Tumhe Jo Maine Dekha.. Tumhe Jo Maine Jana.. (Rikara ff)— part 5

Hey friends… Kiya here… Although I am not getting so much comments I am writing this bcz may be it bcz of I can’t post it regular but I am trying to continue my two ffs regularly.. So plz support me.. Pkz.. Ur comments gives me engry to write something new.. So plz…
Let’s start the ff…

Part 5

Gauri & Jiya is behind a tree… Goons r continually threatens the little girl and all peoples… Gauri thinks something & explains Jiya… Jiya goes & break somethings in a shop.. Two goons goes to see… Jiya returnes hiding.. Another goon who is caught the little girl frees her & checked everything… Gauri goes and holds the girl.. They silently moves from there suddenly goon comes & sees her taking the girl.. They shouts & pointed gun towards them.. Gauri hold the girl & covers her her… A gunshot sound.. All r shocked…
Gauri opens her eyes & saw that nothing happend to her nor that girl… She saw the goons hand is bleeding.. All saw that it was ACP Randhawa who shots the goon… All get relax… A another goon hurts Ranveer from back… Ranveer fights with them… Police comes & catches all gonns..
Ranveer comes to Gauri…
Ranveer: ” R u OK???”
Gauri nodes..
Ranveer: ” Really u r a very brave girl.. I must say… Bcz of u this little girl’s life is saved… She is a big business man’s daughter.. These goons cames for revenge.. Thanks a lot..”
Jiya comes..
Gauri: ” Its alright.. As a citizen its our duty to help u…”
Ranveer: ” Well.. Really nice to meet Miss???”
Gauri: ” Gauri.. Gauri Sharma…”
Ranveer: ” O.. I am ACP Ranveer sing Randhawa…”
Jiya: ” Nice to meet u sir…”
Jiya & Gauri shake hands.. Gauri noticed that Ranveer’s hand was bleeding..
Gauri: ” Oh my god.. Ur hand is bleeding.. Wait..” She takes a handkerchief from her bag and tied his hand for stop bleeding… Ranveer smiles…
Gauri: ” What happened??”
Ranveer: ” Today is Raksha bandhan and my wrist was empty.. I am feeling really very bad and look u tied something in my wrist..”
Gauri: ” Of course bcz u also save my life as a brother..”
They smiled.. They three have a small chi chat…
Ranveer: ” So from today u r my sister & I am ur brother.. Any problem just call me OK???”
Jiya: ” Now the problem is she needs a job…”
Gauri: ” Jiya??? Nothing bhaiya.. She is just..”
Ranveer: ” U r calling me bhaiya right?? Then??? Jiya tell me..”
Jiya: ” Actually bhaiya she lost her job today.. She needs a job to support her family.. Can u help her??? ”
Ranveer: ” Well.. Don’t worry.. Send me ur details Gauri.. I will search a job for u OK???”
Gauri & Jiya smiles.. They bid good bye to each other and goes..

Gauri comes her home.. Gives medicine to her Chacha & goes to her room…
She goes to freshen up..

Om in his room.. Sitting in front of window & drinking his coffee..
Om in his mind, ” Oh god.. What a day.. Its a Raksha Bandhan but before that.. That girl.. She is really a stupid.. Well I am a stupid as well… Without knowing her I started accusing her.. That’s wrong.. She didn’t tell sorry to me directly.. Battamez ladki..”

Gauri’s room… She is talking to a Krishna idol…
Gauri: ” Why he also didn’t say sorry to me directly.. Ghamandi(Arrogant)… But why I am only thinking about her… So much happend in a one day.. Really and I am thinking about that stupid… Kanha ji.. At first he looks so clam but when he opens his mouth feels like lava balls r coming towards me… Like his name Omkara as tandav Shiv… Huh..”
She goes and sleeps…
Gauri says Angrily, ” Omkara sing Oberoi…”

Om(Angrily): ” Gauri Sharma…”
He sleeps…

Ranveer comes Oberoi mansion… Prinku comes to him..
Ranveer: ” U r still awake for me???”
Prinku: ” No not for u.. For Dudhwale bhaiya.. He comes so early morning na???”
Ranveer: ” Prinku???”
Prinku: ” So u r asking silly question.. Or whom I can wait???”
Ranveer: ” Sorry..”
They laugh..
Prinku sees his hand..
Prinku: ” What happened???”
Ranveer: ” Just a small cut.. Don’t worry Gauri tied it..”
Prinku: ” Gauri???”
Ranveer: ” Oh.. A long story.. Come I will tell u…”
They goes…

Shivika’s room…
Shivaye hugs Annika…
Shivaye: ” Don’t worry.. I will find a good secretary for u… OK????”

Ranveer knocks.. Shivaye goes & opens the door…
Shivaye: ” Yes Ranveer everything is alright???”
Ranveer: ” Sorry for disturbing u Shivaye.. But I think I can help u..”
Shivaye: ” What do mean???”
Ranveer: ” Actually I met a girl today.. Very good & honest… Her name is Gauri Sharma.. I think she can do that job.. I will mail u details if u want??”
Shivaye: ” OK Ranveer if u suggest then send me the details.. Annika & I will check it…”
Ranveer: ” Great then Good night…”
Shivaye: ” Good night…”
Ranveer goes..

Precap: ” Gauri in Oberoi mansion…”

That’s all friends.. Plz support my this ff too.. Plz.. All I need ur comments.. Plz…for reading…

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  1. Wow ? kiya nice update…Like priveer in your story a lot…..waiting for next part….take your time ?

    1. Kiya

      Thanks San.. I like PreVeer to.. So little PreVeer touch…

  2. Super awesome update

    1. Kiya

      Thanks Dr.. Keep reading.

  3. Shreyanvi

    Nice….post nxt part soon…

    1. Kiya

      Thanks Shreyanvi.. Keep reading Dr…

  4. Niriha


    1. Kiya

      Thanks Niriha..

  5. Amazing part…. eagerly waiting for next part as it will be Gauri’s entry in Oberoi Mansion….
    n please don’t be upset u know what u r one of my favourite peoples because I really like ur stories…. so please don’t get upset n there r people who really wait for next part of ur ff….
    (n please keep smiling although I have never met u but I would not like seeing u like this)

    1. Kiya

      Thanks Dr… Thanks for ur so much Support.. And yes now I am not upset…

  6. Awesome yaar…. Waiting for the next one…. Post it soon…

    1. Kiya

      Thanks Sagithya.. Keep reading..

  7. Yashu

    Awesome loved it……i really liked private in ur story…..eagerly waiting for nxt episode….

    1. Kiya

      Thanks Yashu… Keep reading Dr…

  8. Yashu


  9. Rasika

    Nice… ??

  10. Kiya

    Thanks Rasika…

  11. Verna

    Wow.. really good.. I loved today’s part.. Gauri became Ranveer’s sister now 🙂 🙂

    1. Kiya

      Thanks Verna.. Keep reading.. And give ur suggestions..


    1. Kiya

      Thanks Dr..

  13. Chandani99

    Wow awesome

    1. Kiya

      Thanks Chadani Dr…

  14. Aashi26

    sorry for not commenting before kiya di….now I will regularly comment…well I loved ranveer-gauri bro-sis bond….

    1. Kiya

      Thanks Aashi.. Its OK Dr.. Keep supporting..

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