tumse milne ki dua zindagi ban gayi (ragsan os) by priya15 with an apology note…

Hii priya here after a loooooooooong time ..tq so much for the support which u people gave for me in my last two os..i m surprised ..thank u so much for that guys..so here one more os for u people…hope u people l support me like before…one big sry for not cmntng in many ffs…actually i was busy with my studies but guys I M READING UR FFS AS A SILENT READER..i mean MEGHA123 DI, AZURE DI, PARI , SINDHU DIS AND MANY OF THE FFS BUT AS A SILENT READER as i couldn’t get time to cmnt..so sorry for that my sisters.hope u people can understand..yet u people r angry with me then i m so sorry for that..now let us go into the story….
p.s: its a very long os…

In KOLKATA…
There was a big gate inside it there was two houses but without wall..(guys it has one gate)..in which the name board is written FRIENDS VILLA…..

In the lawn:
One boy and girl are sitting(they are of 15 years old)…their face clearly shows that they are crying….the girl wiped her tears and turned to the boys side and said “SANKU,u have to go with ur parents…u know what we should leave our parents ever..i will miss u so much my friend..but uncle ke liye tumhe jaana hoga…papa keh rahe the ki uncle ke liye yeh offer paana bachpan ka sapna tha…..so pls don’t cry go with them..” sanky said “ i m happy that i m going from here u know na that i hate this place… but i have my frns here..i don’t want to leave them and go”..he turned to her and said “RAGU…we cant be with each other…papa said that we cant come back after going there as he l be busy…and getting transfer from that company is difficult ..u know na u r my best friend i cant be without speaking to u for one day too”.. ragini said to him “ha..sanku i know but ????? okay..tum mujhse milne ke liye aa nahi sakte ho toh kya hua..lekin mei toh tumhare paas aa sakti hun na??( she winks her eyes ) i promise u ..once we will complete our college and we will be settled in one job..i will come and meet u ..YEH MERA VAADA HAI TUMSE…i l surely meet my best friend after that” a warm but weak smile appeared on both their faces…
INSIDE THEIR HOUSE;
Dp: shekar u know that i don’t want to go from here but this is the best for sanskar..i m n fear that whether sanskar stays here then he l be depressed more ( guys actually there is one fb ..dp has said a lie to both that they r going to USA bcoz he got transfer ..the reason is different ..notice at the ragsan convo sanky said he hate this place???so that is the reason they r going…i l reveal that reason down)
Shekar : ya i can understand..even i think the same..sanky is happy when he stays with ragu but after the time when he stays alone..he is thinking of that incident..so even i think change of place is the only way for him to come out of that incident..
Ap and sumi: ya thats the right thing …
( ap, dp and sanky r leaving on next day flight)
Next day mrng:
Sanky comes to ragini’s room and give her one box and say to her open it after i leave..ragini too gives him one gift…. ragsan hug each other and cry as they cant see each other..
The maheshwari’s left to USA…

AFTER 8 years…
KOLKATA:
One girl comes out after taking bath with pink anarkali and opens one box( the same box which sanky gave)…which has bracelet and it is written “ FRIENDS” ..( that girl is ragini)..She wears it and says “ i l be coming to meet u soon my dear sanku..just wait for me”
USA:
One guy is sitting in the chair by seeing some files..he gets a call from his maa…
On call:
Ap: beta ! wr r u ???
Guy: ma i m n office…i l come late today as i have a lots of work..
Ap: okay but come soon sanskar!!
Sanky: okay ma..i l come after finishing my work soon..
He kept his phone in which his watch had hit the table..he suddenly took his hand and saw his watch whether it has some scratch ?? and said “ thank god watch is fyn “ (the watch is gifted by ragini to him remember ragini gave one gift to him..that watch contains his and ragini’s childhood photo in it , so sanky is conscious about his watch..haha)
KOLKATA:
Ragini came out of the room and went and took aarti from her mom..
Sumi: ragini finish ur breakfast and go.
Ragini : nahi ma i l manage ..i m getting late..
Shekar: no first finish ur breakfast and then go..
Ragini : papa..mujhe der ho rahi hai..i want to go..
Shekar : ek din der hone mei kuch nahi hoga….
Ragini : papa! Ek din late jaane mei kuch nahi hoga balki office ki pehli din late jaane mei bahut kuch ho sakta hai…so bye for now
Ragini entered her office …receptionist says to her that MD has called u to his cabin…ragini is hell shocked ..she things in her mind “ y he called me in??i came to office at the correct time..hare yar yeh ho kya raha hai??”
She gets in the cabin..
Ragini : may i get in sir?
Md : yes ms. Gadodia .
Ragini : sir u have called me ??
Md: ya actually meine aapko yeh kehne liye bulaya ki aap yahan kaam nahi kar sakte ho..
Ragini couldn’t understand anything..she is shocked..
Md continues..: i have read ur internship certificate and called mr.sinha ..he said that “ ragini is capable to train staffs..she is one of the best trainee student i have seen”
So ms. Gadodia i have decided that u l work in our USA branch…as we seriously need a staff like u there as we r facing a big loss there for past few years…..will u pls go usa ..u can return after one month..bcoz i know that u l clear everything soon there..
Ragini was happy she is dancing in..and said “ ya sir! Sure”
She went to her house and said to her parents ..they permitted her..

USA..
Sanky is lying in couch and seeing his phone for each n every min like a mad..suddenly he got a msg ..and his face glows like a 1000w bulb..( Thats ragini msg)
Ragini : hii sanku !! wt r u doing ??
Sanky: hii ragu !i m just lying in my bed and ….( sanky is abt to type the other ..)
Ragini : and seeing ur phone whether u get a msg from me??am i ryt buddu??
Sanky : ha ..did u have kept any camera here??
Ragini : noo….Y r u asking so??
Sanky : then how can u say so crctly??
Ragini : hahah…mr. sanskar maheshwari i m ur best friend..i know what will u do at the mrng , at eve and at nyt.. to say in simple..i know everything abt u..a-z…
Sanky : seriously?? Great!!accha batao how was ur first day…
Ragini : very good ( she was abt to say that she is gng to come to usa but she thinks that late it be suspense)
Sanky : oh really ??i m so happy..chalo ab tumhara photo send karo..( guys actually sanky and ragini planned that they l send their photo to each other once rag gets a job)
Ragini : no …pehle tum..
Sanky : ohkay ziddhi ki dukhan..( sanky thinks y l i send her my photo lets play a prank!!)
Ragini receives one pic with the quotation “ chalo send kar diya..ab tumhara pic bejo “..she is so excited to see her frnd..but she is shocked to see the pic..its SHARUKH KHAN…( that too of ddlj look)
Ragini : (thinks) u l not send urs then y i l send mine..no mr.buddu maheshwari..wait n watch!
Sanky receives a pic he is excited but that pic……its of KAJOL( ddlj look )he is hell shocked..
Sanky : whats this??
Ragini : ur reply..
Ragini : chalo good night..i want to go to office tomorrow…bye..
Sanky: good night ki bacchii..ek din aavoge na ..tab samjathi hun tujhe..bye…
Ragini smiles…that day l come soon sanku…( thinks)
Next day ragini went to USA..
Days passed..but she is busy with her work..she thinks to search sanky but the work load never goes from her head..and the reason why ragini went to usa was successfull..she has taken that company out of the continuous loss..so now ragini has to return india…

At that day night :
Ragini’s POV:
When i got to know that i want to go to USA…the thing why i smiled is …i m going to meet u ..i m going to fulfil my promise..i was happy that aakhir meri intazaar khatam honewaali hai… u don’t know sanky “ TUMSE MILNE KI DUA meri ZINDAGI BAN GAYI ‘’ u r the only person i share everything..but this destiny …its playing its game…(she cries)…suddenly she wipes her tears..ragini y r u crying u have one day..u can search for sanky.. i m sure ur frndship is not that week that u cant even identify him..no i l search u sanky..

Next day :
Ragini went out in search of sanky..
Sanky was walking in a road by speaking to somebody through phone…they both didn’t notice each other..while going their hands touched ..i mean they hit each other..both felt something..but sanky doesn’t take it serious as he is busy in call…ragini suddenly stopped after that moment and turned ..TUMSE MILKE AISA LAGA JAISE APNA KOI PLAYS….
She runs through the way where he went..suddenly she noticed sanky standing outside the mall …dont know y but she felt something …she runs to him and called.. ”excuse me”
Sanky turned : ya! ( don’t know y unknown smile appeared in sanky’s face)
Ragini thought “yeh smile aur awaaz toh bilkul sanky jaisa hai “
Ragini said with tears flowing in her eyes “ SANSKAR….”
Tears started to flow from sanky eyes too…” RAGINI ..” they both hugged each other and they were happy that they both have met each other…
They went to the park which is nearer..
Sanky was in deep thought..
Ragini : Kya hua??kya soch rahi ho
Sanky : bas yahi ki how did u identify me??
Ragini : oye! We r frnds i can easily identify u …i m not that much duffer ki mei apni dosth ki smile, awaaz sab kuch bul sakthi hun…
Sanky : thank god !!! aakhir hamare dosthi ki naam lekar tumne yeh toh accept kiya kit um duffer ho…( sanky laughed…ragini raised her eyebrows and asked)
Ragini : u??i have identified but u were teasing me..buddu …
They started their nokh-jhok..one point they stopped and laughed..
Sanky asked ragini what a sudden surprise that u came to usa..that too its just one day u have joined in office??
Ragini said everything to him..sanky said “ WAHOO..ms. ziddhi ki dukhan…i m proud of u”
ragini gave him a angry look ..
sanky : what???
ragini : what what??..tumne kya kaha mujhe..ziddhi ki dukhan??
Sanky : ya u do alot of zidh na thats y ziddhi ki dukhan ..haha..
Ragini said ..u r really an buddu mr.buddu maheshwari..
Sanky : mei buddu hun ???
Ragini : ya..buddu buddu…

sanky gets a call from dp ..but he cut it.ragini sensed that he become angry..she asked what happend…sanky said to her “ papa wants me to accompany him “ ragini exclaimed “ where??” sanky said with anger “ KOLKATA”..” u know na ragu i hate that place..then how can i ??” ragini said “ y cant u ??sanky pls erase ur past and come there..okay come for me??plss” he wanted to deny it but as he saw her innocent face that too in a pleading manner “ okay..i l come there forever..but just for u “ ..ragini gave him a warm smile..( guys actually sanky sister was died there..she has got cancer in which she died…dp said na that sanky is in depression thats bcoz of that only..sanky loves his sis alot..he cant believe that his sis left him..dp and ap got afraid that whether their son l be like this forever..so they both want to take sanky far away so that he forgets that incident)
maheshwaris returned to india..and gadodia and maheshwari family stayed friends forever…..
one day dp and shekar thought to make ragsan married..but they denied by saying that we both r best friends…but after sometime they both said okay we will marry…after marriage they started to love each other..eventhough they both started to live as a couples and started to love each other..their friendship never ended..they always stayed as a best friends for each other..they both were friends first then only hus and wife..whenever any couple fight occur in them ..they sat as a frnd and discuss it..then they patch up..
so here is the end of my story…hope u all loved it..sry if its boring….and ya i know this is so long..say ur views..pls silent readers do cmnt as i just write an os..ur cmnts boost me..pls cmnt…so that only i can improve myself..so pls do cmnt….

84 comments

  1. DC1

    |Registered Member

    Yay!!!.. .. Finally read your os after such a long time, since I got your pm… I was waiting for this os but TU took a lot of time na… Seriously I loved it yaar… There nok-jhok was adorable… Ragini zidhi ki dukan lol… I seriously loved that dialogue and ddlj part was good too. Keep writing like this sis… Will wait for your next os… Take care love you loads

    • Priya15

      |Author

      Haha. Ya di tu took along time to update this… L write it soon di.. Tq so much for this lovely cmnt…. It means a lot my cutie di.. Love u..

    • Priya15

      |Author

      Tq so much Lila di.. I was waiting for ur ff.. I m missing it so much….. Update it soon.. Especially power of true love di…

  2. Fairy

    Super awesome dear😊😊😊 loved ragsan !!!!!its a realllyyyy veryyy sweeeet story dear…keeep rockng n stay blesssed😊😊😊

  3. Tharu

    |Registered Member

    It’s the first time I read is about ragsan.It’s beautiful dear..Actually I am a swasan fan.but l like your is.

  4. Astha

    |Registered Member

    phehali teri di tujse naras hun……. kon kaha teri di ko hindi patha????? what is meant by ziddhi ki dukhan? ok leave that……. loved the os to the core……. amazing os dear. sila scenes appo nan idha imagine pannikiten yenna na…… opening scene ku enaku ajith jothika movie villa dan flash achi….. then sharukan n kajol scene la etti movie scene flaash achi. unna hurt panradukaga sollaala thonichi sonnen. thats it. hope my sis wont take me wrong. ragsan frndship……. no words to describe. and the gifts to each other…. its adorble……. loved it dear. take care. love u loads.

    • Astha

      |Registered Member

      priya…… oru page um vitu vekada……. edkv, krpkab, ishqbaaz, most imp yhm, nalla velai…. deleez mudinjiduchi….. ethana serial pakura… ethana serial ff padikira chlm?????

      • Priya15

        |Author

        Akka yhm LA na cmnt pana maten.. I just watch ishqbaaz,edkv and brahmarakshas regularly… And ragsan os and ishqbaaz LA some os padipan

    • Priya15

      |Author

      I m sorry… Actually comedy ah eng LA ezhuduna kick eh poidum.. So that only I wrote it n Hindi… Ziddhi ki dukhan means adamency ki market….. And villa nu oru movie irukune neenga soli Dan theriyum.. And ya eeti concept venumnu Dan eduthan. Actually I don’t know how to show that they didn’t see each other as frns used to share pics..APA anda thought mind LA vandudu so have written it…tq… Tc ..love u too…

  5. Bshama1239

    |Registered Member

    The ddlj part was nawsum n that 1000w was AW moment ur dialogues were much more interesting than my ff of ishqbaaz keep going dear I red ur os for the first time nice going n u too have the writing skills which is better or beyond the level
    Don’t return me my comment dear remember a episode in which anika told this I can’t write the whole dialogue becoz I am a bit busy n yaa I took ur suggestion for making omkara jealous

    • Priya15

      |Author

      Tq so much di.. Ur compliment made me so happy…. Which dialogue di ???pls say me…. I don’t know which dialogue u r speaking abt?????ya I have saw it… Tq for that… Jealous omi…haha…

  6. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Priya di it was such a sweet OS don’t state such a lovely OS boring 🙂 So nice 🙂 Sweet yet simple 🙂 Loved it 🙂 Good going 🙂

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

    Di if u don’t mind, plz write an OS on Ishqbaaz, please 🙏🙏

    Stay blessed…

    -Zuha

    • Priya15

      |Author

      Tq so much zuha.. And ya I l write one on ishkara soon… I m thinking of its end… L write it when I get next holiday pakka….u too keep smiling dear…luv u…then how r u ????how s ur studies???

      • Priya15

        |Author

        Jo (hope u don’t mind calling u by jo)… We have alot of similarities dear.. I mean u r a ishkara fan.. Am I ryt??? ? And me too a ishkara fan.. I love teju the most in these 4..and u too the same… Aur I also love Danny Character alot than sanky… I used to watch saraswatichandra for Danny and when I saw Sr I m so happy to see him back.. But sanky ki character toh Danny se straight opp.. That naughty chirpy waala character nahi hai.. But ya I love sanky too but lot more Danny.. Ho gayi na zyada similarities???

      • Fatarajo

        |Registered Member

        Actually my fav is teju among four of them but I like varun also 😛 but I liked him the most in saraswatichandra where he acted as danny. I used to love sanky character initially but later they spoil his character.

      • Fatarajo

        |Registered Member

        Hey priya yes u r right! Ishkara is my fav too and I like swasan but I feel sr was better with ragsan 😛 but swasan is ok too 😛 and yeah me also loved his danny character i actually liked sanky when he was negative as i thought his and ragini’s story will start 😛
        And btw i write two ffs also , one on ishqbaaz and one on krpkab and edkv combo
        but i do mention which scene is for which show 😛

    • Priya15

      |Author

      Haha same here I have stopped watching Sr when it has come out of the pair ragsan dear….. Even I thought the same but CVS betrayed us. Haha….. I read ur ishqbaaz ff… Edkv and krpkab??? Noo.. L read it once I have become free…

      • Fatarajo

        |Registered Member

        Sure haha well ya i also don’t like the fact when cvs cheat fans by changing pair ,but i like raglak more than swalak 😅

  7. sona

    It’s was so lovely..reliable..
    Actually this us the first ff I read about ragsan..
    I’m from edkv fan page…
    As u posted this link..there..I came to know about it..
    Its ssooi.. nice.😊😊😊

  8. SPP

    |Registered Member

    Awesome Superb Fantastic Amazing
    Loved it to the core DEAR
    Thanks for this OS
    Really it was Marvelous Wonderful
    Loved Ragsan a lot
    U just nailed down

    • Priya15

      |Author

      Tq so much di… Actually this is a story… As I gave the name ragsan I planned to get them married at the end… I didn’t show any proposals and all just bcoz I want it to be a frnds story….. And di tq so much for ur constant support…

  9. Richa19

    |Registered Member

    Superb amazing!!!!!!!
    Lovely os….. Loved their dialogues… Nok jhok.. Everything!!!!

    Keep rocking dear!! It was mind blowing!!!! 😘😘

  10. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    Awesome awesome awesome superb it is dear u r really well actually m a diehard swasan fan and this is the first ragsan os I have ever read and m glad that it was urs coZ this was awesome and the thing I loved the most was that u didn’t include swara coz some writers make swara negative or sister of sanskar which I personally don’t like but this was just superb I totally loved it the plot was fresh and so beautiful
    Keep writing more and more and yes sorry for late comment
    Love u dear

    • Priya15

      |Author

      I know Khushi.. U r a swasan fan but tqs for reading it for me.. I m feeling so happy to hear that Khushi.. Tumne Khushi De diya mujhe.. Haha.. Actually I want to share with u one thing as u r my frnd.. Actually I was abt to pen that Swara sanskar’s sis died but then I thought that it l not be good.. Thank God that I didn’t disappoint u… So happy for that.. Surely l write more.. No sry sweetie…. Bcoz I can understand.. And u r watching ishqbaaz na?? There was a segment posted on Aug 29 epi.. See to it… Ishkara seg.. Ishu ki sachayi om ke saamne… Om become angry young man.. Watch it.. Okay?? Luv u so much dear…. Tq very much… Big big Hugs to you dear..

  11. Ashrita.S

    |Registered Member

    Fabulous one dear… I really liked it a lot… the end part where they solve their problems as friends … that was very cute.. loved to the core and come back with another heart touching story..tc

    • Priya15

      |Author

      Tq so much di.. For ur constant support.. Ya l come back with one more.. But I think it l be on ishkara…. Hope u l support me there too….. Tc u too.. Love u.. Big big Hugs..

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