Twinj: Bakhuda Tumhi Ho (My Happily Ever After)

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Bakhuda Tumhi Ho-
MY HAPPILY EVER AFTER! (Epilogue)
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-5 years later-
Kunj’s POV:
I’m standing in front of my room’s window and just staring at… Nothing in particular. How things have changed! How life has changed in past few years!
I could hear the loud crys of the babies. My twin daughters. Twinkle! That’s all I remember every time I see them.
Just then Disha came in. “Kunj! What’re you doing? They’re crying!” She exclaimed worriedly and came running to pacify the babies.
One of them has big eyes like Twinkle’s and the other is a complete imitation of me. Small, deep eyes, little pink lips and fair complexion.

“Olelele… Don’t cry baby.”
Oh! Did I mention, this celebration, this decoration, this happiness, it’s all for our lovely princesses as today is their ‘Naming ceremony.’
I thought I had enough happiness and I should stop wishing for more. But Twinkle didn’t. She believed… If our hearts can desire it, we can have it.
After her final transplant session, doctor had clearly warned me that we shouldn’t be seeing such a dream for the upcoming few years. Her body has just gone through so much and is weakly immune. We should keep her in a dust and contamination free environment and restrain from having a baby for at least a few years. ‘Her body isn’t strong enough to carry a baby now.’ I clearly accepted those words of doctor and didn’t think about anything else because for me nothing was important than my Twinkle. But Twinkle didn’t. She didn’t want to listen to me, to the doctor. She kept assuring me she was OK and her body could really handle that. But I was firm on my decision which made her sad and depressed.
Before that day, I never realized the importance of a child in her life, in OUR life. I was afraid, scared to be a father. What if I ended up being a bad father and spoiled my child’s life just like my mother did with me! Not that I didn’t trust Twinkle, I didn’t trust myself.
However her stubbornness, her pain and lonliness forced me to bow down in front of her. Though she didn’t do anything but still I lost because sometimes the biggest punishment we can give to people is… Nothing at all! Going against the doctor was never an option for me so we opted to adopting an orpha kid for her. And we adopted the same child from the ‘Happy Palace’ that had called us mumma and papa that day. I just couldn’t get that little girl out of my head! She’s ‘Roshni’. And she’s indeed our ‘Roshni’ (light)
And four years later, Twinkle started pastering me about having our child. How could she forget! She had been counting every month, every week and even day since that meeting with doctor. Not that she loves Roshni any less but she says, she wanted a part of me, my soul inside her, someone who’d remind me of my childhood and my happiness. And no happiness could be compared to that. And she was right!
The time that I spend with her during her expecting period was worth it. I got to see a whole new person in that duration. She was no more the mature, sensible person she once used to be but like a stubborn child who want their every demand fulfilled at any cost. She woke me up in the middle of the night and asked me to cook such Indian foods which I had never heard of in my life! And after I had cooked them, she’d say her mood was gone. She had become the over-emotional TV serial wife who made their husbands do anything and everything and if I refused politely, she used to cry loudly which I had grown really afraid of theses days! She snored more than normal, made me shopping with her for hours, cook when we were home and she had started watching those over-emotional TV serials which she never did before! Also she totally FORCED me into watching them!
My office had become a distant dream. She didn’t let me leave her side from the first day of her second trimester! Everytime I tried to leave, she complained about it to dad that I was ignoring her because she was looking fat and unattractive and MY dad who had become HER dad scolded me and kicked me out of the office asking or rather warning me to be by her side!
Everyday we were using a measuring tape for measuring her belly to see how much our baby has grown. I can never forget that Twinkle who is captured in my eyes, her face glistening with a glow, her belly round with our child and the smile of happiness and contentment on her face which never faded away despite the pain she was in!
We boys can actually never understand the pain woman go through during their expectancy and all their lives that too with a smile on their faces! Her feet swelled up due to her body’s overweight, feeling nauseated all the time, waking up in the middle of the night and craving for junk because the baby wanted it, feeling pleasure at the pain of the baby’s body moments when it kicks from inside and the excruciating near death experience in the labor room. Really… I can never forget that horrible yet blissful day! Horrible because my Twinkle bore so much pain in front of my eyes and I couldn’t do anything while blissful because… I was blessed with two little princess who are my life besides Twinkle and Roshni. I asked her to opt out for surgery but she was adamant that the blood loss during the surgery can harm the baby. Baby! Baby! Baby! Like her life, her pain was a minor detail in comparison to the baby! Everytime I mentioned my worries, she just smiled- a breath taking one and said, “Kunj! It’s all worth it and one day, you’ll realize it!”
That time I didn’t understand the meaning of her words. I was repulsed by the thought of loving her or even tolerating something that’d hurt her so much!
Her screams, when she went into the labor went through my body like I was being burnt alive! Like it was my physical pain and not hers! But still after an hour of the birth of our twin daughters, she was smiling. Really! How could she smile! I couldn’t! I couldn’t get over HER pain and she forgot it like nothing happened! Really… Women are stronger than men, in every aspect.
“Kunj!” Disha almost screamed in my ears.
“Ouch Disha! Are you mad? Or am I deaf?” I shouted exasperatingly.
“I should be asking the same thing to you! Are you OK? I’ve been calling you since ten minutes and you’re just lost in your own world. What happened Kunj? Is everything OK?”
“Hmmm! Everything is perfect.” I grinned ear to ear and was about to ask about Twinkle when the baby started crying. “Give her to me.” I said before carefully taking the little bundles of joy from Disha.
“Don’t cry baby. Mumma is getting ready.” Hearing the word ‘mumma’ they become quite which I really love. Now I’ve realized this. She loves them… More than she loves me. And I can’t hate anything that my Twinkle loves. And now I’ve realized the importance of all my three angels in my life. The insecurities, the pain, the worries long gone. But Roshni will always be my most favorite daughter maybe because she’s elder one among all siblings or maybe because she was the first one to make me experience the unexpressable feeling of a father. The sudden jolt when she called me ‘papa’ is undefinable!
“Disha, I’ll just go and check on Twinkle. I need to see what’s taking so long.” Saying this, I went downstairs to the room where she was getting ready. I saw the makeup artist, her team and the hairstylist leaving which was a great relief. Moving inside, I saw my Twinkle sitting on the dressing chair happy and satisfied. Just one look on her and my world gets muted which I still couldn’t figure out HOW! She looks so mesmerizing that her looks defy her age all the time. I’m indeed really lucky to have her and thanking Lord for this blessing would be less. No one on this planet can never be lucky enough to have Twinkle as their life partner. That’s so much special she is. I thanked her mentally. That has become a reflex.
Now evey time I see her, I remember how she pulled me out of the darkness and led me to the light, how she transformed me from a wasted drug addict to a good son, responsible husband and a proud father.
She turned around sensing my presence but within a second, her eyes shifed to the babies and she walked to me beaming before taking them from my arms.

“Thanks Kunj for bringing them here. You’ve no idea how much I was missing them!” She said while kissing their cheeks without even glancing at me for a second.
“You’re looking breathtakingly beautiful.” I whispered leaning on her ear to grab her attention on which I succeeded. She slightly blushed which is always a heavenly sight for me.
“Thank you. You too are no less.” She replied looking at me. Her eyes holding love and only love for me!
“Now we should proceed to the hall where everybody is waiting. Shall we princess?” I asked softly taking one baby from her.
“Kunj! I’m a mother of three kids now! Don’t call me princess!” She whines like a child making me laugh. “Roshni is our princess.”
Nodding my head slowly, I pulled her towards me with my right arm through her waist. “I agree Mrs. Sarna. But then, you’re the queen of my heart as well as of this Villa. OK!”
She shook her head while laughing softly. “Sure!” She chirped and before dropping a kiss on her forehead, I stepped back.
She put her hand in mine and we both walked towards the hall where everyone was waiting for us. Dad, Disha, Yuvraj, my princess- Roshni, Nanu, Rishab and his finacé, Raina.
“Look! Who has come finally.” Arohi said looking at us in happiness. I smiled at her- my sister, who has grown into a beautiful lady. For me, she’s no less than an angel just popped out of a fairytale.

She’s no longer weak, innocent child we brothers had to protect all the time. She has grown, she has become mature. Thanks to this hypocrite society!

Flashback
-4 years ago-
“Bhai! I can’t sit at home like this! I want to join your office. You can give me any post which matches my profile. I’ll happily do it.” Arohi was adamant at joining office.
Arohi started to work in a branch of Kunj’s office which was in Bangalore. She was coming out of her depression and forgetting everything, living her life, making friends and being like all other office girls, open-minded and frank. She was managing her studies as well as office. They say, ‘a busy bee has no time for sorrow.’ That’s what she was doing, keeping herself so busy that she doesn’t think about her pain, her loss in these years. But sometimes, going through a bad incident, is like stepping on a chewing gum. Where ever you go, it follows. Past isn’t something which would leave you so easily. That time she became friend with a guy, Rahil and he was literally the first guy whom she talked or trusted in past one year.
But it all ended in a worst way one day. There was a meeting and the whole team of management was called to the team manager’s cabin. They discussed about a few things after which Arohi left and their were only men of the unit sitting there. And the topic deviated to something else.
Suddenly, someone asked Rahil, “Hey buddy, listen! That Arohi, what’s going on between you two?”
Rahil clearly told them they were just friends. The others didn’t believe him, but he kept on insisting that they were only good friends and nothing more was there.
But what that person next said shocked him. “Oh man! You’re so slow! Just ask her and see! All this has happened to her once already, nothing would change much if it happens twice! She’s that type of girl!”
Rahil was paralyzed and frozen due to shock. Somewhere in his heart, he really liked Arohi and respected her for being so strong but for him there were more important things in that situation. If he fought or said anything to his senior, he’d lose his job! So chose to walk out like a coward. However the worst part was, Arohi was standing right outside the door and had heard every word of it. He wanted to comfort her, tell her that it’s alright but how could he face her! Inside that cabin, he said nothing to defend her!
After that, many times, he tried to talk to her, call her, drop messages, but she didn’t want to listen anything. Rahil tried calling her several hundred times but she only kept ignoring him. Soon after, she left Bangalore and came back to Mumbai.
But that was the last time, she had trusted a man! It was never again. She made her loneliness her strength. She asked Kunj to give her job which would be according to her qualifications i.e. a garduate employee, the rest she’d earn, with her hard work. And she did. She continued her studies with her part time job and now she’s the senior architectural engineer of the company. Apart from that she also runs a woman empowerment NGO which funds women for jobs, teaches them skills for a livelihood and gives them self-defense training.
Flashback ends.

I saw her phone ringing and it was ‘Rahil calling.’ Sighing she rejected the call. That guy is calling her even after four years! Maybe he’s really guilty. But I can’t say Arohi is wrong because she isn’t! She was hurt to the extent of breaking down again because of that man. Her so-called best friend! Really, the world doesn’t suffer from the violence of the bad people but from the silence of the good people.
Though I’ve decided to talk about it to her today but I’m not that good in convincing people. Only Twinkle can do that but she clearly denied! She ended the discussion in just 60 seconds! Seriously, Twinkle is the woman who can make me silent in a fraction of seconds.

Flashback.
Twinkle was working on her laptop when Kunj came to her. “Twinkle! I’ve to talk to you about something.”
“Okay! You’ve one minute after that I’ve to leave.” She spoke not moving her eyes from the laptop.
“Twinkle please convince Arohi to forgive Rahil.” He pleaded hopefully.
Twinkle abruptly stopped typing and shot her head up. “Answer my one question Kunj. What’d you do if someone was backbiting about me right in front of your face?”
Kunj’s jaws clenched hearing this. “I’d punch him in the face so hard that he wouldn’t be able to talk all his life!” He snapped furiously.
Twinkle smirked resuming her typing. How easily she made him understand her point! “Kunj, even Arohi deserves such a guy, who can take a stand for her. Not someone like that Rahil! Who’s so spineless and a coward! A person who can’t stand up for his best friend, do you think, he’d do it for his wife? I don’t think so.”
“But Twinkle…”
“Kunj! If Arohi wants to forgive him, I’ll accept her decision wholeheartedly but I won’t ask her to do it! Not even once! End of discussion!”
Kunj was about to protest but cut short by his wife. “60 seconds over. Now I’ve to go.”
Flashback ends.

“Kunj!”
“Yes dad?”
“Beta should we start the ceremony? Everybody has arrived and are waiting.”
“No dad. Not now. I’ve called someone, let them arrive till then please wait.” Dad smiled and after patting my back moved towards the guests.
“Arohi!”
“Ya Bhai?”
“When someone calls with love, we should receive it.”
She instantly understood what I was talking about. “Bhai, when the past calls, we shouldn’t answer, it has nothing new to say. It’ll be just scrapping my wounds and nothing else.”
“So much hate?”
“I don’t hate him bhai. But… I’ve never been lucky with love and I’m OK with it. He has hurt me a lot and even though he tried to protect me from my pain, but again, he didn’t stand by me when I probably needed it the most. Bhai you know why I came back from Bangalore? Because I’m not strong enough to fight such people with such twisted mentality and face their rough judgements anymore. Here, this is your office, you can slap anybody across their faces and make them mind their own business whoever would talk ill about me! And my emotional state can be better… Forget it Bhai. I’m fine. I’m happy and satisfied with my life! Besides a woman doesn’t need a man to be something in life. This is my identity and I’m proud of it.” She said smiling and walked away and now I, too am convinced because while talking she was content. There was no hint of sadness or pain on her face which is all that I want.
I’m sick and tired of this narrow minded mentality, frustrated with the double standards and the hypocrisy. I’m ashamed because even I had a different view of women before, but not anymore. Girls like Arohi are real gems and we give them a hard time because they aren’t afraid to be themselves. In fact, they’ve more character than us. My Arohi isn’t a victim but a tigress. People who judge her are cowards, who are only intimidated, insecure and jealous about her success. She never hid her real self, not everyone is brave enough to fight with this society. But she is!
Shaking my head, to remove all thoughts, I walked towards MY life. Approaching her, she asked me the same question everyone is asking. “Kunj why are you delaying the function, who’s going to come?”
I was about to answer when we all heard a voice, ‘Twinkle beti.’ Turning our heads to the source of voice, a smile broke on our faces.
“Kunj! You called them?”
“Yes. I did it for my queen and for my princesses! Are you happy?”
“Off course! I’ll just come. OK.”
She rushed to receive all the ladies and kids from ‘happy palace’.
“OK. OK. OK. Now done. Everyone arrived. So let’s start the function.” Arohi beamed excitedly. “So, who will name the babies?”
“ME!” Twinkle and I shouted in unison.
“OK. OK. No need of arguing!” Arohi stated coming forward making all of us laugh. “Bhai! Take her.” She said giving me one of our babies. And the other to Twinkle. “Now, Bhai will do commence the naming ceremony by giving name to the younger baby and bhabhi, the elder one.”
Roshni clapped to show her support. “Yes mumma papa! Bua is right.” She chirped in her cute, musical voice.

“So. Ladies first. Come-on Twinkle. What name have you chosen for your child?” Yuvraj asked in his all time excitement.
She looked at the baby with so much adoration as if holding the entire universe in her hands. “My daughter.” She called out emotionally. “I want to name my daughter after the woman who had taught my husband to love, to trust, to care. I’m naming her after KALPANA. My elder daughter’s name will be… Kalpana.”
I was dumbstruck after hearing her. I couldn’t believe it! A woman hates any other woman in her husband’s life and that’s phenomenal. But she… How can Lord give one person so big heart and so much sensibility. She smiled at me while I was looking at her with so much love and respect that I can’t define. “Kunj! Now Kalpana will always be with you. She’s gone nowhere!” Nodding my head with teary eyes, I just thought one thing yet once again, ‘I owe my life, my existence to her!’
I can never understand her neither I try anymore! I’d rather enjoy these little surprises which discovers a new side of her personality every day.
“What name have you chosen for my younger princess?”
My turn to surprise her. “I’ll name my little daughter after the woman who taught me to live. Who gave a meaning to my life time and time again. And the woman who will be the role model for my daughters, like whom I want my daughters to be. My younger daughter’s name will start with the letter ‘T’ just like “Twinkle” who’s my love, my life!” He paused for taking a deep breath before continuing. “Her name will be… Tamanna!”
Twinkle gasped with a beautiful smile.
“Yes. ROSHNI KUNJ SARNA, KALPANA KUNJ SARNA and TAMANNA KUNJ SARNA… Fairies of my kingdom!” I announced feeling myself on cloud nine.
Dad came forward and gave us a side hug. “I’m so happy today. This is all I wanted to see. My son! HIS FAMILY!”
“OUR FAMILY dad! Dad… Thanks for bringing Twinkle in my life.”
“No need of thanking me for something that was my duty son.” Smiling ear to ear he left.
“Golu, I missed you so much! When will you come again?” Roshni asked to that mannerless boy.
Oh Golu! How can I forget that kid from orphanage!
“Don’t worry Roshni. I’ll soon grow up and marry you and then will take you with me.”
What did he just say!
I ran to them and grabbed my daughter. I’m never going to let that happen!
“Kunj what are you doing?” Twinkle asked in shock.
“Ask that boy to stay away from my daughter.” I stated bluntly and saw bewilderment on Twinkle’s face. She was biting her inner cheek to control her laughter. But suddenly, Disha, Yuvraj, Rishab, Arohi burst out laughing.
“What?” I asked all somberly.
“Kunj it w…was a j…joke. Look at your face!” She continued laughing.
“Twinkle, I’m trying to be a good father.” I reasoned still not letting go of my Roshni.
“Ya. I can see that! Kunj they’re just kids.” Disha exclaimed and everyone continued laughing and I couldn’t help smiling.
Wow! This is happiness and I call it family. OUR family!
I should also thank Twinkle for changing my misconceptions about women. I thought every woman was like my mom. Selfish and uncaring. But she changed that. She changed everything.
Woman…
You give her a part of yourself and she’ll bless you with a little bundle of joy. Give her a house and she’ll make it a Home. Give her groceries and she’ll make it a fine meal. Give her a smile and she’ll give you your heart! She multiples, enlarges and beautifies everything that is given to her.
So my advice is… Don’t give her pain. You’ll receive it a hundred times more intensified!
This is so perfect. And like a fairytale, our story ended in… AND THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER.
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Thank you very much for reading.
Tadaa! The epilogue! Don’t know if it was up to the mark but I tried my best and hey, nobody is perfect;)
I know about Arohi, many of you think she should be married and having kids etc. But that isn’t what happens with rape victims. She’s strong and complete in her own beautiful way. So please accept that.
And a HAPPILY EVER AFTER isn’t only about getting married and having kids, it’s about how happy and contented your soul is!
Kunj and Twinkle settled down. Feeling tears in my eyes to let go of this beautiful story but all things come to an end one day or another. And so is it.
Roshni is a little grown up in past few years and you’ve no idea of how hard I had to work on finding that picture of the kids! One who has big eyes like Twinkle and other who has small eyes like Kunj so that they look… Real! Really, the babies look like Twinj!
And silent readers! At least now tell me you’re there!
Ramya: Thank you for commenting. Though I don’t reply but I read each of your comment and trust me I love your words a lot:*
NOW ABOUT MY NEW STORY! *Screaming excitedly* Okay! So yeah, the title of that story will be “FINDING SOLACE IN YOU”. I’ve started working on it and I promise it’ll bring ghoosebumbs on your skin, you’d feel butterflies in your stomach because I felt so while finalizing the plot:)
I know, I told you initially that my new story will be “Captured my heart” but I’m not going to work on it because it has long plot and I don’t think I could be able to make it because I’ve to end my fiction before the end of May due to traveling and all so… I had put that story on hold before even starting XD
The prologue of new story, “Finding solace in you” will be updated as soon as I complete it also I need your opinion regarding the continuity of this story! Actually I want to start it in April as many of my old readers are missing due to exams so that’s why I was thinking to start it in next month rest is your wish! Do tell me about your views.
Keep smiling:-)
Love you all<3
Take care!
PENS DOWN! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR GIVING THIS STORY A TRY.

Completed on: March 19, 2018 12:50 AM.

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  1. Presha

    Cute
    Just a perfect happy ending
    Loved it

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much Presha:)

  2. I don’t know how to describe this …….this is fantastic epilogue…..the characters truely deserved a fairytale ending……..this was indeed the best they could get…..I am soo happy that I started reading this story…….more than a FF the story had many things to teach us……

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much Riya:) I’m happy you gave this story a try.

  3. Roshini125

    You are a champ!!!
    After a very longtime i fell in love
    ie with ur story
    come back soon

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you so much Roshni:)

  4. Amazing
    Plz can u write more ff like this i love your style of writing the way you describe everything i just loved it
    And truly the journey of this ff was mindblowing
    I just wish i could press the like button a million times…..
    Love u bye

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much dear:) Ya! Sure, I’ll write a new story… Hope you’d read it!

  5. Sana785

    Isse achi ending ho hi nhi skti….
    Awesome yrr
    Loved it to the core…
    :):):):):):):):):):*:*:*:*

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much Sana:)

  6. Hi maha I was so happy to read ur ff and I loved this happy ending and this ff is the best of my life and would br close to my heart for ever and as u said about the next i am damn exiceted to read it plsss jaldi post karna maha

  7. Hi maha first of all tarif karun kya uski jisne tujhe banaya maha in my life I have never seen a emwriter like u who can portray emotion so well I loved u r ff from the day one and even now also I usually read ur ff from starting and u would miss bakhuda the most as it is the only ff where I have commented regularly … It is really emotional to say food bye to this ff but every thing haa an end but I am really eager for ur ff and I can’t wait more plss maha jaldi post karna and till that I would miss u love u maha

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much Sia:* I can’t tell you how much your comments mean to me. You were always the most supportive even when you’re busy with exams or something. You always makes me overwhelmed:)
      Thanks a lot dear:) I’ll post soon Sia.

  8. The loveliest epilogue I have ever read ???
    I just loved how you described kunj’s perspective on women when I read that I just recalled his views on women in the beginning of ff I just loved ???the gradual change of opinion

    And regarding ur new ff; actually I’m going to a boarding in April and would return only till mid of may; so even I wish that you start it in the month of April so that I don’t start missing your lovely creations there
    When I’ll return in may I would read it at that time
    But plz post the prologue before hand??

    Love you??

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Ya! Even while writing I too remembered his notion about women. And was feeling quite happy that his mentality changed:) Thank you so much dear for such sweet words! And you want me to start new story in April… Right! Well Okay. As you wish:)

  9. Mallika4962

    Loved it! ?
    I haven’t read any of the previous chapters as I joined only yesterday but reading this was amazing! ?
    Loved how you made Arohi independent and didn’t go with idea of her marrying someone! ? Rape victims are treated really badly and their re marriage is not considered by the Indian society. Showing how Arohi is independent and does not need a man to support her was awesome! ?
    Loads of love!
    ???

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much Mallika dear for giving it a try:) I’m glad you loved it. Loads of love<3

  10. Hi Maha,,,this is beyond description. ..I don’t hv words to express my gratitude to u for writing such an amazing story…about Arohi ur right,, y always girls shud marry n settle, dey can live dere life according 2 dere wish..n Twinkle is such a sweetheart..
    Kunj made her life complete….I wud love it if u continue dis ff bcoz as i said earlier dis story is close to my heart….Waiting for ur new ones….Continue writing…love u??????

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you so much Shihayna:* I’m actually on cloud nine after reading your and other’s views:) Hope to see your views in my new stories too<3

  11. I dont know what to say about todays episode..i have no words…
    It was awesome….superb…fabulous
    Really loved every word of it…
    Every thing was perfect kunj his queen and his three princess…and arohu she really a brave lady who bec9me an inspiration for many girls like her…i really love her character the way u describe…kunj is really a very possesive father hehe…golu roshni and kunj’s scene was really funny and cutehe is really very possesive about his princess…and twunj scenes were also awesome…i will really miss this story..
    But also excited for ur new story api..plz post ot soon cant wait for it…

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much dear for writing such appreciation:) Ya! I’ll post soon.

  12. outstanding maha…
    best epilogue ….for this ff…
    absolutely phenomenal…
    the way u describe every thing about a woman was fantabulous…
    luved it so much
    plz post soon ur next ff
    can’t wait …
    Luv u

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you so much Yashika:) Ya! I’m working on it, will post it as soon as I complete it!

  13. AMAZING, AMAZING, AMAZING
    It was just a perfect end to the most beautiful and elegant fan fiction
    Just yesterday I was again reading this ff and it gave me same joy as it gave when reading it first time. This is one of those stories that even if u read again and again it would have the same impact on u which it had reading it for first time
    Words cannot describe how mind blowing this story was
    This story can easily be up there with the stories of best writers(other than that of telly updates) even though u r new to this territory and they have been writing having years and years of experience. No doubt about that
    Your writing really reflects ur great personality and thinking and ur positive approach to life
    Coming to epilogue,absolutely loved it
    When I was reading it , I was feeling every single emotion u put in this brilliant writing
    I was enjoying it so much while reading
    Twinj’s love for their three daughters is just adorable
    Loved how strong Arohi has become
    And yes women are more stronger than men in every aspect
    Excited for the new story
    Loads of love

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Oh my Allah! Dear, your comment… I don’t know what to say:’) I seriously fell in love with your words. Thank you so much Cindy for such an amazing words. Hope to see your views in my new story too<3
      Love you so much:*

  14. Baby

    god maha dii ?
    am boundless of words ?
    am just soo amazing having goosies and having butterfliwes having flow of emotions running down my body and hert flowing with happiness ?
    this story like many some other stories took my heart away with it ?
    it had been a beautiful journey throughout from start till the end ?
    i never decided that how will i deal with the end of this story coz it reminded me of it ending with a sad end but you did justice ? i appreciate ?
    it has been beautiful i remember that poem on that drug till now it have really touched the soul ?
    the morals you always gave have been amazing ?
    it had always been a ferris wheel hahha twists and turns and now finally when a new beginning have started in their lives we all are contented ?
    loved it diii ?
    you are amazing person ?
    this story have taught me many lessons in life ?
    a journey full of joy tears emotions and love ?
    roshini was soo pretty the pix u collected beautiful ?
    n aarohi is correct on her place but i really wish if rahil was guilty n correct then could be forgiven in future ?
    m literally crying coz it has come to an end ? but obviously it had to some day so why not today ? being positive ??
    well loved it and am waiting eagerly for your next story ?
    love you di ?
    had to surely take out time from my exams for commenting on last part of my favourites………??????????????????????????????????

  15. Hiii diii???
    #*#*Firstly— sorry for the late reply as I said buri aatma ….??
    Abhi bhi mere peeche lagi hai.????#*#*

    Awesome episode…?
    Perfect just perfect?
    Infact I’m not having words to describe my happiness????
    Finally I’m relieved by reading the last episode and this epilogue…?
    U simply touched my heart♥️
    Nd golu scene was so cutieeeee ?
    Kunjs possessiveness towards his family…????
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    .
    No words left to describe u and u r skills..?
    My dictionary nd vocabulary totally empty totally blank …???☺️?
    Please come soon with u r new ff …?
    Eagerly waiting for your story and don’t worry even I get into college then also I’ll read and comment to ur stories ????
    Till then I’ll miss u ?
    And now I’m crying don’t know why ???
    I’ve never seen u but feeling hell emotional ?
    Infact replying u just became my habit?
    I’ve Never been this much close to any unknown person …??
    Sorry I’m getting tooooooooo much emotional I can’t do anything
    I’ll miss U …
    U r FAN?????
    Only thing left with me is to say take care of yourself family education future nd everything ????
    Byee
    ?????

  16. Hi di and everyone who’s ever reading this
    I wanted to share my life’s very important part with u all especially with u Didi
    This is that dark part of my life which no one knows only my bestie nd know u all
    I wanted u r suggestions
    Not even my mom dad bro knows about this
    I don’t have guts to share this with my family
    I’m daring to write this by reading u r all supportive replies

    I hope u all will suggest good to me
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    .
    I was in class 8th I just don’t know the meaning of crush and liking
    I was always a book worm nd I was a good student all my friends used to tease me but not that seriously they were supportive too
    One day an idiot entered my life and everything was upside down
    By time I came to know that he likes me and I’m his crush …. He’s very good looking decent innocent and charming boy
    As a result I was distracted from my studies
    On class 9th also he used to see me (we both were in different sections so he used to stare me in recess and more over our buses were also same and my stop was just before his stop) and this continued till my results got worse
    In 10th I was totally upside down for him
    ((We never talked to each other still
    Not even a friendly talk nothing))
    But he totally ignored me I thought he is getting serious for his studies so I also focused on my studies(( but his result was worst nd I’ve got a good cgpa and scholarship so studies might not be the reason for ignoring me))
    But his friend aayush was in my class and he used to feel jealous of my marks and rankings in the school ((I think he used to inform him abt my doings))
    In 11th and 12th
    ((still he is ignoring me like anything he left the bus too and started to come to school by his bike ))
    And due to my hard working I got the best section ((super 40 type in which all the best students r present))
    When he came to know he was shocked I don’t know why but by seeing him I can say he was not happy
    And he again started his tricks to disturb me distract me …
    And his one of the friend was present in my tution classes ((for IIT JEE & ADVANCE)) also and I THINK HE INFORMED HIM ABOUT MY MARKS starting of the year I ve totally forgotten him and my studies we’re going great but unfortunately he again started coming to my class and used to make friends so that he can come to my class
    Even if he missed any day
    But he definately come to my class the day before or 2 day’s before the phase tests that were going in the tution and my results graph simply fell nd this continued nd now I’m totally an below average student don’t know y what he has done to me but I’m totally uncomfortable insecure and feeling like living in hell and whenever I’m with my family I just forget what he has done to me
    I too don’t know what he has done or it was just a misunderstanding nd God knows…
    Today also I cry for him whenever I remember him
    In physics board xam I saw him but he just pretend like he don’t know who am I simply he just walked without any expressions
    The one who used to give a brilliant blushing smile totally changed
    On chem xam day again this happened he simply acts like I ve never existed for him
    Don’t know y but I’m feeling disgusting for myself for falling for that idiot
    And 21st we are having maths xam and I’m totally struck that what he will do …
    Actually 21st will be the last day for meeting him may be of my life still he ignores me like anything..
    I just want to tell him or at least just wanted to say HI to him but I’m totally blank I’m not getting anything y he’s ignoring me…
    Note : in class 8th he proposed his bestie but she rejected him
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    So this was my short faltu sa story
    Please suggest me Kya karun Mei
    •aaj Tak ek doosre ko hello Tak ki nahi bola
    him dono ne
    •Ek doosre ke samne aatey hi hum ek dum stranger ki act Kar tey hai
    ••Aur 21st last day hai usse Milne aur baat Kar ne ka
    Use baadh hum kabhi nahi milengey shayad
    But I’m totally mad for him
    I just can’t give his place to anyone
    He will be in my heart forever
    He is my first present nd last crush
    No one can replace him
    I’ll remember him forever nd ever till my last breath
    Whenever I see other and in movies it just reminds me the old sweet memories when he used to come to my class just to see me
    Please I’m totally in a confused state right now please give u r suggestions

    AND MAHA DIDI u have to give suggestion it’s compulsory for u
    I’m seriously sorry to all of u for wasting u r time
    And Didi u r suggestion is very very important for me
    Waiting for your suggestion….

    And finally di I’m sorry
    Unknown aka SUNAINA
    But Didi I’m really really very sorry
    Sunaina is his __________ name
    And I’m sorry to u all
    U all can call me unknown only
    Sunaina is not my true name nd identity
    I’m sorry Maha didi???

    1. Please don’t be angry on me?????

      1. Maha_Aijaz

        Okay! So I couldn’t make anything out of your comment. I’m sorry though… The one Sunaina who used to comment from start in fiction?
        Apart from it, how he used to distract you… I mean, just by his mere presence won’t distract you from your studies obviously and then you yourself told me that you both didn’t even talk for once so how ACTUALLY he used to distract you… If he messages you or something? And then… How his mere presence effect your studies? I’m not getting anything… Please elaborate!
        Though for now I’d just say… To ignore him, don’t give a damn to him! And concentrate on your studies because he’s not worth of appreciation this attention and thoughts.

  17. Vibhu

    Well I hope you know that you got very late this time. I was seriously getting so impatient to read this epilogue. And my god, when this update came, I got so late in reading it. Now that’s what’s called DESTINY ????
    And what to say about the update , I think calling it a masterpiece will be much less that what it actually is..!!!
    Kunj views about women and their importance to everyone was just flawless..!! What a perfect message u have given to everyone ! ❤??
    Then Kunj’s perfect family and their three babies .. This imagination brought a smile on my face ! ???
    Roshini .. Tht baby who had first called kunj as papa is now a part of their perfect family !! ??????
    This was really very heart touching.
    But then the best part of this story was twinkle naming her baby after Kalpana. Seriously no other women can do such a great thing. !!!! ❤❤❤❤❤
    Then the way u portrayed Aarohi’s life after being a rape victim is another appreciable point of this story ..!!
    Somewhere I thought she will get settled with that guy. But its ohkk .. Every lifestory can’t be perfect !! ☺✌
    Trust me, you are just amazing.
    And I would suggest if you can get this story published as a novel , do try!! Coz this is surely going to be the bestsellers and very popular among the youth !!!!
    Hahahahaa .. I hope you won’t take my saying as a joke coz I’m not joking ?????????????
    I am so happy that you are coming with your next story soon. I’m waiting for it to start.
    And and and did you just say that you will bring a part 2 of Bakhuda* .. If that’s so, I am the happiest person on earth today ..!!! ❤?
    Bye dear
    More power to you girl ?
    Stay healthy and blessed

  18. Himanigaur

    Heyy!! I’m gonna miss this soooo much!! Pls post something new soon.. loved the way the story ended.. personally wanted to read more of the story but it’s fine!! Love you loads!!

  19. Ramya

    This is what we call it as a epilogue.
    Perfect
    Not even a single place to say anything
    It’s beyond perfect.
    Trust me dear. I’m smiling through out. And I’m on your side about arohi marrying.
    I agree with you about happiness.
    And you thanked me in this one. It felt so special and thank you for it.
    I just loved it enjoyed it.
    I can’t describe in words.
    I’m eagerly waiting for your 2 ff.
    I think this is the longed comment I wrote foR you.
    Common it’s end of story so I don’t want to be choosy by keeping words to myself.
    It’s on of the best story I ever read.
    And of you are planning to post it on watt pad then let me know.
    I would love to read it again.
    With love

  20. Fenil

    Fabulous All Three Articles !!

  21. Superb I loved it totally
    Ur whole story is awesome and u r amazing writer
    N
    Special lines which u have written on woman are amazing ? I read so many things about women but this lines touched my heart ♥ tnq for this amazing story

  22. Superb mindblowing epilogue dear
    Super se bhi uper tha ye amazing dear
    U r awesome writer tooo gud yrrrr

    Plzzzzzz post soon ur 2 ff
    Plzzz
    Luvvvvvv u dear

  23. SSK

    Amazing epilogue and beautiful ending. Actually the perfect happy ending. It ended quite soon. The story was very well written and the characters were so well described. Kudos to your writing Maha, the emotions, the scenes were also really beautifully depicted. I had always waited for this FF. I would read once more the whole FF in one go. Al the very best Maha, you are really one of the best writers in TU. All the best. 🙂

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