Tumpe marta hai mera dil ff raglak – Prologue

hii guys hatami here
Well i am sure you won’t have hear my name because i am new and i am sending prolouge to my OS of raglak
If you like it then we will make a real OS or i will drop the idea
So its a prolouge of the ff i am going to write
And pls comment

So lets get started

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A lady is roaming and she falls a man caught her hand and she smiles looking at him but then suddenly that man leaves her hand she fall down from the hill , she is caught by a young man who was loving his heart to her and came up with her
she lays on bed he helps her stand on her feet again but she left him and another man came to her life again the plan of leaving and taking and leaving and taking and leaving and taking countinues after that the girl fell on her feet and then lay on solid square ground when at last a man hold her hand
And she remember the same bed on which she lated first she wakes up and found herself on grass (soft velvet grass thats very smooth ) she remember someone and ran to him but see him hugging another girl
he sees her and than ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………. …………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………. ………………………………………… ………………………….
The girl layes on grass full of khoon (she dosn’t look like the young person she was )
But in her death she is smiling on the soft velvet grass

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Thanks for all the reads and yes also pls comment on this so that i can make new ff and Os
See guys i can make any pair
But for now i can make one and i will work on it
Now the question is do you like it
So you wanna get ff of this or not
Pls comment and give me feedback
For characters and for more fantasy
Because this one is full of that one …………..
Byee guys and pls comment and make me feel that this prolouge is good enough that you will enjoy in ff
Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

-With alots of love
Hatami
(I am a indian just the name i put is diff)

Credit to: Hatami

11 comments

  1. Sonya

    |Registered Member

    sound superb
    even i got little confuse
    but would love to read to figure out
    who r the man that played with her
    seems shes not fond of the one who saved her
    i think u also get confuse from my comment lol

    but dear continue

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