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Twinj: Bakhuda Tumhi Ho (Prologue)

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Inspired by “LOVE CURE” whose friendship brings positivity in HIS life.

Bakhuda Tumhi Ho-
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Kunj Manohar Sarna, an arrogant and drug addict with a painful past.
Dr. Twinkle, a girl who had eloped from her home for building her career and to save herself from her greedy brother. She was hired by Mr. Manohar to cure Kunj’s addiction through a legal six months contract.
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His heart was shattered, eyes dried, trust broken into pieces that pained him every now and then but maintained a straight, cold, cruel and unaffected mask on his face.

She was like the most beautiful star of the night just like her name whose light and warmth was destined to show him his way.
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Will she be able to build his trust once again?
Will she be able to bring him back to his life?
Will she be able to heal him or end up by getting herself broken?
How she’ll stop him from taking drugs?
Will they live blissfully or would his past come haunting?
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PROLOGUE:
He was breathing heavily, painting and Twinkle could see him sweating all over.
He hadn’t taken drugs as promised but his body wasn’t ready for this sudden change. He was getting another panic attack. “Kunj try to calm down please”, she said hardly controlling her tears.
“I…I….c..can’t…bear this pain”, he managed to say
“Tell me what can I do?”
“Just distract me, talk something unimportant, do anything to distract my mind so that I don’t think about it”
She couldn’t understand half of his words but just understood one thing, she shouldn’t think about anything now….
He was still rubbing the corner of his forehead through his fingers to get some relief from that horrible feeling when Twinkle made him to face her through holding his shoulder and gave a tight slap to him straight on his cheek. He was shocked on his sudden gesture, but soon his mind was diverted to that burning sensation.
“I…actually..this was the only way to….”she stuttered turning her face to other side
He leaned close to her, though she didn’t turn but she could feel his breath on her shoulder which was giving ghoosebumbs all over her body
He came close to her ear and whispered “I’m already addicted enough, I don’t want to get habitual of these slaps now. So now do that again”, saying this he stood up from couch and left from there.
She sat there confused because she didn’t understand half of his words maybe due to mismanagement of his tongue or maybe because her mind was numb at the moment.
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Thank you for reading!
Hey everyone! So much overwhelmed to get such amazing response from you all on my One Shot. Hopefully you all liked this Prologue too, episodes will be start posting from next week till then shoot your love through comments because I’ll love to read that. Also I had taken inspiration from a novel “Love cures”, telling you before so that you don’t complaint afterwards, though it’ll be different from the novel but still it’s my responsibility to inform.
Keep smiling:-)
Love you all<3
Take care!

46 Comments
  1. Fenil

    Superb

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much.

  2. Maha_Aijaz

    Error: In last dialogue of Kunj it’s, “I’m already addicted enough, I don’t want to get habitual of these slaps now. So never do that again”. Instead of NOW there’s NEVER.
    Sorry peeps for the blunder, actually I completely forgot to read before submitting.

  3. Anusha

    Superb

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much dear.

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much dear.

  4. Presha

    Awesome
    Loved it

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much dear.

  5. Diffrent story post soon

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much dear.

  6. amazing ☺ waiting for further epiosdes post soon

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much dear.

  7. Different & interesting story.

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you so much dear.

  8. Ayesha51

    awsm.& amazng love story
    post asap
    love u

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much dear. Love you too<3

  9. Awesome amazing fantastic episode dear
    plzzz post soon dear

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much dear for such sweet words.

  10. fantastic
    post soon

  11. Maha_Aijaz

    Thank you very much dear. Yes I’ll post soon:*

  12. Unheard-Of

    OMG!! The prologue was Brilliant…😍
    It was as fantastic as it could be!
    Hoping to see the next part soon… 😊

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much dear:*

  13. Superb
    Loved it
    But what was kunj’s past that made him Luke these…..
    Plzz post soon

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much dear:* for knowing the past you’ve to wait for episodes XD so keep reading.

  14. Awsm concept man loved it now plss post tge 1st soon can’t wait

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much dear:* yes will post soon<3

  15. already excited

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much dear:*

  16. Marrie

    New concept
    Amazing
    Excited
    Post soon

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much dear:* keep reading.

  17. Twinj2000

    WOW yaar that so amazing 😁😁👍👍
    Different concept ❤️❤️😇
    Loved it ❤️❤️
    Eager
    Post soon😘😘
    Waiting 😁🤗

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much dear:*

  18. Baby

    hey maha dii sorry to run away i between only actually its my bestieesss bday sooo wish kar rhi thi…..♥

    well to d prologue god am dying ♥ it was full of suspense ♥
    loved it alott dii ♥
    u nailed it ♥
    lods of love ♥
    post soo 🙂

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you really very much dear and no need of apologies in fact wish your bestie a very happy birthday by my side too:*

      1. Baby

        thanku maha dii ♥

  19. Ramya

    Awesome Amazing

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much dear:*

  20. Shalini15

    Amazing superb concept. Loved it. Looking forward to read it. Do continue soon.

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much dear:* well just now I’ve asked you to read on your previous comment but you’re already here XD thanks for reading<3

  21. Ananya_DSK

    Amazing!!! Absolutely loved it!!!
    You are an amazing writer, I must say…
    Too good…

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you so much dear for your sweet words:*

  22. Aneka choudhary

    Amazing ….very nice

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much dear:*

  23. Nishuu

    Superb

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much dear:*

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