twinj….ek kahani (few shorts) shot 1

Hey guys thnx a lot for your comments
so lets start the epi

The sun rays falls on a girl she wakes up her eyes became red due to continue crying …….suddenly their was a knock on the door “TWINKLE ” ( yes the girl is twinkle )
tw- mahi u here in early morning.
ma- i m here to give u a good no best news of my life ( guys twihi are childhood besties)
tw- what ?????
ma- my marriage is fixed with karan.
tw- wow such a best news and they both hug eo
ma- but i think u r not good is everything ok
between u and jiju.
tw- yeh……
ma- don’t lie to me
tw- yehh…and suddenly she starts crying
ma- what happened twinkle and consoles her

“FLASBACK”
twinkle came out frm the bathroom in a pink towel wrap on her body suddenly she bumped into kunj and they both fall on bed they were lost in eo and both came close to eo and their lips met that was a passionate kiss full of love…………and kunj with a sudden jurk got up frm the bed….
ku- what have i done how i will face maya tw r u mad u know na i love maya how can we come close to eo……i can’t love u tw never …..saying this he gone out leaving tw shock…
tw sat and crids bitterly and she sleeps
FLASBACK ENDS

ma- its k tw one or oher day jiju will realize his love for u
tw- he will never realize his love better will be we get divorce
mahi gets shock……

precap- yes i don’t love him

so guys how it was please comment i need ur comments to continue this plzzz my frnds
bye guys
adeeba

26 comments

  1. Aamna_2690

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    Hey adeeba!!
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    The episode was awsum…. loved it…. but don’t u think it was too short….. but it’s ok…… plz post the next episode soon……
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    Kya yaar soch rahi hona yeh kab se bakbak kiye jaa rahi hai…. introduce toh kiya nai khud ko…..
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    So let me introduce my self…..
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    My self Aamna….. i am 16 n a total chatter box…. a small part of this twinj family n a ff writer….. will u be like to my friend????
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    N welcome to our crazy family of twinj world…..
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    Plz post the next episode soon…..
    Waitinggggg!!!!!
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    Loads of love n support ❤❤❤
    Keep smiling😊😊☺☺
    From;
    Aamna

  2. SidMin

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    Loved it 🙂 Awesome 🙂 Feeling sad for Twinkle I think Kunj also loves her but why did he blame Twinkle for the Kiss ?
    Twinkle want DIVORCE
    post soon can’t wait 🙂
    love you 🙂

  3. Priya23

    Hey adeeba…sorry 4 not cmnting ur intro.. This plot is very good…love it.. Plzz plzz post ur next epi soon dear…and try to bit longer..m waiting..

    Ok now my intro if u want… m from Bangladesh….17 years old..And yes we r also friend’s but can i called u as sister..if u don’t mind..?? OK..now m going..
    Stay happy and keep smiling..
    Love you..

  4. Adya

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    Well yeah… amazing one yrr..I love it already.
    I’m too toooo excited for the next… divorce.. kiss.. waoh.. awesome ….
    Try posting soon…
    love you!

      • Adya

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        Arre.. I’m so sry sabko wait karna pada … Maine submit kr Diya h.. Dekho kab post hota h..
        Well love you too cutie sis..

    • Priya23

      Yehhh Yehhh.. Yepppyyyy.. Sabmit kardia..oh god m waiting 4 it desperately yaar…thanks.. Wese may v tumse badi hu adya… Just joking.. He he he. OK ..love u sistar

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