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ALL YOURS-TWINJ -AAMU

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“ALL YOURS”
(!!MATURE CONTENT!!)

-Tw’s pov-
Huh…wat he thinks of himself…😑
Evrytime..! Evrytime..! He do dis with me…
Muje to khud par gussa aata hai…mene kyu kiya asie sadu sarna se pyaar…
Dekho mr. Abhi tak nahi aaya…
Aane do batati hu….
(I m angry om myself..y i love sadu sarna…see…he has not cm yet..)
Ohh..! Wait..
Lemme introduce myself..
I m twinkle,twinkle taneja..
Ooh correction..twinkle sarna..last week only i got marriedΒ  to my prince charming..
Mera sadu sarna urf kunj sarna
Wait..!?
Wat prince charming..?
Huh..!
No prince charming…
Mene to galti kardi usse pyaar kar ke…
Meri zindagi barbaad ho gayi…!πŸ˜‘πŸ˜’
(I did a mistake by loving him…my life destroyed coz of him)…

Dekho abhi tak nahi aaye laad sahab..
Promise kiya tha k aaj dinner par chalenge..lekin nahi.!
Nahi aaya..
Huh…
Baat hi ni karungi usse…or…
Or..
Haa…!
Ek b kiss ni dungi..
Yaaa…ye right hai .!
Bohot tadpaaungi use …
(C till now he jad not come…
He had promise me to take me for a dinner..
But no..!
Let him cm..
I’ll not talk to him..
N
N..
Yaa…i will not give him a single kiss…
Dis is his punishment..yay..
It will b fun)
I was in my own world..
Wen..
Wen…
Evrything in front of me become dark…
Oo my god..!
Bhagwaanji maaf kardo..!
Achcha okay..!dedungi ek kiss kunj ko…
Or thodi baat b kar lungi..
Lekin pls bhagwaanji meri aankhen mat lelo mujhseπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
(God..!pls forgive me..
Okay …i will give him 1 kiss…
N yes..i’ll talk to him also a bit…
But pls god…dont take my eyes aay from.me..πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚)
Wait..!
I m in sm1s arm…

Oh dat means..some one has kidnapped me…
Smart twinkleπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
But meri aankhen kyu band kardi…muh band karna chahiye na..!
(But y he had blindfold my eyes..he should shut my mouth na..!)…
Pehli baar kidnap kar raha hoga bechara…!
Hmm…muje madad karni chahiya
(He would b kidnapping for d first tym..
I should help him..)
“Dekho bhaiya,kidnape karne k liye mera muh band karna chahiye…aankhen nahi”i said smartlyπŸ˜‚
Wait..!
Y i m teaching him…?
He is kidnapping me na.!
Yah..! I shoukd beat him..
N i startedgo beat him…
I was in his arms only…n beating him back..
I can sense he is in pain..but y he is not shouting…
“Ab me thak gayi..!”i muttered n stoped…
He dropped me on a cosy bed..
Oh my god..!…
Y some one took me on his bed..!???
Is he going to rape me.?
No…!!!!
“Hey..mr.itni der se mere kuli ban kar muje uthaya..mene kuch nahi kaha…lekin ab tumne kuch b kara na..!
Me pkka tumhe nahi chodungi…!….
Mera kunj tumhe bohot marega….
N…”i said inΒ  fear
“But tum to apne pati se naraz hona..! Ek kiss b nahi dogi na..!” He said n i m sure he is having a smirk..
Wait..!
Dis voice..!
Kunj..?
“Kkk…kunj..?”i again spoke while stammering…
N i opened d blindfold…
Oooooooo myyyyyyyy gooooooodddd…!!!!
“Wow…!”it was my room only..he had took me from hall to rooom..it was decorated with red bulbems n roses..
N den i looked at d men…n
N
😑😑😑😀😀😀😀😀
He was non other than kunj..
Mr.smirk..huh..
“U..?kunj…”
“Yes mrs.sarna”
“Y did u kidnap me…?”i asked angrily
“Wen i said i kidnap u…tymne hi apne dimag k ghode ko bhagaya…”(u thought it by urself)

Now wat should i say..!
He is right..!
“Y dint u cm to pick me up.?..n wat is dis all..? N yaa m not taling to u..?…n ”
Before i could speak…
He captured my lips with his
(MATURE CONTENT FURTHER…READ AT UR OWN RISK)

I protested…
It was a passionate one…
He suck my lower lip ..n den bite it..
My anger disappered at once..
After a short time he pulled out
“How is it…?”he asked about d decoration..
“WOnderful..!” I exclaimed.
“Oh..!achcha u were doing dis..!”i said wrapping my hands around his neck…
N he just gave a cheesy smile..
O my god..!..
I wanna kiss him…
N i should na..!
He did dis much for me..so
Without thinking further
I crash his lips…
Dis was also a passionate one….
He was enjoying n ofcourse me too…
Slowly his hands reach my zip..n slowly he unzipped it…n took my kurti out….
I tear up his shirt in one go….
N after about 10 minutes we pulled out…
I was blushing hard…
I hugged him as i was undressed..he had took out my kurti..i was just wearing inners

He start to kiss all over my face…not leaving a single place…den in a descendin order he moved towards my neck..leaving small love bites..making me moan in pleasure…
My hands reach on his jeans..i took it out….
Now i had already lost my temper..
I pushed him on d bed…n jumped upon him..
Ofcourse taking care dat he woukdnt b hurt…
Now i started to kiss n bite him all over his neck n shoulder..
He took out my salwar…
But i dont care..i was in my wild mood…
He was now moaning n i was enjoying…
(πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚)
Now it was his turn.. he bite me all over and I moaned.

Now i cant do anything..as he was a muscular man…i was just moaning n my hands running in his hair…n back…
He put wet kisses all over my body…
He removed all his left clothes and mine as well
N before consummating…
He looked at me for my approval..
“All urs..!”i said in his ears…
N without wasting for a second..
“Mine only..n forever” he said n we consummated.
Agghhhh..!!it pained…but more it gave me pleasure..
I groaned hard..
He put his lips on mine….his hands cupping my face..
My eyes were closed…
He broke d lips n kissed my eyes..i opened it…n a tear escaped my eye..
He suck it n nod in no…
“Dis tears is of happiness…for becomimg ALL URS…”i said..n he smiled..
After half or one hour…he pulled himself from me…n kissed my forhead..
I slept in his embrace fully satisfied for becoming HIS FOREVER….
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Phew..!
How was it.??
Vulgar.??.
I Know it was..!
Hope u liked it…
I had for d first tym wrote like dis..
Ofcourse i had wrote intimate one..
But not dis much deep…
Hope u liked my work..
Although it was a bad…
I m so nervous posting dis..pls cmnt…
I was seriously sooo much disappointed reading cmnts on d previous…igot very less…pls cmnt on dis..
If i will not get…den m not going to start any ff..
I know its blackmailing but..!

Pls
N i DEDICATE DIS OS TOO MY ADEEBU….MY SWWEETY N HER FRNDS….
As she toldher frnds to cmnt on my 2 shot as i was disappointed…
Thank u sooo much for dat…achcha ha..! Ni bolti thank u..
Hope u liked it…??
Pls guys cmnt…!

33 Comments
  1. Sohi

    It was very romantic os
    Hehe twinkles pov was funny
    Do continue

  2. Itna hot..uffffff itni garmi mein itna hot os.. Mujhe bht garmi lag rhi..hehehe…vaise yeh os ufff..kitna vulgar tha..hehehe ab tune hi toh bola
    Acha ab. Main serious ho jati hun bht amazing tha yrrrrrrrrrrrr aur bht acha kiya mujhe dedicate krke(ab thnx tho bol nai skti) aur main apne friends ko zaroor bolungi yeh OS padhne..biee

    1. U r a blo*dy stupid girl adeeba…
      I mean u do comments on ur ff and posts wid so many diff names…just to increase ur comments…blo*dy b*t*h…i know that abhigyani..dara…aashiya and many shitty names…is u only

      1. Aamu

        Hey adeeba wat she is talking bout…????

      2. U blo*dy first of all that abhigyani nd all r presha’s friend u blo*dy hell u get lost..aur han mujhse panga mat lo.
        blo*dy b*t*h

      3. Presha

        Listen miss the names u took r my friends who comment on ajeeb ff bcoz I have asked them…
        So u blo*dy shut ur mouth…

      4. Baby

        u shilpa phele bhi samjhaya tha kaali naagin…terko samaj nhi aaya tha kya huh……..disgusting person u r yrr…..haadd hai matlab pagal kahin ki..how dare u speak ill about some one if u donno………huh…..n u r srsly a moron dude….bezatii karane ke baad firse here for a bejati……huh….actually nt dude….I wanna use b*t*h bt thought nt to use bad today……huh……wid u kinda ppl…….stupid……..

  3. awesome tooooo hot n bit funny plzzzzzz start new ff love ur writing πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  4. Twinjfan.tamanna

    Hawttt! Yaar seriously kya likha hai meri ammu jaan! I. Just just loved it! No words! Twinkle’s POV was so funny!.hehe πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ my kunj! 😘😘

    With love,
    Urs Tamanna

  5. Presha

    Hey any…
    Its not vulgar…
    Its hot romantic nd se*y…
    Just loved it.. πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’‹πŸ’‹

  6. Ramya

    Hi aamu
    It’s nice

  7. SidMin23

    Ncie and sweet

  8. Sameera

    Ufff pehle itni garmi hai upper se yehh haayeeee sooo hot yaar loveddddddd it sooooooooooooooo much twinkle dialogues were too cute 😘😘😘…
    Ab jaldi se apne ff Kar intro post kardo warna me tujhse baat nai karungi (ye mera black n white mail hai πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚)
    Love u ….

  9. Hii amena in tuition adeeba said that u dedicated a os to us thnx dear
    The os was too romantic
    Hotness overlooded

  10. Romantic os

  11. Heloooo ammu
    Hot os

  12. Thanks amena for this
    Nice os

  13. Lovely os

  14. Shukriya amena iske liye bht ache se tumne describe kiya h yeh os aur twinkle ke POV bht funny the

  15. Too gud but wasn’t vulgar

  16. πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ˜±πŸ‘ŒπŸ˜†πŸ’₯πŸ’₯πŸ’₯πŸ’₯πŸ‘ŒπŸ’•garmi ke maare heat stroke na ho jaayeeπŸ˜€πŸ˜…..just fab and surprisingly funny tooπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚twinj ka convoπŸ˜‚…..πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

  17. Mia12

    Ammu bilkul sahi kehti hai tu ki mai teri tarah hi chatter box hun,,πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚.. Well omggggg kitna Amazing os tha yrr,,😘😘😘😘😘 and twinkle POV was sooo funny,,πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚.. Twinj romance was just sooooo hotttttt,,πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜›πŸ˜›.. Love it to the core,,❀❀❀❀❀.. well wese toh romance deep tha but vulgar nai tha chalta hai,,πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚.. Or ab itne nakhre mat dikha jaldhi apna ff ka intro post karde samjhi,,πŸ˜’πŸ˜’..
    Load’s of love,,β€β€πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’πŸ’..

  18. Amaya Bhardwaj

    Ufff. Ufff….Ufffffff. Itna passionate hot romance…..Garmi badha di tune TOH….Koi ac on karo yaar… Global warming k liye tujhe hi jimmedar tehrana chahiye baby….HW can u write sooo good…Itna hotty os….Loved it took CORE jaan…..
    Or tujhe kisne KHA ye vulgar or bad that it was soooooo lovely….Tw talks were soooooo cuteeeeee and funny….
    MUuuaaaaaahhhh 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
    Don’t get disappointed with less cmmt yrr…..U will surely get ur disired no of comments …..Becoz u write sooo well jaan…..
    Do continue
    Keep smiling 😊😊😊

    LOVE Uuuu INNAAAA SAAARAAa….😍😍😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  19. Well it was a nice os…
    But but but…i dnt understand one thing now….is it becoming a new trend on tei tu…dat u all for increasing comments….urself do comment on ur posts…like seriouly are u guyzz mad…firstly dat stupid adeeba..and u too…..and dat stupid adeeba…she herself do so many comments wid different names on her posts and ffs…are u blo*dy mad

    1. Aamu

      Well thanx u liked it..
      N miss mind ur language….
      I had never ever cmnt on my ff with other name…
      I dont even know wat r u talking about..
      N dont use ill languages otherwise i also know very welll to deal with a bl**dy b**ch u…!😑😑😑😑😑😑😬😬😠😠😠

      1. Aamu

        Like u*

    2. Oyiii sun yeh mahira nd all mere friends h got itt

    3. Nd I m not free person.. Aamu said that’s y I commenting…

    4. Areee you madd????pagal aurat ho kyaa ……itna problem hai to apne tashreef uthao aur jao yahan seπŸ˜’πŸ˜›

    5. Baby

      thanks fr liking d os….bt dare u speak ill bout any one…..I swear kaali naagin I ll show u ur death……….kar rahein naa log tarreef Bhai bandi teri kya prblm hai we r nt mad u r mad yrr seedhe seedhe bol u r jealous den we ll say ohk……..par y u r using dese ill words…… u nincompoop moron……

  20. Purnima.agrawal30

    Amazing awesome hot romantic marvelous epi

  21. Shalini15

    Hi my partner, sorry for late comment actually I’ve left Tu but today is Sunday nd I was getting bored toh socha TU open karke ffs padh lun.

    This os was just amazing mind blowing fabulous nd Hot Hot Hot nd super Hot. Twinkle’s pov nd her tantrums nd dialoges were too good. Loved it so much.

    Loveyou πŸ˜— πŸ˜— πŸ˜— πŸ˜— πŸ˜— πŸ˜— πŸ˜— πŸ˜— πŸ˜— πŸ’– πŸ’– πŸ’– πŸ’– πŸ’– πŸ’– πŸ’–

  22. Baby

    oyyyeeee hoyyeee meriii aami jaan……….☺
    osm mmmuuuahahhhh………..loved it sooooooo mch………☺
    speechless wow…..jst amazing marvelleous romantic uff…..hot….thik tha nt vulgar sooo chillax……….☺
    love u lods………☺

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