Twinj: Bakhuda Tumhi Ho (Episode:23)

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Bakhuda Tumhi Ho-
“Bhai… Bhabhi… She… She left bhai! SHE LEFT YOU FOREVER!”
Kunj can’t believe his ears. It was like his world has come crushing down. “WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU SAYING AROHI!” He almost shouted at her without realizing it wasn’t her fault.
After a second, he calmed himself before asking. “Arohi! Please tell me exactly what happened?” He asked trying to sound normal but inside he was freaking out!
She gulped. “Bhai! Bhabhi came here… *sobbed* and I don’t know what happened… *sniffed* why she said she has a flight for US tomorrow morning and up til then she’ll stay at farm house! She doesn’t want to stay with you anymore! She’ll leave tomorrow morning and will never come back!” She burst out crying at the last part.
Kunj remembered their conversation from the morning and all the wierd things she was talking… He tried to put them together but nothing makes sense. “No!” He says in a choked whisper and fall on the couch. “She can’t leave me!” He kept repeating same phrase to himself again and again.
“Kunj! It isn’t over yet! You can’t lose like this!” Disha encouraged him.
“What is left Disha?” He asked in same blank tone.
“Kunj! She’s at farm house till morning. So just go and tell her that YOU LOVE HER! SHE’LL COME BACK! Go Kunj! Go before you lose her forever!” Disha said on the verge of crying.
He realized that he can’t waste time sitting here anymore. “YES I LOVE HER! AND I CAN’T LIVE WITHOUT HER! AND I’LL BRING HER BACK NO MATTER WHAT!”
With those words he walked towards the car without hearing anyone and within a moment he was speeding to the farm house.
The true value of something is realized when it is lost! And now Kunj realizes the true value of Twinkle. He wanted answer but he knew Twinkle! She was the most stubborn person he has ever met. She would never agree to come back home!
Once reaching the place, he angrily walked towards the hall where Twinkle was sitting drowned in her own thoughts.
“Twinkle!” He yelled angrily.
Twinkle was startled by the sudden sound. She didn’t want to face him there so she got up and started walking upstairs.
“Twinkle stop! You can’t be running away from my questions like this!” He exclaimed furiously and walked behind her with the same pace.
She reached the room and stood before the dressing table.

Path Lab:
“So Twinkle! Are you ready to hear the results?”
Twinkle’s face went pale but she nodded lightly. “Yes doctor! Please tell me.”
“Twinkle! You’re going to LIVE! The reports are normal! The medicines have been working! You’ll be fine! The Cancer’s curable!”
Twinkle didn’t react for a minute. “Say it again doctor!”
“I’ll say it 100 times dear! Because it’s the truth!”
The tears which Twinkle was holding for so long began to flow and she wanted them to flow because those were of happiness! She wouldn’t leave anything! She wouldn’t leave Kunj! She’ll be alive! She’ll live with her Kunj! They both will experience the bliss of life! She would be with her Kunj forever! They would be together! They would’ve kids together! And grow old together!
She took the reports in her hands thanking Lord for showing her this day before moving out. She had to do a lot of planning!
She went to home and asked RishYuvi and Arohi to help her with her plan in sending Kunj to the farm house on which they readily agreed!
Flashback ends-

Twinkle smiled happily with satisfaction. ‘Now everything will be fine!’ She thought when Kunj arrived.
“Twinkle you can’t…” He trailed off to look around the room and was stunned to see it so beautifully decorated with flowers, candles and rose petals.
“Twinkle!” He gulped audibly. “What’s all this?” He asked totally puzzled.
She leaned forward, stood on her toes for matching his level and kissed his forehead. “Happy birthday Kunj! I wanted to give you the best gift on your birthday… I love you Kunj and I know you love me too. You just needed a wake up call to realize that so I had to do all this. I want to be yours forever Kunj!” She whispered in a low but heavy voice blushing furiously while looking down.
It took some moments for Kunj to digest the words. All the anger, frustration and questions were vanished by now! Now all he wanted was to live in this moment! He still couldn’t believe it was a dream or reality! How easily and beautifully she said those words. This is one of the best quality which he liked the most about her. She always spoke her heart out not caring what others think. She didn’t complicate things! He had been planning and trying how to say the same thing all the way to the farm house but couldn’t! He didn’t blink his eyes afraid that it was a beautiful dream and would vanish once he woke up.
“Jise zindagi dhoondh rahi hai…
Kya ye woh makaam mera hai…
Yahaan chain se bas ruk jaaun…
Kyun dil ye mujhe kehta hai…
Jazbaat naye se mile hain…
Jaane kya asar ye huaa hai…
Ik aas mili phir mujhko…
Jo qubool kisi ne kiya hai… played.”

Those words weren’t new to him. He had heard them innumerable times from different girls. But hearing them from her made them sound so much special. He had been longing for her since time unknown. He was ecstatic. He raised her chin with his thumb and forefinger to make her look into his eyes. “Say it again.” He demanded in a deep husky tone.
She pursed her lips in a thin line lowering her eyelashes and shook her still blushing face which made her more irresistible.
“Today I got to know one thing.” Kunj said mischievously.
“The cutest thing in the world is… A shy girl trying to seduce you.” He said with a wide grin playing on his lips.
“Seduce!” She exclaimed trying to sound angry but then smiled hiding herself in his embrace.
“You know Twinkle today you made me the happiest man in the world. I didn’t realize it up til now but… Somewhere between laughing for no reason, stupid arguments, making fun of each other, challenging each other, I FELL IN LOVE WITH YOU!”
“Kisi shaayar ki ghazal…
Jo de rooh ko sukoon ke pal…
Koi mujhko yun mila hai…
Jaise banjaare ko ghar…
Naye mausam ki sehar…
Yaa sard mein dopahar…
Koi mujhko yun mila hai…
Jaise banjare ko ghar… played.”

He making her free from his grip cupped her face and without wasting a second, captured her lips into a deep passionate kiss. This kiss was entirely a different one. It was filled with desire, love and their passion for each other so much that they were kept wanting for more. Her lips were so soft that he felt like kissing rose petals. They pulled away to catch their breaths. For both of them it was like first touch and first kiss because never before they had felt this way. It was due to circumstances! Within a split second, Twinkle was picked from the floor and next moment she was on the bed.
She laughed at his eagerness. “Kunj you’re behaving like a desperate college boy who just had his first kiss. What’s the hurry?” She said flirtatiously tracing her finger on his cheek.
He felt like an electric current has passed thru his body because every time he was the one who used to go all romantic and out of the way to tease her. But now, her touch contained desire! He never knew she has such a bold side!
The most beautiful moment one may see after falling in love is when your shy, introvert partner takes passion to newer heights.
“You’re going to pay for provoking me like this!” He said with a smirk.
“Go ahead. I’m all yours.” She said. Her cheeks flushed with redness.
He looked at her and her eyes were holding the same emotions as his. Love, passion and burning desire for each other. Few hours ago he had felt like he would lose her forever and the pain was unbearable! Now all he wanted to intertwine their souls together in a bond that can never be broken. He looked at her divine beauty and that was blissful enough! She had worn just plain red saree, with jhumkas and mangalsutra. Her face was free of makeup but she was looking breathtakingly beautiful! Her face was glowing golden in the dim light of candles making him want her more. Their heartbeats were the only melody they would be hearing. Twinkle glanced Kunj with pure trust in her eyes. Today whatever happens between them she was never going to regret it. Because nothing could go wrong now!
She was cancer free now! Kunj would be drug free in a few more months!
He always had the urge to see her that way, the real her but he respected her enough to wait for her consent.
Twinkle smilingly closed her eyes as her husband leaned in, closing the gaps between them. Their surrounding become felicitous, blessing the lovers as they conversed in the language of love.
The feeling of becoming his… Was just heavenly. The thing called ‘Love’ just distils desire upon the eyes and brings bewitching grace into the heart. It was same with Kunj. Her touch was so different and special because she was beautiful both inside out. Her body was as pure and sacred as her heart and mind.
Kunj wanted to live at that moment forever but he had to remember it was her first time with all her heart and consent so he must be more careful and gentle. After few hours of that pleasurable pain, Twinkle put her head on his arm completely exhausted and out of breath.
As she was about to say something, Kunj placed a finger on her lips. “Shhh. Sleep my love, we’ll talk tomorrow.” He whispered softly caressing her face and wrapped his shirt around her. Then gently kissed her forehead pulling her more into his embrace. Within some minutes he heard her snoring lightly. He chuckled seeing her and remembered Twinkle telling him that she snores when she’s tired. A smile crept on his face as he thought how time changes, there was a time when her snores were the most irritating thing for him, and now, it isn’t less than a melody….
‘MAKING LOVE’ it was the first time he realized why it is called so. With others it was always just physical but today someone had touched his soul and not merely body.
It was a night filled with passions, when Twinkle set a-side his solitude, his lonliness by sharing her soul with him, by becoming one flesh, a part of each other.
With so much love being poured into his soul, the wounds of lonliness healed making him a happier person. There is no heaven like mutual love.
She loved him, he loved her and their lives couldn’t get any better!
Both love birds slept in each other’s embrace. Little did they know that the most beautiful moment in their lives would be the last!
Twinkle woke up in Kunj’s arms. It was like a dream come true. Like Lord had blessed her with all the happiness that exists in this world. This was all she ever wanted, herself in his arms! Kunj had a smile on his face even while he was fast asleep. Twinkle smiled on seeing this because her smile was mirroring his. She then moved her eyes to clock and it was almost 9. Today she wouldn’t have cared but it wasn’t like Twinkle to get excited over something and forget her responsibilities. She tried to get up but two strong arms pulled her back and she heard Kunj’s sleepy voice. “Sleep a little more please.”
She shook Kunj by his shoulder. “Kunj utho! It’s nine. Don’t you’ve to go to the office!”
“Office!” He exclaimed in a bored tone, gruff-lazy voice.
Twinkle was amused. He sounded like a lazy kid who was asked to go to school on a Monday morning. “Kunj! I’ve never seen you talking like this about office. What happened?”
He pulled her over his chest opening his eyes. “Because… Office used to be my hiding corner to escape from the world, my cocoon to keep me away from my pain, a place where I ruled and used my authority to vent out my frustration. And it WAS my first priority, not any more! Now I’ve found a reason to live.”
She felt happy would be an understatement. There wasn’t any word to express her emotions but still being a girl he wanted to hear more. “What do you mean by used to be?”
He pulled her more closer before answering. “Now it has become a villain in my love story!” He paused looking at her intently. “You know Twinkle! Nobody ever made me feel this way. This special. I can never thank you enough. You healed my heart, my soul and both emotional and physical injuries. And I know Twinkle you deserve better… In fact best but I promise I’ll be at least half of the man you deserve.”
“Shhh! Kunj! You deserve me just like I deserve you so don’t talk nonsense!” She scolded trying to sound angry. “And don’t say thank you. It was my duty as a wife and as a doctor. It was destiny that brought us together who knew we would end up together like this.” She added blushing with her most beautiful smile.
Kunj eyed her lovingly wrapping his arms around her waist. “Twinkle! Today you may ask me anything. I’ll give you whatever you ask that’s so happy I’m.”
“Anything?” She asked raising her eyebrows.
“Anything!” Kunj exclaimed in a challenging tone.
“Ok then go and get ready. First we’ve to go home and then you’ve to go to the office. But… If you want you can skip office today. After all it’s your birthday!” She chirped excitedly.
“Aww Man!” He growled. “I should’ve expected something so boring like this from a boring person like you! Why did I even promise!” He grumbled grumpily getting up.
Twinkle laughed loudly. “You’re acting like a grumpy bear Kunj!”
“Ya whatever!” He said annoyingly and walked inside washroom for freshening up.

In the kitchen:
Twinkle was cooking in the kitchen when Kunj sneaked inside so he could spend a little time with her.
“May I help?” He asked startling her.
“What the heck Kunj! You should’ve warned me. I’m holding a knife what if I would cut my finger? She asked glaring at him.
“Then I would take your finger and suck the blood from your cut.” Kunj said trying to be romantic.
Twinkle rolled her eyes on his answer. “Yeah! Yeah! After all you’re a vampire right!” She said suppressing her smile.
“Here I’m trying to be romantic and you’re thinking about Twilight?” He asked frowning.
“If you’re trying to be romantic then at least be a little creative my dear hubby.” She teased earning an irritating expression from him.
“Ya! Fine. Tease me as much as you want!” He said narrowing his eyes.
“Aww is my pati dev angry?”
Kunj smiled. “Nope how can I be angry with my cutiepie!” Kunj said dropping a kiss on her nose.
“Good because even if you would’ve been angry I wouldn’t convince you!” She said poking tongue out at him making Kunj chuckled.
He stood behind her and wrapping his arms around her waist, he pulled her back. “My baby is in full mood to tease me today.” He said amusingly.
“Kunj! What’re you doing? Move!” She exclaimed trying to move from his grip.
“I can’t.” He said sensuously digging his nose more into her neck which made Twinkle shiver.
“K… Kunj! Please go and sit outside. I can’t concentrate!” She said in low voice.
“Twinkle! Get used to it! I’m not changing it anyway. You can’t understand the warmth I feel in your embrace. Like… Nothing can be better than it is now. Like… I’ve all the happiness in the world. It’s amazing how things in my life changed! When I had perfected the art of hating people, you started loving me. When I needed people the most, they left me… And so… I became rude to the world, you showered generosity to me. When I learned to live with all the miseries, the pain was gone. When I had chose to live all alone, you came and held my hand. I just can’t be thankful enough to you for making my life so much beautiful.”
“Jaise koi kinaara…
Deta ho sahaara…
Mujhe wo mila kisi mod par…
Koi raat ka taara…
Karta ho ujaala…
Waise hi roshan kare woh shehar… played.”

Twinkle was overwhelmed with emotions. She just leaned her back on his chest. “It happens many times Kunj. When we wait for the sun whole night, it doesn’t come out. It comes out after we fall asleep. But we shouldn’t lose faith on Lord. We shouldn’t forget that the darkest hour is just before the dawn. Even the worst days of our lives have 24 hours only. If we’ve happiness all the time and no pain at all, we would never learn to struggle and struggle is what makes us stronger. Even happiness would lose it’s worth. We love happiness because we EARN it after passing thru the pain. And look today, now, we’re in this moment because…” She took a pause before completing. “It was your pain that brought us together.”
He smiled gleefully kissing her head. Both stayed in that posture for awhile enjoying the silence around them.
“Dard mere woh bhula hi gayaa…
Kuch aisa asar huaa…
Jeena mujhe phir se woh sikha raha…
Hmm.. Jaise baarish kar de thar…
Yaa marham dard par…
Koi mujhko yun mila hai…
Jaise banjare ko ghar…
Naye mausam ki sehar…
Yaa sard mein dopahar…
Koi mujhko yun mila hai…
Jaise banjaare ko ghar… played.”

After few minutes, Kunj face turned serious and he twirled Twinkle around. “Promise me Twinkle, you would never leave me!” He said. His voice held authority.
He looked into his eyes which held nothing but love. “Never!” She assured him before standing on her toes to kiss him which he found really cute.
“Twinkle! Love me all you want. Because after going home, I’m not going to be in a good mood.” He said sounding angry.
“Why Kunj? What happened?” She questioned surprisingly.
“I’ve to take a class of all those idiots who told me you’re leaving!”
“Kunj that was…”
“No Twinkle! You don’t know how panicked I was! The way Arohi was crying and everyone else sitting there with a tensed face. They had no idea of my condition! I’ll see each one of them.” He exclaimed furiously.
She huffed and gave in. After breakfast they left for home but before they could enter Twinkle’s phone rang.
“Kunj! You go inside. I’ll be there in a minute.”
“Ok! Come fast.” He said and walked inside not before placing a light kiss on her forehead.
She smiled seeing his disappearing figure and answered the call. “Yes doctor. Any problem?”
“Yes Twinkle! Can you come now it’s urgent.”
“No Dr. Actually I can’t! I need a leave today.”
“Twinkle please. Just come and meet me! It’s really important.”
Twinkle sighed. “Ok. I’ll be there in 2 hrs.”
“Good. I’ll be waiting!” And the call got disconnected leaving Twinkle in deep thoughts.
‘Dr. Ragini handles only one case at a time. And till yesterday it was me! Then how come in one day, she got a new patient with such a serious problem? And she’s senior to me. In every case, she’s better than me. Then why does she want to meet me?’ She thought feeling little tense.
Thank you very much for reading!
Hey everyone. Here you go with the most awaiting episode with the most awaiting scenes. And believe me it was one hell of a difficult one for me seriously it was too hard to write this episode because I really wanted to make it graceful and now that I’ve accomplished the task I want long, good and a large number of comments *greedy me XD*
So do you really think Twinkle is safe and her cancer is cured? Do you really think life is so easy? Well tighten up your seat belts because really emotional episodes are on the way and I highly recommend you all to keep handkerchief or tissue with you while reading.
Thank you so much for the words you all have written in previous episode. I know ‘thank you’ isn’t enough but I’ve nothing to give you in return for the love you all are showering. Honestly I hadn’t expected so much love:*
Thanks to each and every person who are taking out time in reading this fiction from their tough schedule and are commenting regularly. Thanks a lot and I love you all so much.
Vags: I’m not that good dear and I really hope we all become the way Twinkle is because she’s a true gem and ya sure we’ll meet one day for sure In’shaAllah. In fact I want to meet you all as you guys are so amazing;*
Lastly I’ll try to post next episode by Sunday In’shaAllah till then keep guessing what’ll going to happen in future ones.
Keep smiling:-)
Love you all<3
Take care!

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  1. Cheena2001Cp

    Maha , It was graceful,beautiful with various layers of emotions!! I loved it too bits!
    You know what the best part was?When she got to know that she will live,when they confessed,when they sealed their love !!!!
    I had a little smile while reading it! Blissful!
    Excited for more emotional scenes though! KItna rulaogi?
    Twnkle and Kunj are love!!!

    Btw new update that too so on time……wonderful!

    See you soon,

  2. The episode amazingly amazing beautifully beautiful……..and what not……..but again u left it in a cliff…….not fare okay????????????……but still…..I love Ur FF…….and will wait for next episode ….????????

  3. Hi maha ajj ka episode was rhe best best kunj and twinkle ke dialogues were brilliant and twinj romantic scences were beautiful love it as always no doubt I think twinkle s cancer can’t ne ciredcshe might have got some one else reports don’t know bit early waiting thank u maha for posting early bye love u

  4. Presha

    I m speechless
    Loved it
    Post Soonest

  5. SidMin23

    Nice and love twinj moment waiting for Sunday

  6. awesome
    waiting for sunday…

  7. Fenil


  8. Omg I am gonna die with happiness
    Firstly thanks for posting quickly
    On to today’s episode my heart was just bursting with happiness I was on cloud infinity after reading
    Amazing , superb, fantastic I don’t have enough words to describe
    Your r in my favourites list always I love reading ur ff
    Post soon dear
    Loads and loads of love

  9. such a beautiful episode dii
    their confession their emotions every thing was soo amazing loved it
    the best part was fb part the way u describe twinkle’s emotions was awesome
    but the last conversatiin between twinkle and doctor was really scary is their any problem in twinkle’s reports..what if she is not cured from cancer…oh my Allah what will happen in their life..plz post soon cant wait to read next part.

  10. Plz plz don’t make the reports fake
    Plz let twinkle be safe and her cancer be cured plz its my request no take it as a order

  11. It’s a very nice episode. Loved it. But please don’t separate twinj in the upcoming episodes!!

  12. Hey Maha dear! I’m new to the comment box of your ff..
    Your ff is MINDBLOWING trust me .. Its awesome bruh .. Keep it up .. Your writing skills are OUTSTANDING
    I’ve been reading this ff since yesterday.. And I’m so attached to it already .. The way you expressed all the emotions was amazing
    Loved it to the coreeeee and to the moon and back .. MashaAllah .. Waiting for the next one … Sooooonnn possstttt iiiitttt puuuuhhhhlllleeeeaaassseeee
    So eager to read the next one ..
    Keep it dear .. You’re doing a great work

    Can we be friends puhleasseee?

    Anywayssss Allah Hafiz and don’t forget to post the chappyyy… 🙂 :p

  13. OMG!!!!! I was just like WOWWWWWWW… This was just the best……But I just hope that the reports were correct…. I cannot see twinj breaking……….

  14. SSK

    Back to back episodes….thank u soo much for posting it so quickly and the episode was fab. Actually I don’t have much words to praise you. You are such a great writer, really a moment Twinj were happy and now i the doc is calling Twinkle again, beautifully written and well expressed through words. U did a brilliant job. Just cant wait to read more 🙂

  15. Maha. I’m highly disappointed. Is this what we call romance. There wasn’t any intense scenes. Don’t you know how to show romance and if you don’t know then learn it from other FFs till then stop writing because a writer should know the art of hot intense romance and you’re lacking in it. I was tolerating you thinking that you’ll improve but this is too much! Kindly stop this utter nonsense.
    I don’t know why all are praising you when the matter of fact is you should be criticize by everyone!

    1. Ajeeb gareeb log! ?
      Why don’t you come up with your ff and thanwrite whatever you want

  16. Ananya_DSK

    Whew!! That was quite a scare, wasn’t it?? I had totally freaked out after the previous episode, and had already begun wondering what Twinkle’s comeback may look like and all that…. But Boom!! You never fail to surprise me, and I looove this kind of surprises!! The family did an extremely great job of scaring Kunj, and looks like they all are gonna be sooo dead when he goes back home… He definitely got a really amazing birthday gift!
    The rise and fall of Kunj’s emotions were beautifully expressed!! And ‘the’ scene was written really well too… The morning scene, the kitchen one… Everything was picture perfect!! It was really nice to see this shy, romantic side of Twinkle…!! Absolutely loved each bit! She’s assured Kunj that she’ll never leave him…, but I’m not so sure after Dr.Ragini’s call… What could have happened? Could it be that Twinkle’s reports were exchanged or something of that sort? I’m getting really worried now…. Fingers crossed and hoping for the best!! Lots of love ?

  17. Baby

    maha diii god you really shook me today i am crying am happy full of emotions like wow its like if i say i was speechless and i have no words that is also an understatement i am soo in love with this episode soo romantic soo beautiful soo full of emotions but i know what’s coming up next twinkle is not cured she is still sick there was some problem with reports right ?
    it was an amazing episode can’t comment big enough but to be true am addicted to your story diii like drug ke tarah its like a beautiful dream the words the messages the way everything is expressed really gets me in a wonderland i am soo much into it that i can’t wait for it ?
    you are amazing dii awesome loving your special talent actually its my pleasure am able to read it other wise kisko chance milta hai ?
    itne lovely thoughts itna amazing romance and itna sensuous tha i was kind of feeling it ??
    LOL just kidding but i was soo into it and then kunj ki cheesy talks but now you asking for tissue papers and tears is scaring me to death though i maybe know what’s coming up next ?
    but still i can’t wait for your next post to be up ASAP
    post soon dii ? soo yeah sunday that is day after tmrw long to go god like ages ??
    diii today was just as beautiful as you you are really an amazing person by heart twinkle tells everything hehe ???
    love you soooo much dii ?
    today was marvelous specchless am out of words am crying and really crying coz i donno am sad for twinj like ab kya hoga but happy finally everything happened b/w them ?
    love u again and love my twinj ???

  18. Vibhu

    Ohk .. So to some extent I guessed it all right !! It seemed so realistic yaar.. That happiness when doctor told that the medicines are working , my heart truely missed a beat …. Kunj and his happiness ?
    All those cute romantic scenes of bedroom and kitchen were amazing .
    Loved their talks …
    I felt like awwww reading the episode today..!!
    And the last now .. Phir she doctor ka fon aa gyaa .. God!! I hope twinkle didn’t have more complications in cancer !!
    Its just like a thunder before the storm!!,
    I have become a fan of your writing skills girl ….
    Also … Thankyou that u are giving ur time and writing this beautiful story on our favourite Twinj … I promise that I will always encourage you by commenting on your updates!!
    Lots of love

  19. Hello maha thos time I am not here before ur ff but to give a girl piece of min Miss’s anisha can u just shut ur blo*dy mouth and mind ur own bussiness maha is doing really well people like u make others stop there ff I know u may not like twinj if is it soo then go and read other couple where u can find hot romance ahe has dobe really well if u are so much interested then do it own your own if u like it that then post a hot romance we never stoped u and u r telling a writer should know how to write hot romance that blo*dy shit thought of your s is waste like u if u don’t like the story don’t read it many are there to read her story if 1 comment is less it won’t affect her if can’t praise there hardworking then don’t say bad about it too and after this lecture if u have any shame or guilt then never. Comment bad about a writer u can suggest thing politely and she already told u she can’t write mature things so don’t force her also .sorry maha but can’t stop myself felt really bags for u ,u do so much hardworking for us and people like her can’t respect . Don’t feel bad about that anishas comment u continue the story we all are wid u

  20. Wowwwwww finally twinj became one now…
    So happy…We got confession+consummation?????Thank u soo much for these..U have nailed each n everything… Seriously,, u are a grear writer and deserve an Oscar Award….???
    Okay let’s do one thing..we will together bring tashan e ishq 2 with sid and jasmine?I will be the producer. U will be the writer..fenil bhai will be director and rest one will be assistant director or choreographer okkk..It will be so great and fun naa??(but in our dreams only????)U know I badly want tashan e ishq 2..but don’t know why lead couples doesn’t repeat in indian tv serials?But u all writers fulfill my half of the tummy by writing such a lovely ffs????
    And yaa,,u again ended episode in suspense and gave us more shocks..??Pata nhi aaplog itne maasoom maasoom bache ko itna shock q dete ho??School wale toh exam lekar shock dete h??aur aaplog cliffhanger aur suspense mein chodkar shock dete ho..huhuhu..Go I will not talk with u but I can’t help it??Qnki ghum firkar toh yahi wapas aana h???To read my one of fvrt ff??
    Do post soon and yaa will seat with handkerchiefs and tissue papers to read ur ff??..But whatever u are going to write,,it’s going to be amazing as u have magical hand??And I love emotional episodes too…Bas twinkle ko kuch mat hone dena appi???
    Lots of love..
    Allah hafiz…
    Take care and do care for ur small small innocent sisters too??

  21. Ruchi

    Hey !!!
    wow!! It was amazing
    I got a mini heart attack when i read that she left him … after the confession i thought everything will be fine … but u ended the epi on clif hanger “” m really curious to know what will happen next!!!
    post soon dear
    Take care 🙂

  22. sudha chandrika

    Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm……… Twinkie going to face the troubles now…..feeling tensed……but yaar…….please don’t separate twinkle and Kunj now……instead of that anything ok dear

  23. Twinj2000

    Hey that one of the beautiful pieces of writing ever ?❤️❤️
    Amazing ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
    I loved this new side of twinkle ??
    I love many ffs on Tu but I swear this is my fav love story ….like all this ffs r amazing but the love story of this ff is such a unique one ??
    Totally loving it ya ❤️❤️❤️❤️
    Twinj romance was so graceful and you really showed us why it is known as making love …like so pure it is ..I loved it ya …totally ur fan ???????????????????
    But the end scared the hell out of me
    Hey maha I have a request to make and I don’t force you to fulfill my elrequrst coz u r an amazing writer and must have already planned something great but still ….my request is that Iam ok with carrying tissues but please however emotional plz don’t separate twinj??? let them fight together ..and again I wanna tell that all this only if possible if u have diff storyline n all it’s ok
    N again I wanna tell u by reading this we can understand how difficult it is to write this episode …really u r one of a kind….kudos to you …loads and loads of love ❤️❤️❤️❤️

  24. Really awesome chapterThe epi was written soo gracefully, waiting eagerly for Sunday with tissue box?????

  25. It was so gracious
    Even without depicting a single action you portrayed each and. Every emotion soo well

    Something wrong with twinkle?

    Loved it
    Post soon
    Waiting waiting ?

  26. maha maha maha superb fantastic episode dear
    to ye twinkle ka plan tha sabke saath me milkar
    Awesome fabulous surprise ????
    kunj to beachra pehle shocked ho gya???

    aur yrrrr ye last me kya tha plzzzzz twinj ko alag mat krna plzzzz mere ko darr lag raha h
    plzzzzzzzzz post soon dear

  27. Ramya

    Aaahhh it was such a bliss to read it.
    I loved it.
    Their confession
    That’s so lovely.
    I’m beyond words.
    Why do I feel like Twinkle is not cured yet.
    Hey I hope what I’m thinking should be wrong.
    It was so amazing
    The way portraited it
    I’m speechless.
    You deserve best writer award.
    Just so lovely.
    Loved it.

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