Twinj ff – love or mistake ???? Episode 1


Hey guys …
Thnx for suggestions
@ I will give past between present …. I know many of u suggested to give past first but I was having a good idea for showing past between present so that is why I had choosen 2nd option .
@ yuvraj opposite will be mahi .. if the situation will suit I will add her sry but I can’t promise …
@ and plz try cooperate with me if will give u short updates .
@ I will concentrate on each and every charcter of ff … so the story will go slow … so plz don’t panic….
@ plz imagine sid as kunj … plz ….
@ thnx for ur comments in Proglogue …


Link of proglogue of twinj version : Click here

Link of Proglogue of swasan version : Prologue – Click here

Recap – Proglogue ; A girl confronts a boy .


♡Episode 1 ♡
The boy was sitting on bed and was crying recalling his past . His face is revealed . He is none other than kunj {many or all of u have guessed right }
Kunj {monologue}- why ???? Why have u done this with me . . Why ???? When first time I falled in love with someone u snatched it with me … why ????? I know I have done wrong with her … I should not …..
His chain of thought was disturbed by someone’s knock on the door . It was her mom usha
Usha – kunj puttar , come food is ready … ??
Kunj nods yes . Usha was about to leave when she notices tear marks on kunj’s face and his eyes which had swelled bcoz of crying .
Usha {with concern }- kunj , are u crying ???? ??
Kunj {hiding his tears and with a fake smile }- no mom , just work stress and nothing… u go na I will come down …. ??
Usha {in a little ordering tone } – ok …. freshen up fast and come down … ur papa is waiting for u …. ??

Kunj {with again a fake smile } – ok meri maan now go …. ??

Saying this kunj takes usha out of the room and closes the door from inside . Here usha is still thinking what had happened suddenly to his son . SHe goes from there with unsatisfaction.


Here the girl reaches to his house and he rings the door bell . A lady in late 50’s comes opens the door .
Lady {with little concern }- bohot jaldi aagai tu twinkle { u have came so early twinkle } ??
{ So the girl is one other then our twinkle … again most or many of u have guessed correct and the lady is twinkle ‘s ma leela }

Twinkle {with blank expression as she is still thinking about kunj } – there was much work in office …??
Leela sensed something is fishy so she asked – I am ur mum I can easily sense that something is wrong so tell me clearly where u were till now bcoz u should have returned one hour before this … ??
Listening leela’s queries about his life twinkle became furious and blurted out kunj’s anger on leela.
twinkle {with his full anger } – ma… I am not a small nursery kid …. I am big enough to take care of myself & who are u to question me … I am ur daughter not ur servant to answer ur each and every nonsense question … so never try to ask me this question again that where I were ??? I can …. ??

She was interrupted by his father’s voice .
Raman {twinkle’s father} { with same angry tone as twinkle }- PRINCESS…. how dare u to speak like this with ur mom … she is also ur mom …. not ur servant ….??
Twinkle {realized what she said to leela and asked for forgiveness} – sorry papa ….
Raman {with a little calm tone but still angry } – ok … but remember that ur mom is not at all ur servant …. she does work of the whole house but never complained … she neither asked for holiday nor a break …. I know there are servants in house to work but still she had to work … but where in house where there is no servants .. then these women work day and night for their family .. sometimes a woman had to work in home also and outside also to earn their livelihood … so now mind ur tounge … and go to ur room now .. ??

Twinkle goes from there with a guilt in her face .
Twinkle goes inside her room and closes the door and cries .
Twinkle {monologue } – why god ??? Why have u done this with .me .. this is second time when I got betrayal … I hate u MR.KUNJ SARNA … now enough … I can’t bear this pain … I want to share this pain with someone .. but with whom .. ??
Suddenly twinkle sees a diary kept on her study table . She goes near her table and sat on the chair .

Twinkle {a idea popped out in her mind }- DIARY …
{Hope u guys understood the idea }


So guys … this was the 1st episode hope u liked it … do share ur valuable comments …. and i know today chappy was boring but i want tell about mother’s importance in our life. So
… want a precap … ok ..ok… lelo …
Precap – twinkle started writing diarry {past } happy moments of papa mumma and princess ….??

Ok tata ….
Take care …
Keep smiling …

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  1. Nice…keep it up

  2. Kritika14

    Really loved it. Eager for the next episode already. Hope you don’t keep me waiting! Loves xx

  3. Ayu

    Sanju! It is grabbing my attention sooo badly! I wanna know whats gonna happen!! Pls cont this soon!! Loving it?

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Oh no its grabbing ur attention really !!!!!!! Thnx … and next part will be posted soon …

  4. Awesome

  5. SidMin

    Wow Loved it the episode was so emotional cute sometimes we really burst out someone else’s anger on our mom 🙂 Loved it post soon 🙂

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx ….. and same with me also … and once again thnx

  6. Amazing epi.. great start of the story.. really loved it.. eagerly waiting for the next ?

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx next part will be posted soon

  7. Rashiverma2199

    Sanjana amazing episode…..loved it….sorry couldn’t comment on prologue….

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx ….. and its ok …

  8. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous interesting emotional epi …..

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx for describing m ff in so may words ….y

  9. Superb epi…

  10. Sonali05

    Superb epi…..
    Really loved it…
    Eagerly waiting for next epi

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx …. next part will be posted soon…

  11. Tara

    woo… awsm.. sanju..(hope u dont mind me calling u that)
    waiting for the next part

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx and I will not mind it …. and next part will be soon …

  12. Ramya

    Hey sanju
    Awesome episode dear
    Really loved it
    I loved d way u said abt mom
    Heart touching dear
    Plsss asap

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Hey ramya
      Thnx …..
      Next part will be soon …

  13. Kruti

    Amazing yar….post d nxf one soon

    1. Sanjanaagrawal

      Thnx next part will be soon….

  14. Baby

    Sanjana amazing luvd it although pta nhi kya hua hai twinj ke beech me cnt w8 I need to read more…

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