Twinj: Endless love… (OS)

Twinj: Endless love…..
Hey guys Anushka here. I m just overwhelmed by reading ur comments. I just can’t believe I got 81comments. Thank u so much Abc,mitali, Sam, akku di, crazy,baby, aakriti, Aastha, mystery, zayb_zikra, srishti, sidmin, swasan=love, Aurora, Anu Mishra, crazy, anu, twinj, twinj forever, Sofia, Sakshi,bhavya, riyaana, plz, Olivia, pavani, joker, human being, dheemahee, ishaaan, preeti, lama, earl, anu, aarti, sanam, Fiona and silent readers for silent support.

U can read my earlier stories:-
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Twinj%3A+true+love+never+dies

So here it goes.
Characters- kunj, twinkle, rt and leela.

One day, a young guy named kunj and a young girl named twinkle fell in love.

But Kunj came from a poor family. So twinkle’s parents weren’t too happy.

So kunj decided not only to court the girl but to court her parents as well. In time, the parents saw that he was a good man and was worthy of their daughter’s hand.

But there was another problem:

Kunj was a soldier. Soon, war broke out and he was being sent overseas for a year.
The week before he left, Kunj knelt on his knee and asked his lady love twinkle, “Will you marry me?” She wiped a tear, said yes, and they were engaged. They agreed that when he got back in one year, they would get married.

But tragedy struck. A few days after he left, the girl had an accident. It was a head-on collision.

When twinkle woke up in the hospital, she saw her father and mother crying. Immediately, she got to know that there was something wrong.

She later found out that she suffered brain injury. The part of her brain that controlled her face muscles was damaged. Her once lovely face was now disfigured. She cried as she saw herself in the mirror. “Yesterday, I was beautiful. Today, I’m a monster.” Her body was also covered with so many ugly wounds.

Right there and then, she decided to release her fiancé from their promise. She knew he won’t love her anymore. She would have to forget about him and never see him again.

For one year, kunj wrote many letters—but she didn’t answer. He phoned her many times but she didn’t return her calls.

But after one year, leela walked into her room and announced, “He’s back from the war.”

Twinkle shouted, “No! Please don’t tell him about me. Don’t tell him I’m here!”

Leela the mother of twinkle said, “He’s getting married,” and handed her a wedding invitation.

Twinkle’s heart sank. She knew she still loved him but she had to forget him now becoz of her ugly monster face.

With great sadness, she opened the wedding invitation.

And then she saw her name “Twinkle” written on it!

Confused, she asked, “What is this?”

That was when Kunj entered her room with a bouquet of flowers. He knelt beside her and asked, “Will you marry me?”

Twinkle covered her face with her hands and said, “I’m ugly!”

Kunj said, “Without ur permission, mom sent me ur photos. When I saw them , I realized that nothing has changed. You’re still the person I fell in love. You’re still as beautiful as ever. Because I love you!”

Twinkle wid out saying anything hugged him.

They married each other and lived happily.
And twinkle’s face recovered after marriage through various surgeries.

Hope u like it.
God bless
Love u
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Keep commenting.

Credit to: Anushka

85 comments

  1. Olivia

    That’s what which is called a one slot. It’s amazing piece of writing by an amazing writer.

    • Anushka

      Yup I will surely update next one but can’t say when becoz I have my xams starting next week. Thanks for commenting.

  2. Mystery

    Lovely episode Anushka. Looking forward to see ur another one slot. Love uhhhh and ur one slot

    • Anushka

      Thanq u for commenting Aashima but I can’t say when I will upload my next is as I have exams

  3. Aakanksha

    Ohhhhh anu…..what to say u hav just left me speechless yaar….all I can say is I love u to the cube of infinity….keep writing dear

    • Anushka

      Akku di u left me speechless wid ur comment. I love u 2. Thanq for encouraging me and commenting. A comment of a great writer like u means alot

    • Anushka

      Actually mannat i haven’t taken it from Facebook but I took ideas from Internet. And it can’t be same as more than half of the story is made up by me. In my previous os twinj: true love never dies many readers demanded not to make anyone dead and then I wasn’t getting ideas so I just checked in internet about stories and I got a story with same central idea but it was about a business man and was really too short.So I did some changes in language, concept,length, characters and off course the ending. So u can say this story is entirely diff from that story.

  4. very nice yaar anushka…great concept..bt i would love to read a bit detailed stories..as u r good writer so can i request this from u??
    once again loved it

    • Anushka

      Off course Tara I would write a detailed one next time. Thank u so much for commenting and appreciating me.

  5. Srishti

    So Sorry annu today also I m late but can’t do anything as I have school
    But still u write so so well that I m addicted towards u. I m just proud to be ur frnd and a fan

    • Anushka

      It’s totally fine wid me dear but I m also sorry for replying u so late. I just love u sri and ur comment. How do u always manage to bring a smile on my face.

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