twinjfan-(tamanna) on July 4, 2016 9:55 am

      awesome…twinj as a married couple..wow..in ur first epi itself u hv make me add ur ff in my favorite list.. plz post asap…

      • Naina0923 on July 4, 2016 6:04 pm

        Thank u so much!!!?
        U added my FF to ur fav list❤️
        Omg! I am so honoured ☺️?
        Thanx!!!
        Will post in a day or so

    17. dreamer...arundhati on July 4, 2016 7:54 pm

      Naina count me to in the list of ur ff fans
      Sorry der 4 late comment
      Osum

      • Naina0923 on July 4, 2016 8:53 pm

        Thanx Arundhati!!!!?
        So glad that u liked it
        No probs if your late just glad that u considered reading it??

    18. zayb_zikra on July 4, 2016 10:03 pm

      Superbbbbbbb amazing..
      Do cont asap

      • Naina0923 on July 4, 2016 10:09 pm

        Thank u!!!!?
        Will continue asap?

    19. Ria on July 5, 2016 3:56 am

      The episode was amazing..do continue soon.

      • Naina0923 on July 5, 2016 5:56 am

        Thank u so much Ria!!!?
        Will continue asap

    20. baby on July 6, 2016 2:26 am

      osm naina sry fr being sooooooooooooo late pls continue n post asap

      • Naina0923 on July 7, 2016 7:27 am

        It’s okay!!!
        Thank u so much for reading ?
        Means a lot to me?

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