Tumhe Jo Maine Dekha.. Tumhe Jo Maine Jana.. (Rikara ff)— part 1

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iii friends… Its Kiya here… Thanks for ur such & lovely response on my Rikara ff intro… Now start the 1st part… Here is the link intro/ Character sketch….

Intro & character sketch

Part 1

A big mansion is shown… Of course its Oberoi mansion….
In house temple….
There is 5 ladies in front of Mata rani’s idol… All r praying… There face is shown… Yes its Dadi, Janvi, Pinky, Annika & Saumya….
After finishing arti…
Dadi: ” Today is very big day in this house… It’s raksha bandhan…”
Janvi: ” Yes mummy ji… Its a very big function… All there brothers r waiting for their little sister…”
Dadi: ” But r they really waiting???? Saumya… Did Rudra woke up???”
Saumya: ” No Dadi… I don’t think so bcz before coming for arti I went to him and he sleeping like a baby…”

All laugh… Dadi: ” Then go and wake up him…”
Saumya: ” Yes Dadi…”
Pinky: ” Annika u also go…”
Annika: ” Where Maa???”
Pinky: ” Oho go and remind my diamond son that today is raksha bandhan so no meetings for today… Ok???”
Annika: ” Ok Maa…”
SauAni leaves…

Dadi: ” Saumya is perfect for Rudra and this house…”
Janvi: ” Yes mummy ji…”
Pinky: ” But before Rudra its our Devdas… What about him??? I think he will marry his statues…”
Janvi: ” Pinky???”
Pinky: ” Sorry Jethaniji…”
They smiled…

A person is shown making a statue… His long hairs r flows in the air…

Saumya comes to Rudra’s room…
He is still sleeping like a baby hugging a pillow…
Saumya: ” This Rudra na… Rudra… Rudra… Wake up its 9 AM… Rudra..”
……No response……
Saumya called him again… Shook him… No response at all….
Finally Saumya picks a jug full of water and throws it on Rudra… Rudra wakes up with a jerk…
Rudra: ” What happened???”

Saumya: ” Its 9 AM Rudra…”
Rudra: ” So what????”
Saumya: ” It’s raksha bandhan Rudra…”
Rudra: ” So what????”

Saumya looked at him…
Rudra: ” Wait… Raksha bandhan… That means Prinku is coming… Oh no… I am sleeping this late… Oh no…”
Saumya: ” Oh yes… Learn something from bade bal wale bhaiya…”
Rudra: ” What??? Rudra sing Oberoi will learn from that lambe bal wala prani….”
Saumya: ” Shut up… He is better than u…”
Rudra: ” Oh really??? Then why he is alone till now???”
Saumya: ” Rudra???”
Rudra: ” Sorry…”

The person is shown again and his hand is full of mud… His eyes have a spaces…

Shivika’s room…
Annika: ” Shivaye…”
Shivaye: ” I know its raksha bandhan.. And no meetings for today… U told this more than 10 times Annika, I remember…
Annika: ” I know but Maa told me to remind u again bcz last time u left bcz of some work… Remember???”
Shivaye: ” Yaa… Sorry for that.. Not this time.. But I am glad that every time Om handled every situation…”
Annika: ” Yes of course our Om is a real gem…”
Shivaye: ” Right.. Where is he????”
Annika: ” In his room… Preparing the gift for Prinku…”
They smiled…

The person is shown again making statue… Full of mud in his hands… His eyes have a spaces…
Shivaye call him….
Shivaye: ” Om…”
The person turns and his face is shown… Yes its Hero Omkara sing Oberoi…. Shivika & Rumya was at his room’s door and he smiled at them….

Precap: A girl says to a another girl, ” Don’t very at all when Gauri Sharma is with u…” They smiles….

So this is the first part… Pls leave comments dr readers and tell me that u liked it or not… Thank u…. Have a good day….

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20 Comments
    1. Kiya

      Thanks dr…

    1. Kiya

      Thanks Rasika…

  1. Amazing

    1. Kiya

      Thank u dr…

  2. Verna

    Loved the way u gave dramatic intro for MY Omi loved today’s part dr

    1. Kiya

      Thanks Verna… Keep reading…

  3. AWESOME COOL NICE SUPERB INTERESTING????

    1. Kiya

      Thanks dr….

  4. hy kiya nice plz post next one asap
    I know its gonna be sooo interesting

    1. Kiya

      Thanks Ayesha…

  5. Shreyanvi

    Nice one…post nxt part soon…

    1. Kiya

      Thanks dr..

  6. Niriha

    Awesome

    1. Kiya

      Thanks dr….

  7. hi kiya how r u…sweet updat dear nic start….nxt post soon dear

    1. Kiya

      Thanks dr… I am fine… How r u????

  8. Chandani99

    So Di…..finally you posted it!!!I was waiting eagerly for this part and to my expectation it is JUST AMAZING……I AM SPEECHLESS…..LOVE YOU DI??❤️❤️

  9. Kiya

    Thanks a lot dr… Love u too….

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