Twinj: Bakhuda Tumhi Ho (Episode:27)

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Bakhuda Tumhi Ho-
Episode:27
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“I’m leaving… Soon.” She told him bitterly and Kunj just stood there like a statue.
Twinkle couldn’t witness his shattered state anymore, so she turned around and ran to the room. Once latching the door, she cried her heart out falling on her knees. She has hurt the love of her life so badly! What might he be thinking about her! How much she had hurt him!
Standing on her feet, she walked towards the bedside table and took Kunj’s photo frame in her hands. ‘Kunj! This is for your own good. Nobody can ever love you as much as I do. I love you enough to let you go. Please try to forgive me. I had no choice. If I ever had to choose between your happiness and your love, I would happily do it again… A hundred more times… That’s so much I love you.’
She took in her arms their marriage photograph letting the tears of pain to fall on it.

While crying all the while, she didn’t realize when she fell asleep on the ground.
But her sleep got disturbed as soon as she felt a hand caressing her hair. She slowly opened her eyes to find her ‘mother’ sitting there with a sad and worried face.
“Mom.” She called out softly.
“What have you done Twinkie!” Her mom said wiping her tears.
She hiccuped trying to control her sobs. “M… Mom…!” Unable to continue she hugged her mom tightly, breaking down in her arms. “Mom. I love him mom! I never wanted this! But I can’t tell him anything! I had to lie mom because this was the only way to prevent him from breaking… Mom he’ll never be able to…”
“Shhh.” Her mother shushed her gently putting a finger on her lips. “Twinkie! I’m proud of you. You did something no one else could do! The hardest thing is to hurt yourself for the sake of other’s happiness. You did that… But believe me… He’s your husband. He deserves to know the truth, to know everything. Don’t hide it from him my child.”
“Mom. He’ll b… Break! He’ll… Die!” She said between her sobs.
“Dear you’re hurting him more by showing fake hatred towards him.”
“Mom, I’m making him hate me so that it would be easy for him to move on but if something happened to me in front of him he won’t be able to survive that. He’ll be stuck forever mom! I can’t bear that.” She paused to wipe her tears in between hiccups. “I’m doing everything for him mom.”
Her mother sighed. “Whatever your decision is Twinkie, I know you’ll never do anything wrong. You’re my smart and strong princess.”
She keeping her head on her mother’s lap spoke, “Mom. Don’t leave me please… Everyone leaves… No one stays… I sent everyone away mom!” She kept on blabbering while clutching her mother’s lap.
“I won’t Twinkie. Sleep peacefully! I’m here with you.” Her mom soothed her kindly brushing her fingers in Twinkle’s hairs.
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Kunj kept walking on the road aimlessly. It was like… The same pain he had experienced 9 years ago coming back much more severe, much more intensified! The pain, the betrayal, the lonliness, everything!

(As Sudha had always asked for song’s link so here it is:Β Β Β https://youtu.be/VMEXKJbsUmE)
“Ye dil tanha kyun rahe…
Kyun hum tukdon mein jiye…
Ye dil tanha kyun rahe…
Kyun hum tukdon mein jiyein…
Kyun rooh meri ye sahe…
Main adhoora jee raha hoon…
Hardum ye keh raha hoon…
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai…
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai… played.”

The hollow from which Twinkle had brought him back, he seemed sinking into it again, dissolving in self destruction, the difference was just that… There wasn’t Twinkle to wipe his tears, to share his pains, to lead him to the right, to vanish the darkness.

“Andheron se tha mera rishta bada…
Tune hi ujaalon se waaqif kiya…
Ab lauta main hoon inn andheron mein phir…
Toh paaya hai khud ko begaana yahaan…
Tanhaayi bhi mujhse khafaa ho gayi…
Banjaron ne bhi thukra diya…
Main adhoora jee raha hoon…
Khud par hi ik sazaa hoon…
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai…
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai… played.”

Today he was cursing himself for changing so much! ‘Why did you changed so much Kunj! Why? Had you been the old Kunj, you would’ve destroyed her career, her dreams, her life and forget her like a sip of wine! This is the problem with getting attached to someone. When they leave, you just feel lost. Why Twinkle?’ He yelled out on the lonely road.

“Tere jism ki woh khushbuein…
Ab bhi inn saanson mein zinda hai…
Mujhe ho rahi inse ghutan…
Mere gale ka ye phanda hai…
tere choodiyon ki woh khanak…
Yaadon ke kamre mein goonje hai…
Sunkar isey aata hai yaad…
Haathon mein mere zanjeerin hain…
Tuhi aake inko nikaal zaraa…
Kar mujhe yahaan se rihaa… played.”

‘Why did you do this! Why me! In this world full of millions of people, why did you pick me from this crowd! To hate, to destroy, to leave! This is your healing? You came to do this into my life! You came into my life and did all that to show me this day… Now I’ll show you how futile and meaningless it all was!’ He said thinking something wiping his tears.

“Main adhoora jee raha hoon…
Ye sadaayein de rahaa hoon…
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai…
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai… played.”

At Sarna Mansion-
Twinkle heard a loud knock on the door. Her sleep broke and she woke up to find herself on floor. She glanced at the clock and it was almost morning. She had slept for almost 5 hours. She got worried as someone was roughly knocking the door again and again. She stood up wiping her tears, did her hair quickly and opened the door to find a servant completely panicked. “Ma’am! Come down fast!”
“Why! What happened?”
“Sir had arrived home. And he’s…”
Without listening anything else, she ran past him like anything. The worst things were coming into her mind while her tears weren’t stopping neither she tried. But what hurt her more was… He was in this condition because of her!
She ran to the hall and the sight she saw shattered her heart in pieces. He was a painful sight to see! His clothes, hairs completely covered in sweat, his feet unable to support him! The once kind and loving eyes were blank and emotionless!
She rushed to him to prevent him from falling. “What have you done Kunj?” She cried.
He chuckled humorlessly. “What have I done! I’ll tell you…” He paused to look at her deeply. “You were my happiness, my relief, my everything. Now when you’re leaving… I’ve decided to go back to the one who used to heal me before… MY DRUGS!”
“No! You can’t do this.” She yelled angrily.
“I can! And I will… Why did you do this huh! I’m Kunj Sarna! Even someone accidentally walked on my feet na they APOLOGIZE, and YOU walked all over my heart and didn’t even realize! You know, if I had lost a part of myself, that wouldn’t have hurt as much as it’s hurting now! There isn’t difference between you and that Chayya! You know Dr. Twinkle… Even if you ask a pro*titute to FAKE love, she’ll never agree. You. Are. Worse. Than. A. PRO*TITUTE!”
“KUNJ! Behave yourself.” She shouted angrily.
“Don’t you dare shout at me! You’ve lost that right…” He hissed before continuing. “You know what… The only more thing shocking than the truth was… The LIES you told all the way to cover it up! LIE… I love you… LIE… I’ll never leave you… LIE… I’ll always be there for you… LIE… Love…” He said and started laughing hysterically.
“Kunj please…”
“Today… I feel so useless! Like… For you… I was just a disease and you were a medicine…! I was saving you and you were… Killing me. What did I ever ask you! All I ever wanted is that you need me as much as I want you… As much as I need you…”
“Kunj! Please try to understand.”
“Understand what? That how you cheated me! How you just…” Before he could speak further, he fell on sofa.
Twinkle helped him in getting up, lead him to the room and carefully placed him on the bed. “I hate you.” He murmured in his sleep. Hearing to it Twinkle painfully sat on couch staring at him. Her heart was burdened with guilt and pain.
Her phone’s ring brought her out of the trance. She received the call not removing his eyes from Kunj’s face. “Hello.”
“Am I speaking to Mrs. Kunj Sarna?”
“Yes.”
“Ma’am your flight for London is going to take off tomorrow evening. Just a reminder.”
“Thank you.”
“Take care ma’am.” With those words the call was disconnected. She walked towards him and sitting beside him, she caressed her hair. ‘Every pain, every accusation, I’ll readily accept Kunj. Be happy. I’ll leave you tomorrow and go somewhere far from you… Where you won’t be able to find me… Where I’ll live these last few months of my life praying for your goodwill, happiness and forgiveness.’
At the corner of her heart, she was rather shocked the way Kunj accepted, admitted and reacted to the situation with his heart. Without any mask on his face.
Because as far as she knew him, he never really forgave people. He just pretended like it’s OK and waited for his turn to destroy them. But he didn’t! He accepted the pieces of his brokenness and… That he couldn’t fight anymore… Anyone!
She didn’t want this!

Next Morning-
Kunj’s sleep was disturbed by the loud thud of something. He lazily opened his eyes and saw Twinkle taking things from the cupboard and packing her bag. He immediately got up and recalled whatever happened! He was deeply regretting it!

Whatever might be the case, he couldn’t deny he was rude and harsh last night. He had spoken so much unacceptable about her in his inebriated state.

Pro*titute! He even called her that.
“Twinkle! I…”
“It’s OK Kunj.”
He walked towards her and held her hands softly. “No! It isn’t OK Twinkle.” His heart was sinking seeing Twinkle packing her bag. “I know the way I behaved last night was unforgivable but I wasn’t in my senses. I’m sorry Twinkle! I seriously didn’t mean anything. Please don’t go!” He pleaded desperately looking at her with hope.
She pulled her hand from his grip. “I said, it’s OK Kunj.” Turning her face to opposite side, she continued. “You cleared whatever you had to say yesterday-night. I know there was a part of me that believed that I could change you, but the reality is that… I can’t. You can change yourself and I can change myself… I can’t do it for you. And you made me realize it. So I’m leaving.” She sneered sadly.
Kunj clenched his jaws as he felt his anger rising hearing her words. “Weren’t you here to treat me!” He mocked. His voice laced with anger.
“I was. But I can’t do it anymore. I quit. I’m leaving tonight and you can do whatever you want to do with your life. I just have to say one thing… Take care of your body Kunj because that’s the place you’ve to live in all your life.”
He angrily eyed her. “You don’t need to fake concern Dr. Twinkle! I think you’ve forgotten… It’s Ok. Let me remind you!” He paused looking at her intently. “YOU had showed your true colors yesterday. Didn’t you? You’re just like all other, even worse.” He hissed but a part of him wanted her to say that this was all a lie and that she was the same Twinkle, his TWINKLE but it didn’t happen.
“I understand. You don’t have to tolerate me anymore.”
He was deeply hurt but still masked his painful expression with an unaffected-straight look. “Wish you a happy journey. And I’ll pray you never come back.” He snapped before walking out.
She sighed sitting at the edge of bed. “Don’t worry. I won’t!” She mumbled smiling sadly.
It was a relationship in which two people had become one. Now when it was breaking, it resulted in two half people. Solitude is a good place to visit but a poor place to live in.

In the Evening-
Twinkle’s flight was going to take off in an hour. She had done all the packing and was ready to leave when Kunj returned from office.
“Where are you going?” He asked in all-oblivious tone like nothing happened.
She gave him a surprised glance. Didn’t they have this discussion just this morning?
“I think those drugs got into your head.” She snapped. “Don’t you remember?”
“Yes I do. But sweetheart I think you’re forgetting something.” He smirked raising a brow.
“W… What?” She asked hell confused at his behavior. He should be angry and disgusted with her now! In his eyes, she had betrayed him. “What am I forgetting Kunj?”
“You’re forgetting about the contract. For the six months mentioned in the contract, three are still remaining. Aren’t they?”
‘No this can’t be! He can’t be doing this!’ She thought.
“Umm… Yes… But that…” She couldn’t answer. She had nothing to say after all.
“What? Cat got your tongue? Weren’t you the one to sign it?” He questioned holding the contract in front of her eyes.
“Yes Kunj. But now that doesn’t matter. We don’t love each other. And we don’t want to live with each other. End of discussion.”
“No Twinkle Kunj Sarna! It isn’t! You started this and I’ll end this MY way! You’re bound to the contract. And you’ll have to stay! You want it or not!”
“What if I don’t!”
“Then I’ll file a case against you for breaking the contract and it’ll land you behind the bars for at least… 5 long years.” He spoke in a raucous tone. “So… You’ve two options, either stay here 3 months as my wife in the Mansion or in the jail for 5 years. I’m not going to pressurize you…!” He paused surrending his hands in air. “You can select ANY option you like. Which one is more comfortable to you?” He added innocently.
Twinkle was feeling helpless now. “No! This can’t be! Because this contract is valid only as long as I’m your wife! I’ll fight you in the court and soon seek divorce.” She bellowed angrily.
Hearing this, he laughed loudly at her face and stood leaning on the cupboard with his hands folded on his chest. “If you’ve anything more senseless, then please say that too. Till then, I’m relaxing.”
“What do you mean?”
“What I mean is… If you go to the court, I’ll deny the divorce. And then, as it is NOT by our mutual consent, court WILL have to give me six months to save our marriage and ask you to stay with me as my wife for SIX months.
So basically, now you’ve three options, 3 months with me, 6 months with me or 5 years in jail.”
Twinkle was speechless. She knew him well. If he has decided, then he wouldn’t let her go that easily. He would do anything to get things done his way! The only thing that she could do now was to reason with him. “Why are you doing this Kunj!” She asked frustratedly.
“Because I won’t let you go that easily Twinkle. I’m keeping you with me! Every minute! Every second! Every breath! So you can see how happy I’m without you!” His penetrating words seemed to sink in her soul.
Liars are the people who called it ‘Heartbreak’. It feels like each and every part of the body is broken too.
Loving someone is like strapping your heart to a stick of dynamite and giving it to someone and trusting them so much that they’ll never light the fuse! He was standing at the same position right now! Now when his heart was broken, his mind dominated his life and decisions.
“Actually the mistake is all mine… I love you more than you deserved, how could I be such a fool?” He yelled banging his fisted hand on the cupboard.
“And now you’re hurting me more than I deserve, how can you be so cruel?” She questioned him with the same intensity.
“This is the end of discussion Twinkle! And don’t you dare double cross me!” He warned her.
“No Kunj! I’m not staying here.” She was on the verge of crying by now. “Why don’t you just forget everything and move on!”

Her tears gave no peace to Kunj’s badly bruised heart like it should. In fact, it hurt him so badly that he wanted to hug her tightly assuring him that everything is going to fine but only if she would share her sorrows with him.
He turned his face, clenching his jaws and fisting his hands tightly to calm his nerve after seeing his tear-stained face. “Move on! How I wish this could be as easy to do as it is to say!” He scorned through gritted teeth.
She angrily threw her purse on the bed unable to tolerate that nonsense anymore. After glancing him angrily, she walked out. Once after Twinkle left, Kunj sighed sitting on the couch. ‘I’m sorry Twinkle, but I won’t let you do this to yourself… To US!’ He told himself with a weak smile.

Flashback-
At the Office:
Kunj was snapping and yelling at everybody in his sight. After all, anger is a natural defense against pain. Where there’s pain, people use anger to express it!
“What the hell! Didn’t I tell you to proofread that file and send it to Yuvi!” Kunj yelled at his PA.
“S… Sir! Yuvraj Sir has been working on another assignment. He’s out of town for a few days. I’ve no idea about…” She stuttered.
“Ok just Get out! I’ll see that myself.” He said and the secretary ran out of the cabin panicking before she would lose her job when Disha came in.
“Kunj! What’s going on! Are you OK?” She asked worriedly.
“Disha! I’m not in a mood to talk to anyone and I don’t want to say something rude to you. So please leave.” He tried to be at his best behavior.
Disha got to understand that it was some problem between him and Twinkle! Nothing else could’ve such a strong effect on him.
“Kunj tell me what’s wrong? Did she say or do something?” Disha asked calmly.
“Don’t take her name. That selfish, mean woman who…”
“Kunj…?” She called him out in daze. She couldn’t believe the way Kunj was talking about her. “What such happened? Please tell me yaar! My heart’s sinking.” She pleaded.
Kunj sighed leaning back into the chair and told her everything. “Today-evening she’s leaving because her so-called ‘job’ is done.” He completed emotionlessly.
“And you’re letting her go!” She proceeded in shock.
“What do you mean Disha! Why should I stop her now when she has cleared…”
“Kunj! I can’t believe you- the business tycoon Kunj Sarna could be such a fool! Kunj what has happened to you! You, who have mastered the skill of judging people is believing whatever is being fed to you! You’re a pro at judging people! You can see the jealousy, hatred and helplessness behind the mask of smile on people’s faces! Then why are you acting so dumb now! I don’t believe you Kunj!”
“Disha! Even I was shocked but that doesn’t change the truth! And the truth is…”
“Truth! Forget it, even if Lord comes and tells me that THIS girl had done such a thing I wouldn’t believe. Kunj even a broken watch shows correct time twice a day! Every coin has two sides. Don’t take such a harsh decision based on just the one side which you see! You never know what she’s going through! I know it’ll be difficult to find the truth but worse to regret! Imagine the guilt and remorse you would feel if you came to know that… She wasn’t at fault at all! That she had valid and acceptable reason for doing this!
Take care Kunj and take the right decision. Because for all I know about her, if she had to walk away from you, she wouldn’t have given herself, as a wife, to you.” Saying this, she passed him a smile and left leaving Kunj in deep thoughts.
Flashback ends-

Kunj’s POV:
Sitting on the couch, I tried to think about the reason behind Twinkle’s behavior. All sort of scenarios came to my mind but nothing fit. I was hell confused.

If someone blackmailing her? Is she under some pressure? Does she love…. Even the thought of she loving to someone else broke my heart! No! No! No! This can’t be! Because if she might’ve loved someone then she wouldn’t have submitted herself to me! I fought my horrendous assumptions. Then what it can be? Twinkle isn’t the type of girl to blackmail so easily. Nor she’s the type of girl to break relationships like that! I know she respects our marriage and that she’s doing this because of some reason. But what is it Twinkle? Why can’t you tell me?
I turned around and saw her packed bag which she left open in anger when something caught my eye. I pulled it slightly out of the bag and was shocked!
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Thank you very much for reading.
First of all, sorry readers for getting late but actually I wasn’t at home… Was at my cousin’s place for having some fun:) I’m really sorry for making you guys wait.
Coming to episode… Guess what Kunj found in her bag! And whoever makes correct guess, I’ll give nothing to them XD So… Kunj stopped Twinkle from leaving and thanks to Disha who knocked his brain… While writing Kunj’s sad dialogue, I was seriously listening that song and literally I was feeling ghoosebumbs. Hopefully you all liked the episode as well.
Now coming to ‘thank-you’… Thank you very much Jahnavi and Himanigaur for commenting.
Fenil and baby: thank you so much for commenting first of all then sorry I couldn’t fulfill your wish but there’s a reason behind it… Actually Manohar wouldn’t know the clash between Kunj and Twinkle because Kunj wouldn’t want that. Though I wanted to reveal it afterwards but seeing you both requesting I had to reveal it now. Hope you guys still like the episode the way I wrote.
Piya: No need of apologies dear and thank you for reading.
Then Thank you so much Ramya, Sidmin78, Sunaina, Riya, Cheena, Ananya, Presha, Vibhu, Cindy, Yashika, Sia, SidMin23, Anaya, Rayna, SSK, Sanjana (finally I got to know your name… I actually wanted to name Kalpana as Sanjana but then ended up with Kalpana:*) Sudha… Thank you so very much for writing such amazing words for this story. Thanks a lot guys.
Franciee and Purnima: I’ll keep your request in mind dear. Don’t worry and enjoy the story.
Also someone (I don’t remember the name) asked me about my education… I mean in which standard I’m! So… I’ve given exams of Bachelor’s in commerce and now I’m soon going to give aptitude test for MBA in supply chain In’shaAllah.
Last but not least don’t leave the page before dropping your views and keep predicting the further storyline! It’s too much interesting to read. I’ll try my BEST to update next one by Wednesday In’shaAllah.
Keep smiling:-)
Love you all<3
Take care!

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49 Comments
  1. Himanigaur

    Omggg!!! I was waiting so eagerly for the episode!!! It was just awesome!! Thank god Kunj stopped Twinkle!!! I think they are here reports.. maybe not sure tho.. pls post it on Wednesday.. can’t wait now!!!! Love:)

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much Himanigaur. Well you’ve to wait for that revelation:* thanks again for commenting dear!

  2. Hiii Maha diii😜
    Today’s epi was mind-blowing πŸ’¨πŸ’¨πŸ’¨

    Emotional+angry kunj+love+hate
    Wahhh what a mashup u have created πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

    I think he’ll know abt the disease nd will indirectly help twinki I THINK na baba

    The way he blocked her way woah🀘🀘 superb

    Bbye
    Nd post soon

    πŸ€•πŸ™pleπŸ™„aseπŸ™‚β˜ΊοΈ

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much Sunaina:* Glad you loved the episode. Keep reading dear<3

  3. Oh my god maha u just pulled the earth beneath me only I know how I read this epipsd
    Full of emotional and loved it man kunj ka side was truly justified and the dialogues were the best dialogues anyone can write maha so one write a book plsssss and I swear that book would be so famous that everyone in the world will have it as u r not the best author on tu only but in the whole world I though sometimes forget about other ffs but your ff doesn’t leave my brain in the examination hall also what have u done to me maha .kunj ke dialogues se better koi dialogues makkhi hai plsssss post soon and ya I was the one who ased ur education I thought u might in 10th or 12 th bit its nice to see awsm brains on tu plsssss psot soon

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Oh Sia… I’m actually speechless after reading your comment. Thank you very much for such amazing appreciation dear:* I’ll try to write a book (well that sounds so funny to me XD) I’m so happy that my fiction is occupied in your mind every time;) thanks a lot dear for commenting<3

  4. Hi…i am a silent reader to all the twinj fan fics on telly updates….never really commented on any of them…but ur story just compelled me to…i m so in love with it…u wont believe i desperately wait for the story update…u are such a talented writer…like really fantastic…pls do update soon…πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜„πŸ™‚

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Siddhi! I’m so happy that finally you’ve commented dear. Thank you so much for that:* Truly felt great after reading your words. Keep the support coming!

  5. Could dis episode get any better…My goodness it was just too good….Disha is a blessing in their life. Hope it all sorts out soon and someone knocks some sense in twinkle’s brain…

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much Piya. Yeah Disha was a blessing for Twinj for sure<3 keep reading dear!

  6. Twinjsidminfan

    Hiii maha dii ….. this was such an emotional episode 😒😒😒 couldn’t see my babies in this condition… please make everything fine between them… please don’t let anything happen to our twinkiπŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™
    Please let kunj know the truth in the next episode itself plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzz diii i beg u πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™ PlZzzz don’t make them suffer anymore πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™

    Diii ur an amazing writer😍😍😍 masha Allah I’m awestruck with the way u convey twinj’s each and every emotion…..

    Luv u diii ❀❀
    Plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzz do post sooner 😊😊

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Hey dear! I think you’re first time commenting here… Correct me if I’m wrong:) so a big wala thank you for commenting dear:* I’m so happy that you loved the episode the way I had written. Thanks a lot yaar. Keep reading:*
      Loads of love!

  7. Twinjsidminfan

    Hiii maha dii ….. this was such an emotional episode 😒😒😒 couldn’t see my babies in this condition… please make everything fine between them… please don’t let anything happen to our twinkiπŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™ poor link is hurting himself sooΓ²o much nd our twinki too 😭😭😭😭😭
    Please let kunj know the truth in the next episode itself plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzz diii i beg u πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™ PlZzzz don’t make them suffer anymore πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™

    Diii ur an amazing writer😍😍😍 masha Allah I’m awestruck with the way u convey twinj’s each and every emotion…..

    Luv u diii ❀❀
    Plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzz do post sooner 😊😊

  8. You nailed the episode,i just wish kunj gets to know the truth in next episode itself.Lots of love

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you so much Neha:* yeah the truth has to come out eventually but when…? For that answer you’ve to read the upcoming ones<3 Keep reading dear!

  9. Inshallah! Mind blowing episode. Superb. β™‘

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much dear for commenting:*

  10. Awesome episode <3
    Thanks Allah that kunj stopped twinkle
    Now coming to the suspense part (the last part of episode) I am trying to come up with what can it be and I am whacking my brain but the only thing that comes in my mind are twinkles medical report that say she is suffering cancer
    Let's see if I am right or wrong
    Love ur writings
    Eagerly waiting for next episode
    Post soon dear πŸ™‚

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Yeah! Thanks to Allah that Kunj stopped Twinkle and the credit goes to ME and then Disha XD Thank you very much for sharing your view dear. About your guess… Well you’ve to wait for knowing that it’s report or something else:)

  11. Baby

    god i new you were taking long to post but i had also this in mind that surely you must be busy somewhere coz u aren’t the type to not be punctual and do what you say…… dii πŸ’–u were as always the best like i was soo into it again πŸ’œ
    thanks alot for revealing soo much now than later its okay if u have dat in mind about manohar not knowing about it while reading also i was thinking dat nly πŸ’— and about disha god i love her soo much srsly jst soo sweet πŸ’š if she wont have been there twinj wont be together for sure πŸ’™ n den coming to the thing kunj got really cant make a guess coz i dont at all think u ll let kunj get those reports of hers soo easily how will story proceed then but if you have done dat then that’s gonna be amazing πŸ’› coz kunj will surel y find a solution then πŸ’–
    and srsly kunj changed yrr he has totally changed he aplogised and then he understood ppl wat dey wanna say and the facts πŸ’– really marvellous speechless πŸ’› love u soo mch 🧑
    post soon WEDNESDAY means day after tomorrow can’t wait ahhh πŸ’
    love ya di take care c u soon 😘

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      For your comment… I guess ‘thanks’ would be less dear:* Your each and every word is such a treat for me<3 First of all thank you very much that you found me punctual (Though I'm not that much particular regarding updates XD) Then thanks a lot for loving the episode the way I had wrote. Seriously it means a lot:* yeah I'll try my level best to post tomorrow itself<3
      Loads of love dear!

  12. Purnima.agrawal30

    AwesomeπŸ‘βœŠπŸ‘…eagerly waiting for next part

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much Purnima for reading dear:* keep commenting!

  13. Can’t even wait a second for next update………it was really an emotional rollercoaster……pleased update sooon

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you so much Riya:* Glad you felt it an emotional rollercoaster:) Keep reading dear<3

  14. Ananya_DSK

    Hello Maha!!! Oh my god! This was such a beautifully written episode… Twinkle’s condition was so touching… You made me cry with your amazing narration yet again… Poor Kunj!!! Looks like he felt totally broken… Good thing Disha came to the rescue of the couple… Twinkle’s illusion of seeing her mother was yet another segment that won my heart… It was soo endearing… I’m really happy that Kunj found a way to make Twinkle stay back… Will Twinkle consider her mother’s advice? I really don’t know… But I’m definitely excited to know… There are millions of other questions running in my head… And only you can answer them… I won’t be making any guesses because I know that you are better at deciding what should happen in the story… So I’m assuming it’ll be better for me to keep my nonsense to myself πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    You’ve done a really fantastic job and made me fall in love with this story yet again… I’ve become a bigger fan of yours now…

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Ananya! I think… I’ve to thank you a million times for writing such an incredible words every time you share your view:* Thank you very much dear for loving the episode and for finding it worth of appreciation. Your words mean a world to me<3 Keep reading and commenting (only if you get time because I know you might be busy in exams preparation)
      Loads of love<3

  15. Fenil

    Marvellous chappy.
    Yaa it’s fine.

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you so much Fenil:)

  16. Wow! Wonderful episode
    Apologies for not commenting from a long time Studies kept me occupied
    And about kunj finding something I think it can be Twinkle’s report or their wedding pic which twinkle might be carrying

    Love ya
    Post soon

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      No need of apologies dear:* I can understand… Thank you very much for commenting! Hmmm… You’re… Uh, well you’ve to wait for knowing what’s it:) keep reading dear<3

  17. I will say it was unpredictable epi.ya I mean tumhari story ko predict krna is not easy baby.u r awesome & ur writing skills r excellent .πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
    Luved it so much can’t wait for next epi.
    Epi was marvellous fantabulous phenomenal πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–
    Luved it so much 😘😘😘😘
    Even I m also commerce student 😊😊😊
    Or tumhe writer bhi bnna chaiye πŸ‘πŸ‘because u r superb πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Oh really… Is my story that unpredictable XD Well if it is then I should be happy (I guess:-P) Thank you… A huge wala thank you actually for such sweet words Yashika:*
      So… You’re also a commerce student, glad to know yaar!
      Loads of love dear<3

  18. Vibhu

    Hey …. Seriously u r very late this time..!! I was getting so impatient to read your story.. Best part of today were Twinkle and her mother’s scenes πŸ˜†πŸ˜
    Woohoo .. Kunj and his anger .. He really got out of his mind and her called twinkle as pro*****te .. Pagal ladka πŸ˜•
    But then ThankGod he stopped Twinkle with the reason of Contract .. Smart boy πŸ˜πŸ˜‚
    Hahaa .. Giving her options ✌
    Disha is such a swthrt .. She’s seriously known Twinkle so well .. She’s so much belief in her ☺. Thankfully she gave some sense to kunj as well.
    Also, I’m not sure but I wish that he sees the reports and could get to know about Twinkle’s disease ..!!!
    Can’t wait to read the next part .. May your *Wednesday* come sooner πŸ˜›πŸ˜‚
    Bye
    TC

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Yeah I got late and I’m sorry for that dear. Thank you very much for such wonderful words:* Keep reading Vibhu!

  19. Awsm chappy.
    Loved every bit of it😘😘
    Thank god that kunj stopped twinkle…
    But twinkle is not doing right with kunj..She is giving herself pain by doing these..and poor kunj..How heartbroken he felt😭😭
    But at least kunj understood that something is wrong with her,that’s why she is behaving like these..Overall episode was very nice 😘😘and emotional too😭😭
    U have portrayed kunj’s emotions very nicely..
    Really u r great writerπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
    U know,I totally get speechless when I read ur ff just due to ur writing skills…U have a brilliant mind..
    Allah has given u the bestest skill for writing.. Masha Allah!!Keep it up..Thank u is very small word to say u,for starting this ff..It’s not just an ff but it motivates us😘😘😘I am ur fan now😘😘
    HAts off to u..
    AND in the last part I think kunj have seen twinkle’s report..
    Plzzz do post soon.Can’t wait for next part..
    Lots of love to uπŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜
    Are u there on insta??Plzz do give me ur id if u r there..
    Would love to follow my celebrity😘😘

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Rayna dear! I’m speechless and overwhelmed after reading your view:* thank you soooo much for such encouraging and lovely and cute words<3 i don't have words to actually thank you guys.
      Your each and every word means a world to me:*
      Celebrity… Lol! I'm just an ordinary writer dear… Sharam arahe hai mujhe seriously XD Okay… So I'm not insta. I'm sorry! I'm not even on FB! I'm not a social media person at all! I just use WhatsApp. That's it:) but felt great that you asked me.
      Loads of love Rayna:*

  20. Presha

    Awesome
    Loved it
    I went numb reading this…
    Speechless i m

    Love u

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much Presha:* Glad you liked the episode dear<3

  21. Mind blowing epiosde
    Emotions+anger+guilt+pain everytging was awesome…loved every word of it
    Thanks to disha that she give aome sense to kunj and he stop his lady love…twnkle and her mom’s scene was really amazing hope she tell kunj about her cancer as her mother says…cant wait for the next one plz post the bext part soon…and ya may be kunj had seen twinkle’s reports…or may be it was something about that child for whom twinkle agree to marry kunj…plz plz post the next part soon appi..and sorry appi for the late comment.
    Allah Hafiz
    Post soon

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you so much dear for your sweet comment:* And no need of apologies for getting late! For knowing what’ll be in that bag… You’ve to wait for next one;) till then loads of love<3

  22. Hello api….
    M ap ki tarif m kya likho mjy bilkul b smjh nhi ati…πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ u r just bestest… πŸ‘πŸ‘ u portray each and everything in awsm way… everyone’s emotions…. 😒😒

    TARIF😍😍 KARO KYA US KI JIS NA TMY BANAYAπŸ˜™πŸ˜™ MAHA(API)

    ap ka liye or ap ki writing skills ka liye jo b likho wo kam ha😍😍

    Ek book hi likh do twinj pa… Infact u can … do try once to write book babes πŸ˜™πŸ˜™… apny hidden talent ko duniya ko dekhao…😎😎

    Acha chlo allah hafiz bht bakwas kr li m na…πŸ˜‰

    Sorry agr meri kisi bt ka bura lga ho… Q ka ap ka ff pa cmnt krty waqt mj sa ruka hi nhi jata … is liye sorry agr m na cmnt m kch zyada bakwas kr di ho…😊😊
    Allah Hafiz😚

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Anaya! You know I was smiling all the while reading your comment which actually vanished when you used ‘bakwas’ FOR your comment and ‘sorry’ FOR me! Don’t say that again, Ok! This time I’m telling you with love but next time I’ll scold you XD Sudhar jao Ok;)
      NOW! Thank you so much for such amazing and incredible words:* I’m so happy that you loved the episode:* I’m actually thinking about writing a book now Lol XD (kidding:-P) Keep loving dear:*
      Loads of love<3

  23. SSK

    Bful episode πŸ™‚

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much:)

  24. Twinj2000

    Hey maha that was yet another fantastic episode 😍😍😍❀️
    U won my heart again ❀️❀️
    So emotional 😭
    Thanks to Disha for making Kunj realise that his twinkle can’t do this and thank goodness he was successful in making her stay back πŸ˜„
    I hope twinkle realises soon that even if she lied to him that she don’t let be him he’ll go back to drug n that miserable life ….so it’s better for him to know the truth
    Also I loved the imagination scene of twinkle here she saw her mother ❀️
    Loved it πŸ’•πŸ’•
    Hehe u were gonna name Kalpana as sanjana…well I would be kunjs first love ❀️
    Today is wed…I hope we get an updateπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much Sanjana dear for loving the episode and using such amazing words for me:* Yeah I was going to do that but selected Kalpana’s eventually… If I would’ve known than sure enough I would’ve named her Sanjana:)
      About next episode… I’ve posted it just now without proofreading so I’m like koi ghalte na ho:/
      Loads of love<3

      1. Twinj2000

        Hehe it’s ok πŸ˜‰ whenever you come up with a new ff take sanjana as one of the character πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰just kidding ya πŸ˜…πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
        N the next part I read …I’ve posted my views on that page but really loved it soooo much 😘😘n even if there r some lil mistakes np …ur writing is magical and mistakes don’t really matter !

  25. Ramya

    Awesome Amazing
    I’m glad Kunj had not gave up on her.
    Thanks to disha for knocking some senses in his S brain

    Now it’s so interesting.
    What had Kunj found?
    May be about cancer.
    Just so amazingly you wrote dear.

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